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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


lowku by um May 31, 2002 4:27 AM
shot taken from security camera by try May 30, 2002 7:49 PM
Laundry Soap by izza May 30, 2002 8:01 PM
very nice by shrimp May 30, 2002 9:44 PM
Ciel - PC by Lescuyer May 30, 2002 5:53 PM
White Oak by izza May 30, 2002 4:09 PM
Fox by izza May 30, 2002 1:09 PM
spring mud by kkizer May 29, 2002 9:00 PM
Rose by adrianbkelly May 29, 2002 5:01 PM
dinner by abbehill May 29, 2002 4:04 PM
Seeping sadness by Harry May 29, 2002 3:44 PM
resolution near by abbehill May 29, 2002 1:31 PM
Pheasent by izza May 29, 2002 11:44 AM
pheasants by shrimp May 29, 2002 12:41 PM
good one shrimp - you inspire me by judih. May 29, 2002 7:34 PM
wow thanks by shrimp May 29, 2002 10:03 PM
Figure it out by vincy May 29, 2002 10:18 AM
old age creeping up by abbehill May 29, 2002 1:29 PM
maturing by abbehill May 29, 2002 3:41 PM
? by abbehill May 29, 2002 3:43 PM
Pilgrimage by Sabertash May 28, 2002 4:28 PM
monkey mind by buddhabitch May 28, 2002 6:52 AM
this morning by shrimp May 28, 2002 8:15 AM
You are right by izza May 28, 2002 11:25 AM
after the rain by shrimp May 28, 2002 5:17 PM
fullmoonday by m.t.mynd May 27, 2002 7:12 AM
postlude by panta rhei May 27, 2002 6:43 AM
question by midday shadows May 27, 2002 4:58 AM
Silence in the exam room by SoundOfSilence May 27, 2002 4:31 AM
Yay! by midday shadows May 27, 2002 4:57 AM
#2's by izza May 27, 2002 7:56 AM
city rain by bluemonk May 27, 2002 1:28 AM
Snails by izza May 28, 2002 6:53 AM
shelter by abbehill May 26, 2002 7:17 PM
blast by abbehill May 26, 2002 7:16 PM
blast it all by abbehill May 26, 2002 7:16 PM
the search by abbehill May 26, 2002 7:11 PM
search on by abbehill May 26, 2002 7:13 PM
search will end by abbehill May 26, 2002 7:13 PM
e2ternal (Tri-Ku) by mtmynd May 26, 2002 4:00 PM
fear less (a bi-ku) by mtmynd May 26, 2002 3:48 PM
splash by mtmynd May 26, 2002 3:43 PM
PoKu by mtmynd May 26, 2002 3:25 PM
a haiku and others by Hopalong Cassady May 26, 2002 11:58 AM
a jar for the brain by shrimp May 26, 2002 12:23 PM
Ketchup bottle by izza May 26, 2002 1:55 PM
ketchup by shrimp May 26, 2002 3:08 PM
rude house guest by judih. May 26, 2002 7:29 PM
thanks by bluemonk May 27, 2002 6:27 AM
(pickins) by mtmynd May 25, 2002 1:16 PM
....... by um May 25, 2002 11:49 PM
five/nine by mtmynd May 25, 2002 10:42 AM
now dried by shrimp May 26, 2002 11:53 AM
Sidewalk by izza May 26, 2002 1:53 PM
simplify by mtmynd May 25, 2002 10:40 AM
.... by um May 25, 2002 11:51 PM
brief by mtmynd May 25, 2002 10:34 AM
high hai' by mtmynd May 25, 2002 10:32 AM
...... by um May 25, 2002 11:52 PM
splash by mtmynd May 25, 2002 10:28 AM
I like this one by izza May 26, 2002 10:49 AM
Flinch by rolomar May 25, 2002 1:58 AM
Kaw! by izza May 24, 2002 7:23 PM
stand off by judih. May 24, 2002 7:26 PM
Sparrow by izza May 24, 2002 7:31 PM
dawn by judih. May 24, 2002 7:34 PM
Dawn's early light by izza May 24, 2002 7:37 PM
canticle by judih. May 24, 2002 7:44 PM
The oboes werent really there, were they? by izza May 24, 2002 7:48 PM
of course it was by judih. May 24, 2002 8:11 PM
Comparison by izza May 25, 2002 10:11 AM
quit giving advice by shrimp May 24, 2002 11:35 PM
