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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


Changes...PC by SCBell1 Dec 30, 2003 11:06 PM
worry by Illuminara Dec 31, 2003 12:10 AM
15 PC by zero hero Dec 31, 2003 3:01 PM
PC by Illuminara Dec 31, 2003 12:12 AM
Reply by SCBell1 Dec 31, 2003 1:23 PM
... by pottygok Dec 31, 2003 8:18 AM
good stuff by MichaelAMichael Dec 31, 2003 8:47 AM
reply by SCBell1 Dec 31, 2003 1:25 PM
sixteen (PC) by zero hero Dec 31, 2003 12:30 PM
death is only a worry for those who waste time thinking about dying by Yabyum Dec 30, 2003 4:03 PM
only a morsel by Jimboloco Jan 1, 2004 8:05 AM
General Death by zero hero Jan 2, 2004 10:33 AM
sounds like by Billectric Jan 2, 2004 12:46 PM
laughing by vance Dec 30, 2003 10:26 AM
freedom (PC) by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 2:48 AM
Economy of language? by pottygok Dec 31, 2003 8:41 AM
yeah I need to count with something besides my fingers by zero hero Dec 31, 2003 10:17 AM
the call by Illuminara Dec 30, 2003 12:25 AM
going to St. Elizabeth's (edited tense) by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 5:34 AM
nightmare wakes her--PC by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 2:04 PM
I would love to oblige by zero hero Dec 29, 2003 4:12 PM
from the window by bobert Jan 2, 2004 7:56 PM
sip of blood--PC by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 2:03 PM
this by Illuminara Dec 30, 2003 12:11 AM
flannel sheets--PC by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 2:03 PM
fresh snow--PC by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 2:03 PM
lullaby (PC) by zero hero Dec 29, 2003 9:27 AM
... by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 1:44 PM
yeah it was weak I see it now ,thanks by zero hero Dec 29, 2003 2:47 PM
fog(pc) by sonofthesun Dec 28, 2003 11:51 PM
headlights(PC) by sonofthesun Dec 30, 2003 2:08 AM
click by Illuminara Dec 28, 2003 10:48 AM
synap by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 11:15 AM
PC by buddhabitch Dec 28, 2003 5:14 AM
exhale (PC) by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 11:27 AM
... by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 1:43 PM
I am going to be a diamond one day by zero hero Jan 26, 2004 5:36 PM
over (PC) by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 12:07 AM
... by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 1:42 PM
Community by ARAHH Dec 27, 2003 11:24 AM
Once again by ARAHH Dec 27, 2003 11:23 AM
as if (PC) by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 12:34 AM
x mas by Emelia Dec 26, 2003 6:21 PM
time (PC) by zero hero Dec 28, 2003 12:26 AM
... by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 1:41 PM
I must have been drunk by zero hero Dec 29, 2003 2:48 PM
the swell of jazz trumpet--PC by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 7:36 AM
breathless(PC) by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 6:27 PM
... by pottygok Dec 29, 2003 1:39 PM
ok by zero hero Jan 26, 2004 5:37 PM
a fly stays warm--PC by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 7:36 AM
