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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  December 2002
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


well balanced by vincy Dec 31, 2002 10:55 AM
futile by vincy Dec 31, 2002 11:08 AM
weight watcher by Illuminara Dec 31, 2002 11:16 PM
self referential by sam fletcher Dec 30, 2002 6:24 PM
fido haido by buddhabitch Dec 31, 2002 9:11 AM
heyyou by vincy Dec 31, 2002 9:26 AM
poets & canaries by junio Dec 30, 2002 4:39 PM
Problem by ARAHH Dec 30, 2002 12:58 PM
mud by Illuminara Dec 31, 2002 11:21 PM
Joint by ARAHH Dec 30, 2002 12:56 PM
joint by rastaruined Jan 2, 2003 3:25 PM
#3677 by mtmynd Dec 29, 2002 8:00 AM
in a splash by orange Dec 31, 2002 12:04 AM
wash by judih. Dec 31, 2002 12:34 AM
taking pictures by orange Dec 31, 2002 12:39 AM
become by judih. Dec 31, 2002 12:44 AM
on silk... by orange Dec 31, 2002 12:59 AM
glimpse of wind thoughts by judih. Dec 31, 2002 1:08 AM
#3676 by mtmynd Dec 29, 2002 7:56 AM
# by Illuminara Dec 31, 2002 11:24 PM
kitty ku (PC) by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 1:18 PM
#3675 by mtmynd Dec 29, 2002 7:52 AM
tracking the motions by orange Jan 1, 2003 3:16 PM
January Haiku 2002 by Alexander Burton Dec 28, 2002 7:29 PM
how by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:39 PM
winter sounds by rouge saint Dec 28, 2002 5:56 PM
winter nights by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:41 PM
erosion by Illuminara Dec 28, 2002 10:48 AM
fill er up by buddhabitch Dec 28, 2002 11:25 AM
I did filler up by Illuminara Dec 28, 2002 11:33 AM
filled by buddhabitch Dec 28, 2002 2:53 PM
alignment by stevadore Dec 31, 2002 6:59 AM
wind by Illuminara Dec 28, 2002 10:42 AM
snow by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:44 PM
my jazzy Xmas Day by visions Dec 27, 2002 10:13 AM
bluestuffhappy by sam fletcher Dec 27, 2002 6:14 PM
hibernation by Illuminara Dec 28, 2002 10:51 AM
Carmen by visions Dec 28, 2002 11:10 AM
jazz by Illuminara Dec 28, 2002 11:19 AM
what a night by visions Dec 28, 2002 3:41 PM
May December by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 12:46 PM
hai'd out by buddhabitch Dec 27, 2002 7:46 AM
silly... by jamelah Dec 27, 2002 7:50 AM
any political convention a.k.a A Joke by orange Dec 26, 2002 1:14 AM
have a seat, smoke a spiral by orange Dec 24, 2002 8:56 AM
ritual smoke by wendyfaber Dec 24, 2002 5:23 PM
boison girls by rumball107 Dec 24, 2002 9:35 PM
new hampshire manger by wendyfaber Dec 24, 2002 3:28 AM
brush away time by judih. Dec 24, 2002 3:32 AM
tradition by wendyfaber Dec 24, 2002 3:46 AM
renewal--rebirth? by wendyfaber Dec 24, 2002 3:57 AM
eyal on the mountain by judih. Dec 24, 2002 4:03 AM
spidery webbed angel hair by wendyfaber Dec 24, 2002 4:01 AM
dawn winds by wendyfaber Dec 24, 2002 3:33 AM
jah hah! by buddhabitch Dec 24, 2002 1:48 AM
exists by Illuminara Dec 28, 2002 11:22 AM
existence by buddhabitch Dec 29, 2002 5:06 AM
flamenco beat, the pulse of life by primavera Dec 23, 2002 10:28 AM
to those behind... by rastaruined Dec 22, 2002 11:27 AM
sere, reflective by ARAHH Dec 22, 2002 4:00 AM
XMAS by artguy Dec 21, 2002 9:35 AM
hollidays are here! by onesadloser Dec 20, 2002 12:40 PM
geeks baring gifts by ironhands Dec 21, 2002 7:49 AM
insensitive trial by ARAHH Dec 20, 2002 12:39 PM
Sifting by Uncle B Dec 20, 2002 10:32 AM
???? by artguy Dec 18, 2002 5:56 PM
the Flow (beat going down) by rastaruined Dec 17, 2002 3:44 PM
telephone trajectory by orange Dec 15, 2002 9:18 PM
Summer Rain by headburner Dec 15, 2002 4:04 AM
watching it float by by orange Dec 14, 2002 1:31 PM
Is by twotymer97 Dec 13, 2002 5:08 PM
From The Burner...with love by headburner Dec 14, 2002 7:46 PM
. by headburner Dec 12, 2002 5:53 PM
ohhhh! by twotymer97 Dec 13, 2002 5:13 PM
Seasons of the Earth by Snow Leopard Dec 12, 2002 4:18 PM
... by headburner Dec 14, 2002 8:03 PM
fly hai by buddhabitch Dec 11, 2002 7:28 AM
fear not, sweet Soo... by rusalke Dec 11, 2002 9:41 AM
ahh friend... by buddhabitch Dec 11, 2002 10:01 AM
haiku clouds by judih. Dec 11, 2002 10:15 AM
haiku by Josip Broz Tito Dec 12, 2002 1:31 PM
Bathroom Raids by JohnnyCat Dec 10, 2002 4:35 PM
Revivals by JohnnyCat Dec 10, 2002 4:27 PM
Self Medicating by JohnnyCat Dec 10, 2002 4:25 PM
Japanese Ex-boyfriend by JohnnyCat Dec 10, 2002 4:19 PM
Paradise by headburner Dec 10, 2002 2:19 PM
a post-it reminder by orange Dec 9, 2002 6:09 PM
default by stevadore Dec 9, 2002 6:28 AM
Drunken Dharma Haiku by Snow Leopard Dec 6, 2002 7:34 AM
drunken prophecy by rastaruined Dec 7, 2002 1:17 PM
Fireflies by Jarran Krause Dec 4, 2002 10:04 PM
x-mass by rastaruined Dec 4, 2002 10:02 AM
pfrt by ibeentired Dec 3, 2002 9:10 PM
Love by artguy Dec 3, 2002 6:37 PM
south station blues by orange Dec 3, 2002 5:51 PM
Melancholy by artguy Dec 3, 2002 5:45 PM
haiku moment by buddhabitch Dec 2, 2002 11:51 AM
haiku moment by buddhabitch Dec 2, 2002 11:48 AM
so lets us dine by Dave The Dov Dec 2, 2002 2:21 PM
haiku moment by buddhabitch Dec 2, 2002 11:44 AM


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