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Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


haiku (pc) by fabled construct Feb 29, 2004 10:44 AM
Levis Hatchling by universe=one-song Feb 28, 2004 7:01 AM
Bird Sanctuary by tinker jack Feb 29, 2004 10:03 PM
heron nest by fabled construct Mar 1, 2004 1:53 PM
good haiku site by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 2:22 PM
toy doll by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 12:11 PM
vapor by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 12:20 PM
grandmother by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 12:23 PM
ill by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 2:09 PM
suicide by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 2:12 PM
ticking (pc) by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 2:13 PM
tocking by 4 degrees Feb 28, 2004 7:06 AM
little girl smiles by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:15 AM
count the birds by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:16 AM
daytime moon by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:17 AM
dog stirs by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:17 AM
sat to eat by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:18 AM
pen runs out by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:18 AM
old pen left to dry by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:18 AM
runny nose by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:19 AM
night lamp by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:20 AM
bare winter branches by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:20 AM
a girl asleep (pc) by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:21 AM
heya by 4 degrees Feb 28, 2004 11:24 AM
i got carried away by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:24 AM
and by 4 degrees Feb 28, 2004 11:26 AM
i actually can't by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:26 AM
i'll see by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:27 AM
i am heartbroken... by 4 degrees Feb 28, 2004 11:27 AM
next week... by pinstripe Feb 28, 2004 11:30 AM
a monologue by squidwork Feb 29, 2004 3:24 AM
are they all that bad by pinstripe Mar 2, 2004 12:36 PM
this one's by squidwork Mar 3, 2004 1:32 AM
can i borrow the last line by squidwork Mar 5, 2004 7:17 AM
(pc)beets by nas the lost Feb 26, 2004 7:34 PM
i'm a bit confused by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 12:26 PM
evening bliss (pc) by sonofthesun Feb 25, 2004 10:10 PM
its a son(pc) by sonofthesun Feb 25, 2004 10:13 PM
it peaks by sonofthesun Feb 25, 2004 10:16 PM
...(pc) by fabled construct Feb 25, 2004 12:10 PM
take a new picture by 4 degrees Feb 25, 2004 1:03 PM
mmm..haiku? by fabled construct Feb 26, 2004 12:46 PM
... by 4 degrees Feb 26, 2004 12:54 PM
changed (pc) by fabled construct Feb 26, 2004 12:45 PM
photo of a traced thought by orange Feb 24, 2004 4:35 PM
xerox by 4 degrees Feb 25, 2004 12:24 PM
Pup! by noangel Feb 24, 2004 2:18 PM
voyeur-ku by 4 degrees Feb 23, 2004 7:58 AM
... by squidwork Feb 26, 2004 3:09 AM
.... by 4 degrees Mar 2, 2004 7:40 PM
sickness (pc) by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:10 AM
not bad by judih. Feb 23, 2004 3:51 AM
thanks by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:54 AM
what are my others by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:55 AM
You are doing pretty excellent for a novice. by tinker jack Feb 23, 2004 5:41 PM
thank you by fabled construct Feb 24, 2004 7:43 AM
This is the first Haiku I ever read that went off in my head like Hiroshima by tinker jack Feb 25, 2004 7:48 AM
it just spread.... by fabled construct Feb 25, 2004 11:11 AM
i had to by fabled construct Feb 25, 2004 12:32 PM
Neurological? by tinker jack Feb 25, 2004 6:04 PM
django? by fabled construct Mar 1, 2004 1:50 PM
actually, by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:57 AM
too late by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:01 AM
doh! by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:02 AM
... by pottygok Feb 26, 2004 7:18 AM
... by fabled construct Feb 26, 2004 10:41 AM
