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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


chorefully by buddhabitch Jun 30, 2002 9:51 AM
i need friend next by judih. Jun 30, 2002 7:11 PM
buzzz by mtmynd Jun 29, 2002 10:00 AM
kkizer, re: haiku by Kristessa Jun 29, 2002 12:48 AM
keep it up... by kkizer Jul 3, 2002 3:46 PM
freedom of youth by abbehill Jun 28, 2002 2:52 PM
... by abbehill Jun 28, 2002 2:55 PM
Or (the same one different) by Billectric Jun 28, 2002 12:30 PM
Dancing in the air by spoonriver Jun 28, 2002 11:01 AM
slope by vincy Jun 28, 2002 10:10 AM
is there a sigh in the house? by judih. Jun 28, 2002 10:15 AM
past flashed, future flows by buddhabitch Jun 28, 2002 11:18 AM
yin yang square dance by judih. Jun 28, 2002 3:24 AM
shadows by abbehill Jun 27, 2002 11:00 AM
koda ku by stilltrucking Jun 27, 2002 11:29 AM
hot ku by judih. Jun 27, 2002 7:08 AM
fan dance by buddhabitch Jun 27, 2002 8:33 AM
slamming bedroom door by brought-on-the-earth Jun 27, 2002 5:58 AM
a boat ride on the lake by brought-on-the-earth Jun 27, 2002 8:06 AM
cooking at the cottage by brought-on-the-earth Jun 27, 2002 8:12 AM
late night singing by brought-on-the-earth Jun 27, 2002 8:27 AM
stay tuned by buddhabitch Jun 27, 2002 5:55 AM
off to conquer by judih. Jun 27, 2002 7:05 AM
glancing blow by buddhabitch Jun 27, 2002 5:29 AM
haiku too by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:55 PM
Ahhhh! by kkizer Jun 28, 2002 7:51 AM
haiku by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:52 PM
sweet jean by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:43 PM
water by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:42 PM
no title by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:37 PM
wonderful by michigan Jul 13, 2002 11:14 PM
ssss by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:31 PM
oh by Kristessa Jun 26, 2002 11:29 PM
over easy by buddhabitch Jun 27, 2002 5:20 AM
Allen Ginsberg by Dave The Dov Jun 26, 2002 4:01 PM
sack of poetry by judih. Jun 26, 2002 7:13 PM
Here's One For Judih The Puppet Master by Dave The Dov Jun 27, 2002 2:58 PM
Dave the Dov by judih. Jul 5, 2002 2:27 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Yes!!!! by Dave The Dov Jul 5, 2002 7:09 AM
pain by m.t.mynd Jun 26, 2002 8:02 AM
chew by mtmynd Jun 26, 2002 7:52 AM
B4 Zero by mtmynd Jun 26, 2002 7:26 AM
papa bird watching by brought-on-the-earth Jun 26, 2002 12:23 AM
old duck's flight by visions Jun 28, 2002 3:36 AM
ku chee ku chee by um Jun 25, 2002 11:19 PM
ku chee ku chee girl by buddhabitch Jun 26, 2002 3:57 AM
cheekubreezes by panta rhei Jun 26, 2002 4:21 AM
ehhh? by anniefay Jun 25, 2002 7:13 PM
impending storm by anniefay Jun 25, 2002 4:37 PM
home from the seaside of life by judih. Jun 25, 2002 11:46 AM
rolling with the waves at low tide by buddhabitch Jun 25, 2002 2:18 PM
tsunami by um Jun 25, 2002 11:50 PM
Shivers by Lescuyer Jun 25, 2002 10:16 AM
my definition by anniefay Jun 25, 2002 3:39 AM
four am high koup by trey Jun 25, 2002 1:50 AM
a perfect morning by snakhi Jun 24, 2002 3:51 PM
micro-conversations by orange Jun 24, 2002 12:08 PM
another bend of words by orange Jun 24, 2002 11:53 AM
nineteen by rusalke Jun 24, 2002 11:04 AM
breathing a lighter web by panta rhei Jun 24, 2002 11:25 AM
quick feng shui by judih. Jun 24, 2002 11:43 AM
enigmatic beard by brought-on-the-earth Jun 24, 2002 9:35 AM
..so dont blame me.. by brought-on-the-earth Jun 24, 2002 10:24 AM
in cog neeto by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2002 7:29 AM
are you implying by judih. Jun 24, 2002 7:34 AM
shenandoah refuge by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 10:10 AM
