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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  January 2003
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


the soul by Yabyum Jan 30, 2003 7:19 PM
Please Criticise by Snow Leopard Jan 30, 2003 12:01 PM
untitled by dino_ou812 Jan 29, 2003 8:00 AM
Weight by artguy Jan 29, 2003 6:25 AM
Bush's "State of the Union" Adress' Haiku by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 6:21 PM
Nihilbert will be absent for almost 20 days by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 2:44 PM
vacate by judih. Jan 31, 2003 4:25 AM
peace, haiku by rastaruined Jan 27, 2003 7:01 PM
PC, haiku by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 3:01 PM
"untitled" by dino_ou812 Jan 27, 2003 3:24 PM
Since we're talking about fruits by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 2:55 PM
"untitled" by dino_ou812 Jan 27, 2003 3:23 PM
A Haiku Unto You by Dave The Dov Jan 27, 2003 10:32 AM
haiku unto me by ellipsis Jan 27, 2003 9:24 PM
Haiku unto us by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 2:39 PM
A Thank You Haiku by Dave The Dov Jan 28, 2003 3:41 PM
A Thank You Haiku by Dave The Dov Jan 28, 2003 3:39 PM
Rue Haiku by Feign Feb 7, 2003 9:23 PM
small thing by Feign Jan 26, 2003 2:44 PM
Dressin' weird by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 2:58 PM
hai blue by Feign Jan 26, 2003 2:41 PM
Hai jew by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 3:00 PM
i am by anniefay Jan 26, 2003 10:19 AM
You are by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 2:46 PM
honey burst mentality by judih. Jan 25, 2003 10:11 PM
be by greenauto Jan 26, 2003 4:12 PM
Modern youth mentality by Nihilbert Jan 28, 2003 2:49 PM
to my mother by nullpointer Jan 25, 2003 2:41 PM
ECHOE by willylee Jan 25, 2003 1:58 PM
ghost by solarflare Jan 24, 2003 2:17 PM
A question of taste by This Twisted Youth Jan 23, 2003 11:42 PM
Haiku For The Lovestung by RobotGoat Jan 23, 2003 6:38 PM
Haiku for a Lovestud by Nihilbert Jan 23, 2003 8:09 PM
freezing me by auziea Jan 23, 2003 11:45 AM
bbbrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!! by anniefay Jan 23, 2003 4:01 PM
Nihilbert faces death while killing a roach (based upon a true story) by Nihilbert Jan 23, 2003 2:20 AM
Insectifried by Feign Jan 26, 2003 2:31 PM
Idle Haiku by Nihilbert Jan 23, 2003 1:48 AM
yeah yeah by Feign Jan 26, 2003 2:27 PM
tripped up moment by orange Jan 23, 2003 12:14 AM
London 4.58am by Altrufish Jan 22, 2003 8:58 PM
this by firecracker Jan 23, 2003 9:41 AM
The Truth by Altrufish Jan 23, 2003 4:45 PM
Hi-IQ? by Altrufish Jan 22, 2003 6:52 PM
..... by Yabyum Jan 22, 2003 6:58 PM
Low IQ by Nihilbert Jan 22, 2003 7:04 PM
Cold Haiku by artguy Jan 22, 2003 1:33 PM
Hot Haiku by Nihilbert Jan 22, 2003 7:16 PM
little dried out cartoons by orange Jan 23, 2003 12:17 AM
try this: by ellipsis Jan 22, 2003 1:05 AM
.......... by Yabyum Jan 22, 2003 4:47 PM
------C by ellipsis Jan 22, 2003 10:33 PM
Positive aspect of negative thinking by Nihilbert Jan 23, 2003 1:39 AM
you should shut up by skruffie Jan 20, 2003 12:03 PM
piggys by skruffie Jan 20, 2003 12:01 PM
I'm praying by visions Jan 20, 2003 3:05 AM
you will live, anne by panta rhei Jan 20, 2003 3:14 AM
I live! by visions Jan 20, 2003 6:08 AM
Returning medieval times by Nihilbert Jan 20, 2003 4:07 PM
lol, that would be a sight by visions Jan 22, 2003 2:17 AM
