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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


later haiku by mtmynd May 31, 2003 10:03 AM
morrison-ku by mtmynd May 31, 2003 10:00 AM
strange days- ku by stevadore Jun 3, 2003 6:42 AM
hai-sign by mtmynd May 31, 2003 9:55 AM
death-ku by mtmynd May 31, 2003 9:31 AM
question-ku's by mtmynd May 31, 2003 9:33 AM
live ku by buddhabitch May 31, 2003 9:41 AM
fuc ku by buddhabitch May 31, 2003 9:43 AM
question ku's by buddhabitch May 31, 2003 9:45 AM
come again soo-ku by mtmynd May 31, 2003 9:57 AM
cec ku, addendum by buddhabitch May 31, 2003 10:30 AM
sun ku by buddhabitch May 31, 2003 9:52 AM
lee-kus (damn... how to make this plural... looks like swearing) by anniefay May 31, 2003 12:24 PM
What I want by xkimix May 30, 2003 5:13 PM
All I Need by a majority of one Jun 2, 2003 9:10 PM
wary haiku by beatvibe May 30, 2003 3:26 PM
lost words by jamelah May 30, 2003 9:56 AM
ha by jamelah May 30, 2003 10:34 AM
Snick-errr by Arcadia May 30, 2003 10:54 AM
that's how to get a response, anyway! by anniefay May 30, 2003 11:29 AM
His # by fingurz May 29, 2003 5:09 PM
and by feed_yr_head May 29, 2003 5:48 PM
true that by fingurz May 30, 2003 10:53 PM
noted stretch by orange May 28, 2003 11:23 PM
...... by Yabyum May 28, 2003 8:19 PM
Haber-mas by Arcadia May 28, 2003 2:54 PM
puzzling by beatvibe May 28, 2003 12:16 PM
kkiser-ku by mtmynd May 28, 2003 6:39 AM
un-issa by mtmynd May 28, 2003 6:41 AM
mathemati-ku by mtmynd May 28, 2003 6:45 AM
elusive kevin by judih. May 28, 2003 7:00 AM
natural warning by kkizer May 28, 2003 3:59 PM
Haiku.java by beatvibe May 27, 2003 8:40 PM
Why I watch MSNBC by tkeiser May 27, 2003 7:41 PM
one of those days by phoenix3 May 27, 2003 7:25 PM
Abisal (o últimas palabras de un extraño animal-terrestre-parlante) by Arcadia May 27, 2003 6:17 PM
Double by Shy One May 28, 2003 6:24 AM
haiku clarification by beatvibe May 27, 2003 5:29 PM
gesundheit by jamelah May 27, 2003 7:03 PM
Ja, heitund ist ges. by beatvibe May 27, 2003 8:37 PM
the word "gesundheit" by jamelah May 28, 2003 1:06 PM
developmental by beatvibe May 28, 2003 8:29 PM
lust and sneezing by jamelah May 29, 2003 7:17 AM
physiology by beatvibe May 29, 2003 9:15 AM
probably better by jamelah May 29, 2003 1:34 PM
sneezing by fingurz May 31, 2003 12:11 PM
True... by beatvibe May 31, 2003 3:24 PM
Ironwood Wind Haiku pc by howlingers May 27, 2003 8:50 AM
if haiku is about syllable count, then it is no longer haiku by howlingers May 28, 2003 8:27 AM
Fidel by Arcadia May 26, 2003 5:11 PM
green olive by howlingers May 27, 2003 1:00 PM
At night by pilotsavant May 26, 2003 4:27 PM
Volcano by Arcadia May 26, 2003 5:05 PM
3 squares by phoenix3 May 26, 2003 1:47 PM
we three by phoenix3 May 26, 2003 11:07 AM
judih ku by judih. May 26, 2003 7:33 AM
judih laughs by GordonWilson May 26, 2003 10:33 AM
prolonged haiku by beatvibe May 24, 2003 7:56 PM
Wheat Field Tornado by frontal-abstraction May 24, 2003 6:47 AM