... by pottygok Feb 26, 2004 1:27 PM
ok, cheers by fabled construct Feb 29, 2004 12:05 PM
approaching a haiku reading list by pottygok Mar 4, 2004 2:49 PM
batt by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:05 AM
comment by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:04 AM
my father was... by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:06 AM
one syllable last line? by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:09 AM
here...(pc) by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:10 AM
playing by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:18 AM
2-liner? by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:21 AM
everything has a name by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:31 AM
try here: by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:34 AM
cheers by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 1:16 PM
pageant sags by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:04 AM
i like the idea by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:03 AM
hmmm.. by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:04 AM
no, hadn't by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:05 AM
better just to paint it... by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:07 AM
great by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:09 AM
yep... by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:11 AM
on the road to mastery by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:19 AM
well, like anyone i hope i am by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 4:22 AM
you're lucky by judih. Feb 23, 2004 4:35 AM
feb.rua.ry by Emelia Feb 22, 2004 8:41 AM
february ku by buddhabitch Feb 22, 2004 11:30 AM
ku-ku by pinstripe Feb 20, 2004 8:15 AM
do re mi ku by buddhabitch Feb 22, 2004 11:00 AM
recording reagan in action by squidwork Feb 19, 2004 9:24 PM
three ku by buddhabitch Feb 19, 2004 6:33 PM
reply by bobert9 Feb 21, 2004 9:42 PM
captured in time by buddhabitch Feb 22, 2004 10:36 AM
bee high (pc) by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 3:12 AM
I am not sure by buddhabitch Feb 23, 2004 11:19 AM
grace by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 12:38 PM
micro-conversation (the ant) by orange Feb 24, 2004 6:23 PM
pottygok... by pinstripe Feb 19, 2004 1:24 PM
I'll be back in a half hour... by pottygok Feb 19, 2004 1:28 PM
...(pc) by pinstripe Feb 19, 2004 1:32 PM
..... by 4 degrees Feb 19, 2004 1:35 PM
sarcasm? by pinstripe Feb 19, 2004 1:38 PM
llai by 4 degrees Feb 19, 2004 1:40 PM
... by pottygok Feb 19, 2004 1:53 PM
maybe...?(pc) by pinstripe Feb 20, 2004 4:06 AM
... by pottygok Feb 26, 2004 7:23 AM
thanks...(pc) by pinstripe Feb 27, 2004 12:07 PM
the dale (pc) by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 11:39 AM
... by pottygok Feb 19, 2004 1:22 PM
thankyou! by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 1:25 PM
oh...just thought by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 1:36 PM
no... by pottygok Feb 19, 2004 1:56 PM
cheers by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 2:05 PM
..to disturb by 4 degrees Feb 19, 2004 11:07 AM
essence by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 11:56 AM
.... by 4 degrees Feb 29, 2004 1:43 PM
thanks 4D by fabled construct Mar 1, 2004 1:52 PM
.... by 4 degrees Mar 1, 2004 1:55 PM
Green grass by tinker jack Feb 18, 2004 3:30 PM
some city, somewhere by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 11:42 AM
Programs by ARAHH Feb 18, 2004 1:22 PM
mastur-ku by 4 degrees Feb 18, 2004 5:24 AM
hand job by tinker jack Feb 19, 2004 9:25 AM
warning by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 11:43 AM
dissassociation by tinker jack Feb 22, 2004 1:58 PM
dispersion by fabled construct Feb 23, 2004 12:40 PM
dissuasion by 4 degrees Feb 23, 2004 3:22 PM
Virginal -retitled -(edited a lot) by tinker jack Feb 23, 2004 5:43 PM
sorry I went there by tinker jack Feb 23, 2004 5:55 PM
.... by 4 degrees Feb 23, 2004 7:10 PM
Under command .. by ARAHH Feb 18, 2004 5:01 AM
the meaning of life by ferrari23 Feb 14, 2004 8:08 PM