Your post is exactly by izza May 25, 2002 10:08 AM
Dear Izza! by primavera May 25, 2002 10:43 AM
Other board? by izza May 26, 2002 10:47 AM
add a bit of humor to your life, you'll enjoy it more by shrimp May 25, 2002 9:58 PM
re:your namecalling rant brought about by your adversion to revision, learning, by izza May 26, 2002 10:40 AM
ha ha by shrimp May 26, 2002 11:33 AM
I see you broke out your Webster's for that one by izza May 26, 2002 1:43 PM
you gotta lighten up by shrimp May 26, 2002 2:15 PM
Thanks for addressing the issues by izza May 26, 2002 3:00 PM
Patio by izza May 24, 2002 7:18 PM
Rainy Sidewalk by izza May 24, 2002 6:43 PM
Afternoon mist by izza May 24, 2002 2:53 PM
Eddie Piss by Anntelope May 24, 2002 8:10 AM
(fart) by mtmynd May 24, 2002 8:00 AM
sweet dream baby by judih. May 24, 2002 8:02 AM
fart by Anntelope May 24, 2002 8:08 AM
...... by um May 25, 2002 3:34 AM
electric guitea by judih. May 24, 2002 7:35 AM
''''''' by um May 25, 2002 3:36 AM
Poppopil by Mob May 25, 2002 3:44 AM
Ewe by Xerial May 23, 2002 10:38 PM
.... by um May 25, 2002 3:39 AM
The Quartet ode to Miniver by rube lindale May 23, 2002 3:00 PM
uber cool by Albuquerque Lullaby May 23, 2002 8:57 PM
Rejection by midday shadows May 23, 2002 11:49 AM
ja by shrimp May 23, 2002 12:14 PM
Jawohl by Mob May 24, 2002 9:16 AM
na klar by SoundOfSilence May 24, 2002 1:54 PM
Rotwein schmeckt by shrimp May 24, 2002 11:33 PM
Bonheur by SoundOfSilence May 24, 2002 1:55 PM
melon by mtmynd May 23, 2002 7:45 AM
sunshine feast by stilltrucking May 23, 2002 12:21 PM
the crow's chest by shrimp May 22, 2002 11:57 PM
beautiful thing (a memory!) by bluemonk May 22, 2002 7:21 AM
very nice work by izza May 23, 2002 4:06 PM
the melt by m.t.mynd May 22, 2002 7:16 AM
are you still blocked up? by bluemonk May 22, 2002 7:18 AM
desert highway by stilltrucking May 23, 2002 5:52 AM
Good nite by vincy May 22, 2002 12:55 AM
return by DizzyKicks May 21, 2002 11:40 AM
Balloon by izza May 21, 2002 12:42 PM
Realization by vincy May 21, 2002 10:06 AM
Wag by izza May 21, 2002 10:10 AM
Dog chasing tail by vincy May 21, 2002 10:28 AM
IMAGES! by izza May 21, 2002 11:12 AM
izza by bluemonk May 21, 2002 11:35 AM
Bulldog. by izza May 21, 2002 1:33 PM
images by shrimp May 23, 2002 12:09 AM
Protocol by vincy May 21, 2002 11:46 AM
Poetic form by izza May 21, 2002 12:37 PM
Two related three line poems concerning the wasting of time by izza May 21, 2002 1:34 PM
Levi says: by primavera May 21, 2002 1:45 PM
Everyone by izza May 21, 2002 3:37 PM
when the dead dog by shrimp May 23, 2002 12:05 AM
my face this morning by bluemonk May 21, 2002 12:29 AM
my mirror this morning by judih. May 21, 2002 1:22 AM
This morning by vincy May 21, 2002 9:24 AM
Afternoon nap by izza May 21, 2002 9:41 AM
face throb by stilltrucking May 21, 2002 1:23 PM
the birds of winter that peck at my summer by louder than god May 20, 2002 4:10 PM
Spring fever by vincy May 20, 2002 10:56 AM
Hard pills by vincy May 20, 2002 11:03 AM
to swollow by vincy May 20, 2002 11:15 AM
Gray Sweater by izza May 20, 2002 11:14 AM
Cautiously optimistic by vincy May 19, 2002 1:08 PM
Gloomy forecast by vincy May 19, 2002 1:12 PM
Cheer up! by vincy May 19, 2002 1:16 PM
