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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


^ by rain70 Aug 30, 2003 11:41 AM
grackles greet the sun by mtmynd Aug 30, 2003 8:57 AM
CAW!!! by artguy Aug 30, 2003 11:38 AM
for the birds by starsailor Sep 1, 2003 5:30 AM
love fruit by buddhabitch Aug 29, 2003 6:05 AM
Juicy Judih by mtmynd Aug 29, 2003 6:34 AM
squeeze out another one by judih. Aug 29, 2003 9:22 PM
pomegranate bursts by judih. Aug 29, 2003 9:20 PM
brooklyn 3:22 am. by ironhands Aug 29, 2003 12:24 AM
empty streets by judih. Aug 29, 2003 4:03 AM
Out of that crappy kidnapping art show by poildecarotte Aug 29, 2003 4:21 AM
Flat by cholswade Aug 28, 2003 4:40 PM
(haiku 4544) by mtmynd Aug 28, 2003 7:10 AM
Sky by artguy Aug 28, 2003 4:02 PM
Is this haiku? by buddhabitch Aug 28, 2003 5:44 AM
is this haisoo zen? by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 5:52 AM
rhei ta-pan, by ARAHH Aug 28, 2003 6:34 AM
panta gram by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 6:47 AM
Ancient leaves by ARAHH Aug 28, 2003 6:55 AM
seventh month by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 7:39 AM
west fallen sun by judih. Aug 28, 2003 7:31 AM
fallen sun by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 7:36 AM
is this by judih. Aug 28, 2003 7:29 AM
disciple PC by nowherenothing Aug 27, 2003 9:52 PM
Trying for too much... by pottygok Aug 28, 2003 7:38 AM
'ku by zen_ Sep 20, 2003 2:55 AM
A few more that need some critiques... by pottygok Aug 27, 2003 6:52 PM
Hello, by ARAHH Aug 28, 2003 4:02 AM
shadows by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 4:23 AM
re: by pottygok Aug 28, 2003 7:38 AM
moment by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 7:42 AM
Grass-PC! by cholswade Aug 27, 2003 5:54 PM
Only one image??? by pottygok Aug 27, 2003 6:33 PM
OK by cholswade Aug 28, 2003 3:38 AM
Read Higginson... by pottygok Aug 28, 2003 7:32 AM
Thanks+ a question by cholswade Aug 28, 2003 3:58 PM
Question??? by pottygok Aug 29, 2003 12:28 PM
Thanks again! by cholswade Aug 30, 2003 4:26 PM
grass by panta rhei Aug 28, 2003 7:45 AM
Reminds me by cholswade Aug 30, 2003 4:31 PM
Whiskey Island Seeks Haiku... by pottygok Aug 27, 2003 2:21 PM
5 by ARAHH Aug 27, 2003 8:20 AM
Rain by Sabertash Aug 26, 2003 9:25 PM
store (in a dry place) by beatvibe Aug 25, 2003 5:59 PM
a ruckus by firecracker Aug 25, 2003 6:52 PM
cobalt by beatvibe Aug 25, 2003 8:36 PM
speaking of lint (and cobalt) by jamelah Aug 26, 2003 7:45 PM
eve's enigma by beatvibe Aug 26, 2003 8:36 PM
huh by ironhands Aug 29, 2003 12:19 AM
Different haiku PC by bohothug Aug 24, 2003 9:48 AM
what's wrong by poildecarotte Aug 25, 2003 8:27 AM
Just because the challenge was issued... !-) by pottygok Aug 25, 2003 12:58 PM
Repetition... by pottygok Aug 25, 2003 1:04 PM
Actually by bohothug Aug 25, 2003 4:52 PM
Solid... by pottygok Aug 25, 2003 7:29 PM
4-6 by ARAHH Aug 24, 2003 8:49 AM
1-3 by ARAHH Aug 24, 2003 8:46 AM
snoring by Emelia Aug 24, 2003 1:33 AM
weimaraner curled by wendyfaber Aug 24, 2003 4:05 AM
boat party by Emelia Aug 24, 2003 1:27 AM
hudson river distances by wendyfaber Aug 24, 2003 4:16 AM
Today by ARAHH Aug 23, 2003 8:05 AM
Drifter at work by ARAHH Aug 23, 2003 8:02 AM
Fin d'saison by Sylph Aug 23, 2003 7:14 AM
L'hiver by anonymous-one Aug 27, 2003 10:43 PM
a new day by magic love Aug 23, 2003 5:14 AM
For Some men by magic love Aug 22, 2003 10:26 PM
sorry by elvin Aug 26, 2003 5:50 PM
little big words by magic love Aug 22, 2003 10:21 PM
Please by magic love Aug 22, 2003 10:13 PM
chance versus reason by Yabyum Aug 22, 2003 10:54 AM