delete this by tinker jack Feb 14, 2004 8:58 PM
Any one? by rocky Feb 14, 2004 6:51 PM
what's up, by judih. Feb 14, 2004 7:16 PM
Tropic Of Cancer by artguy Feb 14, 2004 6:29 AM
wake up by judih. Feb 13, 2004 10:42 PM
what? by rocky Feb 14, 2004 6:47 PM
Eat This by Booswa Feb 13, 2004 10:40 PM
morning haiku by kkizer Feb 13, 2004 6:52 AM
morning haiku by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 12:07 PM
morning haiku by squidwork Feb 19, 2004 9:28 PM
morning haiku by fabled construct Feb 20, 2004 12:21 AM
morning ku by judih. Feb 20, 2004 12:29 AM
morning haiku by fabled construct Feb 20, 2004 3:53 AM
noon haiku by fabled construct Feb 20, 2004 3:54 AM
evenen ku by squidwork Feb 20, 2004 5:42 AM
midnight ku by fabled construct Feb 22, 2004 5:12 AM
metafiscal by zero hero Feb 13, 2004 3:01 AM
dry as the by sonofthesun Feb 12, 2004 9:38 PM
crumbs by sonofthesun Feb 12, 2004 9:40 PM
wondrous by sonofthesun Feb 12, 2004 9:42 PM
curious by sonofthesun Feb 12, 2004 9:45 PM
weather by zero hero Feb 13, 2004 2:56 AM
Media Blitz by skipjack Feb 14, 2004 7:06 AM
more just now stories... by buddhabitch Feb 12, 2004 8:35 AM
a cup of tea by markk Feb 12, 2004 8:48 AM
Morning Edition by zero hero Feb 13, 2004 2:52 AM
almost frozen (wake me when you leave) by orange Feb 11, 2004 1:36 PM
nocturnal hollow by panta rhei Feb 11, 2004 11:55 AM
yasssss by markk Feb 12, 2004 8:48 AM
silent snow by zero hero Feb 13, 2004 2:44 AM
just now stories by buddhabitch Feb 11, 2004 7:18 AM
seasonal disfunction (retitled) by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 7:49 AM
deglued by zero hero Feb 12, 2004 8:00 AM
February Sky by zero hero Feb 12, 2004 8:03 AM
Crying Haiku by pinstripe Feb 10, 2004 1:40 PM
is that funny? by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:33 AM
he's a genius by majic Feb 11, 2004 3:54 AM
sarcasm is the best by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 4:01 AM
sssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh by pinstripe Feb 12, 2004 2:40 PM
the square root on negative one* by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 6:47 AM
hinted by pinstripe Feb 12, 2004 2:42 PM
i'm a genius by pinstripe Feb 12, 2004 2:39 PM
no, by pinstripe Feb 12, 2004 2:37 PM
fuck by 4 degrees Feb 12, 2004 6:31 PM
crying wolf by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 6:42 AM
blood-shedding furs by pinstripe Feb 12, 2004 2:36 PM
shore of lake ontario haiku by jim vinny Feb 10, 2004 11:07 AM
rising canal Devonshire haiku by pinstripe Feb 10, 2004 1:43 PM
man drops a rich load of knowledge where ever he goes by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 7:04 AM
not a holiday season 'haiku' by in a sense Feb 9, 2004 8:42 PM
...... by Yabyum Feb 9, 2004 5:30 PM
blobular ku by zero hero Feb 10, 2004 10:01 AM
Hip Hop by artguy Feb 8, 2004 11:34 AM
Guzzle by pinstripe Feb 9, 2004 2:24 PM
pink tongues by DocStray Feb 6, 2004 2:29 PM
patient as a cat by zero hero Feb 8, 2004 7:23 AM
cat trick is a trick , thievery is movement by DocStray Feb 8, 2004 9:38 AM
wet fur by zero hero Feb 9, 2004 5:19 PM
I like by Illuminara Feb 9, 2004 5:20 PM
put it down beginner's luck by zero hero Feb 9, 2004 5:52 PM
cozy realities of roses by zero hero Feb 5, 2004 6:48 AM
typing by zero hero Feb 5, 2004 10:58 AM
yawn by seajay1221 Feb 6, 2004 11:31 AM
yawl by zero hero Feb 7, 2004 12:48 PM
eye by fabled construct Feb 3, 2004 1:43 PM
finger by fabled construct Feb 3, 2004 1:46 PM
ribs by fabled construct Feb 3, 2004 1:50 PM
route 666 by zero hero Feb 3, 2004 3:07 PM
M62 by fabled construct Feb 4, 2004 2:09 AM
white bird (retitled from night bird) by zero hero Feb 4, 2004 7:54 AM
turn off the headlights by fabled construct Feb 6, 2004 1:22 PM
shade by zero hero Feb 6, 2004 10:35 PM
gnarled tree by fabled construct Feb 7, 2004 12:23 PM
Pb-winds (first line edited one word) by zero hero Feb 7, 2004 12:59 PM
pores opening by fabled construct Feb 7, 2004 1:06 PM
cold fact by zero hero Feb 8, 2004 7:47 AM
black heat by fabled construct Feb 8, 2004 9:24 AM
Aracne by zero hero Feb 9, 2004 5:33 PM
no birds (small edit 2nd line) by fabled construct Feb 10, 2004 8:55 AM