the la river by ironhands May 24, 2003 3:52 AM
halifax harbour by Vaselina May 24, 2003 4:35 AM
dj haiku by beatvibe May 23, 2003 5:33 PM
turntables by Vaselina May 24, 2003 4:38 AM
blonde by sam fletcher May 23, 2003 3:41 PM
Midnight by Arcadia May 22, 2003 8:06 PM
The Last Goodbye - ku by Mob May 22, 2003 6:50 AM
wonderment by deadangelpoet11727 May 21, 2003 9:18 AM
dark capes by ironhands May 21, 2003 2:29 AM
sunday headache by ModernAncient May 20, 2003 6:15 PM
drift by beatvibe May 20, 2003 4:57 PM
Primate-remembered heavens by ARAHH May 20, 2003 8:47 AM
Wheels of old by ARAHH May 20, 2003 8:39 AM
Trial in love for ease by ARAHH May 20, 2003 8:37 AM
there is time by thunder chicken May 20, 2003 11:15 AM
nights passage by ironhands May 20, 2003 2:24 AM
loony by sam fletcher May 23, 2003 3:29 PM
deteriorate by fingurz May 19, 2003 1:27 PM
future by thunder chicken May 20, 2003 11:19 AM
illusions by fingurz May 19, 2003 1:24 PM
patronization by beatvibe May 19, 2003 1:05 PM
beatvibe... by firecracker May 22, 2003 5:29 PM
wow... by beatvibe May 23, 2003 5:30 PM
Vasks voices by Arcadia May 18, 2003 7:21 PM
positively by Birdie May 18, 2003 4:45 PM
the passing day by fingurz May 18, 2003 12:18 PM
complete eclipse by kkizer May 18, 2003 8:54 AM
eclipsing moon by kkizer May 18, 2003 8:53 AM
i like this one by firecracker May 22, 2003 5:30 PM
Eclipse by kkizer May 24, 2003 9:28 AM
latex haiku by beatvibe May 18, 2003 8:35 AM
one chime less by Rhinehart May 18, 2003 3:51 AM
zern's by Emelia May 17, 2003 3:38 PM
etc by Emelia May 17, 2003 3:43 PM
/--........ by greenhill May 17, 2003 12:34 PM
cephalopod haiku by beatvibe May 17, 2003 9:19 AM
Arches by leftie May 16, 2003 6:43 AM
Arches by leftie May 16, 2003 6:40 AM
trademark red and yellow by atom tan May 16, 2003 10:41 AM
please pull ahead by atom tan May 16, 2003 10:47 AM
seedy buns by atom tan May 16, 2003 12:01 PM
$ ku by thunder chicken May 14, 2003 9:31 PM
veil of commerce and locks by greenhill May 15, 2003 11:14 PM
happy to know by thunder chicken May 16, 2003 5:01 PM
line by beatvibe May 14, 2003 7:28 PM
To Whom It May Concern by belle_cherie May 14, 2003 12:45 PM
be it by european girl May 14, 2003 8:26 AM
suburban haiku by eggnoize May 14, 2003 8:16 AM
every(wo)man by Emelia May 13, 2003 9:32 PM
prince(ss) by Emelia May 13, 2003 8:27 PM
limited edition haiku by beatvibe May 13, 2003 7:46 PM
... by blacksheepgirl May 13, 2003 7:48 PM
rubics cube by Emelia May 13, 2003 8:36 PM
Burst by Arcadia May 13, 2003 9:31 AM
MRB – Material Review Board by ARAHH May 13, 2003 6:15 AM
hai cuba by Emelia May 12, 2003 6:56 PM
glo stick by Emelia May 12, 2003 7:00 PM
sake? by Jo Jo May 12, 2003 12:22 PM
sole lee ku by mtmynd May 12, 2003 8:54 AM
hot day by judih. May 12, 2003 6:57 AM
JUDIH! by Siege May 12, 2003 7:03 AM
may by Emelia May 11, 2003 5:14 PM
Factory Irregulars (20 Discounted Haikus) by beatvibe May 10, 2003 12:06 PM