and now I stop laughing by zero hero Dec 26, 2003 9:12 AM
radio politicians--PC by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 7:36 AM
this haiku writing is serious stuff who am I to PC u by zero hero Dec 26, 2003 9:09 AM
... by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 1:11 PM
dying fly buzz--PC by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 7:35 AM
eros and thanatos by zero hero Dec 26, 2003 9:06 AM
taur:us by Emelia Dec 24, 2003 6:15 PM
convex by Emelia Dec 25, 2003 2:44 PM
He took a hike... by c.w. williams Dec 22, 2003 9:32 PM
echo by zero hero Dec 24, 2003 2:11 AM
lost in the woods by Emelia Dec 24, 2003 9:56 AM
ku-direction a(PC) by zero hero Dec 24, 2003 5:33 PM
... by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 1:22 PM
yes I understand by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 7:13 PM
I just should a said thanks by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 7:14 PM
A SHORT HISTORY OF AMERICAN SLAVERY by ghostwalker Dec 22, 2003 2:05 PM
the future of the history (edited a lot) by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 7:51 PM
Warm dendrites by ARAHH Dec 22, 2003 12:10 PM
Triangular Warning by ARAHH Dec 22, 2003 11:55 AM
Cats know: by ARAHH Dec 22, 2003 12:03 PM
Margret Chase Smith Balloon by ghostwalker Dec 22, 2003 10:15 AM
Be aware where you swim, honey by Arcadia Dec 22, 2003 10:28 AM
reign-dance by Andeh Dec 22, 2003 7:16 AM
yet by Andeh Dec 22, 2003 7:22 AM
no battles by Andeh Dec 22, 2003 7:24 AM
meaning of love by Andeh Dec 22, 2003 7:28 AM
Christmas Pageant--PC by pottygok Dec 22, 2003 4:55 AM
tangled stars by Honus Dec 22, 2003 2:01 AM
o yes we did by judih. Dec 22, 2003 2:55 AM
The pinata night by Honus Mar 4, 2004 1:55 AM
random ku-sings by c.w. williams Dec 21, 2003 10:47 PM
night drive by vance Dec 21, 2003 12:27 PM
night drive by temppixie Dec 22, 2003 10:07 AM
I needed that by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 10:52 AM
open trap door in wood floor by zero hero Dec 30, 2003 1:10 PM
Must have been by vance Jan 1, 2004 11:13 PM
Dark Geometry by zero hero Jan 6, 2004 9:42 AM
Sunrise by Arcadia Dec 21, 2003 8:58 AM
driving home--PC by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 5:15 AM
home by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 5:57 AM
on the road by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 6:46 AM
Oooh!!! by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 4:56 PM
:) (edited) by zero hero Dec 23, 2003 8:03 PM
... by pottygok Dec 26, 2003 7:06 AM
lost driveway--PC by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 5:14 AM
bipedal (PC) by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 2:09 AM
... by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 5:19 AM
growing up at sixty three by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 5:36 AM
leafwalk by wendyfaber Dec 21, 2003 8:14 AM
flame (PC) by son_of_sham Dec 20, 2003 8:45 PM
moonsight by wendyfaber Dec 20, 2003 10:37 PM
eyes are stars by son_of_sham Dec 20, 2003 10:51 PM
three strikes by zero hero Dec 21, 2003 1:56 AM