well? by mtmynd Jun 24, 2002 7:14 AM
cold water well by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 7:32 AM
wishing well by judih. Jun 24, 2002 10:36 AM
wishful thinking by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 10:46 AM
brothers sisters by judih. Jun 24, 2002 10:51 AM
heaven scent by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2002 7:08 AM
ku quest by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 7:22 AM
42 v.2 by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 6:51 AM
meanings by widowmaker Jun 24, 2002 6:46 AM
be am ku by m.t.mynd Jun 24, 2002 6:36 AM
eighteen by rusalke Jun 24, 2002 1:53 AM
eternally freaku by panta rhei Jun 24, 2002 2:01 AM
you're right, as always by rusalke Jun 24, 2002 2:41 AM
orange st. haiku 1999 by zil Jun 24, 2002 1:24 AM
hill-climbing by brought-on-the-earth Jun 24, 2002 12:59 AM
medical test after hill-climbing by brought-on-the-earth Jun 24, 2002 1:06 AM
tempting new hobby by brought-on-the-earth Jun 24, 2002 2:29 AM
the view from the hill by brought-on-the-earth Jun 24, 2002 8:44 AM
reading the lines on a blade of grass by orange Jun 23, 2002 9:27 PM
magic sur prize by judih. Jun 23, 2002 7:52 PM
in deed by rusalke Jun 24, 2002 1:22 AM
depression girl by AngelHeadedHipster Jun 23, 2002 1:42 PM
ode to grape seed oil by judih. Jun 23, 2002 7:22 AM
eating crow #X? by stilltrucking Jun 23, 2002 3:46 AM
mount arrogance by judih. Jun 23, 2002 3:51 AM
industrial haiku #2 by zil Jun 23, 2002 1:47 AM
insider by judih. Jun 23, 2002 1:54 AM
think I'll stay home today by rusalke Jun 23, 2002 2:26 AM
5:34 am by stilltrucking Jun 23, 2002 2:36 AM
.... by um Jun 23, 2002 2:31 AM
tune him up by stilltrucking Jun 23, 2002 12:02 AM
seventeen by rusalke Jun 22, 2002 11:47 PM
sixteen by rusalke Jun 22, 2002 2:38 PM
shakespeare bonsai by judih. Jun 22, 2002 10:33 PM
"TWO DEAD FLIES" (5,7,5) by Anntelope Jun 22, 2002 7:57 AM
i'll trade ya by um Jun 24, 2002 1:04 AM
salutations by buddhabitch Jun 22, 2002 6:44 AM
inside out by buddhabitch Jun 22, 2002 6:34 AM
blues for blue skies by buddhabitch Jun 22, 2002 6:27 AM
into the by um Jun 24, 2002 1:08 AM
mystic cryptic by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2002 7:25 AM
krazy love by um Jun 25, 2002 1:55 AM
hey, I'm a man… by trey Jun 22, 2002 2:49 AM
fifteen by rusalke Jun 22, 2002 12:16 AM
fertile blossoms by judih. Jun 22, 2002 4:10 AM
something by Dr. Gonzo Jun 21, 2002 9:56 PM
outlaw ku-er by buddhabitch Jun 21, 2002 4:21 AM
translation please by buddhabitch Jun 21, 2002 4:10 AM
one potato, none by buddhabitch Jun 21, 2002 4:00 AM
White fire by spoonriver Jun 20, 2002 1:07 PM
ku wait by stilltrucking Jun 20, 2002 7:28 AM
Elizabeth Browning by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 9:53 AM
10-4 by stilltrucking Jun 20, 2002 11:11 AM
like a nice glass of cold milk by stilltrucking Jun 20, 2002 1:34 PM
who did that song? by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 5:04 AM
who knows everly by judih. Jun 20, 2002 5:07 AM
everly judih by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 8:57 AM
hai hai hai haiku by um Jun 20, 2002 4:15 AM
pairs hold hands by judih. Jun 20, 2002 4:22 AM
cardiff backstreet by pengwin Jun 20, 2002 2:42 AM
yeah, dig, ever hear by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 9:00 AM
high-ku economy by brought-on-the-earth Jun 19, 2002 11:42 PM
g'night by anniefay Jun 19, 2002 7:13 PM
Exobiology by Billectric Jun 19, 2002 5:28 PM
sierra mountainshine by judih. Jun 19, 2002 11:18 AM
white mountain embrace by buddhabitch Jun 19, 2002 3:53 PM
today's promise by anniefay Jun 19, 2002 5:40 AM
