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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


heat [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 21, 2004 4:40 PM
black phoebe [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 21, 2004 4:39 PM
sylly ku (PC) (html edited) by short timer Jul 21, 2004 1:18 PM
Drunken Haiku by the Drunken Haiku Master by drunkenhaikumaster Jul 21, 2004 7:29 AM
now by jamelah Jul 21, 2004 8:14 AM
your drunken haiku is formidable.... by monkriot Jul 21, 2004 3:55 PM
Zen by Sacredburro Jul 21, 2004 5:09 AM
mindfully by wendyfaber Jul 21, 2004 4:17 PM
seagull by firecracker Jul 20, 2004 6:08 PM
jonathan livingston by jamelah Jul 20, 2004 6:34 PM
a ghost checks out the construction by orange Jul 20, 2004 2:11 PM
old boat [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 20, 2004 11:18 AM
... by pottygok Jul 20, 2004 12:35 PM
Metaphor in Haiku (edits) by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2004 3:54 AM
butcher haiku by cylance Jul 20, 2004 4:45 AM
Again, good information... by kkizer Jul 20, 2004 7:10 AM
poetic techniques by Beth Vieira Jul 20, 2004 7:14 AM
i agree with your post... by mtmynd Jul 20, 2004 9:21 AM
... by pottygok Jul 20, 2004 12:32 PM
note about my ku: by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2004 3:26 PM
... by pottygok Jul 21, 2004 6:40 AM
when pigs can fly... by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2004 7:38 AM
... by pottygok Jul 21, 2004 12:32 PM
Thanks... by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2004 3:27 PM
thanks buddha by Arcadia Jul 20, 2004 3:30 PM
the tide's delirium [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 19, 2004 1:29 PM
Haiku Onto You!!!! by Dave The Dov Jul 19, 2004 10:38 AM
How true. by Billectric Jul 20, 2004 5:14 AM
heh by ellipsis Jul 20, 2004 7:14 AM
ku ku for aggressive haiku by singlemalt Jul 19, 2004 9:22 AM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 20, 2004 11:28 AM
#5550 by mtmynd Jul 19, 2004 8:42 AM
time caught in a circle by panta rhei Jul 19, 2004 9:20 AM
time flows by panta rhei Jul 19, 2004 9:21 AM
Haiku Techniques by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2004 5:33 AM
very very nice by judih. Jul 19, 2004 6:51 AM
sweet jane... by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2004 8:05 AM
Good information... by kkizer Jul 19, 2004 7:09 AM
I know... by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2004 8:07 AM
... by pottygok Jul 19, 2004 7:32 AM
haiku taboos by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2004 8:24 AM
... by pottygok Jul 19, 2004 9:23 AM
upsetting? by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2004 10:12 AM
... by pottygok Jul 20, 2004 12:07 PM
I think I got... by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2004 3:16 PM
... by pottygok Jul 21, 2004 7:33 AM
I don't disagree... by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2004 8:13 AM
... by pottygok Jul 21, 2004 12:26 PM
very interesting link by panta rhei Jul 19, 2004 9:32 AM
welcome Panta by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2004 10:13 AM
Sunday morning (RW) by buddhabitch Jul 18, 2004 6:10 AM
Morning too.... by artguy Jul 18, 2004 10:41 AM
monday by monkriot Jul 19, 2004 12:45 PM
... by pottygok Jul 21, 2004 7:48 AM
upside-down circle by shem Jul 17, 2004 9:59 PM
Now that by Billectric Jul 19, 2004 6:19 AM
No.. by shem Jul 19, 2004 9:00 AM
Jewel lake by shem Jul 17, 2004 9:58 PM
flies [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 17, 2004 9:02 AM
... by pottygok Jul 19, 2004 9:31 AM
pc by starsailor Jul 16, 2004 5:54 PM
... by pottygok Jul 19, 2004 9:04 AM
politics brain melt by mnaz Jul 15, 2004 5:45 PM
later on.. by mnaz Jul 15, 2004 7:07 PM
midday lowtide [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 15, 2004 12:12 PM
... by pottygok Jul 19, 2004 7:59 AM
crepe myrtle [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 15, 2004 12:04 PM
... by pottygok Jul 19, 2004 7:43 AM
pc by starsailor Jul 15, 2004 5:02 AM
while pc by wendyfaber Jul 14, 2004 7:53 PM
unity by wendyfaber Jul 14, 2004 7:59 PM
emptiness by wendyfaber Jul 14, 2004 8:05 PM
passing grade by wendyfaber Jul 14, 2004 8:16 PM
Can you haiku? by singlemalt Jul 13, 2004 1:16 PM
this haiku will pump you up by singlemalt Jul 13, 2004 10:52 AM
Hm by Jazz Messiah Jul 14, 2004 8:24 AM
pabst and poetry by JrMint Jul 14, 2004 2:56 PM
Imprints... pc by Jazz Messiah Jul 13, 2004 8:56 AM
ahhh... by buddhabitch Jul 13, 2004 11:53 AM
... by pottygok Jul 13, 2004 12:57 PM
buses by kilmes Jul 13, 2004 5:43 PM
waiting worker by wendyfaber Jul 14, 2004 7:46 PM
house [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 13, 2004 6:35 AM
um... by buddhabitch Jul 13, 2004 12:03 PM
... by pottygok Jul 13, 2004 12:52 PM
dusk [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 13, 2004 6:33 AM
this one... by buddhabitch Jul 13, 2004 11:56 AM
... by pottygok Jul 13, 2004 12:51 PM
you have a message by Beth Vieira Jul 17, 2004 7:12 AM
tears [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 13, 2004 6:31 AM
... by pottygok Jul 13, 2004 12:49 PM
booming [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 13, 2004 6:29 AM