I fell too by Julienne Jan 22, 2003 12:03 PM
you happy girl! by visions Jan 22, 2003 12:09 PM
don't worry by Julienne Jan 22, 2003 12:19 PM
drawing circles in mind by orange Jan 20, 2003 1:17 AM
Sunday afternoon collage by Nihilbert Jan 19, 2003 3:01 PM
tonite by Yabyum Jan 19, 2003 2:49 PM
a rarity for me... by Kreddible Trout Jan 18, 2003 5:09 PM
witness by Yabyum Jan 18, 2003 2:44 PM
popcorn in your teeth by orange Jan 17, 2003 6:13 AM
caffeine in your mind by Mob Jan 18, 2003 8:26 AM
Missing the oldies by Nihilbert Jan 19, 2003 11:45 AM
Why Nihilbert compares himself with Santa Claus? by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 3:32 AM
cook he's by judih. Jan 17, 2003 3:34 AM
How could John Paul II save the day by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:35 AM
paul by Illuminara Jan 17, 2003 6:24 PM
out of time by Feign Jan 26, 2003 10:17 PM
The USA Inmigration Service's dream by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:35 AM
Jesus vs. J. Edgar Hoover by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:35 AM
To all the people that write Haikus in this board by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:30 AM
to a nihilist by judih. Jan 17, 2003 3:25 AM
What's in a name anyways... by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 3:30 AM
"Read-in-between-lines" Squirrel by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:28 AM
A banana suicide by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 1:24 AM
history again by Feign Jan 16, 2003 10:00 PM
So it goes by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:30 AM
confused by Feign Jan 16, 2003 9:56 PM
There you go: a cool god for you by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:03 AM
Cool god by Feign Jan 26, 2003 2:24 PM
mother by Yabyum Jan 16, 2003 5:12 PM
Meditations by AngelHeadedHipster Jan 16, 2003 10:31 AM
pond water by auziea Jan 16, 2003 4:34 AM
time by stexaxx Jan 16, 2003 7:42 AM
perfect by ibeentired Jan 16, 2003 8:39 PM
About other waters by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:09 AM
lucid beats by orange Jan 15, 2003 3:19 PM
the record deal by auziea Jan 16, 2003 4:38 AM
From underground to upperground by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:26 AM
what it's about by long distance drunk Jan 23, 2003 8:47 PM
one before i venture out into the frigid land of "needsomecash" by Yabyum Jan 15, 2003 4:34 AM
that wind by ironhands Jan 16, 2003 3:34 PM
Fearsome trendy winds by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:14 AM
shall we by Consort Jan 15, 2003 1:45 AM
I have a better idea by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:05 AM
the pinner by Yabyum Jan 14, 2003 8:44 PM
The pinball machine by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:34 AM
war (tell me if this is any good) by AngelHeadedHipster Jan 14, 2003 12:52 PM
War in a Baghdad's living room by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:18 AM
city sidewalk by starve2act Jan 14, 2003 12:47 PM
My future lawsuit statement against Taco Bell by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:52 AM
homade chicken soup by Yabyum Jan 13, 2003 4:50 PM
Hobo chicken soup by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:41 AM
journey to el norte by WIREMAN Jan 13, 2003 3:30 PM
Everyman by jeffrex Jan 13, 2003 11:32 AM
Welcome by artguy Jan 13, 2003 3:33 PM
To my Dear....... by Mob Jan 13, 2003 8:08 AM
