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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


pome by Emelia Sep 30, 2002 10:31 AM
3:15am and all is well? by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2002 2:15 AM
opening eyes by panta rhei Sep 30, 2002 2:27 AM
fog words by panta rhei Sep 30, 2002 1:43 AM
tired time after time fog by buddhabitch Sep 30, 2002 2:13 AM
latearly by panta rhei Sep 30, 2002 2:21 AM
thoughtless by wuwei Sep 29, 2002 7:55 PM
letting it happen by panta rhei Sep 30, 2002 1:41 AM
newbie posting by slowpoke Sep 29, 2002 3:58 PM
piano mastery by judih. Sep 29, 2002 11:10 AM
cannabis satie by mtmynd Sep 29, 2002 11:22 AM
shifting my shape by panta rhei Sep 30, 2002 1:49 AM
probably not! by anniefay Sep 29, 2002 4:32 AM
Please critique by sonofthesun Sep 28, 2002 3:07 PM
quad-ku by mtmynd Sep 28, 2002 4:07 PM
Damacles by Emelia Sep 27, 2002 3:13 PM
champagne-ku by panta rhei Sep 27, 2002 12:52 AM
falling drops by panta rhei Sep 27, 2002 12:51 AM
3438 by mtmynd Sep 26, 2002 10:38 PM
3437 by mtmynd Sep 26, 2002 10:26 PM
dancing past horizon by panta rhei Sep 27, 2002 12:49 AM
3436 by mtmynd Sep 26, 2002 10:17 PM
happiness by visions Sep 26, 2002 5:33 AM
PC Haiku ! by Feign Sep 26, 2002 4:54 AM
Haiku no.17 (PC) by Rhinehart Sep 26, 2002 3:11 AM
Always Travelling by Billectric Sep 25, 2002 12:48 PM
rain will come by bluemonk Sep 25, 2002 7:46 AM
Flower by zombielvis Sep 25, 2002 11:12 AM
skyways by zil Sep 26, 2002 12:49 AM
Inter-being by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:08 AM
Corruption-Emptiness by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:12 AM
Samsara by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:15 AM
Samadhi by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:18 AM
Pap, ode 2 Kabbalah by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:21 AM
summer of '02 by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:25 AM
Rumi by wendyfaber Sep 25, 2002 7:27 AM
shrii guru by bluemonk Sep 25, 2002 7:42 AM
yesterday by wendyfaber Sep 26, 2002 1:54 AM
where by wendyfaber Sep 26, 2002 2:15 AM
rumi by wendyfaber Sep 26, 2002 2:19 AM
if u dare by wendyfaber Jan 2, 2003 2:26 AM
tears of joy by bluemonk Jan 25, 2003 7:44 PM
loss as flashlight by wendyfaber Jul 8, 2004 7:56 AM
ohm is home by judih. Sep 25, 2002 12:57 PM
Greek Chorus by wendyfaber Sep 26, 2002 1:59 AM
travel by wendyfaber Sep 26, 2002 2:09 AM
wish for something by Voxette Sep 25, 2002 6:50 AM
sorrow by Voxette Sep 25, 2002 6:47 AM
gentle by Voxette Sep 25, 2002 6:37 AM
soup by Voxette Sep 25, 2002 6:22 AM
Phantom Pains by NARAKA Sep 25, 2002 5:28 AM
soo-ku by panta rhei Sep 25, 2002 1:29 AM
pure gold September born by visions Sep 25, 2002 1:41 AM
hearing you by panta rhei Sep 25, 2002 1:45 AM
very busy just now... by visions Sep 25, 2002 1:59 AM
i, too, try to learn by panta rhei Sep 25, 2002 2:06 AM
music and dreams heal by visions Sep 25, 2002 2:16 AM
A.M. by buddhabitch Sep 25, 2002 7:35 AM
blown my way by buddhabitch Sep 25, 2002 7:32 AM
autumn shout by Voxette Sep 24, 2002 9:46 AM
jump in by Voxette Sep 24, 2002 9:43 AM
pathwise buzzards by buddhabitch Sep 24, 2002 9:40 AM
birds of prey by zombielvis Sep 24, 2002 10:01 AM
dance by Voxette Sep 24, 2002 9:39 AM
starting this circus all over again (cream and sugar?) by orange Sep 23, 2002 7:13 PM
