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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


Hollowend by Arcadia Oct 31, 2003 9:27 AM
The atomic touch ... by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 1, 2003 1:22 AM
fraidy cat chicken ku by thunder chicken Nov 1, 2003 2:04 AM
1 or 2 by Jimboloco Oct 30, 2003 6:59 AM
sturdy haiku kid by Jimboloco Oct 31, 2003 9:51 AM
Freezing Indianola night haikus by poildecarotte Oct 29, 2003 7:32 PM
10-29 by BE ATRICE Oct 29, 2003 3:18 PM
amen by Yabyum Oct 27, 2003 6:45 PM
wakeful huntress by wendyfaber Oct 29, 2003 3:33 AM
...... by Yabyum Oct 26, 2003 5:20 PM
uh huh... by zen_ Oct 28, 2003 11:42 AM
I quit by Jimboloco Oct 30, 2003 1:34 PM
Sunday by anonymous-one Oct 26, 2003 11:23 AM
surreal by Jimboloco Oct 24, 2003 6:21 PM
awe shit........ by Yabyum Oct 24, 2003 4:00 PM
School daze (bis) by anonymous-one Oct 24, 2003 9:49 AM
ice or street hocky by zen_ Oct 28, 2003 11:50 AM
School daze. by anonymous-one Oct 24, 2003 9:46 AM
epiphany by desolation underwood Oct 24, 2003 4:56 AM
And dawn ... by ARAHH Oct 24, 2003 2:06 AM
an october night by hella Oct 23, 2003 11:26 PM
morning, on the moon by ~K Oct 23, 2003 8:54 PM
very interesting by BE ATRICE Oct 23, 2003 10:15 PM
blood blister by Yabyum Oct 23, 2003 1:24 PM
shark by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 9:44 AM
k by Arcadia Oct 23, 2003 9:59 AM
blue surface by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 10:56 AM
suspended in time. by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 8:49 PM
a won by BE ATRICE Oct 23, 2003 10:15 PM
%^) by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 9:16 AM
'.´.(((((......... by Arcadia Oct 23, 2003 9:45 AM
:-0 (edit) by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 10:02 AM
? by Arcadia Oct 23, 2003 10:26 AM
summertime heat by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 10:42 AM
rail yard by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 7:47 AM
choo choo by BE ATRICE Oct 23, 2003 8:30 PM
Well. by anonymous-one Oct 23, 2003 8:41 PM
ROTC DREAMS by Jimboloco Oct 22, 2003 5:44 AM
. by Yabyum Oct 21, 2003 6:51 PM
Monterey by Andeh Oct 20, 2003 8:46 PM
Carmel by Andeh Oct 20, 2003 8:51 PM
Hatteras by Andeh Oct 20, 2003 8:36 PM
C'ville by Andeh Oct 20, 2003 8:40 PM
i climbed to the top of a lighthouse yesterday and looked across the ocean by Yabyum Oct 20, 2003 5:48 PM
I climbed to the top of the police station thirty years ago and looked in by Jimboloco Oct 21, 2003 3:50 AM
i want to be punched in the mouth. by Yabyum Oct 20, 2003 2:19 PM
if only everything i felt inside could be summed up with one simple haiku by Yabyum Oct 19, 2003 6:58 PM
simple by che kabir Oct 20, 2003 5:08 AM
simple, simple by che kabir Oct 20, 2003 5:08 AM
super hero girl by Yabyum Oct 19, 2003 6:53 PM
who would win a fight? the ocean or the sky? by Yabyum Oct 19, 2003 8:58 AM
animousity pungent by judih. Oct 19, 2003 8:41 PM
Zoo by chronicshankar Oct 19, 2003 7:59 AM
i have been trying for an hour on my electric typewriter to write what i believe by Yabyum Oct 18, 2003 7:22 PM
my belief by judih. Oct 18, 2003 10:06 PM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Oct 19, 2003 4:35 AM
... by pottygok Oct 22, 2003 10:49 PM
sometimes when i am trying to sleep, i get these weird muscle spasms in my leg by Yabyum Oct 17, 2003 7:10 PM
Mg++ and Ca++, motion fever by ARAHH Oct 18, 2003 11:47 AM
feeling a little by Yabyum Oct 17, 2003 7:08 PM
so beautiful by arid zona Oct 18, 2003 11:27 AM
...yet dangerous by che kabir Oct 20, 2003 5:03 AM
Sweetly by Feign Oct 17, 2003 2:34 PM
thanks by Jimboloco Oct 17, 2003 5:15 PM
...... by Yabyum Oct 20, 2003 2:24 PM
noone can tell by Jimboloco Oct 21, 2003 3:46 AM
a view of the park by Emelia Oct 16, 2003 8:00 PM
