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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  November 2002
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


high blown sassafras by judih. Nov 30, 2002 2:33 AM
Sunday by artguy Dec 1, 2002 11:04 AM
decision by rusalke Nov 29, 2002 9:37 AM
remember the oak by the brook... by visions Nov 30, 2002 1:19 PM
ah, Maria, recuerdo como no! by rusalke Nov 30, 2002 11:13 PM
write, write, escribe tus poemas! by visions Nov 30, 2002 1:41 PM
si, oigo y recuerdo by rusalke Nov 30, 2002 11:50 PM
lo siento mucho! by visions Dec 1, 2002 12:26 PM
blush response by rusalke Nov 29, 2002 8:34 AM
hothouse rain by judih. Nov 29, 2002 9:33 AM
re by dylan_thomas-ish Dec 1, 2002 12:32 AM
hush by mtmynd Nov 26, 2002 7:58 AM
who koo by mtmynd Nov 26, 2002 8:02 AM
slow koo by mtmynd Nov 26, 2002 8:03 AM
whoa koo by mtmynd Nov 26, 2002 8:06 AM
tight by mtmynd Nov 26, 2002 8:08 AM
turkey by wendyfaber Nov 27, 2002 10:31 AM
i dig by Jarran Krause Dec 5, 2002 4:02 AM
mountain groan by buddhabitch Nov 26, 2002 6:59 AM
spicey rendevouz by panta rhei Nov 26, 2002 7:07 AM
for two? by buddhabitch Nov 26, 2002 7:15 AM
coffee by panta rhei Nov 26, 2002 7:25 AM
piku by panta rhei Nov 26, 2002 7:29 AM
oh yes by buddhabitch Nov 26, 2002 7:34 AM
k by panta rhei Nov 26, 2002 8:50 AM
quickie by judih. Nov 26, 2002 7:28 AM
coffee kisses by buddhabitch Nov 26, 2002 7:30 AM
Tollwut by Mob Nov 26, 2002 5:54 AM
Winter Haiku - pc by New Englander Nov 25, 2002 12:41 PM
Autumn Haiku - pc by New Englander Nov 25, 2002 12:38 PM
hopalong hai by buddhabitch Nov 25, 2002 9:49 AM
a photo from early 1950s by Julienne Nov 25, 2002 5:40 AM
love melt by justalil Nov 24, 2002 9:06 PM
short letter by long distance drunk Nov 24, 2002 1:51 AM
splintering by long distance drunk Nov 24, 2002 1:48 AM
rounded gravitational props by orange Nov 23, 2002 9:08 PM
training by Emelia Nov 22, 2002 7:13 PM
grrrrr by Emelia Nov 26, 2002 9:40 PM
carry on by buddhabitch Nov 22, 2002 6:42 AM
swarming cold (pc) by thelonius punk Nov 21, 2002 10:24 PM
damn cold by Emelia Nov 22, 2002 7:14 PM
meeting of passions (pc) by thelonius punk Nov 21, 2002 10:20 PM
well by rastaruined Nov 23, 2002 4:25 PM
dear thelonius p by judih. Nov 24, 2002 7:35 PM
Parallel thoughts by vincy Nov 21, 2002 4:05 PM
midnight dripping on the line by orange Nov 20, 2002 9:35 PM
sigh hai circuitous by buddhabitch Nov 20, 2002 6:07 PM
wrinkled toes in motion by orange Nov 20, 2002 9:27 PM
walls by rastaruined Nov 20, 2002 9:38 AM
music hai by Julienne Nov 20, 2002 5:32 AM
Zoundz by artguy Nov 21, 2002 3:21 PM
blue smoke rising by orange Nov 20, 2002 12:48 AM
yeah by Jarran Krause Dec 5, 2002 4:00 AM
Big Bang by JackyDuluoz Nov 19, 2002 8:50 PM
helpless by justalil Nov 19, 2002 10:45 AM
... by justalil Nov 19, 2002 10:47 AM
... by justalil Nov 19, 2002 10:48 AM
... by justalil Nov 19, 2002 10:52 AM
... by justalil Nov 19, 2002 10:55 AM
hair stands on end by orange Nov 19, 2002 12:21 PM
musical void by Emelia Nov 19, 2002 8:11 PM
w/ ice by Emelia Nov 19, 2002 8:14 PM
haiku squence by anymouse Nov 19, 2002 9:01 AM
toothpaste by mtmynd Nov 19, 2002 8:11 AM
The Haiku That Wasn't There by Doctor Proteus Nov 18, 2002 6:24 PM
haiku pms by mtmynd Nov 18, 2002 6:43 PM
Quiet Night's Muse by Beauregard Lee - pc by tkg Nov 18, 2002 7:57 AM
