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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


boards by cylance Jul 31, 2003 2:21 AM
bored. by seasevengreen Jul 31, 2003 4:40 AM
pottery by cylance Jul 31, 2003 5:36 AM
mould. by seasevengreen Jul 31, 2003 7:13 AM
mould* by rain70 Aug 1, 2003 9:56 AM
appendages (stumped) by beatvibe Jul 30, 2003 10:22 PM
entanglement by ellipsis Jul 31, 2003 3:13 PM
Droping Eaves by rain70 Aug 1, 2003 10:41 AM
lisa by Yabyum Jul 30, 2003 8:03 PM
wreaking havoc on each other by ellipsis Jul 31, 2003 3:10 PM
..................... by Yabyum Aug 3, 2003 4:54 PM
psht...males by ellipsis Aug 3, 2003 7:26 PM
I, II, II, IV by buddhabitch Jul 30, 2003 9:38 AM
Very nice by Sabertash Jul 30, 2003 10:11 PM
snug by wendyfaber Jul 30, 2003 5:06 AM
slim shady by wendyfaber Jul 30, 2003 5:11 AM
rock bottom by wendyfaber Jul 30, 2003 5:14 AM
windowmate by wendyfaber Jul 30, 2003 5:17 AM
choice by wendyfaber Jul 30, 2003 5:19 AM
bones by wendyfaber Jul 30, 2003 5:23 AM
thank you by thunder chicken Jul 30, 2003 7:23 AM
this is not a hy ku. by Yabyum Jul 29, 2003 6:13 PM
rumbly rambling by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:09 PM
rumbly rambling 2 by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:10 PM
rumbly rambling 3 by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:12 PM
rumbly rambling 4 by fingurz Jan 26, 2004 5:10 PM
Affluence... by Aminorblue Jul 29, 2003 12:00 AM
spontaneous worth. by seasevengreen Jul 29, 2003 12:57 AM
............................................................................... by Yabyum Jul 28, 2003 6:58 PM
4c7 by Aminorblue Jul 28, 2003 6:22 PM
a pleasant surprise... by seasevengreen Jul 28, 2003 8:36 PM
'Acceptance' [HAIKU] by seasevengreen Jul 28, 2003 5:54 PM
the new handcuffs by fingurz Jul 27, 2003 6:45 PM
expected by zenlunatic Jul 27, 2003 6:37 PM
kevin? by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:15 PM
Monogamy - please critique by flood Jul 26, 2003 5:19 PM
Eh... by pottygok Jul 27, 2003 7:38 PM
A shower is nice. by Rickety Jul 26, 2003 12:52 AM
hi ku by jim vinny Jul 25, 2003 8:42 AM
high coo by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:18 PM
mastery by buddhabitch Jul 25, 2003 6:25 AM
Mandala by artguy Jul 29, 2003 5:12 PM
Following The Narrow Road To The Deep North by Snow Leopard Jul 24, 2003 5:45 AM
the death of Mars by aliengrove Jul 23, 2003 4:22 PM
tactile ku by rain70 Jul 25, 2003 6:47 AM
lip prying machine by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:20 PM
AL sales tax leaps from 9 percent to 10 percent (i'm lazy ku) by ellipsis Jul 23, 2003 3:49 PM
^ by rain70 Jul 23, 2003 3:21 PM
lust haiku by jim vinny Jul 23, 2003 12:13 PM
... by rain70 Jul 23, 2003 3:26 PM
sssss by artguy Jul 24, 2003 4:07 PM
lucky son of a bitch haiku by jim vinny Jul 23, 2003 8:49 AM
cold comfort haiku by jim vinny Jul 23, 2003 8:51 AM
multi-media by DizzyKicks Jul 23, 2003 4:08 AM
gambit by beatvibe Jul 22, 2003 11:40 AM
