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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


... by shem Jun 30, 2004 8:43 AM
nice by buddhabitch Jul 1, 2004 5:42 AM
Phish by gtricky Jun 30, 2004 7:18 AM
The Violent Air (4 Haikus) - - PC by Jazz Messiah Jun 30, 2004 6:37 AM
some ideas, not necessarily my own by Beth Vieira Jun 30, 2004 2:01 PM
critique of a critique by buddhabitch Jul 1, 2004 5:48 AM
on reading hermit hut poets pc by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 8:08 PM
on reading Thoreau's Walden pc by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 8:06 PM
phone call by SLucia Jun 29, 2004 7:34 PM
nervousness by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 7:59 PM
waiting by Mie Jun 29, 2004 11:35 AM
glimmers by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 8:03 PM
unread papers pc by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:08 PM
... by shem Jun 28, 2004 9:12 PM
the news pc by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:07 PM
summer by shem Jun 28, 2004 5:49 PM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:05 PM
take 2 by shem Jun 29, 2004 3:04 PM
as i sit here by SLucia Jun 27, 2004 8:41 PM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:01 PM
You are naked by Chipzee Jun 27, 2004 7:56 AM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 6:57 PM
summer night by SLucia Jun 26, 2004 6:27 PM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 6:50 PM
briefcase pc by Beth Vieira Jun 26, 2004 3:18 PM
ooooh. . . by bubbleybingo Jun 27, 2004 4:45 PM
upside down bathtub pc by Beth Vieira Jun 26, 2004 3:16 PM
photos by bubbleybingo Jun 27, 2004 4:50 PM
hidden moon (PC) by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:08 PM
more moons by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 10:34 PM
... by pottygok Jun 26, 2004 1:39 AM
traffic jam (PC) by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:07 PM
pool by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 10:30 PM
... by pottygok Jun 26, 2004 12:04 PM
pool by Beth Vieira Jun 26, 2004 3:12 PM
... by pottygok Jun 26, 2004 3:57 PM
cinco de mayo (PC) by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:06 PM
moony by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 10:28 PM
milk moon (PC) by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:06 PM
meow by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 10:22 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:51 PM
courtyard 'ku pc by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 4:28 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:05 PM
as I said by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 10:39 PM
... by pottygok Jun 26, 2004 1:41 AM
frontage road at dusk PC by andyw Jun 24, 2004 8:06 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 1:10 AM
heat pc by Beth Vieira Jun 24, 2004 4:31 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 1:07 AM
yup by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 10:07 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:55 PM
Charm for the unhappy young man by martha40 Jun 24, 2004 1:46 PM
Lowku by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 1:10 PM
sweet rain by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2004 6:48 AM
and then there was by Beth Vieira Jun 24, 2004 4:29 PM
the dangers of salt pc by Beth Vieira Jun 23, 2004 8:02 PM
murder mystery receipe by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2004 5:13 AM
drought by buddhabitch Jun 23, 2004 4:05 AM
haibun by Beth Vieira Jun 23, 2004 7:58 PM
nope by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2004 4:38 AM
drought haibun by buddhabitch Jun 24, 2004 5:03 AM
rush by Beth Vieira Jun 24, 2004 4:07 PM
(you remembered not to say goodbye) by orange Jun 21, 2004 2:14 PM
forgotten items by SLucia Jun 26, 2004 6:33 PM
poetry pc by Beth Vieira Jun 21, 2004 12:00 PM
... by pottygok Jun 22, 2004 6:24 PM
haijinx by Beth Vieira Jun 23, 2004 7:55 PM
... by pottygok Jun 24, 2004 7:35 AM
... by buddhabitch Jun 20, 2004 5:50 PM
hail by panta rhei Jun 21, 2004 12:53 AM
A Handful of High-Roller Haiku (PC) by exquisite_corpse Jun 18, 2004 2:17 PM
... by pottygok Jun 21, 2004 12:21 AM
on an unrelated note: by Createyers Jun 24, 2004 2:12 PM
... by pottygok Jun 24, 2004 6:04 PM
Spring PC by Createyers Jun 18, 2004 11:02 AM
Focus on the moment, not the poetry... by pottygok Jun 21, 2004 12:12 AM
as for by Createyers Jun 21, 2004 6:43 AM
no title by kkizer Jun 18, 2004 6:32 AM
fellatio-ku by 4 degrees Jun 17, 2004 10:28 PM
buffalo-ku by 4 degrees Jun 17, 2004 10:32 PM
salad toss-ku by 4 degrees Jun 17, 2004 10:35 PM
zengasm by 4 degrees Jun 17, 2004 10:40 PM
Bessie Smith ku by judih. Jun 18, 2004 7:15 AM
jade stalk by Beth Vieira Jun 18, 2004 5:13 PM
yesterday by wendy faber Jun 17, 2004 8:32 PM
familiar sounds by wendy faber Jun 17, 2004 8:30 PM
beachbound by wendy faber Jun 17, 2004 8:26 PM
turtletime by wendy faber Jun 17, 2004 8:35 PM
sculpted by wendy faber Jun 17, 2004 8:37 PM
midnight blue pc by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 2:39 PM
summer leaves pc by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 2:37 PM