tasters choice by Zorb May 19, 2002 3:06 PM
Haiku from a Dream by wendyfaber May 19, 2002 3:54 AM
inner chat by wendyfaber May 19, 2002 2:57 PM
moving on by wendyfaber May 19, 2002 2:59 PM
old tapes rerun by wendyfaber May 19, 2002 3:04 PM
haiku (5,7,5) by Anntelope May 18, 2002 1:47 PM
Name calling by vincy May 18, 2002 12:45 AM
politically correct by vincy May 18, 2002 12:47 AM
swirls. by gorden lee May 17, 2002 6:07 PM
Not a haiku but it fits here better than on the other boards by izza May 17, 2002 5:58 PM
Haiku For The Zombies by RobotGoat May 17, 2002 2:47 PM
permeate by mtmynd May 17, 2002 7:16 AM
Crossing by vincy May 17, 2002 8:59 AM
Highkoos by m.t.mynd May 17, 2002 5:55 AM
beginnings by mtmynd May 16, 2002 11:59 PM
Let there be light by vincy May 17, 2002 12:06 AM
greed by vincy May 16, 2002 9:06 PM
greedy by vincy May 16, 2002 9:08 PM
Grrrr! by vincy May 16, 2002 9:12 PM
Betrayal by vincy May 16, 2002 8:50 PM
licked wounds by vincy May 16, 2002 8:56 PM
spring rain by abbehill May 16, 2002 1:55 PM
..... by um May 19, 2002 9:46 PM
bluemonk by firecracker May 16, 2002 11:49 AM
blue monk by judih. May 16, 2002 12:06 PM
judih by twotymer97 May 16, 2002 12:32 PM
palindrome (mindless) by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:15 AM
a man by bluemonk May 16, 2002 9:47 AM
an entertaining woman by bluemonk May 16, 2002 9:49 AM
a dog by bluemonk May 16, 2002 9:52 AM
the neighborhood by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:20 AM
a guest by bluemonk May 16, 2002 9:55 AM
the doorbell by bluemonk May 16, 2002 9:56 AM
a door by twotymer97 May 16, 2002 9:57 AM
baby by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:00 AM
hors d'oeuvres by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:07 AM
a break in the conversation by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:11 AM
end of the night by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:16 AM
pretentious choice by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:26 AM
machine by twotymer97 May 16, 2002 11:01 AM
windows by bluemonk May 16, 2002 11:05 AM
an entertaining woman by izza May 16, 2002 12:27 PM
a bartender by bluemonk May 16, 2002 10:03 AM
I like this series by izza May 16, 2002 12:29 PM
thank you izza by bluemonk May 16, 2002 12:34 PM
Very Cool by izza May 16, 2002 12:42 PM
ditto by jota May 16, 2002 5:35 PM
Well...not exactly by izza May 16, 2002 5:57 PM
antennae by judih. May 16, 2002 3:04 AM
Planner by izza May 15, 2002 4:34 PM
Home by twotymer97 May 15, 2002 4:15 PM
tough night by GordonWilson May 15, 2002 4:10 PM
Could someone mail me... by Post Pre Then May 15, 2002 8:25 AM
You didnt list an email by izza May 15, 2002 12:21 PM
faku by um May 15, 2002 4:13 AM
kuku by vincy May 15, 2002 7:50 AM
notku by um May 16, 2002 2:59 AM
ha! cool? by subterrissole May 16, 2002 3:05 AM
yuku by um May 17, 2002 4:17 AM
... by cylance May 13, 2002 2:22 PM
WISE TREE by aone May 13, 2002 2:19 PM
RISE~~ by aone May 13, 2002 2:18 PM
CHASING by aone May 13, 2002 1:39 PM
AH! by aone May 13, 2002 1:38 PM
Open Sesame by vincy May 13, 2002 12:12 PM
Inner workings by izza May 13, 2002 12:14 PM
MY classroom by izza May 13, 2002 12:11 PM
Changes by buddhabitch May 13, 2002 12:47 PM