The Two Faces Of Snow... by Mob Jan 13, 2003 7:39 AM
A futuristic trade route to the universe by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:49 PM
I'm in love with a monosyllabic girl by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:35 PM
A German flu caused by a masive tomato intoxication by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:31 PM
How punk lifestyle is NOT an individualistic movement by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:28 PM
Porn Jeanie: Major Nelson is at work, not a clue by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:25 PM
A discussion about nature of nature & nature of silence by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:23 PM
How to choke the "Evil Axis" by Nihilbert Jan 12, 2003 5:11 PM
/////...////// by Yabyum Jan 12, 2003 3:42 PM
anyone, anyone? by anniefay Jan 12, 2003 5:36 AM
on the card it says: by orange Jan 12, 2003 10:48 AM
double sided movement by orange Jan 12, 2003 2:08 AM
catch by anniefay Jan 12, 2003 5:31 AM
green serene by Yabyum Jan 11, 2003 3:07 PM
penetrate the evening by orange Jan 9, 2003 11:23 PM
haiku for the quiet by rastaruined Jan 9, 2003 11:54 AM
White by artguy Jan 9, 2003 12:32 PM
Black by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 2:38 AM
we're (just) gonna take it / transients by ARAHH Jan 9, 2003 5:07 AM
efforts tranquilles by ARAHH Jan 9, 2003 5:01 AM
hoooo by Nobody Jan 8, 2003 10:56 PM
wafting wisps by ironhands Jan 9, 2003 10:31 AM
football-ku by stevadore Jan 8, 2003 10:11 AM
voodoo by ironhands Jan 9, 2003 10:28 AM
Cafe by artguy Jan 7, 2003 6:21 PM
cafe by ironhands Jan 8, 2003 1:53 AM
Walking Haiku by artguy Jan 7, 2003 6:19 PM
snow on pines by ironhands Jan 8, 2003 1:49 AM
Crow by artguy Jan 6, 2003 4:50 PM
#1 by PhilipHarris Jan 5, 2003 3:21 PM
#2 by PhilipHarris Jan 5, 2003 3:23 PM
#3 by PhilipHarris Jan 5, 2003 3:25 PM
#4 by PhilipHarris Jan 5, 2003 3:28 PM
#5 by PhilipHarris Jan 5, 2003 3:30 PM
#3692 by mtmynd Jan 5, 2003 11:23 AM
you can see me doing flips in the backround by orange Jan 5, 2003 2:55 PM
colour me by panta rhei Jan 5, 2003 5:38 AM
morning snow by anniefay Jan 5, 2003 5:59 AM
peace by anniefay Jan 5, 2003 6:07 AM
my adventures by buddhabitch Jan 5, 2003 11:19 AM
play me by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:05 PM
rock on by buddhabitch Jan 5, 2003 5:14 AM
sunglasses view by panta rhei Jan 5, 2003 5:36 AM
rocky times by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:03 PM
Rock me up Chuckie my boy by Nihilbert Jan 17, 2003 3:27 AM
I'll have some rocky road please... by buddhabitch Jan 3, 2003 8:42 PM
another stone by judih. Jan 4, 2003 12:01 AM
rock it good by buddhabitch Jan 4, 2003 10:13 AM
Dharma path by artguy Jan 6, 2003 4:46 PM
words in the snow by orange Jan 2, 2003 11:39 PM
snowangels by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:08 PM
almost silent haiku by daorley Jan 2, 2003 5:05 PM
Whisper by artguy Jan 6, 2003 4:48 PM
Definetly quiet Haiku by Nihilbert Jan 22, 2003 7:21 PM
some special gumboot haiku by bobby.f.m Jan 2, 2003 4:29 AM
mud by panta rhei Jan 2, 2003 5:05 AM
galloshes by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:13 PM
the wait by buddhabitch Jan 1, 2003 4:55 PM
to wait by buddhabitch Jan 2, 2003 5:58 PM
still waiting for by Vaselina Jan 5, 2003 7:11 PM
a vocal movement by orange Jan 1, 2003 3:07 PM


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