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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  August 2002
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


dawned by mtmynd Aug 31, 2002 9:30 AM
haiku for silent nights by zil Aug 31, 2002 12:51 AM
petulant puppy by judih. Aug 30, 2002 9:19 PM
~~~ by mtmynd Aug 30, 2002 8:47 AM
sign language by judih. Aug 30, 2002 8:50 AM
g'nite by abbehill Aug 29, 2002 8:16 PM
dreams by abbehill Aug 29, 2002 8:21 PM
haiku dreams (v.2) by stilltrucking Aug 31, 2002 3:06 PM
hatching by judih. Aug 29, 2002 7:38 PM
hatching II by Emelia Sep 10, 2002 3:40 PM
unlocking a teardrop by orange Aug 29, 2002 3:37 PM
~~ by mtmynd Aug 29, 2002 9:02 AM
`` by panta rhei Aug 29, 2002 10:46 AM
.. by panta rhei Aug 29, 2002 10:49 AM
return of the sun (for judih) by buddhabitch Aug 28, 2002 5:12 PM
smell the salty sea love by judih. Aug 28, 2002 7:53 PM
From Me To You Yes Dear Reader Another Haiku by Dave The Dov Aug 28, 2002 3:45 PM
Hakiu For You by Dave The Dov Aug 28, 2002 3:42 PM
from here 2 there by magon Aug 28, 2002 5:33 AM
s(n)igh(t) by judih. Aug 27, 2002 8:14 PM
,,, by buddhabitch Aug 27, 2002 5:31 PM
walking the dog by buddhabitch Aug 27, 2002 8:34 AM
in silent stealth - for emelia by judih. Aug 26, 2002 7:44 PM
there is no wind - for judih by Emelia Aug 30, 2002 11:38 AM
hai quest by vincy Aug 26, 2002 4:13 PM
Request by vincy Aug 26, 2002 4:20 PM
haiku for an urban night by zil Aug 26, 2002 12:14 AM
and another by Emelia Aug 26, 2002 3:30 PM
bath htab by judih. Aug 25, 2002 9:03 PM
i saw / was i by panta rhei Aug 26, 2002 1:28 AM
One eye i by buddhabitch Aug 26, 2002 4:33 AM
ah ha by judih. Aug 26, 2002 5:40 AM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Aug 25, 2002 3:58 PM
ha ha by Emelia Aug 24, 2002 1:31 PM
a.m. by Emelia Aug 24, 2002 1:30 PM
p.m. by judih. Aug 25, 2002 8:28 AM
Let us begin a thread on Haiku's for Marijuana..or on at that... by PsylocybinSam Aug 23, 2002 9:21 PM
bud dee by judih. Aug 23, 2002 9:40 PM
smoke by SoundOfSilence Aug 24, 2002 2:13 AM
WEED NEED MORE.....haikus on pot by PsylocybinSam Aug 24, 2002 9:37 PM
sup her by judih. Aug 25, 2002 7:20 PM
fun funk punk plunk by Emelia Aug 26, 2002 3:39 PM
suit her by buddhabitch Aug 25, 2002 7:41 PM
i swear by justalil Aug 26, 2002 10:49 AM
why? by buddhabitch Aug 26, 2002 10:57 AM
Well stated BuddaBitch... by PsylocybinSam Aug 26, 2002 6:16 PM
goodness gracious by buddhabitch Aug 23, 2002 4:07 PM
This is Modern by Emelia Aug 23, 2002 2:56 PM
hai times by vincy Aug 23, 2002 10:09 AM
low times by vincy Aug 23, 2002 10:13 AM
next times by vincy Aug 23, 2002 10:17 AM
tom tom backstroke by judih. Aug 23, 2002 8:34 AM
slap pack a quack by judih. Aug 23, 2002 10:16 AM
A Miracle by brought-on-the-earth Aug 23, 2002 7:25 AM
where? by stilltrucking Aug 23, 2002 6:55 AM
good one, truckin' by Billectric Aug 27, 2002 6:40 AM
cursed by visions Aug 22, 2002 11:39 PM
were you goin man? by junio Aug 22, 2002 10:36 PM
sci fi hai ku by vincy Aug 22, 2002 10:09 PM
space hiccups by judih. Aug 22, 2002 11:09 PM
rice by McGog Aug 22, 2002 4:38 PM
post-pone-ne-ne by learned Aug 22, 2002 2:47 PM
... by buddhabitch Aug 22, 2002 11:35 AM
aerate by judih. Aug 22, 2002 1:19 PM
Ice Cubes by Emelia Aug 22, 2002 10:42 AM
6:15pm by Emelia Aug 21, 2002 3:19 PM
dreaming of haiku ku by judih. Aug 21, 2002 12:15 PM