Holy bits by Arcadia Jul 23, 2003 7:40 AM
glad you picked up on the... by beatvibe Jul 23, 2003 10:15 AM
summer by cylance Jul 22, 2003 12:48 AM
larceny by liv Jul 21, 2003 7:02 PM
pie by elvin Jul 23, 2003 10:44 PM
the pants by liv Aug 4, 2003 8:02 PM
inquisitive haiku by jim vinny Jul 21, 2003 2:38 PM
? by Arcadia Jul 21, 2003 2:51 PM
crying forest haiku by jim vinny Jul 21, 2003 3:06 PM
sad haiku by jim vinny Jul 21, 2003 2:08 PM
bad haiku by jim vinny Jul 21, 2003 1:57 PM
self by enemy Jul 21, 2003 8:43 AM
BORED by SHADOW MAN Jul 21, 2003 8:37 AM
whirled piece by mtmynd Jul 21, 2003 6:29 AM
'sho nuff by mtmynd Jul 21, 2003 6:46 AM
no fuck zone by thunder chicken Jul 23, 2003 2:25 PM
love by beatvibe Jul 20, 2003 7:38 PM
love by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2003 6:09 AM
love by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2003 6:13 AM
love by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2003 6:16 AM
love by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2003 6:19 AM
love by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2003 6:23 AM
... by jillyfromthecreek Jul 20, 2003 1:42 AM
~' by judih. Jul 20, 2003 2:06 AM
blank e-mail by sequin Jul 19, 2003 12:34 PM
actions by enemy Jul 19, 2003 5:56 PM
screaming for attention by ellipsis Jul 19, 2003 11:45 PM
silent argument by sequin Jul 20, 2003 5:16 AM
Simple ode to a Complex theif by sequin Jul 19, 2003 12:23 PM
to steal something real by ellipsis Jul 19, 2003 11:47 PM
ashing out by eh... Jul 19, 2003 10:02 AM
eh by Sylph Jul 19, 2003 2:20 PM
Wind Song by Sylph Jul 19, 2003 9:22 AM
... by rain70 Jul 21, 2003 3:40 PM
reconceptions by mtmynd Jul 19, 2003 7:38 AM
................. by Yabyum Jul 18, 2003 12:57 PM
wordless haiku by buddhabitch Jul 18, 2003 6:09 AM
wordless haiku? by ellipsis Jul 18, 2003 6:38 AM
wordless haiku by jamelah Jul 18, 2003 8:55 AM
wordless haiku by ellipsis Jul 18, 2003 8:59 AM
second installment by beatvibe Jul 18, 2003 10:38 AM
duly noted by ellipsis Jul 18, 2003 11:15 AM
Of course, this type of stuff... by beatvibe Jul 18, 2003 3:21 PM
pure haiku by beatvibe Jul 18, 2003 4:04 PM
_^_ by rain70 Jul 21, 2003 4:06 PM
less haiku by fingurz Jul 29, 2003 2:24 PM
pro by beatvibe Jul 17, 2003 8:13 PM
forced breathing lessons by ellipsis Jul 18, 2003 6:46 AM
traditional by all hail the stars Jul 17, 2003 3:46 PM
my haiku, full of itself by ellipsis Jul 18, 2003 6:35 AM
haiku of haiku by all hail the stars Jul 18, 2003 4:19 PM
new banality by judih. Jul 17, 2003 12:31 PM
stale banality by ellipsis Jul 17, 2003 1:54 PM
Nezahualcoyotl by Arcadia Jul 17, 2003 12:11 PM
el estudiante español con Síndrome de Tourette by ellipsis Jul 17, 2003 2:14 PM
The english wall by Arcadia Jul 18, 2003 10:28 AM
postmodern by beatvibe Jul 15, 2003 11:20 AM
letting go... by buddhabitch Jul 14, 2003 3:19 PM
shaiku? by Mob Jul 14, 2003 8:57 AM
My Adorartion by PeaceLover Jul 14, 2003 4:24 AM
Nicotine fiends by Alex Uziel Jul 13, 2003 9:28 PM