... by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 1:06 AM
? by Crackpot Jenkins Jun 25, 2004 8:38 PM
summer leaves by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 8:55 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 9:53 PM
i say "leave it" by bubbleybingo Jun 27, 2004 5:01 PM
The Social Patriarch (pc) by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 5:12 PM
---- by mtmynd Jun 16, 2004 5:53 PM
felt eraser by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 6:09 PM
Red on A Cold Day (pc) by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 4:47 PM
kitchen by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 5:59 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:48 AM
thanks by e_dog Jun 18, 2004 8:22 AM
Tontoism by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 12:01 PM
super-ku by mtmynd Jun 16, 2004 4:28 PM
invasion of the ku by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 4:50 PM
holy ku, batman.. by mnaz Jun 17, 2004 1:29 AM
hawk pc by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 12:48 PM
very by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 5:23 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:45 AM
totally disagree by e_dog Jun 17, 2004 7:37 AM
tailspin by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 11:53 AM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:00 PM
agree by e_dog Jun 17, 2004 4:29 PM
clouded pc by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 12:45 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:44 AM
yes by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 11:59 AM
K-2471 by beatvibe Jun 16, 2004 12:11 PM
confusion by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 1:29 PM
Yeah... by beatvibe Jun 16, 2004 4:00 PM
conversation pc by Beth Vieira Jun 15, 2004 1:09 PM
what is the fog by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 8:39 AM
fogged in by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 12:40 PM
It worked for me by beatvibe Jun 16, 2004 2:00 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:43 AM
thanks to all by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 12:02 PM
Thoughts like candy by Jon Converse Jun 15, 2004 1:35 AM
vessel by wendy faber Jun 15, 2004 2:10 AM
i prefer alcohol by fabled construct Jun 14, 2004 8:17 AM
guaranteed personality by fabled construct Jun 14, 2004 8:19 AM
that reminds me.. by mnaz Jun 15, 2004 2:57 AM
yeah by fabled construct Jun 17, 2004 3:33 AM
The Spectacle -- pc by e_dog Jun 13, 2004 6:19 PM
hopeful seeker by wendy faber Jun 13, 2004 8:31 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 12:25 AM
I agree by Createyers Jun 14, 2004 2:28 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 11:14 PM
now by Createyers Jun 15, 2004 8:13 AM
... by pottygok Jun 16, 2004 2:33 PM
perhaps by Createyers Jun 17, 2004 6:12 AM
i see whyat you mean but by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 8:31 AM
... by pottygok Jun 16, 2004 2:41 PM
good read--full story sensed by wendy faber Jun 14, 2004 9:52 AM
this moment only by wendy faber Jun 12, 2004 6:50 PM
desert scene by mnaz Jun 12, 2004 5:01 PM
desert weekend by wendy faber Jun 12, 2004 6:53 PM
desert dust.. by mnaz Jun 13, 2004 1:49 AM
web pc by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 12:48 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 12:51 PM
threads by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 12:59 PM
.... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 1:04 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 1:08 PM
ring by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 1:20 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 1:35 PM
key by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 2:07 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 2:28 PM
possible romantic entanglement by wendy faber Jun 13, 2004 9:17 AM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 13, 2004 10:11 AM
... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 1:17 PM
unmeant by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 2:10 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 2:32 PM
... by pottygok Jun 12, 2004 11:39 PM
I was afraid by Beth Vieira Jun 15, 2004 12:19 PM
rustling leaves by wendy faber Jun 11, 2004 6:13 PM
sent by wendy faber Jun 11, 2004 6:16 PM
zazen by wendy faber Jun 11, 2004 6:19 PM
.. by Yabyum Jun 10, 2004 10:58 AM
family disrupted by wendy faber Jun 10, 2004 8:58 AM
ancestral memories by wendy faber Jun 10, 2004 9:02 AM
I like by Createyers Jun 10, 2004 1:18 PM
do do ku by buddhabitch Jun 10, 2004 5:50 AM
undo by artguy Jun 10, 2004 5:19 PM
unauthorized, clearly by mnaz Jun 9, 2004 5:00 PM
jazz pc by Beth Vieira Jun 9, 2004 11:27 AM
... by pottygok Jun 10, 2004 12:14 AM
question: by Createyers Jun 10, 2004 6:42 AM
kigo by Beth Vieira Jun 10, 2004 11:05 AM
I need to do more research by Createyers Jun 11, 2004 6:27 AM
I would have to research it too by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 12:54 PM
another view... by pottygok Jun 12, 2004 11:36 PM
thank you by Createyers Jun 14, 2004 6:17 AM