machines of loving grace by stilltrucking Jun 18, 2002 7:44 PM
i know its not haiku by xman52 Jun 18, 2002 10:55 AM
outward looking by abbehill Jun 18, 2002 2:37 PM
beats me by stilltrucking Jun 18, 2002 2:38 PM
storm coming by anniefay Jun 18, 2002 10:52 AM
my clouds pile up high by xman52 Jun 18, 2002 11:05 AM
forecast by abbehill Jun 18, 2002 2:30 PM
my clouds pile up high by xman52 Jun 18, 2002 11:08 AM
pilot education by brought-on-the-earth Jun 18, 2002 3:05 AM
learning to walk by xman52 Jun 18, 2002 11:49 AM
like the first breath of a baby (john prine) by stilltrucking Jun 19, 2002 1:06 AM
f(r)iendship by brought-on-the-earth Jun 18, 2002 1:18 AM
hold my hand by judih. Jun 18, 2002 3:15 AM
you're the angel by brought-on-the-earth Jun 18, 2002 3:24 AM
angel whispers by judih. Jun 18, 2002 3:29 AM
ha! my instincts... by brought-on-the-earth Jun 18, 2002 4:15 AM
it hurt but now i see by judih. Jun 18, 2002 4:35 AM
popping invisable realities by orange Jun 17, 2002 10:02 PM
walk with me by orange Jun 17, 2002 10:02 AM
man on corner- pc by clevername Jun 17, 2002 5:36 AM
The Whole Family by Billectric Jun 16, 2002 2:14 PM
alone by mtmynd Jun 16, 2002 2:21 PM
me too, by Billectric Jun 16, 2002 3:25 PM
Small winds by Parcival Jun 15, 2002 4:02 PM
Green T(int) by mtmynd Jun 15, 2002 12:15 PM
a key by orange Jun 17, 2002 9:53 AM
jamelah's garden by anniefay Jun 15, 2002 10:28 AM
annie-ku by mtmynd Jun 15, 2002 10:49 AM
saturday by anniefay Jun 15, 2002 10:25 AM
parking lot splendor (friday night) by anniefay Jun 15, 2002 10:21 AM
hai-concerto by mtmynd Jun 15, 2002 9:53 AM
Nature's manifold species by brought-on-the-earth Jun 15, 2002 11:53 AM
Down the Rabbit-hole by brought-on-the-earth Jun 15, 2002 7:56 AM
Hooka Haiku by mtmynd Jun 15, 2002 8:52 AM
yippie ku yi yay by mtmynd Jun 14, 2002 6:28 PM
101 degrees by mtmynd Jun 14, 2002 7:27 AM
outta it by mtmynd Jun 14, 2002 7:29 AM
oh yeah... by ContemplateJazz Jun 14, 2002 7:31 AM
AZ by mtmynd Jun 14, 2002 7:33 AM
games by mtmynd Jun 14, 2002 7:31 AM
the round moon beams by Parcival Jun 13, 2002 8:42 AM
Lost horizon by vincy Jun 12, 2002 6:41 PM
summer squirrel by kkizer Jun 12, 2002 3:28 PM
tiny worm by kkizer Jun 12, 2002 8:39 AM
freeway's earthworm by izza Jun 12, 2002 10:37 AM
walking by redwyrd Jun 11, 2002 10:51 PM
further down the pathway by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 5:43 AM
Hey you by vincy Jun 10, 2002 6:02 PM
www.FreeStyleLiterature.com by Medaplor Jun 10, 2002 3:49 PM
strange haiku by Parcival Jun 10, 2002 4:26 PM
Don't do this! by izza Jun 10, 2002 4:46 PM
no haiku by visions Jun 10, 2002 2:39 PM
no one noticed by visions Jun 10, 2002 3:22 PM
sing you poets for this is the heaven on earth by visions Jun 10, 2002 3:28 PM
insomnia, joy & Händel by visions Jun 10, 2002 3:39 PM
the 1940s wartime sky by visions Jun 10, 2002 3:45 PM
birthday! by judih. Jun 10, 2002 11:02 PM
tyu by eostar Jun 10, 2002 8:21 AM
Pics by izza Jun 10, 2002 6:41 AM
disposable by ContemplateJazz Jun 10, 2002 6:47 AM
May I comment by izza Jun 10, 2002 4:22 PM
pic by bluemonk Jun 10, 2002 5:43 AM
underwater...in every way by ContemplateJazz Jun 10, 2002 2:26 AM
sinking in cool reflection by FunstONO Jun 10, 2002 5:36 AM
the valley motorist by snakhi Jun 8, 2002 7:02 PM
ssshhhhhhh by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 8:07 AM
silence by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 8:07 AM
uni-versal by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 8:09 AM
cosmic state by buddhabitch Jun 8, 2002 9:18 AM
jimi e.e and lust by judih. Jun 8, 2002 7:33 AM
rice paper melts by judih. Jun 8, 2002 7:35 AM