staff meeting haiku by anniefay Aug 21, 2002 7:10 AM
The Chapel by brought-on-the-earth Aug 21, 2002 2:25 AM
nice by kkizer Aug 21, 2002 7:26 AM
by brought-on-the-earth Aug 23, 2002 8:23 AM
Anyone think of a title, please respond? by McGog Aug 21, 2002 12:23 AM
Haiku hive? by Tim Cunningham Aug 21, 2002 1:44 AM
hmm? by Illuminara Aug 21, 2002 5:41 PM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Aug 20, 2002 12:08 PM
monday by Emelia Aug 20, 2002 8:35 AM
!##$&$##! by Nobody Aug 19, 2002 3:48 AM
cut and dried munchkin by buddhabitch Aug 18, 2002 10:04 AM
hungry again! by cocorificus Aug 17, 2002 7:42 PM
gone by abbehill Aug 17, 2002 11:00 AM
Hi, it's me! by brought-on-the-earth Aug 18, 2002 9:07 AM
dawn by anniefay Aug 17, 2002 3:19 AM
dog by mtmynd Aug 16, 2002 2:48 PM
brave dog by ironhands Aug 16, 2002 2:50 PM
dog by cocorificus Aug 17, 2002 7:50 PM
Forest Haiku by Doctor Proteus Aug 16, 2002 2:26 PM
## by Nobody Aug 16, 2002 9:20 AM
storms by anniefay Aug 16, 2002 9:42 AM
meaning eludes by judih. Aug 16, 2002 7:16 AM
one eye blind by buddhabitch Aug 16, 2002 7:37 AM
1:39pm by Emelia Aug 16, 2002 10:44 AM
points of arrival by judih. Aug 15, 2002 8:12 PM
windows opened in the sky by orange Aug 15, 2002 3:35 PM
shit!! by Nobody Aug 15, 2002 10:29 AM
hidden moon by anniefay Aug 15, 2002 11:00 AM
damn by Nobody Aug 15, 2002 11:37 AM
do both! by anniefay Aug 15, 2002 12:10 PM
can't by Nobody Aug 15, 2002 12:25 PM
surge an by yohan yesass Aug 15, 2002 8:16 AM
you ku can do by mtmynd Aug 15, 2002 7:37 AM
last ku by stilltrucking Aug 15, 2002 7:57 AM
No Nihilism by maxpower2967 Aug 14, 2002 7:52 PM
sitting with a pen by Bennie Aug 13, 2002 3:31 PM
tri try ku by buddhabitch Aug 13, 2002 7:11 AM
miserable ku by stilltrucking Aug 15, 2002 6:32 AM
!wonna argue by sola Aug 13, 2002 1:48 AM
Soggy Pillow Haiku by RobotGoat Aug 12, 2002 3:00 PM
your hand by auziea Aug 12, 2002 11:28 AM
that is beautiful by snakhi Aug 15, 2002 5:23 PM
bag it hai by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2002 10:26 AM
mountain hai by judih. Aug 12, 2002 10:36 AM
blossom by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2002 6:51 AM
Summer chill by Bennie Aug 12, 2002 6:24 AM
i ching u ching by judih. Aug 12, 2002 4:21 AM
ching ching cheri by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2002 6:28 AM
I woke up this morning by visions Aug 12, 2002 12:17 AM
rhythm in the blood by visions Aug 12, 2002 1:12 AM
visions by b4 Aug 30, 2002 2:03 PM
Black scream by Bennie Aug 11, 2002 10:31 AM
sparrowsong by aone Aug 11, 2002 9:10 AM
basho tracks by buddhabitch Aug 11, 2002 9:01 AM
so you want banana? by judih. Aug 11, 2002 11:03 AM
HI Qs by Alienamigo Aug 11, 2002 12:23 AM
schnapps ku by anniefay Aug 10, 2002 8:38 PM
no harm done by stilltrucking Aug 11, 2002 5:35 AM
Scottish haiku by Bennie Aug 10, 2002 8:41 AM
More Scots Haiku by Bennie Aug 10, 2002 11:14 AM
Desire by Bennie Aug 10, 2002 8:09 AM
weed by Illuminara Aug 9, 2002 11:48 PM
cosmic comedians by orange Aug 9, 2002 11:29 PM
galactic audience by Illuminara Aug 9, 2002 11:45 PM
rodeo clown by stilltrucking Aug 10, 2002 8:43 AM
satisfied by vaga Aug 9, 2002 9:49 PM
gay boy by learned Aug 9, 2002 12:45 PM
gay by Illuminara Aug 9, 2002 11:51 PM
ku imposter by stilltrucking Aug 9, 2002 9:57 AM