jazz 2 by Beth Vieira Jun 10, 2004 8:24 PM
:-) by Mob Jun 12, 2004 3:50 AM
thank you by Beth Vieira Jun 12, 2004 12:49 PM
... by pottygok Jun 12, 2004 11:44 PM
thanks by Beth Vieira Jun 15, 2004 12:31 PM
Some sites of interest... by pottygok Jun 12, 2004 11:49 PM
thanks much by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 12:09 PM
blue pc by Beth Vieira Jun 9, 2004 11:23 AM
... by pottygok Jun 10, 2004 12:16 AM
so blue by Beth Vieira Jun 10, 2004 8:28 PM
kitchen pc by Beth Vieira Jun 9, 2004 11:19 AM
... by pottygok Jun 10, 2004 12:18 AM
kitchen 2 by Beth Vieira Jun 10, 2004 8:29 PM
... by pottygok Jun 12, 2004 11:50 PM
yes by Beth Vieira Jun 15, 2004 12:35 PM
About that "revelation"... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:00 AM
now that's revelation! by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 12:07 PM
polishing the mirror by shem Jun 9, 2004 8:55 AM
Rain PC by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 1:14 PM
... by pottygok Jun 8, 2004 4:51 PM
timeless lifespan by wendy faber Jun 9, 2004 3:45 AM
muggy morning by wendy faber Jun 9, 2004 3:51 AM
thanks by Createyers Jun 9, 2004 6:49 AM
... by pottygok Jun 10, 2004 12:19 AM
raindance by wendy faber Jun 9, 2004 3:34 AM
molecular string theory by wendy faber Jun 9, 2004 3:40 AM
On Birds by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 8:14 AM
performance by wendy faber Jun 8, 2004 8:58 AM
great by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 10:48 AM
wingspread by wendy faber Jun 8, 2004 9:07 AM
proud by wendy faber Jun 8, 2004 9:10 AM
barnmates pc by wendy faber Jun 8, 2004 9:17 AM
... by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 10:47 AM
the purpose of this sound (a flash) by orange Jun 8, 2004 5:21 AM
I love this by purple shower Jun 8, 2004 6:16 AM
Pseudo-summer by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 9:11 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 7, 2004 10:05 AM
I've by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 11:15 AM
essential by Beth Vieira Jun 7, 2004 2:29 PM
you got it by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 6:11 AM
self-taught by Beth Vieira Jun 8, 2004 11:14 AM
I agree by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 1:29 PM
live oak pc by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:36 PM
... by shem Jun 7, 2004 8:14 PM
your style by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 10:50 AM
beachcombing pc by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:35 PM
... by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 1:14 PM
thanks by Beth Vieira Jun 7, 2004 2:33 PM
well by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 6:13 AM
blue whale migration pc by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:32 PM
santa anna winds pc by Beth Vieira Jun 5, 2004 4:22 PM
santa ana warm by wendy faber Jun 5, 2004 5:18 PM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 11:41 AM
revision by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 3:27 PM
winds by wendy faber Jun 8, 2004 6:54 AM
chaparral pc by Beth Vieira Jun 5, 2004 4:16 PM
undulating by wendy faber Jun 6, 2004 7:30 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 11:45 AM
an ode to the hands of a roofer by Yabyum Jun 5, 2004 1:34 PM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 11:48 AM
#5384 - haiky mobile by mtmynd Jun 5, 2004 6:34 AM
#5384-1/2....radar... by mnaz Jun 5, 2004 7:05 AM
#5384.25 ~ transmission by mtmynd Jun 5, 2004 7:23 AM
beyond numbers, plus a half by mnaz Jun 5, 2004 7:30 AM
report: by mtmynd Jun 5, 2004 7:55 AM
more numbers by mnaz Jun 5, 2004 8:05 AM
numb burrs by mtmynd Jun 5, 2004 8:18 AM
measuring.. by mnaz Jun 5, 2004 8:31 AM
empty by mtmynd Jun 5, 2004 8:36 AM
re*fill... by mnaz Jun 5, 2004 8:53 AM
inspiration by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 11:51 AM
Love? ku by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 7:48 AM
on an unrelated note by Createyers Jun 3, 2004 11:31 AM
Ha ha by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 11:55 AM
familiarity by Createyers Jun 4, 2004 7:11 AM
lovers by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 11:54 AM
Observations by Createyers Jun 3, 2004 6:37 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 11:57 AM
you're right by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 6:20 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 7, 2004 2:40 PM
from by Createyers Jun 8, 2004 6:17 AM
form by Beth Vieira Jun 8, 2004 11:01 AM
Springku by The Fish Jun 2, 2004 1:54 PM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:02 PM
rollin thru by wendyfaber Jun 2, 2004 2:46 AM
sunset soccer by wendyfaber Jun 2, 2004 2:49 AM
shoreside stroller by wendyfaber Jun 2, 2004 2:53 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:08 PM
Cutting weeds by shem Jun 1, 2004 1:54 PM
Cutting weeds by shem Jun 1, 2004 1:53 PM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:12 PM
orbiting question marks by orange Jun 1, 2004 12:39 PM
... by Createyers Jun 2, 2004 1:23 PM
... by Beth Vieira Jun 6, 2004 12:16 PM


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