melting by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 8:06 AM
seesaw by buddhabitch Jun 8, 2002 7:26 AM
shush up by buddhabitch Jun 8, 2002 7:21 AM
illusion by buddhabitch Jun 8, 2002 7:13 AM
illusion by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 7:53 AM
time by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 7:59 AM
immeasurable by panta rhei Jun 8, 2002 8:02 AM
haiku duet by ContemplateJazz Jun 8, 2002 6:01 AM
Stranger by vincy Jun 7, 2002 6:30 PM
Of all people by brought-on-the-earth Jun 8, 2002 12:42 AM
fucking by honey Jun 7, 2002 5:22 PM
haikuanalyst by vincy Jun 7, 2002 3:37 PM
i can by ContemplateJazz Jun 8, 2002 6:04 AM
hissningaya by vincy Jun 7, 2002 12:46 PM
shiva by flowersinherhair Jun 7, 2002 9:16 AM
shiva by flowersinherhair Jun 7, 2002 9:14 AM
shrine sun by saintfool Jun 7, 2002 7:38 AM
Paradise by ~K Jun 6, 2002 8:33 PM
Melting by magic love Jun 6, 2002 8:34 PM
Mi Afternoon by ~K Jun 6, 2002 4:12 PM
at night by shrimp Jun 6, 2002 11:27 PM
i feel small by xman52 Jun 6, 2002 2:16 PM
Droplets by izza Jun 6, 2002 2:29 PM
days later by xman52 Jun 15, 2002 9:41 AM
although by Yabyum Jun 6, 2002 1:58 PM
where did I leave off? by rusalke Jun 6, 2002 11:44 AM
thoughts of yu tu ku by judih. Jun 6, 2002 12:56 PM
long lost by rusalke Jun 7, 2002 1:51 PM
may to june by judih. Jun 7, 2002 10:20 PM
... by abbehill Jun 6, 2002 10:59 AM
~~ by mtmynd Jun 6, 2002 8:18 AM
~~ by mtmynd Jun 6, 2002 8:17 AM
~~ by mtmynd Jun 6, 2002 8:12 AM
re: Father by Mother Jun 5, 2002 12:48 PM
~ by CBL Jun 5, 2002 8:12 AM
~ by CBL Jun 5, 2002 8:09 AM
honey by honey Jun 5, 2002 4:14 AM
bu dha by judih. Jun 4, 2002 2:45 AM
wu me by judih. Jun 4, 2002 2:26 AM
a mid-february sky dance by bluemonk Jun 5, 2002 1:11 AM
The unhaiku in all its glory by ~K Jun 4, 2002 12:56 AM
a finch by shrimp Jun 4, 2002 1:14 PM
thirteen by magic love Jun 5, 2002 4:12 AM
On the bubble by ~K Jun 5, 2002 11:01 PM
POP! by magic love Jun 6, 2002 3:22 AM
Haibort by vincy Jun 3, 2002 9:24 PM
haiput by vincy Jun 3, 2002 9:31 PM
haicon by vincy Jun 3, 2002 9:39 PM
count me out by um Jun 3, 2002 7:08 AM
If you had read the discussion by izza Jun 3, 2002 7:13 AM
hai izza-ku! by visions Jun 3, 2002 7:52 AM
Has value by izza Jun 3, 2002 9:35 AM
Haiku authority by Zorb Jun 3, 2002 11:08 AM
Mistaken on 2 accounts by izza Jun 3, 2002 12:10 PM
400 years by shrimp Jun 4, 2002 12:27 AM
400 years by bluemonk Jun 6, 2002 3:36 AM
Hai who? by Zorb Jun 3, 2002 10:59 AM
smoking or writing by shrimp Jun 4, 2002 12:31 AM
Clap Clap Clap by ~K Jun 4, 2002 12:48 AM
smile by shrimp Jun 4, 2002 4:35 PM
wow by um Jun 5, 2002 4:49 AM
sunny night by stilltrucking Jun 3, 2002 7:08 AM
Sun set by blakespake Jun 3, 2002 6:52 AM
breeze by firecracker Jun 3, 2002 5:53 AM
this is haiku by mtmynd Jun 3, 2002 6:14 AM
Kop-Ku by mtmynd Jun 2, 2002 7:41 PM
counted blessings by judih. Jun 2, 2002 7:45 PM
channel be by mtmynd Jun 2, 2002 10:26 AM
hai-god angry today, makes me seek hai-gu home by visions Jun 2, 2002 11:13 AM
monk artist by judih. Jun 2, 2002 12:31 PM
Bonsai by izza Jun 2, 2002 12:36 PM
home by judih. Jun 2, 2002 6:54 PM
Nice work by izza Jun 3, 2002 6:44 AM
a finch landed on my window-ledge this morning while I was watering the plants by shrimp Jun 2, 2002 10:22 AM
eye to eye by judih. Jun 2, 2002 10:30 AM
one eye then another by shrimp Jun 2, 2002 10:49 AM
swift of wing by judih. Jun 2, 2002 12:28 PM
joy-hai! by mtmynd Jun 2, 2002 10:20 AM
uh-ku by mtmynd Jun 2, 2002 10:18 AM
good question by judih. Jun 2, 2002 10:19 AM
ah so by mtmynd Jun 2, 2002 10:29 AM


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