pressure on buttons (the hands shake) by orange Aug 22, 2003 10:45 AM
magnolia by ironhands Aug 22, 2003 8:34 AM
wow by poildecarotte Aug 22, 2003 9:05 AM
veils by mtmynd Aug 22, 2003 7:54 AM
suction by judih. Aug 22, 2003 7:58 AM
elle est partie! mon amour est partie! by poildecarotte Aug 21, 2003 3:23 PM
Afuera by Arcadia Aug 21, 2003 2:37 PM
august by wendyfaber Aug 21, 2003 10:24 AM
chaste ambulance chased by wendyfaber Aug 21, 2003 10:28 AM
september creeps in by poildecarotte Aug 20, 2003 10:40 AM
wisteria by ironhands Aug 20, 2003 9:06 AM
august by learned Aug 20, 2003 8:10 AM
mum by learned Aug 20, 2003 7:57 AM
Angry haiku by singlemalt Aug 20, 2003 6:44 AM
Ha ha ha by Lawless Sep 10, 2003 8:27 PM
I second that by SassyKat Dec 1, 2003 1:07 PM
drop of stillness by judih. Aug 20, 2003 5:54 AM
no haiku by panta rhei Aug 20, 2003 6:41 AM
floored moth by wendyfaber Aug 20, 2003 4:59 AM
then by beatvibe Aug 19, 2003 7:14 PM
i think i'll post one for pottygok, also by all hail the stars Aug 19, 2003 1:55 PM
more by ironhands Aug 19, 2003 8:22 PM
re: by pottygok Aug 21, 2003 9:51 AM
contageous mold maker by orange Aug 19, 2003 1:34 PM
Haiku On To HepKat by Dave The Dov Aug 19, 2003 12:18 PM
In reverse by frontal-abstraction Aug 20, 2003 9:16 AM
Thanks For The Correction by Dave The Dov Aug 20, 2003 11:17 AM
Haiku Unto You by Dave The Dov Aug 19, 2003 12:16 PM
deck light by ironhands Aug 19, 2003 8:26 PM
Thank You by Dave The Dov Aug 20, 2003 11:19 AM
blue on red by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 4:36 AM
read and tasted by judih. Aug 19, 2003 7:22 AM
message in a bottle? by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 9:35 AM
message in a bottle? by poildecarotte Aug 19, 2003 9:36 AM
aye by ironhands Aug 19, 2003 8:28 PM
my sidewalk by ironhands Aug 18, 2003 8:33 AM
true story - haiku today by buddhabitch Aug 18, 2003 2:19 PM
violin voice and rain by poildecarotte Aug 18, 2003 8:24 AM
hiaku---couldn't by rastaruined Aug 16, 2003 11:34 AM
haiku by kkizer Aug 16, 2003 11:10 AM
haiku by kkizer Aug 16, 2003 11:09 AM
I think by ~K Aug 17, 2003 11:05 PM
Agree by kkizer Aug 18, 2003 7:11 AM
Nostadamus 2009 by Cotton Mouth Soldier Aug 14, 2003 2:28 PM
maybe by rain70 Aug 14, 2003 2:52 PM
infact by mandyminx Oct 19, 2003 9:28 AM
aug by Emelia Aug 14, 2003 11:20 AM
Bonnie by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 6:03 AM
bonne by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 6:34 AM
bon by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 6:54 AM
shake yer bon bon by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 7:42 AM
leave her at dawn by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 7:54 AM
Leave dawn to her by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 8:00 AM
leave of dawn. by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 8:16 AM
freezing morning by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 8:48 AM
g'night by poildecarotte Aug 14, 2003 10:07 AM
special haiku for pottygok by ellipsis Aug 13, 2003 11:14 PM
a rinse of breath? by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 11:31 PM
rinse of breath: by ellipsis Aug 13, 2003 11:34 PM
ahhh... by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 11:39 PM
shussan'iwai by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 11:35 PM
re: by ellipsis Aug 13, 2003 11:39 PM
re: re: by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 11:43 PM
re: re: re: by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 6:19 AM
Five haiku--PC!!! by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 7:21 PM