goldfish by Emelia Oct 16, 2003 8:00 PM
tantric practice by Jimboloco Oct 15, 2003 9:41 AM
dude where's my haiku? by Jimboloco Oct 15, 2003 9:37 AM
bodhisattva by kkizer Oct 15, 2003 6:30 AM
bodhidharma by buddhabitch Oct 22, 2003 7:43 AM
last night I helped by Jimboloco Oct 14, 2003 6:25 AM
alone to be with by sonofthesun Oct 11, 2003 3:49 AM
yellow moon (PC) by pottygok Oct 9, 2003 11:47 PM
. by Yabyum Oct 9, 2003 6:56 PM
strange dialog ("...the law can't touch her at all") by orange Oct 9, 2003 12:44 PM
fall dance by wendyfaber Oct 7, 2003 2:48 PM
bow legged guy by wendyfaber Oct 7, 2003 2:50 PM
quiet confidence by wendyfaber Oct 7, 2003 2:53 PM
The by zen_ Oct 8, 2003 2:26 PM
fires by zen_ Oct 7, 2003 3:21 PM
out for the air by judih. Oct 7, 2003 9:33 PM
The 7th Shoe by Fenris Oct 10, 2003 10:33 AM
falling mood by judih. Oct 7, 2003 11:17 AM
October by Fenris Oct 7, 2003 11:41 AM
d'est-ouest by Andeh Oct 7, 2003 12:26 PM
season of dying is oh so inspiring by Yabyum Oct 20, 2003 2:22 PM
summer´s leave by Mob Oct 7, 2003 2:11 AM
Mornings by Q.T. Oct 6, 2003 11:13 PM
It's a wind up, surely? by Fenris Oct 7, 2003 11:48 AM
Three For the first day of Rain in Vancouver. by AgnosticExtremist Oct 6, 2003 3:16 PM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Oct 6, 2003 7:33 AM
hesitation by judih. Oct 5, 2003 11:53 PM
! by Yabyum Oct 5, 2003 5:02 PM
? by Yabyum Oct 5, 2003 4:52 PM
i've got a really nice smile by m'oon Oct 6, 2003 8:59 AM
best by AgnosticExtremist Oct 6, 2003 3:17 PM
. by Yabyum Oct 5, 2003 4:44 PM
Lovelight by mtmynd Oct 4, 2003 9:34 AM
neighbour's deep fry by judih. Oct 4, 2003 9:23 AM
yummy-ku by mtmynd Oct 4, 2003 9:33 AM
Bordertown by mtmynd Oct 4, 2003 9:19 AM
Where's Davy? by Fenris Oct 7, 2003 11:45 AM
saturday by mtmynd Oct 4, 2003 9:12 AM
. by Yabyum Oct 3, 2003 9:00 PM
For Sarah Ann by Fenris Oct 3, 2003 12:31 PM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Oct 3, 2003 11:56 AM
nice by Yabyum Oct 3, 2003 9:01 PM
e/m hell by mtmynd Oct 3, 2003 8:41 AM
wicked wicked by judih. Oct 3, 2003 12:08 PM
haiku hell by buddhabitch Oct 3, 2003 6:32 AM
haiku tell by mtmynd Oct 3, 2003 8:35 AM
Mirror (pc) by NicFiTycoon Oct 2, 2003 4:15 PM
reflection by zen_ Oct 2, 2003 4:55 PM
One image... by pottygok Oct 2, 2003 5:11 PM
Thanks by NicFiTycoon Oct 2, 2003 5:56 PM
congrats by zen_ Oct 4, 2003 7:47 PM
she sent an e mail and i responded, now she wants to talk on the phone by Yabyum Oct 2, 2003 1:25 PM
not by Jimboloco Oct 2, 2003 1:27 PM
blow me. by Yabyum Oct 2, 2003 2:16 PM
blow me down matey by Jimboloco Oct 14, 2003 5:56 AM
try by Yabyum Oct 2, 2003 2:20 PM
are you young? by Jimboloco Oct 14, 2003 6:03 AM
Is it by Arcadia Oct 2, 2003 1:56 PM
Possibly something for the poetry board? by pottygok Oct 2, 2003 2:39 PM
THIS IS NOT A HAIKU! by Yabyum Oct 2, 2003 3:06 PM
Just curious... by pottygok Oct 2, 2003 4:47 PM
. by Yabyum Oct 2, 2003 4:53 PM
... by pottygok Oct 2, 2003 5:03 PM
myku? by zen_ Oct 2, 2003 5:02 PM
ya know..... by Yabyum Oct 2, 2003 5:12 PM
sounds good by firecracker Oct 2, 2003 6:45 PM
heh by ellipsis Oct 2, 2003 7:17 PM
yeah... by pottygok Oct 2, 2003 9:24 PM
Haiku Onto You by Dave The Dov Oct 3, 2003 10:12 AM
why not by zen_ Oct 3, 2003 2:47 PM
women by Yabyum Oct 3, 2003 9:04 PM
there by zen_ Oct 4, 2003 7:43 PM
why by ViolentSmurf Oct 3, 2003 3:51 PM
last night by Yabyum Oct 3, 2003 3:54 PM
phone tag by zen_ Oct 4, 2003 7:41 PM
ISO by zen_ Oct 2, 2003 10:36 AM
nice bio zenbo by Jimboloco Oct 2, 2003 1:33 PM
haiku blues #2 by slim gizzard Oct 2, 2003 7:40 AM
hmm by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Oct 2, 2003 7:41 AM
dust by Jimboloco Oct 2, 2003 1:43 PM
what are... by slim gizzard Oct 3, 2003 8:54 PM
tide pool by Jimboloco Oct 14, 2003 6:16 AM


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