Slicing ginger in the morning to boil broccoli for nursing mother - pc by tkg Nov 18, 2002 7:37 AM
slump by justalil Nov 18, 2002 7:04 AM
'''' by justalil Nov 18, 2002 7:05 AM
*** by justalil Nov 18, 2002 7:06 AM
??? by Mob Nov 18, 2002 7:16 AM
!!! by justalil Nov 18, 2002 8:55 AM
Swept by coolazice Nov 16, 2002 5:40 PM
i like this by justalil Nov 18, 2002 9:05 AM
Bubble Haiku by Doctor Proteus Nov 14, 2002 4:25 PM
bubububble by justalil Nov 15, 2002 6:49 AM
Bubble..... by artguy Nov 15, 2002 9:42 PM
lost by justalil Nov 14, 2002 12:31 PM
-- by justalil Nov 14, 2002 12:31 PM
-- by justalil Nov 14, 2002 12:32 PM
-- by justalil Nov 14, 2002 12:32 PM
guess by onesadloser Nov 14, 2002 12:44 PM
n by newSkinjoy98 Nov 14, 2002 12:35 PM
fall rain by kkizer Nov 14, 2002 9:29 AM
say by rastaruined Nov 13, 2002 7:10 PM
insomnia with a smile by orange Nov 12, 2002 8:40 PM
when's it tomorrow? by justalil Nov 12, 2002 9:21 PM
puzzled and wandering by orange Nov 12, 2002 8:25 PM
envelope by justalil Nov 12, 2002 2:19 PM
Poor Excuse by joe schmoe Nov 11, 2002 8:46 PM
space case by justalil Nov 11, 2002 4:27 PM
after by Dan Barth Nov 11, 2002 10:24 AM
after - my holidays! by Julienne Nov 11, 2002 10:58 AM
Still Yet Another Haiku For You by Dave The Dov Nov 10, 2002 3:35 PM
Here It Is Another Haiku On To You by Dave The Dov Nov 10, 2002 3:28 PM
back to me by justalil Nov 10, 2002 8:42 PM
long jon silver by rastaruined Nov 10, 2002 12:20 PM
his pirate friends by rastaruined Nov 10, 2002 8:03 PM
long john silver's by justalil Nov 11, 2002 8:06 PM
message from a friend by judih. Nov 10, 2002 10:45 AM
picnic park people by notbeat Nov 10, 2002 3:25 AM
trolliecar trouble by notbeat Nov 10, 2002 2:39 AM
Birch Tree by Andy Morrison Nov 9, 2002 12:49 PM
+ by Emelia Nov 13, 2002 3:16 PM
clippings from a moments gasp by orange Nov 9, 2002 2:33 AM
Whole Lotta.... by artguy Nov 8, 2002 2:37 PM
returned to love or how to kill that special someone by rastaruined Nov 8, 2002 10:38 AM
the plan by rastaruined Nov 9, 2002 4:40 PM
trees by Dan Barth Nov 8, 2002 8:28 AM
smell by Dan Barth Nov 8, 2002 8:24 AM
sound by Dan Barth Nov 8, 2002 8:23 AM
looks like by rastaruined Nov 7, 2002 4:49 PM
mmmmm.... by jamelah Nov 7, 2002 6:35 AM
Moonlight Haikus by Snow Leopard Nov 6, 2002 4:55 AM
Sunrise Sutra by Snow Leopard Nov 6, 2002 4:44 AM
Self-centred Buddhist by Snow Leopard Nov 6, 2002 4:37 AM
manic spiral by orange Nov 6, 2002 12:25 AM
aftertaste by rastaruined Nov 5, 2002 6:44 PM
pond by Dan Barth Nov 5, 2002 8:46 AM
figs by Dan Barth Nov 5, 2002 8:44 AM
midget mulleted ninja boy (introduction) by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 7:03 AM
midget mulleted ninja boy (story) by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 7:05 AM
midget mulleted ninja boy (conclusion) by jamelah Nov 5, 2002 7:07 AM
to the mullet by rastaruined Nov 6, 2002 12:23 PM
Frozen by GinBin Nov 4, 2002 1:16 PM
perfect by anniefay Nov 5, 2002 1:48 AM
welcome by KMBH Nov 6, 2002 2:47 PM
girl by jamelah Nov 3, 2002 4:47 PM
that girl by rastaruined Nov 3, 2002 4:50 PM
she by jamelah Nov 3, 2002 4:54 PM
her by rastaruined Nov 4, 2002 9:23 AM
midnight full by doreen peri Nov 3, 2002 12:58 PM
ruining by rastaruined Nov 3, 2002 4:22 PM
Fur by Mob Nov 2, 2002 3:09 AM


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