road kill by um Aug 13, 2003 11:55 PM
Very nice! by kkizer Aug 14, 2003 6:56 AM
hm by ellipsis Aug 14, 2003 7:08 AM
Nervous street by ARAHH Aug 13, 2003 5:47 AM
if they could choose by panta rhei Aug 13, 2003 9:51 AM
ideal dream tanka by ARAHH Aug 13, 2003 5:45 AM
Essential Elements of haiku, and some things to avoid as well... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 10:33 AM
hm by ellipsis Aug 12, 2003 10:42 AM
Re: hm. by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 11:56 AM
interesting by ellipsis Aug 12, 2003 12:28 PM
well, could be fun... by firecracker Aug 12, 2003 11:37 AM
The best words were invisible... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 11:47 AM
ahhh by firecracker Aug 12, 2003 12:00 PM
Nope... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 12:19 PM
Josh's commentary. by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 12:15 PM
hey by ellipsis Aug 12, 2003 12:37 PM
Trying to open people's minds a little. by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 1:38 PM
damn, yo by ellipsis Aug 12, 2003 3:03 PM
interesting by firecracker Aug 12, 2003 12:44 PM
yeah, good point by ellipsis Aug 12, 2003 12:45 PM
well you know by firecracker Aug 12, 2003 12:53 PM
Perplexed... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 1:46 PM
On a side note... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 12:26 PM
Modern Haiku by kkizer Aug 12, 2003 12:56 PM
we now interrupt by firecracker Aug 12, 2003 1:03 PM
One sticking point... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 1:34 PM
Agree by kkizer Aug 12, 2003 2:01 PM
So it does... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 3:39 PM
Hi Firecracker! by kkizer Aug 12, 2003 2:09 PM
I have some favorite mags... by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 1:20 PM
oooh! free haiku class! by jamelah Aug 12, 2003 12:33 PM
Haikus, I mean "haiku" by Arcadia Aug 12, 2003 4:07 PM
Entering my required subject...boo-hiss on this... by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 9:40 AM
Thanks for answering!!! by Arcadia Aug 13, 2003 10:45 AM
namaste? by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 6:53 PM
Namaste by Arcadia Aug 14, 2003 10:19 AM
another sidenote to pottygok by firecracker Aug 12, 2003 8:40 PM
Is it really appropriate? by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 6:56 PM
well yeah by firecracker Aug 13, 2003 8:03 PM
seika??? by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 10:50 PM
It is now an article... by pottygok Aug 13, 2003 7:19 PM
Utopic siesta by Arcadia Aug 12, 2003 10:21 AM
moldy bread=pcPCpcPC by slim gizzad Aug 12, 2003 9:16 AM
I sure hope pcPCpcPC means "Please Critique." by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 11:05 AM
thanks... by slim gizzad Aug 12, 2003 2:18 PM
A demonstration? by pottygok Aug 12, 2003 3:40 PM
humid by beatvibe Aug 11, 2003 8:50 PM
one spontaneous breath (myku) by Yabyum Aug 11, 2003 3:33 PM
beer bongs by Emelia Aug 11, 2003 2:44 PM
arboretum by Emelia Aug 11, 2003 2:47 PM
eight eleven by Emelia Aug 11, 2003 2:53 PM
Start by artguy Aug 11, 2003 2:09 PM
in a internet cafe in Reykjavik by sequin Aug 10, 2003 2:11 PM
stoned by panta rhei Aug 10, 2003 3:31 AM
B( TC by Divine_Mendacity Aug 9, 2003 3:08 PM
today at work by Mob Aug 9, 2003 5:52 AM
falling (out of love) by beatvibe Aug 8, 2003 10:15 PM
Falling Resolved - A Brief Footnote by beatvibe Aug 8, 2003 10:21 PM
ONO by ARAHH Aug 9, 2003 4:16 AM
at least it's not just me by beatvibe Aug 9, 2003 10:34 AM
with me by ARAHH Aug 9, 2003 1:49 PM