at the sky by long distance drunk Sep 23, 2002 11:36 AM
why, i oughta haiku you! by newSkinjoy98 Sep 23, 2002 10:17 AM
freshfallku by justalil Sep 23, 2002 9:00 AM
Bug by bloodmoon Sep 22, 2002 4:45 PM
Regrets ( I have had a few ) by Mob Sep 22, 2002 4:00 AM
memories by anniefay Sep 22, 2002 8:23 AM
Time by Mob Sep 22, 2002 8:34 AM
haiku for night by zil Sep 22, 2002 12:43 AM
walking through Zion, november 2001 by bluemonk Sep 21, 2002 10:30 AM
A LitKickers Haiku by Mob Sep 21, 2002 2:53 AM
wall of death rider by dot Sep 20, 2002 4:29 PM
rough day continues by justalil Sep 20, 2002 2:26 PM
Liquid Haven by ~K Sep 20, 2002 9:17 PM
California Haiku by Joe_Seven Sep 20, 2002 11:20 AM
autumn haiku by Joe_Seven Sep 20, 2002 11:19 AM
manchineel tree by Emelia Sep 20, 2002 10:23 AM
dock by Emelia Sep 20, 2002 10:20 AM
Ecstasy by Mob Sep 20, 2002 8:24 AM
safe hai by mtmynd Sep 20, 2002 8:33 AM
#3402 by mtmynd Sep 20, 2002 5:52 AM
#3401 by mtmynd Sep 20, 2002 5:47 AM
NICE...You have captured... by zygotenmycoffee Sep 20, 2002 12:51 PM
walking into clarksdale by panta rhei Sep 20, 2002 3:08 AM
hermetically sealed by judih. Sep 20, 2002 3:16 AM
kaos by panta rhei Sep 20, 2002 2:59 AM
tender membranes by judih. Sep 20, 2002 3:07 AM
delicate layer by panta rhei Sep 20, 2002 3:11 AM
madness by panta rhei Sep 20, 2002 2:58 AM
The way I feel by cape memories Sep 19, 2002 1:46 PM
listen by zombielvis Sep 19, 2002 1:32 PM
quite quiet by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2002 9:46 PM
Rose Petals . by dot Sep 19, 2002 12:41 PM
drinking you in... by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2002 9:38 PM
It's a wise woman that knows when she's out of her depth. by dot Sep 19, 2002 12:38 PM
wisdom is knowing you don't know... by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2002 9:34 PM
waiting to hear by panta rhei Sep 19, 2002 8:44 AM
hearing you by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2002 9:31 PM
breezes by panta rhei Sep 19, 2002 8:41 AM
Breeze on NJ Turnpike by zombielvis Sep 19, 2002 10:54 AM
rainy breeze by zombielvis Sep 19, 2002 10:57 AM
OH I FORGOT TO PUT PC by zombielvis Sep 19, 2002 11:13 AM
haiku messenger by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2002 11:29 AM
oh maybe it had no subject (required) hehe by zombielvis Sep 19, 2002 2:15 PM
who is u? by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2002 9:28 PM
confusion by go_rimbaud Sep 19, 2002 8:29 AM
mist of hollow by panta rhei Sep 19, 2002 8:44 AM
mindless morning by justalil Sep 19, 2002 7:49 AM
morning mind by Mob Sep 19, 2002 8:03 AM
nonmorning person by justalil Sep 19, 2002 7:42 AM
morning person by Mob Sep 19, 2002 7:52 AM
morning? by judih. Sep 19, 2002 8:04 AM
afternoon! by Mob Sep 19, 2002 8:08 AM
ah...evening by judih. Sep 19, 2002 8:19 AM
evening by Mob Sep 19, 2002 8:26 AM
de-dayed by panta rhei Sep 19, 2002 8:40 AM
crawl softly through dusk by judih. Sep 19, 2002 8:42 AM
goodnight by Mob Sep 19, 2002 8:50 AM
a handwritten sky by orange Sep 18, 2002 8:41 PM
interstate radio by justalil Sep 19, 2002 7:44 AM
+ by Emelia Sep 23, 2002 3:59 PM
isolation by Emelia Sep 18, 2002 3:24 PM
or go by szerelem Sep 18, 2002 3:40 PM
exactly by Emelia Sep 18, 2002 3:56 PM
INTERNATIONAL POLICE by zygotenmycoffee Sep 18, 2002 2:48 PM
goddamn swedes by ironhands Sep 18, 2002 3:35 PM
grrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!! by justalil Sep 18, 2002 11:18 AM
the cure by anniefay Sep 18, 2002 12:43 PM
what the hell by justalil Sep 18, 2002 11:16 AM
chatty cathy by Emelia Sep 18, 2002 10:30 AM
fall by panta rhei Sep 18, 2002 8:52 AM
i-ku by panta rhei Sep 18, 2002 8:49 AM
late light dance by panta rhei Sep 18, 2002 8:48 AM
play your peace once more by judih. Sep 18, 2002 9:53 AM
Bait and Fish by buddhabitch Sep 17, 2002 10:51 PM
trailer park by jamelah Sep 17, 2002 7:48 PM
deluxe by ironhands Sep 17, 2002 7:51 PM
mullet man(ia) by jamelah Sep 17, 2002 7:55 PM
cats by ironhands Sep 17, 2002 7:18 PM
kettles by judih. Sep 17, 2002 7:21 PM
fast dance (ed) by ironhands Sep 17, 2002 7:24 PM
hovering cat by judih. Sep 17, 2002 7:27 PM
mouse by ironhands Sep 17, 2002 7:30 PM
cat sets out for big city by judih. Sep 17, 2002 7:35 PM
one a my fave bands, by ironhands Sep 17, 2002 7:36 PM
tiptoeing by panta rhei Sep 17, 2002 1:40 AM
drip dropping by twotymer97 Sep 17, 2002 5:34 PM
ragged feathers by panta rhei Sep 17, 2002 1:37 AM
looking at the horizon by panta rhei Sep 17, 2002 1:35 AM
... by twotymer97 Sep 17, 2002 5:36 PM
* by bluemonk Sep 16, 2002 6:33 PM
Press Release by buddhabitch Sep 17, 2002 10:48 PM
pumkins ghosts and monsters by Emelia Sep 16, 2002 3:50 PM
no pumpkin tied to ankle by panta rhei Sep 17, 2002 1:29 AM
cherry-filled eyeball gumballs by Emelia Sep 16, 2002 3:48 PM
whoa boy...you lookin' good! by buddhabitch Sep 16, 2002 9:04 AM
Chantra by Links Sep 16, 2002 8:03 AM
another industrial haiku by zil Sep 15, 2002 10:08 PM
diesel ku by stilltrucking Sep 18, 2002 12:40 PM
lost and found by stilltrucking Sep 15, 2002 11:47 AM
shadow-ku by mtmynd Sep 15, 2002 8:42 AM
breathing the shadows by panta rhei Sep 17, 2002 1:33 AM
oh jesus by stilltrucking Sep 18, 2002 12:32 PM
EDGAR'S COLD WAR by zygotenmycoffee Sep 14, 2002 12:17 PM
:) by go_rimbaud Sep 15, 2002 4:11 PM
the bouquet by anniefay Sep 14, 2002 5:23 AM
doctor my eyes by stilltrucking Sep 14, 2002 3:06 PM
shadows climb freely by go_rimbaud Sep 13, 2002 12:15 PM
everything flows... by buddhabitch Sep 13, 2002 3:50 AM
Paradise by Mob Sep 13, 2002 5:03 AM
soft explosion by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 6:57 AM
chaste by orphicgoblin Sep 13, 2002 2:29 AM
contemplation by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:42 AM
while driving my car... by bobby.f.m Sep 13, 2002 2:28 AM
on the road by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:47 AM
I think I will by bobby.f.m Sep 13, 2002 5:08 AM
As by orphicgoblin Sep 13, 2002 2:23 AM
our violence by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:45 AM
asleep by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:14 AM
morning by orphicgoblin Sep 13, 2002 2:18 AM
for breakfast: by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:26 AM
whirling by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:07 AM
uni versal by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:08 AM
sound of silence by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:08 AM
shhhhhhhh by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:10 AM
silence by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:10 AM
wake of silence by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:14 AM
bravo to your symphony by judih. Sep 13, 2002 3:30 AM