... by pottygok Jul 13, 2004 12:48 PM
the ku of altitude by singlemalt Jul 12, 2004 12:43 PM
the ku of attitude by buddhabitch Jul 12, 2004 2:32 PM
conceited ku by singlemalt Jul 12, 2004 12:37 PM
all about you ku by buddhabitch Jul 12, 2004 2:36 PM
stinky ku by singlemalt Jul 12, 2004 12:34 PM
what's that smell? by buddhabitch Jul 12, 2004 2:40 PM
first aid ku by singlemalt Jul 12, 2004 12:32 PM
second grade aid by buddhabitch Jul 12, 2004 2:43 PM
iced tea ku by singlemalt Jul 12, 2004 12:28 PM
momma drinkku by buddhabitch Jul 12, 2004 2:51 PM
Cloudcroft, NM - RW (replies welcome) by buddhabitch Jul 12, 2004 5:27 AM
last seen near lush green mindless hill by judih. Jul 12, 2004 10:27 AM
ku (be) wilderness by buddhabitch Jul 13, 2004 5:12 AM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:10 PM
Southwest lingo... by buddhabitch Jul 13, 2004 5:01 AM
Written at burst at 4:30 in the morning PC by Loretta's Scars Jul 11, 2004 10:04 AM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:14 PM
waiting at the bus stop for 35 minutes in manchester PC by Jazz Messiah Jul 11, 2004 8:23 AM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:17 PM
post ku by mtmynd Jul 10, 2004 8:55 PM
yin v. yang haiku by singlemalt Jul 10, 2004 9:22 AM
.... by 4 degrees Jul 10, 2004 9:17 PM
bad ass ku by singlemalt Jul 10, 2004 9:20 AM
no mind by mtmynd Jul 10, 2004 8:39 AM
pc by fabled construct Jul 10, 2004 7:09 AM
pc by fabled construct Jul 10, 2004 7:11 AM
pc by fabled construct Jul 10, 2004 7:14 AM
pc by fabled construct Jul 10, 2004 7:05 AM
fightin' haiku, part deux by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 10:07 PM
wham bam ku by mtmynd Jul 10, 2004 8:36 AM
fightin' haiku by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 10:02 PM
Maybe the last line should be by singlemalt Jul 10, 2004 9:13 AM
Silly by electric dolly Jul 9, 2004 7:48 PM
cicadas [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:46 AM
Very Dense by beat_fan Jul 9, 2004 7:11 PM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:19 PM
owl [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:43 AM
Eerie, by beat_fan Jul 9, 2004 7:14 PM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:27 PM
ode to you know what by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 9:02 AM
the thing is thong by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:05 AM
shit! by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 9:08 AM
**it? by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:30 AM
For love of thong by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 8:32 AM
with by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:02 AM
musings of dongs and history by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 9:07 AM
rip off by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:32 AM
Three Haikus (PC) by Createyers Jul 9, 2004 8:31 AM
some ideas by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:41 AM
thanks by Createyers Jul 9, 2004 10:54 AM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:35 PM
Please take a bath by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 7:01 AM
shower [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 8:21 AM
Seriously, take a bath by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 8:30 AM
Gabardine love affair by singlemalt Jul 9, 2004 6:56 AM
clothes by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 8:25 AM
-- ? -- by mtmynd Jul 8, 2004 8:30 PM
yeah, nothin is nuttin by judih. Jul 8, 2004 9:03 PM
prying [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 8:27 AM
1,2,3, etc... by mnaz Jul 9, 2004 1:52 PM
summer stuff.. by mnaz Jul 8, 2004 6:24 PM
midsummer nights dream by mtmynd Jul 8, 2004 8:32 PM
hot [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 8:30 AM
desert hot.. by mnaz Jul 9, 2004 1:06 PM
verdant scene (now).. by mnaz Jul 9, 2004 12:41 PM
Revised version of an older haiku about trees and such - PC by Jazz Messiah Jul 8, 2004 11:24 AM
boxers by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 8:58 AM
summer 04 by cylance Jul 8, 2004 6:14 AM
summer - 03 by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 7:29 AM
summer-02 by Beth Vieira Jul 9, 2004 9:00 AM
some snores - RW (replies welcome) by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 5:39 AM
:-) by cylance Jul 8, 2004 6:13 AM
wabi sabi by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 7:22 AM
still here by wendyfaber Jul 8, 2004 8:12 AM
startled by wendyfaber Jul 8, 2004 8:04 AM
cantalope by shem Jul 7, 2004 7:07 PM
melons by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 12:48 AM
melooney by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 5:21 AM
junipers by shem Jul 7, 2004 7:04 PM
junipers by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 12:50 AM
lone juniper by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 5:15 AM
even in [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 6:43 PM
... by shem Jul 7, 2004 7:12 PM
songs by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 12:52 AM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:40 PM
worms [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 6:38 PM