birds of a feather by zero hero Feb 10, 2004 9:49 AM
angel (edited) by fabled construct Feb 10, 2004 10:39 AM
earth (edited her/your) by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 1:59 AM
track of dust by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 2:42 AM
I am male by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 6:53 AM
i am male by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 1:18 PM
I am stoopid by zero hero Feb 12, 2004 8:30 AM
women behind the sun by fabled construct Feb 12, 2004 2:23 PM
road kill by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 2:40 AM
premonition by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 2:45 AM
raw undedited by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:22 AM
near misses by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:27 AM
yeah by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:38 AM
watch out by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:38 AM
titles of all kinds are suspicious by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:43 AM
valuable lesson in haiku thanks by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 7:17 AM
haiku in accordance by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 1:15 PM
lost in the translation (from carbon based brain to silicon based brain) by zero hero Feb 12, 2004 7:55 AM
words for the trees by fabled construct Feb 12, 2004 2:19 PM
baby driver by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 2:25 AM
steering wheel sticking by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 2:50 AM
murderers by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:12 AM
that's what i was a' wonderin' by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:16 AM
Cain/Able by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:35 AM
cliff-dweller by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:40 AM
Peda* ku by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:49 AM
christians and lions by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:55 AM
physical anthropology 101 by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 7:10 AM
you're the pan piper by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 1:12 PM
you're the sky pilot by zero hero Feb 12, 2004 8:21 AM
renegade hair sample by fabled construct Feb 12, 2004 2:26 PM
left by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 2:04 AM
risk at obtuse angle by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:19 AM
string theory by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 3:42 AM
the resurgency began and we missed it by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:45 AM
unworthy salutation by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:49 AM
unworthy salutation by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 3:49 AM
carnivore by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 4:00 AM
ciao by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 4:03 AM
ok by zero hero Feb 11, 2004 7:12 AM
androgynous text box by fabled construct Feb 11, 2004 1:09 PM
duels by zero hero Feb 12, 2004 8:16 AM
hermaphrodites unite by fabled construct Feb 12, 2004 2:30 PM
Yes we have no bananas today, or Haiku too by skipjack Feb 14, 2004 7:26 AM
bananas are for us monkeys by fabled construct Feb 15, 2004 1:19 PM
white bird by tinker jack Feb 16, 2004 6:09 AM
dying motown classic by fabled construct Feb 16, 2004 7:57 AM
struggle for a haiku today by tinker jack Feb 16, 2004 6:08 PM
partners by fabled construct Feb 19, 2004 12:03 PM
minneapolis by beatvibe Feb 3, 2004 11:52 AM
if by zero hero Feb 3, 2004 3:09 PM
Perhaps not... by beatvibe Feb 4, 2004 8:35 AM
slushy ku by zero hero Feb 5, 2004 7:02 AM
untitled haiku by kkizer Feb 2, 2004 4:56 PM
renga round rosey by buddhabitch Feb 3, 2004 5:53 AM
Pubic Ku (or renga if I add a line?)PC by zero hero Feb 3, 2004 9:39 AM
klue less by zero hero Feb 3, 2004 3:00 PM
Characters (with spaces) by beatvibe Feb 2, 2004 4:28 PM
what's the diff?(PC)(retitled from pregnant gnat) by zero hero Feb 2, 2004 6:18 PM


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