silent hai by mtmynd Sep 13, 2002 5:03 AM
panta by anniefay Sep 13, 2002 10:38 AM
nomad by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:06 AM
wandering wonder by buddhabitch Sep 13, 2002 4:03 AM
ways by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 1:57 AM
paths by buddhabitch Sep 13, 2002 4:00 AM
silent scream by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 1:54 AM
screaming silence by judih. Sep 13, 2002 1:55 AM
hid in the sky by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 2:01 AM
picking grapes by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 1:52 AM
riesling on the rhine by judih. Sep 13, 2002 1:57 AM
grapevine grappling by panta rhei Sep 13, 2002 1:59 AM
this is not kansas by judih. Sep 12, 2002 6:49 AM
we're off to see the wizard... by buddhabitch Sep 13, 2002 3:55 AM
Barb's Pop by Emelia Sep 11, 2002 3:38 PM
911 by mtmynd Sep 11, 2002 6:49 AM
for Levi on 911 by primavera Sep 11, 2002 8:32 AM
eyes rise by cylance Sep 11, 2002 5:26 AM
a flash in her eyes by orange Sep 11, 2002 12:24 AM
orange... by jamelah Sep 11, 2002 5:46 AM
The Connoisseur by Mob Sep 10, 2002 1:16 AM
The Connoisseur II by Mob Sep 10, 2002 1:17 AM
Die Finsternis by Mob Sep 9, 2002 5:34 AM
finsternis II by panta rhei Sep 9, 2002 5:40 AM
hmmmm? by bobby.f.m Sep 9, 2002 5:42 AM
is it still dark when we open our eyes? by panta rhei Sep 9, 2002 5:49 AM
Finsternis III by Mob Sep 9, 2002 6:11 AM
finsternis IV by panta rhei Sep 9, 2002 6:16 AM
Thanks by Mob Sep 9, 2002 6:38 AM
me? i'm ready by panta rhei Sep 9, 2002 7:04 AM
indication by anniefay Sep 9, 2002 5:23 AM
morning by anniefay Sep 9, 2002 5:26 AM
autumn by panta rhei Sep 9, 2002 5:44 AM
liquor and poker by um Sep 8, 2002 4:31 AM
none by kkizer Sep 7, 2002 7:20 PM
eht... by dab Sep 7, 2002 3:00 PM
#3338 by mtmynd Sep 7, 2002 10:24 AM
And... by PsylocybinSam Sep 7, 2002 9:55 AM
experiencing (unSoo haiku) by buddhabitch Sep 7, 2002 5:41 AM
freedom by anniefay Sep 7, 2002 6:03 AM
umbrella smile by ~K Sep 7, 2002 6:09 AM
Career Ghost by ~K Sep 7, 2002 4:26 AM
soft her by judih. Sep 6, 2002 10:17 PM
hard her by rusalke Sep 6, 2002 10:39 PM
ben hur by Illuminara Sep 6, 2002 11:15 PM
plump by MVh Sep 6, 2002 11:17 PM
aperture by snakhi Sep 6, 2002 9:47 AM
day by auziea Sep 6, 2002 12:21 PM
This is by ~K Sep 7, 2002 4:39 AM
B&W by Emelia Sep 10, 2002 3:23 PM
when song plays by judih. Sep 6, 2002 7:02 AM
bead dreams by buddhabitch Sep 6, 2002 4:25 AM
the burning eye by auziea Sep 5, 2002 2:00 PM
the teary eye by snakhi Sep 6, 2002 9:43 AM
the stinky eye by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:59 AM
quietus by Illuminara Sep 5, 2002 12:47 PM
and its sad by auziea Sep 5, 2002 2:02 PM
death's grace by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2002 8:35 AM
how i need ya by judih. Sep 5, 2002 9:23 AM
end in friend by buddhabitch Sep 6, 2002 4:29 AM
sure whatever by justalil Sep 4, 2002 7:31 AM
malaria by cylance Sep 4, 2002 7:14 AM
wordstink by judih. Sep 4, 2002 7:18 AM
fresh flowers by cylance Sep 4, 2002 7:46 AM
haiku for loneliness by zil Sep 3, 2002 10:32 PM
unring by judih. Sep 3, 2002 10:50 PM
tidal effect (PC) by sonofthesun Sep 3, 2002 9:27 PM
whatever happens by judih. Sep 2, 2002 8:34 PM
fly by Illuminara Sep 2, 2002 8:38 PM
War by dionisio Sep 2, 2002 2:02 AM


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