where's the sauce? by cylance Jul 8, 2004 2:26 AM
where's the soup? by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 5:04 AM
haiku...RW (Replies Welcome) by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2004 5:24 AM
coffee by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 5:48 AM
ku'panions by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2004 9:26 AM
why? by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 12:55 AM
because... by buddhabitch Jul 8, 2004 5:26 AM
act as if----RW by wendyfaber Jul 7, 2004 7:44 AM
2 toned lupine by wendyfaber Jul 7, 2004 7:48 AM
new mown hay by wendyfaber Jul 7, 2004 7:52 AM
hey hay by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2004 9:19 AM
wild flower by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2004 9:16 AM
mooses by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2004 9:14 AM
your by wendyfaber Jul 8, 2004 8:11 PM
ergo ego by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 12:44 AM
black [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 12:23 AM
mist [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 9:18 PM
... by pottygok Jul 12, 2004 10:38 PM
Ok, here we go (PC) by CHILDS Jul 6, 2004 10:38 AM
cool by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 9:14 PM
This is one of the few haikus I've ever written... by CHILDS Jul 7, 2004 10:34 AM
white box by mtmynd Jul 6, 2004 10:22 AM
white knight by buddhabitch Jul 7, 2004 5:26 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 1:01 AM
-/- by cylance Jul 6, 2004 2:13 AM
gray by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 1:03 AM
hai coin by mtmynd Jul 4, 2004 10:09 PM
silver by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 1:05 AM
Untitled (pc) by beat_fan Jul 4, 2004 9:03 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:25 AM
the storm by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 9:30 PM
Thanks for the comments. by beat_fan Jul 8, 2004 9:30 AM
kansas by lividlips Jul 4, 2004 7:59 PM
windmills by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 1:07 AM
5-7-5 pc by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 5:02 PM
Nice imagery by beat_fan Jul 4, 2004 8:59 PM
exactly by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:00 PM
likeable by Brage Jul 5, 2004 2:18 AM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:27 AM
Yes, like I said by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 12:10 PM
premises by beatvibe Jul 4, 2004 1:13 PM
thanku by m.t.mynd Jul 4, 2004 10:03 PM
silent understanding by orange Jul 4, 2004 12:05 PM
nature song by mtmynd Jul 4, 2004 11:34 AM
A Taste of Honey - PC by Jazz Messiah Jul 4, 2004 8:46 AM
honey by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 9:38 PM
... by Jazz Messiah Jul 8, 2004 11:22 AM
Announcement: Happy Birthday, Mr. President--write your haiku by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 9:09 PM
thank you by anavia Jul 3, 2004 9:18 PM
Dr. Martens pc by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 6:24 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:29 AM
older man pc by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 6:22 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:30 AM
seeping pc by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 6:21 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:30 AM
Unfortunately, I can't by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 12:13 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 2:23 PM
well, the editors by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 4:47 PM
... by pottygok Jul 7, 2004 6:48 AM
Wow! by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 12:45 PM
fishy lunch by wendy faber Jul 2, 2004 7:47 PM
visitor by wendy faber Jul 2, 2004 7:41 PM
voyager by wendy faber Jul 3, 2004 5:27 AM
backroad darter by wendy faber Jul 2, 2004 7:37 PM
grasping scavenger by wendy faber Jul 3, 2004 5:31 AM
disguised retreat by wendy faber Jul 2, 2004 7:32 PM
her own space by wendy faber Jul 3, 2004 5:35 AM
infinite spaciousness by wendy faber Jul 3, 2004 5:40 AM
little monsters by Glorious Amok Jul 2, 2004 12:45 PM
dinnertime pc by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:08 AM
... by Swann Jul 2, 2004 1:18 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:32 AM
tanker pc by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:07 AM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:36 AM
from the mountain top by buddhabitch Jul 2, 2004 7:56 AM
july 2 by seajay1221 Jul 2, 2004 5:42 AM
summer break by cylance Jul 2, 2004 1:51 AM
Real Panic Is... by Jazz Messiah Jul 1, 2004 6:30 PM
... - PC by Swann Jul 1, 2004 6:22 PM
your words by cylance Jul 2, 2004 1:28 AM
swann by judih. Jul 2, 2004 1:42 AM
thanks guys by Swann Jul 2, 2004 4:37 AM
unruffled by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:16 AM
man by Swann Jul 2, 2004 1:11 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:35 AM
eyeful towering by mtmynd Jul 1, 2004 1:51 PM
hunger by mtmynd Jul 1, 2004 1:53 PM
true blue by mtmynd Jul 1, 2004 2:00 PM
July 1st by Mie Jul 1, 2004 1:31 PM


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