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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


happy with big sis visiting by Julienne Oct 31, 2002 10:06 AM
want some thoughts on this Julienne? by Jac Nov 3, 2002 12:19 AM
weak coffee by justalil Oct 31, 2002 6:47 AM
finding that rush by rastaruined Oct 31, 2002 9:42 AM
connected by Julienne Oct 30, 2002 11:59 PM
Salvador Rain by Jac Oct 30, 2002 11:54 PM
a whisper from the wind by orange Oct 30, 2002 10:21 PM
yes by JackyDuluoz Oct 31, 2002 10:47 PM
visual by artguy Oct 30, 2002 3:10 PM
haiku news by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 10:37 AM
nice one by Billectric Oct 30, 2002 1:27 PM
path by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:24 AM
bike ride by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:21 AM
dizzy by Jac Oct 30, 2002 11:59 PM
i've got a bike you can ride it if you like... by JackyDuluoz Oct 31, 2002 10:46 PM
mucho gusto! by Dan Barth Nov 1, 2002 10:41 AM
What? by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:18 AM
that was by rastaruined Oct 30, 2002 9:22 AM
story by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:26 AM
sky there by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:33 AM
danbarth by rastaruined Oct 31, 2002 9:39 AM
yeah by Dan Barth Nov 1, 2002 10:51 AM
you bet by rastaruined Nov 3, 2002 4:24 PM
#3550 by m.t.mynd Oct 30, 2002 8:48 AM
Promise by buddhabitch Oct 30, 2002 8:33 AM
last day by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:13 AM
PC Meatmen by JackyDuluoz Oct 30, 2002 12:46 AM
~~~ by m.t.mynd Oct 30, 2002 8:50 AM
Hai - bernate by mtmynd Oct 29, 2002 9:26 PM
Leaves tumble by Bobthegashuffer Oct 29, 2002 4:10 PM
leaves tumble fast by rastaruined Oct 29, 2002 9:06 PM
leaves lie by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:41 AM
packed by Jac Oct 31, 2002 12:05 AM
elemental sentences by orange Oct 27, 2002 10:13 PM
*sparkle on the monkey train* by the mingo Oct 28, 2002 2:56 AM
wife by rastaruined Oct 27, 2002 8:33 PM
wife too by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:36 AM
That by Jac Oct 31, 2002 12:09 AM
no words by wuwei Oct 27, 2002 8:59 AM
Off Ku by mtmynd Oct 29, 2002 8:50 PM
piano wind by Bennie Oct 26, 2002 4:57 PM
... by the mingo Oct 28, 2002 2:31 AM
so sweet by Julienne Oct 26, 2002 11:48 AM
.shadow splash. by orange Oct 25, 2002 1:11 AM
imagination by bludelerium Oct 25, 2002 9:40 PM
good night by abbehill Oct 24, 2002 8:34 PM
meatmen by JackyDuluoz Oct 24, 2002 7:49 PM
does its job... by ibeentired Oct 24, 2002 7:53 PM
Meatmen by JackyDuluoz Oct 25, 2002 11:44 PM
Returning by ibeentired Oct 24, 2002 7:24 PM
what's all this then by transistor Oct 24, 2002 7:29 PM
you know what it is mate by ibeentired Oct 24, 2002 7:40 PM
heartbeats by Julienne Oct 24, 2002 11:11 AM
love of snow by Julienne Oct 24, 2002 3:29 AM
Birds........ by artguy Oct 23, 2002 6:40 PM
tuning the sound of eternity by painted.world Oct 22, 2002 9:49 PM
spinning by panta rhei Oct 23, 2002 2:03 AM
A thought by LankyAl Oct 21, 2002 9:53 AM
they told me by Feign Oct 20, 2002 10:46 PM
beyond sight by orange Oct 20, 2002 7:17 PM
weeping willow dance by painted.world Oct 22, 2002 10:12 PM
create a moment by bludelerium Oct 24, 2002 7:51 PM