satire by beatvibe Aug 9, 2003 3:02 PM
Just by ARAHH Aug 10, 2003 5:04 AM
Night-time fates by ARAHH Aug 8, 2003 3:11 PM
raccoon by green_soda Aug 7, 2003 7:41 PM
Pound Ridge 8:01 by ModernAncient Aug 7, 2003 5:05 PM
anytime, anyplace by ellipsis Aug 8, 2003 9:32 AM
brooklyn 3:00 am by ironhands Aug 6, 2003 9:20 PM
connecticut 5 a.m. by judih. Aug 7, 2003 2:47 AM
Like by blagkaput Aug 7, 2003 2:55 AM
münstertal, 12 at noon by panta rhei Aug 7, 2003 3:07 AM
jersey 10:30 am by stevadore Aug 7, 2003 7:35 AM
Durango 6:06 pm by Q.T. Aug 7, 2003 5:07 PM
here and (today) by rain70 Aug 7, 2003 9:43 AM
Rosario, 2:30 PM by Arcadia Aug 7, 2003 10:34 AM
montgomery, 1:30 pm by ellipsis Aug 7, 2003 11:33 AM
, it's humidity, by ellipsis Aug 7, 2003 11:39 AM
its time. by ellipsis Aug 7, 2003 11:41 AM
Santiago Chile, 17:30 PM by Nihilbert Aug 7, 2003 2:28 PM
peoria 4:42pm by kkizer Aug 7, 2003 2:42 PM
Seattle 4:11pm by Sabertash Aug 7, 2003 4:15 PM
Very nice, indeed by beatvibe Aug 7, 2003 9:39 PM
waking song by ModernAncient Aug 6, 2003 6:25 PM
waking dirge by ellipsis Aug 7, 2003 11:44 AM
Crows by Sabertash Aug 6, 2003 11:16 AM
birdtalk by ironhands Aug 6, 2003 9:08 PM
doves by ellipsis Aug 7, 2003 11:46 AM
Blackberries by Sabertash Aug 6, 2003 11:11 AM
berried treasure by ironhands Aug 6, 2003 9:16 PM
chew on this by buddhabitch Aug 5, 2003 7:06 AM
...... by Yabyum Aug 5, 2003 9:08 AM
cinderblock by ironhands Aug 6, 2003 9:10 PM
spit toon by ironhands Aug 6, 2003 9:12 PM
........ by Yabyum Aug 4, 2003 10:00 PM
a rebel yell by ~K Aug 4, 2003 10:23 PM
and furthermore by Yabyum Aug 4, 2003 10:55 AM
buh by ellipsis Aug 4, 2003 11:05 AM
and her sense thereof by beatvibe Aug 4, 2003 10:49 AM
jennifer by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:45 AM
ancients' gift by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:48 AM
flawed whiff by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:50 AM
conniving by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:52 AM
choir of pathways by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:56 AM
hip-hop cricket by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 5:06 AM
multifaceted buddies:..u 1/2 jewish too? by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:12 AM
questionable blossomings by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:13 AM
secret seeds by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:15 AM
welcome by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:17 AM
wandering jews by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 4:21 AM
submerged reality by judih. Aug 4, 2003 3:57 AM
brunch by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 3:34 AM
stingers by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 3:38 AM
courtroom by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 3:43 AM
misty august by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 3:41 AM
travels by wendyfaber Aug 4, 2003 3:46 AM
auziea's haiku by all hail the stars Aug 3, 2003 5:40 PM
Karev iom by kilmes Aug 3, 2003 4:52 PM
To kill a rat by Sabertash Aug 3, 2003 12:39 PM
library haiku stream by rain70 Aug 3, 2003 11:49 AM
a psy-trancer´s evening at home by Mob Aug 2, 2003 2:31 AM
Taking liberty by Sabertash Aug 2, 2003 10:52 PM
Alice by artguy Aug 3, 2003 8:21 AM
Apathy, smoke, complacency by Boom tin dog Aug 3, 2003 10:23 AM
'New Moon for August' by seasevengreen Aug 2, 2003 1:04 AM
revival haiku by beatvibe Aug 1, 2003 9:54 PM
Hallelujah ! by Sabertash Aug 1, 2003 11:01 PM
moss by judih. Aug 1, 2003 12:59 PM


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