... by pottygok Dec 21, 2003 5:24 AM
rad critique bud by son_of_sham Dec 21, 2003 8:35 PM
ill by artguy Dec 19, 2003 1:30 PM
pardon the repost by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 1:46 PM
bright winter morning by kkizer Dec 18, 2003 1:33 PM
winter wind chimes by judih. Dec 18, 2003 11:33 PM
10-12 inches -- PC by pottygok Dec 18, 2003 11:40 AM
a dead ant fetal by zero hero Dec 18, 2003 5:44 PM
can't sleep--PC by pottygok Dec 18, 2003 11:39 AM
your sleeping face--PC by pottygok Dec 18, 2003 11:39 AM
he sleeps by buddhabitch Dec 19, 2003 7:13 AM
... by buddhabitch Dec 18, 2003 10:51 AM
--!-- by mtmynd Dec 18, 2003 10:52 AM
...wonder as in Stevie?... by buddhabitch Dec 18, 2003 10:56 AM
--!!-- by mtmynd Dec 18, 2003 10:59 AM
...Donald? as in trump?... by buddhabitch Dec 18, 2003 11:02 AM
--!!!-- by mtmynd Dec 18, 2003 11:03 AM
...plastic o no band... by buddhabitch Dec 18, 2003 11:15 AM
... by buddhabitch Dec 17, 2003 11:41 PM
... by buddhabitch Dec 17, 2003 11:40 PM
cold at night by c.w. williams Dec 16, 2003 11:37 PM
timelessness by tide Dec 16, 2003 8:54 PM
remembering your arms--PC by pottygok Dec 15, 2003 4:45 PM
letter from her ex--PC by pottygok Dec 15, 2003 4:40 PM
bye-ku by mtmynd Dec 15, 2003 8:23 AM
fly-ku by mtmynd Dec 15, 2003 8:27 AM
try-ku by mtmynd Dec 15, 2003 8:35 AM
sly-ku by mtmynd Dec 15, 2003 8:39 AM
Radiate by fabled construct Dec 15, 2003 4:56 AM
fall out shelter by zero hero Jan 25, 2004 9:23 AM
the bombing lights by fabled construct Jan 26, 2004 2:27 AM
time by zero hero Jan 26, 2004 5:28 PM
opposite clock face by fabled construct Jan 27, 2004 8:34 AM
edited by zero hero Jan 28, 2004 10:05 PM
fits of apologetic gesture by fabled construct Feb 3, 2004 1:51 PM
must be winter PC by e_dog Dec 14, 2003 8:08 PM
. by e_dog Dec 14, 2003 8:10 PM
... by pottygok Dec 15, 2003 6:36 AM
eye of the storm by judih. Dec 14, 2003 10:32 AM
ghosts by wendyfaber Dec 14, 2003 11:13 AM
waiting by wendyfaber Dec 14, 2003 11:15 AM
seabirds by wendyfaber Dec 14, 2003 11:18 AM
... by buddhabitch Dec 14, 2003 9:58 AM
... by buddhabitch Dec 15, 2003 6:59 AM
december rose by zero hero Dec 18, 2003 7:31 PM
never mind by zero hero Dec 18, 2003 7:36 PM
bb by ellipsis Dec 15, 2003 1:53 PM
they're both by zen_ Dec 16, 2003 8:37 PM
blush... by buddhabitch Dec 17, 2003 10:00 AM
ellipsis by buddhabitch Dec 17, 2003 9:58 AM
----- by mtmynd Dec 17, 2003 10:08 AM
.... by buddhabitch Dec 17, 2003 12:05 PM
sound by artguy Dec 14, 2003 9:43 AM
snow beneath overcast skies--PC by pottygok Dec 13, 2003 5:44 PM
blanket on my cheek--PC by pottygok Dec 13, 2003 5:43 PM
waking up alone--PC by pottygok Dec 13, 2003 5:42 PM
I storm out---PC by pottygok Dec 13, 2003 5:42 PM
wind on the window--PC by pottygok Dec 13, 2003 5:42 PM
. by Yabyum Dec 12, 2003 7:45 PM
sunlit shafts on rusty nails by wendyfaber Dec 13, 2003 6:48 AM
sunny spot by wendyfaber Dec 13, 2003 9:25 AM
dawn scents, scenes by wendyfaber Dec 13, 2003 9:29 AM
rose petals by judih. Dec 11, 2003 12:53 PM
hey judih by firecracker Dec 11, 2003 5:12 PM
