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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  February 2003
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


evil ku by mtmynd Feb 28, 2003 9:15 AM
huh-ku by firecracker Feb 28, 2003 7:34 PM
understanding by rudytoot Mar 1, 2003 11:40 AM
live ku by buddhabitch Mar 1, 2003 5:48 AM
afternoon serenade by panta rhei Feb 28, 2003 7:26 AM
innocence today and right now by ARAHH Feb 28, 2003 10:16 AM
ode to hominy by ellipsis Feb 28, 2003 6:31 AM
hai cous cous by panta rhei Feb 28, 2003 7:22 AM
Evolution by ARAHH Feb 28, 2003 5:45 AM
felt beauty by panta rhei Feb 28, 2003 7:23 AM
Interaction by ARAHH Feb 28, 2003 5:44 AM
a worry by 6'Oclock midnight Feb 28, 2003 1:05 AM
Ode: to my lunch break by rudytoot Feb 28, 2003 12:24 AM
lost by rudytoot Feb 28, 2003 12:27 AM
explanation by rudytoot Feb 28, 2003 12:28 AM
one more, for good luck by rudytoot Feb 28, 2003 12:30 AM
1 more by 6'Oclock midnight Feb 28, 2003 12:34 AM
one less by stilltrucking Feb 28, 2003 2:53 AM
Wonderful by wjg Feb 28, 2003 7:31 PM
woncha' be by mtmynd Feb 27, 2003 8:31 AM
A Sad Day by For What It's Worth Feb 27, 2003 11:55 PM
so long by stilltrucking Feb 28, 2003 3:00 AM
haiku for leanne by pedro Feb 27, 2003 8:23 AM
glance by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:32 PM
shapely thoughts by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:00 PM
Ode to myself by Nihilbert Feb 26, 2003 3:36 PM
ode to myself by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:08 PM
Ode To A. P. Carter by Mob Feb 26, 2003 2:53 AM
Ode To Woody Guthrie by Mob Feb 26, 2003 2:51 AM
Trying To Understand Myself by Mob Feb 26, 2003 2:48 AM
refract by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:10 PM
The Camera by Mob Feb 26, 2003 2:46 AM
i spy by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:15 PM
Stop with the war Haikus please by Nihilbert Feb 25, 2003 11:01 PM
war ku? by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:18 PM
hai-danger by mtmynd Feb 25, 2003 9:41 PM
skewed news by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:20 PM
planet radio by buddhabitch Feb 25, 2003 9:51 AM
look by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 10:23 PM
see by buddhabitch Feb 27, 2003 7:43 AM
clear by ellipsis Feb 27, 2003 8:08 AM
letting go by buddhabitch Feb 25, 2003 9:45 AM
leaves cold by judih. Feb 24, 2003 10:38 PM
green leaves by Nihilbert Feb 25, 2003 3:50 AM
winter cold by kkizer Feb 26, 2003 1:23 PM
sacred vessel by aone Feb 24, 2003 10:35 PM
The Pope & his Pope-mobile by Nihilbert Feb 25, 2003 3:48 AM
first posting....figured i'd write a haiku by OscarCJonze Feb 24, 2003 7:51 PM
oscar: by aone Feb 24, 2003 10:34 PM
An Oscar for me by Nihilbert Feb 25, 2003 3:52 AM
#3818 by mtmynd Feb 24, 2003 7:18 AM
(branch off) by ellipsis Feb 24, 2003 7:46 AM
war and peace by buddhabitch Feb 24, 2003 7:10 AM
reflective battles by ellipsis Feb 24, 2003 7:50 AM
[--] by ellipsis Feb 24, 2003 6:35 AM
........ by Yabyum Feb 24, 2003 10:22 AM