Tree fall by judih. Jul 13, 2003 10:01 AM
moontime by mtmynd Jul 13, 2003 9:22 AM
timewise by jillyfromthecreek Jul 12, 2003 8:38 PM
hypocrite by jillyfromthecreek Jul 12, 2003 8:36 PM
Thigh coup. by Holygoof Jul 11, 2003 5:24 PM
squibs by beatvibe Jul 11, 2003 1:16 PM
maybe again by ARAHH Jul 11, 2003 12:32 PM
i'll still lie to you by auziea Jul 11, 2003 10:41 AM
sketches of spring by AngelHeadedHipster Jul 11, 2003 8:45 AM
blood by conked Jul 10, 2003 10:26 PM
red death by enemy Jul 11, 2003 12:05 PM
Entre Ríos y Pellegrini by Arcadia Jul 10, 2003 8:12 PM
Review of Kerouac's "Book of Haikus" by kkizer Jul 10, 2003 7:50 PM
porridge by artguy Jul 11, 2003 12:22 PM
item #231 by beatvibe Jul 10, 2003 6:06 PM
hell by all hail the stars Jul 10, 2003 5:16 PM
....... by Yabyum Jul 10, 2003 2:58 PM
.. by Yabyum Jul 10, 2003 2:56 PM
... by Yabyum Jul 10, 2003 4:55 PM
Pisgah Forest by Boom tin dog Jul 9, 2003 6:42 PM
..... by Yabyum Jul 9, 2003 6:39 PM
.... by Yabyum Jul 9, 2003 6:37 PM
one time by ARAHH Jul 9, 2003 2:26 PM
.... by buddhabitch Jul 9, 2003 8:24 AM
summer boredom by eh... Jul 8, 2003 3:09 PM
Sudestada by Arcadia Jul 8, 2003 4:12 PM
Money prize winning haiku by jillyfromthecreek Jul 7, 2003 10:17 PM
haiku!!!!!pc by pharroh Jul 7, 2003 9:15 PM
Critter comfort by bitterweed cowboy Jul 7, 2003 5:33 PM
summer metaphor by eh... Jul 7, 2003 8:40 AM
god i hate the flu by eh... Jul 7, 2003 7:05 AM
prairie drizzle by bitterweed cowboy Jul 6, 2003 6:08 PM
what is haiku? by kkizer Jul 6, 2003 9:10 AM
yes (ed) by ironhands Jul 6, 2003 9:24 AM
Question by beatvibe Jul 6, 2003 12:30 PM
then why not call it prose? by kkizer Jul 6, 2003 3:41 PM
A horse is a horse by bitterweed cowboy Jul 6, 2003 6:13 PM
abehill ku the first one that snapped in place for me by thunder chicken Jul 6, 2003 10:23 PM
Contemporary Haiku by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2003 6:07 AM
plus, some examples by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2003 6:41 AM
Apparently, they are (as I was) mistaken by beatvibe Jul 7, 2003 9:52 AM
if... (ed) by kkizer Jul 7, 2003 11:36 AM
i agree by Boom tin dog Jul 7, 2003 5:08 PM
as an art form by beatvibe Jul 7, 2003 9:15 PM
sorry about the misunderstanding by bitterweed cowboy Jul 7, 2003 5:28 PM
old crutches break hard by kkizer Jul 7, 2003 6:46 AM
thanks kevin... by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2003 3:48 PM
dialogue by beatvibe Jul 7, 2003 10:16 AM
Cor Van Den Heuvel by kkizer Jul 7, 2003 11:34 AM
you're welcome marc by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2003 3:53 PM
Sounds to me... by artguy Jul 7, 2003 4:37 PM
on hai by mtmynd Jul 7, 2003 9:55 PM
...o so solo by buddhabitch Jul 6, 2003 7:58 AM
moon in the water by thunder chicken Jul 6, 2003 11:19 PM
the interpretation of dreams by enemy Jul 5, 2003 3:50 PM
confusion by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 10:47 PM
fear fact or... by buddhabitch Jul 6, 2003 7:51 AM