presentation haiku by mtmynd May 10, 2003 5:35 PM
code a ku by thunder chicken May 18, 2003 5:10 AM
shit by thunder chicken May 18, 2003 8:07 AM
crystal sugaree by judih. May 10, 2003 11:21 AM
shake it, shake it by ironhands May 10, 2003 12:35 PM
holiday by flushedanddecided May 10, 2003 9:51 AM
cabbie by flushedanddecided May 10, 2003 9:50 AM
Unrestraint Captivity by ARAHH May 10, 2003 4:37 AM
telephone by flushedanddecided May 10, 2003 9:49 AM
alpha/epsilon by ARAHH May 10, 2003 4:35 AM
City Alienation 666 by ARAHH May 10, 2003 4:34 AM
I like by Billectric May 19, 2003 6:16 AM
Montreal by Jo Jo May 9, 2003 12:42 PM
part eee heart eee by buddhabitch May 9, 2003 9:09 AM
weekend update by anniefay May 9, 2003 5:08 AM
tulips by Emelia May 8, 2003 7:33 PM
(no) celebration by Emelia May 8, 2003 7:36 PM
raze by Emelia May 8, 2003 7:41 PM
Flores nocturnas by Arcadia May 8, 2003 7:57 PM
brushing the cloud from face by orange May 8, 2003 10:57 AM
green diskette by judih. May 8, 2003 7:15 AM
green thumbs by ironhands May 9, 2003 4:27 AM
Summer by Crimson War Goddess May 7, 2003 4:25 PM
cathartic haiku (a template) by beatvibe May 7, 2003 2:30 PM
I don´t care but... by Arcadia May 7, 2003 4:02 PM
My Son by Siege May 7, 2003 3:51 AM
internment by beatvibe May 6, 2003 7:33 PM
Same by artguy May 6, 2003 3:56 PM
Reflect by artguy May 6, 2003 3:55 PM
Go by artguy May 6, 2003 3:54 PM
Garden by artguy May 6, 2003 3:53 PM
Rewound in me, remembering spring by ARAHH May 6, 2003 7:41 AM
obscene by ARAHH May 6, 2003 7:39 AM
Innuendo, May w/out end by ARAHH May 6, 2003 7:38 AM
Beloved old professor’s ode by ARAHH May 6, 2003 7:37 AM
koan chip by buddhabitch May 6, 2003 7:33 AM
north georgia in spring by ironhands May 6, 2003 4:42 AM
moss by judih. May 6, 2003 5:02 AM
epilogue by beatvibe May 5, 2003 10:22 PM
request of service by ellipsis May 6, 2003 7:48 AM
#4137 by mtmynd May 5, 2003 5:43 PM
#4136 by mtmynd May 5, 2003 5:42 PM
#4135 by mtmynd May 5, 2003 5:41 PM
#4134 by mtmynd May 5, 2003 5:40 PM
stripped stone by judih. May 5, 2003 9:27 AM
too high by legalizeIT May 4, 2003 6:20 PM
She is My Garden by Andeh May 4, 2003 4:22 PM
now we wait... by thelonius punk May 4, 2003 11:36 PM
ba-plucky by Andeh May 5, 2003 9:23 AM
self-loathing ku by Vaselina May 4, 2003 3:45 PM
i write by Emelia May 3, 2003 5:24 PM
sorrow by Emelia May 3, 2003 5:19 PM
sympathy by Vaselina May 3, 2003 5:34 PM
...another haiku by beatvibe May 3, 2003 4:37 PM
simmer by judih. May 3, 2003 7:29 AM
boil by Vaselina May 3, 2003 5:24 PM
fuck-ku by mtmynd May 2, 2003 3:30 PM
fu-Q by Vaselina May 3, 2003 5:22 PM
it was cold that winter by beatvibe May 2, 2003 2:53 PM
enchilada by judih. May 2, 2003 12:21 PM
hard currency by beatvibe May 1, 2003 6:01 PM
how to turn a buck by stevadore May 2, 2003 7:48 AM
His Soul by Andeh May 5, 2003 9:37 AM
Pass Go by thunder chicken Jun 11, 2003 10:28 PM


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