#3529 by m.t.mynd Oct 20, 2002 11:13 AM
morning sunshine by anniefay Oct 20, 2002 7:24 AM
golden by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:44 AM
shadows by Dan Barth Oct 30, 2002 9:46 AM
I sit by Feign Oct 20, 2002 1:50 AM
perchance by um Oct 20, 2002 1:55 AM
aye by Feign Feb 10, 2003 2:16 AM
coughin' by um Mar 11, 2003 4:20 AM
Reverse haiku by balthazar Oct 19, 2002 8:34 PM
if you mean... by JackyDuluoz Oct 31, 2002 10:51 PM
reply by balthazar Nov 2, 2002 5:40 PM
inverse... by JackyDuluoz Nov 3, 2002 6:16 PM
Hai prophecy by vincy Oct 18, 2002 8:29 PM
oh god by Feign Oct 17, 2002 9:22 PM
this haiku by meathook Oct 19, 2002 3:13 PM
perfect by Feign Oct 17, 2002 9:19 PM
yellow roses by Feign Oct 17, 2002 9:13 PM
this old house by Emelia Oct 18, 2002 3:15 PM
that house by Feign Oct 19, 2002 12:14 PM
trees away by Feign Oct 17, 2002 9:10 PM
poem full by judih. Oct 17, 2002 9:17 PM
Been there, done that by Feign Oct 19, 2002 12:11 PM
wigwagger by Emelia Oct 17, 2002 3:20 PM
distress by transistor Oct 17, 2002 8:54 PM
koo-ku by mtmynd Oct 16, 2002 10:40 PM
echo by anniefay Oct 17, 2002 4:42 AM
Autumn by ibeentired Oct 16, 2002 8:14 PM
now that's a haiku by transistor Oct 16, 2002 8:34 PM
Costa Rican Breakfast by Uncle B Oct 16, 2002 2:27 PM
7-11 Breakfast by transistor Oct 16, 2002 3:20 PM
Spelling?? by GinBin Nov 4, 2002 1:41 PM
fire by Feign Oct 16, 2002 11:28 AM
pretty things by Feign Oct 16, 2002 11:26 AM
wrong thought by Feign Oct 16, 2002 11:23 AM
bird look by Feign Oct 16, 2002 11:21 AM
ghosts by Feign Oct 16, 2002 11:19 AM
outside by Feign Oct 16, 2002 11:17 AM
Cruel Autumn (bad teenage haiku) by AngelHeadedHipster Oct 16, 2002 6:05 AM
electric pass to the heart: a dream by orange Oct 15, 2002 11:06 PM
A Haiku for my Mum ... (missing you always x) by Mob Oct 15, 2002 4:09 AM
mum by wendyfaber Oct 15, 2002 11:13 AM
my momku by bluemonk Oct 15, 2002 3:50 PM
mother by transistor Oct 16, 2002 2:57 PM
mum by Emelia Oct 18, 2002 3:21 PM
In any event by galaxy Oct 14, 2002 6:02 AM
:) by Emelia Oct 18, 2002 3:24 PM
presto chango by buddhabitch Oct 14, 2002 5:39 AM
twilight zone by Mob Oct 14, 2002 5:42 AM
no sleep by justalil Oct 14, 2002 3:57 AM
trying by justalil Oct 14, 2002 3:58 AM
no title this time (well, not exactly) by orange Oct 14, 2002 12:40 AM
jot it by buddhabitch Oct 14, 2002 5:18 AM
silent conversations by Cora Oct 14, 2002 10:23 AM
Nondescript by Dr. David Banner Oct 13, 2002 2:59 PM
simple joy by buddhabitch Oct 14, 2002 5:16 AM
simple joy by Emelia Oct 18, 2002 3:31 PM
hai'est ku by m.t.mynd Oct 13, 2002 1:33 PM
high koo by m.t.mynd Oct 13, 2002 1:39 PM
up and away by buddhabitch Oct 14, 2002 5:10 AM
silence is a freed balloon by m.t.mynd Oct 13, 2002 12:23 PM
hai'er ku by m.t.mynd Oct 13, 2002 12:33 PM
shh by justalil Oct 13, 2002 12:20 AM
whispering by anniefay Oct 13, 2002 5:21 AM
rainy day view by orange Oct 12, 2002 1:09 PM
echo from here by Cora Oct 12, 2002 4:02 PM
i can only imagine... by orange Oct 13, 2002 2:01 PM
[~}{~] by justalil Oct 11, 2002 9:45 PM
broke up by long distance drunk Oct 11, 2002 9:28 PM
& by ibeentired Oct 16, 2002 8:19 PM
no rest by long distance drunk Oct 21, 2002 12:37 PM
remember by auziea Jan 17, 2003 6:04 PM