honk by Illuminara Feb 24, 2003 12:52 AM
quack(PC) by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 12:55 PM
I by Illuminara Dec 28, 2003 2:17 AM
haiku for dummies by zero hero Jan 26, 2004 5:38 PM
deer vs dog by Illuminara Feb 24, 2003 12:33 AM
dog vs. man (PC) by zero hero Dec 27, 2003 1:05 PM
the surgeon by aone Feb 23, 2003 11:28 AM
From a different perspective by Nihilbert Feb 23, 2003 1:43 PM
Currency by Danger D Feb 23, 2003 11:14 AM
Poverty by Nihilbert Feb 23, 2003 1:45 PM
a parking lot haiku by fyrfli Feb 23, 2003 11:10 AM
Airport haiku by Nihilbert Feb 23, 2003 1:48 PM
A Haiku by Joe Netherwood Feb 23, 2003 8:47 AM
B Haiku by Nihilbert Feb 23, 2003 1:49 PM
F* ku by zero hero Feb 22, 2003 9:10 PM
Santiago, Chile by Nihilbert Feb 23, 2003 3:41 AM
further f's by judih. Feb 23, 2003 6:34 AM
f word by zero hero Nov 2, 2003 5:10 PM
grapes by aone Feb 22, 2003 8:59 PM
Lascivious / nostalgic by Nihilbert Feb 23, 2003 3:45 AM
hexagonal by ARAHH Feb 22, 2003 9:31 AM
lonely birch in snow war by ARAHH Feb 22, 2003 9:29 AM
Newspapers our daily dose of fiction by betabandido Feb 20, 2003 5:00 PM
Easy soldiers by Nihilbert Feb 20, 2003 7:07 PM
"past relays the future" by stilltrucking Feb 23, 2003 3:08 AM
USA by stilltrucking Feb 23, 2003 3:19 AM
Dummy Blues by betabandido Feb 20, 2003 2:59 PM
The Betjeman Bomb Blues by betabandido Feb 20, 2003 2:57 PM
Saint Patrick meets George W. by Nihilbert Feb 20, 2003 7:04 PM
Back-home Haiku by Nihilbert Feb 20, 2003 9:12 AM
which is it? by isitnecessaary Feb 20, 2003 4:52 AM
"Fuck America!" someone cried by Nihilbert Feb 20, 2003 9:10 AM
cat o'9 by judih. Feb 19, 2003 10:07 AM
Koan by artguy Feb 19, 2003 8:22 AM
sandwhich haiku by no/one Feb 18, 2003 5:12 PM
circulation/repeat the dawn by orange Feb 18, 2003 12:49 PM
soft snowflakes by aone Feb 18, 2003 11:43 AM
unbalanced apple by judih. Feb 18, 2003 2:33 AM
splitting a core by orange Feb 18, 2003 12:41 PM
gravity by Feign Feb 14, 2003 9:07 PM
Spin by Feign Feb 14, 2003 8:59 PM
in side by judih. Feb 13, 2003 8:16 PM
dramatic in the glass by orange Feb 13, 2003 1:02 AM
Nightwatch by SpunSugarPoet Feb 12, 2003 7:21 PM
cricket cr by judih. Feb 12, 2003 7:40 PM
texture by snakhi Feb 11, 2003 10:47 PM
singularity by buddhabitch Feb 11, 2003 6:28 AM
unappreciated gifts by anniefay Feb 9, 2003 5:51 AM
sleekness by panta rhei Feb 9, 2003 5:56 AM
Cleo by Feign Feb 10, 2003 9:27 PM
Klever Kleptomaniac Kat from Childhood by Mob Feb 11, 2003 6:37 AM
stuff by Feign Feb 9, 2003 3:57 AM
stuff by Feign Feb 9, 2003 3:57 AM
I sure wish by Feign Feb 9, 2003 4:21 AM
here's the thing by Feign Feb 7, 2003 9:31 PM
ok ... by asylum Feb 9, 2003 2:21 AM
yeah by Feign Feb 9, 2003 3:52 AM
happy by asylum Feb 9, 2003 10:55 AM
yeah by Feign Feb 10, 2003 2:12 AM
happy is by mock the knife Feb 10, 2003 2:27 AM
wait till tomorrow by rastaruined Feb 7, 2003 7:58 PM
thank you Levi by Yabyum Feb 3, 2003 7:50 PM
Why is it by JuJu-B Feb 6, 2003 5:17 PM
why not comment. by Ozgarth Feb 3, 2003 2:55 PM


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