Squint by izza May 13, 2002 12:52 PM
pining by buddhabitch May 13, 2002 11:39 AM
ahhh... by GordonWilson May 13, 2002 11:44 AM
A timeless tree by vincy May 13, 2002 11:53 AM
my pining tears... by visions May 13, 2002 12:06 PM
Crow by izza May 12, 2002 7:56 PM
old crow by mtmynd May 16, 2002 7:18 AM
eat crow by mtmynd May 16, 2002 7:20 AM
crowing by mtmynd May 16, 2002 7:22 AM
crows feet by mtmynd May 16, 2002 7:26 AM
Crow's feet by izza May 16, 2002 12:20 PM
flight by buddhabitch May 12, 2002 6:53 AM
bluebird by izza May 12, 2002 11:27 AM
worth toasting by brought-on-the-earth May 12, 2002 1:45 AM
frost waits by bluemonk May 12, 2002 1:13 AM
Planner by izza May 11, 2002 4:32 PM
eternal spring by buddhabitch May 11, 2002 8:55 AM
my cuppa, your cuppa by buddhabitch May 11, 2002 6:31 AM
a cuppa ... by abbehill May 11, 2002 7:44 AM
Sweet Cuppa by izza May 11, 2002 7:48 AM
lawns by abbehill May 10, 2002 7:02 PM
white picket fences by izza May 11, 2002 7:57 AM
... by abbehill May 10, 2002 6:57 PM
My Planner by izza May 11, 2002 7:59 AM
????? by abbehill May 10, 2002 6:44 PM
free love by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:15 PM
Good Senryu by izza May 11, 2002 8:05 AM
rag mama rag by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:10 PM
neighborhood by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:09 PM
time splash in the rolling vine sky by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:07 PM
Deadheads by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:05 PM
Open Mic Night by izza May 11, 2002 8:04 AM
Hole Within One by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:01 PM
clean air & water by gorden lee May 10, 2002 6:00 PM
Tuning In by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 6:03 PM
fried eggs in the skull by gorden lee May 10, 2002 6:09 PM
Grow by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 5:57 PM
Shattered by Face Plants Jr. May 10, 2002 5:53 PM
voices by mtmynd May 10, 2002 7:56 AM
completed by mtmynd May 10, 2002 7:53 AM
hello by buddhabitch May 10, 2002 7:38 AM
retreat by buddhabitch May 10, 2002 7:35 AM
good practice by buddhabitch May 10, 2002 7:33 AM
sorry by vdubya May 9, 2002 10:07 AM
away by m.t.mynd May 9, 2002 8:09 AM
cycles by m.t.mynd May 9, 2002 7:57 AM
.......... by um May 10, 2002 2:22 AM
hai-jinx by mtmynd May 8, 2002 7:59 PM
..... by um May 10, 2002 2:24 AM
... by buddhabitch May 8, 2002 7:31 PM
autumn leaves by izza May 8, 2002 7:44 PM
transitory existence by rouge saint May 8, 2002 6:33 PM
Short circuit by vincy May 8, 2002 7:05 PM
actual haiku ? by izza May 8, 2002 4:16 PM
?'s by buddhabitch May 8, 2002 4:31 PM
reply to ?'s by izza May 8, 2002 4:37 PM
more ?'s by buddhabitch May 8, 2002 4:55 PM
reply to more ?'s by izza May 8, 2002 4:59 PM
the ?'s continue by buddhabitch May 8, 2002 5:04 PM
more "answers" by izza May 8, 2002 5:10 PM
irrelevent by rouge saint May 8, 2002 6:21 PM
Iron rules? by izza May 8, 2002 7:42 PM
Antichrist cloned by vincy May 8, 2002 8:54 AM
Easy now by vincy May 8, 2002 9:05 AM
mirror by Vaselina May 7, 2002 4:28 PM
we are we are by Yabyum May 7, 2002 9:14 PM
evolve by Vaselina May 7, 2002 4:26 PM
nothing by gorden lee May 10, 2002 6:15 PM
be-hai by m.t.mynd May 7, 2002 7:52 AM