rolling, rolling, rolling.... by buddhabitch Aug 9, 2002 8:58 AM
I like it. by Billectric Aug 9, 2002 9:00 AM
earthworm by Illuminara Aug 9, 2002 11:53 PM
gotta get you into my life ku by judih. Aug 8, 2002 8:50 PM
here hai by mtmynd Aug 8, 2002 9:06 PM
messes messages by judih. Aug 8, 2002 9:50 PM
sittin' here by justalil Aug 8, 2002 4:00 PM
boring ku by justalil Aug 8, 2002 3:58 PM
ku kop out? by stilltrucking Aug 8, 2002 1:44 PM
Way to go Truckin' by Billectric Aug 9, 2002 9:03 AM
duck Ku by stilltrucking Aug 9, 2002 9:21 AM
quacker ku by stilltrucking Aug 9, 2002 9:33 AM
blank by Illuminara Aug 9, 2002 11:54 PM
disillusion ku by judih. Aug 8, 2002 9:51 AM
lovely to look at by judih. Aug 8, 2002 9:52 AM
seeing thru ku by stilltrucking Aug 8, 2002 10:07 AM
Hatred Ku by justalil Aug 8, 2002 8:22 AM
friendly ku by stilltrucking Aug 8, 2002 8:53 AM
breakfast of champions by justalil Aug 8, 2002 9:36 AM
More Success by justalil Aug 8, 2002 8:20 AM
didgeridoo by judih. Aug 8, 2002 3:31 AM
morning practice by stilltrucking Aug 8, 2002 6:13 AM
Success! by justalil Aug 8, 2002 8:17 AM
3 Haikus by rube lindale Aug 7, 2002 4:56 PM
Spaniard speech by PsylocybinSam Aug 7, 2002 2:20 PM
1 and two and three by learned Aug 7, 2002 8:58 AM
whchah-tish by learned Aug 7, 2002 7:43 AM
oh come ON by justalil Aug 8, 2002 8:28 AM
broooooooooooommmm by learned Aug 7, 2002 7:29 AM
diet coke by jamelah Aug 7, 2002 5:38 AM
carbonation by justalil Aug 7, 2002 7:00 AM
4am by Bennie Aug 7, 2002 5:36 AM
4:15am by Bennie Aug 7, 2002 5:38 AM
5:25am by Bennie Aug 7, 2002 5:44 AM
breaking fast rules by buddhabitch Aug 7, 2002 5:25 AM
pathwise by buddhabitch Aug 7, 2002 5:22 AM
roarin in the tides of morn by judih. Aug 7, 2002 12:14 PM
more by judih. Aug 7, 2002 12:53 AM
Hiaku,, by PsylocybinSam Aug 6, 2002 11:50 AM
oceanic by buddhabitch Aug 6, 2002 9:12 AM
tea leaves by buddhabitch Aug 5, 2002 5:25 PM
cup spills by judih. Aug 6, 2002 3:59 AM
Holy tea... by PsylocybinSam Aug 6, 2002 2:20 PM
solitary by buddhabitch Aug 5, 2002 5:20 PM
five o clock coffee by louder than god Aug 5, 2002 2:17 PM
Haiku of mine... by PsylocybinSam Aug 5, 2002 12:42 PM
(((((~))))) by justalil Aug 5, 2002 12:45 PM
whirlpool by stilltrucking Aug 5, 2002 1:34 PM
Coffee Break by justalil Aug 5, 2002 10:23 AM
caffiene hallucination crazy ku by stilltrucking Aug 5, 2002 1:11 PM
get a grip by stilltrucking Aug 6, 2002 8:51 AM
mountain hai by buddhabitch Aug 5, 2002 4:29 AM
Rilke 9edit) by stilltrucking Aug 5, 2002 9:21 AM
sky shakin dawn by judih. Aug 4, 2002 8:25 PM
Sky shaking clouds by vincy Aug 4, 2002 8:43 PM
sailor take warning by stilltrucking Aug 4, 2002 9:49 PM
if i ever by judih. Aug 4, 2002 4:40 AM
defraction by panta rhei Aug 4, 2002 5:02 AM
vibra fusion by judih. Aug 4, 2002 5:21 AM
truth-sparked vision by orange Aug 4, 2002 10:29 PM
i am a riddle by gorden lee Aug 3, 2002 8:45 PM
soft anticipation by judih. Aug 3, 2002 7:46 PM
soft landing by vincy Aug 3, 2002 8:32 PM
unwrapped anklet by judih. Aug 3, 2002 8:40 PM
la by audable Aug 3, 2002 5:52 PM
gentle afternoon by aone Aug 3, 2002 1:28 PM
meow by orange Aug 2, 2002 1:57 PM
hello kitty ku by justalil Aug 2, 2002 5:04 PM
Under a Thumb by justalil Aug 2, 2002 9:04 AM
twenty-two (F) by rusalke Aug 2, 2002 4:55 AM
ku tenderness by judih. Aug 2, 2002 4:07 AM


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