please, have it by judih. Dec 11, 2003 7:47 PM
Rose by artguy Dec 12, 2003 5:00 PM
another voice caught in the answering machine by orange Dec 10, 2003 3:04 PM
orange gonna get that? by buddhabitch Dec 11, 2003 8:27 AM
full moon--PC by pottygok Dec 9, 2003 10:39 PM
fool moon by buddhabitch Dec 11, 2003 8:22 AM
mad things rearrange by auziea Dec 9, 2003 3:49 AM
some Haiku (some traditional, some breaking the mould). (edit) by in_earth Dec 8, 2003 11:52 PM
yes by judih. Dec 9, 2003 12:12 AM
And On The Mountain There Is Nothing by Snow Leopard Dec 8, 2003 10:33 AM
Advent wreath--PC by pottygok Dec 8, 2003 7:07 AM
the smell of sandalwood--PC by pottygok Dec 8, 2003 7:07 AM
Season by artguy Dec 7, 2003 3:34 PM
moonlight -- PC by pottygok Dec 7, 2003 3:14 PM
long kisses -- PC by pottygok Dec 7, 2003 3:14 PM
flu headache -- PC by pottygok Dec 7, 2003 3:14 PM
term paper due--PC by pottygok Dec 7, 2003 3:13 PM
yes by judih. Dec 7, 2003 7:55 PM
Aye, aye, sir - it's for us: to see (into), sir by ARAHH Dec 7, 2003 1:11 PM
~/_O/_~ by mtmynd Dec 6, 2003 6:01 PM
~*~ by mtmynd Dec 6, 2003 5:53 PM
_o_o_ by mtmynd Dec 6, 2003 5:50 PM
/-/-/-/ by mtmynd Dec 6, 2003 5:46 PM
----- by mtmynd Dec 5, 2003 4:24 PM
||| by judih. Dec 5, 2003 8:33 PM
snowkissed shoulder by wendyfaber Dec 6, 2003 8:00 AM
visitors by wendyfaber Dec 6, 2003 8:05 AM
vessels by wendyfaber Dec 6, 2003 8:09 AM
///// by artguy Dec 6, 2003 11:59 AM
"America's Haiku Future" by kkizer Dec 5, 2003 8:28 AM
Interesting... by pottygok Dec 7, 2003 3:16 PM
vulvagar by mtmynd Dec 4, 2003 8:21 AM
shhhh.... by mtmynd Dec 4, 2003 8:14 AM
hmmmmmm... by mtmynd Dec 4, 2003 8:10 AM
a haiku for smallness by panzee Dec 3, 2003 8:00 PM
fishy ku PC by zero hero Dec 3, 2003 5:32 PM
... by pottygok Dec 8, 2003 12:45 PM
second attemp by zero hero Dec 8, 2003 3:42 PM
... by pottygok Dec 10, 2003 11:19 AM
third try one more time pleasePC by zero hero Dec 11, 2003 12:23 PM
... by pottygok Dec 12, 2003 3:00 PM
thank you by zero hero Dec 17, 2003 6:17 AM
. by buddhabitch Dec 3, 2003 8:12 AM
coughing in the bedroom by judih. Dec 3, 2003 8:15 AM
clearing by panta rhei Dec 3, 2003 8:24 AM
winter morning by kkizer Dec 3, 2003 9:06 AM
flu headache--PC by pottygok Dec 3, 2003 7:14 AM
ice bound neurons by zero hero Dec 18, 2003 7:44 PM
gone walking by zero hero Dec 19, 2003 1:51 PM
studying together--PC by pottygok Dec 3, 2003 7:06 AM
the winter cabin by rouge saint Dec 2, 2003 5:30 PM
2003 Spiess Awards by kkizer Dec 2, 2003 11:22 AM
the insidiousness of bubba -- PC by firecracker Dec 1, 2003 5:44 PM
It is a cool ku by zero hero Dec 1, 2003 11:11 PM
chewey by hella Dec 1, 2003 11:12 PM
O Bubba by buddhabitch Dec 2, 2003 6:05 AM
ive often thought by hella Dec 2, 2003 9:12 AM
gray to purple by kkizer Dec 1, 2003 2:59 PM
Like by noangel Dec 1, 2003 4:37 PM
Thanks for the kind words... by kkizer Dec 4, 2003 7:58 AM
watchful by wendyfaber Dec 1, 2003 2:25 PM
pecking scrappers by wendyfaber Dec 1, 2003 2:28 PM
wind chill by wendyfaber Dec 1, 2003 2:33 PM
Your by noangel Dec 1, 2003 4:31 PM


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