plastic by long distance drunk Jan 24, 2003 6:10 PM
:::: by justalil Oct 11, 2002 1:10 PM
her revelry by onesadloser Oct 11, 2002 11:44 AM
good morning by justalil Oct 11, 2002 8:05 AM
mmm by justalil Oct 11, 2002 8:07 AM
*grumble* by justalil Oct 11, 2002 8:09 AM
whoo by justalil Oct 11, 2002 8:11 AM
#3492 by mtmynd Oct 11, 2002 7:41 AM
regard by Feign Oct 11, 2002 12:37 AM
:\ by justalil Oct 11, 2002 10:38 PM
deference deferens indifferens by Feign Oct 11, 2002 12:31 AM
deafdumb by Feign Oct 11, 2002 12:25 AM
water's edge by Feign Oct 11, 2002 12:21 AM
my roof to leak by Emelia Oct 10, 2002 7:49 PM
outraged elementals by orange Oct 10, 2002 2:42 PM
post-catharsis by cylance Oct 10, 2002 7:40 AM
catharsis by cylance Oct 10, 2002 7:39 AM
pre-catharsis by cylance Oct 10, 2002 7:38 AM
being mindless - just us by buddhabitch Oct 10, 2002 5:08 AM
listening by panta rhei Oct 10, 2002 5:15 AM
watching by buddhabitch Oct 10, 2002 5:19 AM
eyeskies by judih. Oct 10, 2002 6:49 AM
Listenin................ by artguy Oct 9, 2002 6:24 PM
Jus..... by artguy Oct 9, 2002 5:18 PM
Art by artguy Oct 9, 2002 4:37 PM
what........... by artguy Oct 9, 2002 4:29 PM
blah by justalil Oct 9, 2002 7:53 AM
... by justalil Oct 9, 2002 12:55 PM
{~} by justalil Oct 9, 2002 12:57 PM
be by Illuminara Oct 9, 2002 1:00 PM
slap by Illuminara Oct 9, 2002 12:58 PM
coffee break thought by onesadloser Oct 9, 2002 4:32 AM
and now, a haiku for by jim vinny Oct 8, 2002 11:57 AM
the whole title by jim vinny Oct 8, 2002 12:02 PM
that's by cylance Oct 8, 2002 12:16 PM
Haiku For You by Dave The Dov Oct 7, 2002 2:43 PM
forging ahead without the others seemed like a good idea at the time... pc by sneekymonkey Oct 7, 2002 9:52 AM
Monday Morning Satori by visions Oct 6, 2002 11:38 PM
ego by zil Oct 6, 2002 11:03 PM
eyes closed and feeling by orange Oct 6, 2002 7:15 PM
Meat by JackyDuluoz Oct 6, 2002 4:45 PM
filliments from the solitary traveler by orange Oct 6, 2002 12:58 PM
you speak to me by Cora Oct 10, 2002 2:09 AM
oooaaaatrrgghjhh by learned Oct 6, 2002 12:54 PM
fi nulll ku by judih. Oct 5, 2002 8:01 AM
foggy rain by Emelia Oct 4, 2002 11:17 AM
fifty-seven by wyrdsky Oct 3, 2002 11:50 PM
great! by JackyDuluoz Oct 6, 2002 4:41 PM
... by anniefay Oct 3, 2002 4:44 PM
oh by learned Oct 3, 2002 5:09 PM
nothing matters? by Emelia Oct 4, 2002 11:10 AM
:":": by justalil Oct 4, 2002 11:50 AM
answers by Feign Oct 9, 2002 1:30 AM
sometimes by jim vinny Oct 9, 2002 2:52 PM
HAIKU CHALLENGE-England by shyster Oct 3, 2002 9:07 AM
***whispering..."britain ain't a gaddamn country!"*** by learned Oct 3, 2002 10:26 AM
scotland by learned Oct 3, 2002 10:28 AM
scotland2 by learned Oct 3, 2002 10:30 AM
scotland3 by learned Oct 3, 2002 10:32 AM
Scotland (a defence) by Bennie Oct 5, 2002 3:36 PM
bumbershoot by Feign Oct 6, 2002 11:15 PM
Lined up by Feign Oct 6, 2002 11:21 PM
remember by Feign Oct 2, 2002 3:27 PM
mom's cuisine by Feign Oct 6, 2002 11:27 PM
savored by Feign Oct 2, 2002 3:23 PM
death sentence by Feign Oct 2, 2002 3:21 PM
you by Feign Oct 2, 2002 3:18 PM
wednesday by mtmynd Oct 2, 2002 8:27 AM
late afternoon beauty by panta rhei Oct 2, 2002 8:31 AM
~~ by mtmynd Oct 2, 2002 8:39 AM
ablution by cylance Oct 2, 2002 3:00 AM


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