fiction's edges by ~K Jul 7, 2003 6:25 AM
time travel sleep by eh... Jul 7, 2003 7:19 AM
cringing in my bed by eh... Jul 7, 2003 7:20 AM
fishing for conciousness by ~K Jul 7, 2003 8:23 AM
... by ...Spike Jul 5, 2003 6:57 AM
soul conflict by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 10:44 PM
equilibrium by ...Spike Jul 7, 2003 6:48 AM
slammed by beatvibe Jul 4, 2003 9:15 PM
gag by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 10:49 PM
. by Yabyum Jul 4, 2003 5:19 PM
.. by Yabyum Jul 4, 2003 7:45 PM
containment by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 10:53 PM
poke that fucking skin with a fork by Yabyum Jul 30, 2003 7:07 PM
suicidal happiness by enemy Jul 4, 2003 3:09 PM
2 haikus for suicidal lovers? by sequin Jul 5, 2003 6:50 AM
oppose by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 10:58 PM
^ by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 10:55 PM
this is for two of my favorite kickers. by Yabyum Jul 3, 2003 7:52 PM
blooms by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 11:01 PM
riff me by buddhabitch Jul 3, 2003 4:35 PM
...... by Yabyum Jul 3, 2003 7:06 PM
music to any ears? by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 11:07 PM
conversion by ellipsis Jul 5, 2003 11:04 PM
observations in a 5-7-5 format by enemy aka jack coulton by enemy Jul 3, 2003 4:19 PM
Oh no he didn't... by enemy Jul 3, 2003 4:21 PM
what? you gone get it now by enemy Jul 3, 2003 4:23 PM
i give in to you by enemy Jul 3, 2003 4:25 PM
ok... by enemy Jul 3, 2003 4:27 PM
He by chronicshankar Jul 3, 2003 7:22 PM
it's not a haiku, forgive me everyone but, i want feedback now. by gottasawalrus Jul 3, 2003 2:39 PM
set by beatvibe Jul 3, 2003 11:14 AM
rejection by enemy Jul 3, 2003 2:07 PM
badow by Yabyum Jul 3, 2003 10:32 AM
thoughts, mainly abstract by enemy Jul 3, 2003 2:27 PM
electronics / transmitter headphone by ARAHH Jul 3, 2003 1:09 AM
bad buy by panta rhei Jul 3, 2003 1:22 AM
i know the past by ARAHH Jul 3, 2003 5:12 AM
i know the past by ARAHH Jul 3, 2003 5:13 AM
headphones by judih. Jul 3, 2003 2:52 AM
co- - You with the - heart by ARAHH Jul 3, 2003 1:03 AM
puzzle(d) by others by ARAHH Jul 3, 2003 1:01 AM
texture by ARAHH Jul 3, 2003 1:00 AM
Rhyming haiku for a prostitute by sequin Jul 2, 2003 4:30 PM
behind the curtain by enemy Jul 2, 2003 5:30 PM
beyond form by buddhabitch Jul 2, 2003 3:48 PM
To me... by beatvibe Jul 3, 2003 9:51 AM
Body made of Ivory by Birdland Jul 1, 2003 12:39 PM
i want it to be different by enemy Jul 1, 2003 4:15 PM
equality by ellipsis Jul 2, 2003 2:39 PM
ivory film skin by ellipsis Jul 2, 2003 2:34 PM
Cat Fight by plastique Jul 1, 2003 12:01 PM
now with added salt! by enemy Jul 1, 2003 12:13 PM
Loud by plastique Jul 1, 2003 12:19 PM
Paws by Birdland Jul 1, 2003 12:26 PM
more cats by enemy Jul 1, 2003 5:03 PM
Felines by Birdland Jul 1, 2003 5:06 PM
sexist animals by enemy Jul 1, 2003 5:11 PM


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