Rotten apple by vincy May 7, 2002 10:49 AM
In Vain Haiku by vincy May 7, 2002 11:45 AM
Got to trust somebody by vincy May 7, 2002 11:51 AM
all-ku by m.t.mynd May 7, 2002 7:46 AM
fire by um May 7, 2002 4:46 AM
you by vdubya May 6, 2002 4:59 PM
Wind by izza May 6, 2002 5:55 PM
gentle tides by aone May 6, 2002 2:20 PM
A bite taken by izza May 6, 2002 5:51 PM
OLD MAN by aone May 6, 2002 2:19 PM
old man old door by 13r. hayden May 6, 2002 4:31 PM
Old Man by izza May 6, 2002 5:56 PM
Bible stories by anniefay May 6, 2002 2:01 PM
when I was six by junio May 6, 2002 12:44 PM
wasted time in playgrounds? by DizzyKicks May 6, 2002 11:36 AM
In the name of growth by vincy May 6, 2002 11:53 AM
found by Illuminara May 6, 2002 11:58 AM
Forgotten by vincy May 6, 2002 12:12 PM
scene by Illuminara May 6, 2002 12:16 PM
THE WAY by aone May 6, 2002 11:13 AM
Resurrection by junio May 6, 2002 6:00 AM
mirror by bellazygotic May 5, 2002 11:48 PM
ephemeral by rouge saint May 5, 2002 5:41 PM
ephemeral by eddy May 6, 2002 9:32 AM
A rose petal by izza May 8, 2002 7:46 PM
the planter by anniefay May 5, 2002 3:25 PM
dandelion's perspective by anniefay May 5, 2002 1:40 PM
dandelion by izza May 6, 2002 5:53 PM
Haiku to Harleys by anniefay May 5, 2002 1:34 PM
warehouse windows by DizzyKicks May 5, 2002 12:51 PM
free zzz's by mtmynd May 5, 2002 9:23 AM
respite by mtmynd May 5, 2002 9:18 AM
Fallback by vincy May 5, 2002 8:03 AM
Intention by vincy May 5, 2002 8:08 AM
I wonder why? by vincy May 5, 2002 8:21 AM
plunging into eternity by panta rhei May 5, 2002 8:26 AM
deep in my heart by vincy May 5, 2002 8:31 AM
holy by panta rhei May 5, 2002 8:33 AM
The void has no shame by vincy May 5, 2002 8:43 AM
Nothing matters by vincy May 5, 2002 8:26 AM
What's the matter by vincy May 5, 2002 8:36 AM
..... by anniefay May 5, 2002 4:55 AM
see you there by judih. May 5, 2002 5:30 AM
unbearable by rouge saint May 5, 2002 4:21 AM
haiyou by um May 4, 2002 11:08 PM
billions of years ago by bluemonk May 5, 2002 12:47 AM
this epoch by bluemonk May 5, 2002 12:53 AM
.... by um May 5, 2002 2:18 AM
I forgive you by bluemonk May 5, 2002 12:50 AM
... by um May 5, 2002 2:21 AM
peace chant by bluemonk May 5, 2002 2:48 AM
sad to say by bluemonk May 5, 2002 2:50 AM
...... by um May 5, 2002 3:49 AM
And I forgive you... by izza May 6, 2002 5:58 PM
Hi..you by izza May 6, 2002 6:43 PM
my first haiku... by abbehill May 4, 2002 12:26 PM
dead leaves by brought-on-the-earth May 4, 2002 1:12 PM
so fucking right to lash Jack and Jim? by primavera May 4, 2002 3:17 AM
heavy grey morning dream by bluemonk May 4, 2002 1:14 AM
!!! by gorden lee May 3, 2002 7:25 PM
shunned by rouge saint May 3, 2002 5:20 PM
the other side by Illuminara May 3, 2002 5:23 PM
bridge by Illuminara May 3, 2002 3:01 PM
scent by Illuminara May 3, 2002 3:00 PM
---------------- by mtmynd May 3, 2002 7:00 PM
A funny one: by Tif'eret May 3, 2002 1:25 PM
dust by m.t.mynd May 2, 2002 6:31 PM
rain! by panta rhei May 3, 2002 12:26 AM
passSing thru by judih. May 1, 2002 7:17 PM
permeable by Illuminara May 1, 2002 7:39 PM
heart heard by judih. May 1, 2002 7:50 PM
some cowboy coffee by gorden lee May 1, 2002 6:47 PM


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