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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  July 2001
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This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


D is for Dissection by marianne Jul 31, 2001 10:07 AM
reality calling by firecracker Jul 31, 2001 7:14 AM
yeah by marianne Jul 31, 2001 9:32 AM
thanks... by firecracker Jul 31, 2001 10:50 AM
sculpture garden by judih Jul 31, 2001 2:38 AM
to shield the artists eyes by wijola Jul 31, 2001 2:50 AM
a poor poet pondering by joshuagriffin Jul 31, 2001 12:09 AM
dig it, friend by unknownpoet Jul 31, 2001 1:27 AM
Fraser Valley Satori Pome by unknownpoet Jul 30, 2001 11:18 PM
hey unknown... by star33 Aug 1, 2001 9:46 AM
the last gasp of the 130th st. gang by markk Jul 30, 2001 8:00 PM
hey markk... remember.... by star33 Jul 30, 2001 8:04 PM
i am... by star33 Jul 30, 2001 8:09 PM
yeeeee hah! dem starz is out! by markk Jul 30, 2001 9:02 PM
hey star33 by unknownpoet Jul 30, 2001 11:12 PM
empty plastic tablecloths by judih Jul 30, 2001 8:54 PM
hey markk fuck you by Bobo Aug 1, 2001 7:46 AM
hi bobo by markk Aug 2, 2001 7:46 AM
not really a poem not really a story PC by Bobo Jul 30, 2001 6:36 PM
beautifully done by xyzauto Jul 31, 2001 6:44 PM
hey chris by Bobo Aug 1, 2001 7:42 AM
forgive me by xyzauto Jul 31, 2001 6:53 PM
PC = please critique by judih Jul 31, 2001 8:30 PM
oh juduh by Bobo Aug 1, 2001 7:39 AM
Disenchantment of the Seeker (dissociative logos w/ psilocin blues) by tomverve Jul 30, 2001 12:11 PM
Becoming a woman by try Jul 30, 2001 8:11 AM
christine nocturne by k Jul 30, 2001 4:02 AM
don't let by marianne Jul 30, 2001 6:22 AM
I liked it by lazy tim Jul 30, 2001 12:07 PM
bravo by tomverve Jul 30, 2001 2:25 PM
Don't stop by wijola Jul 31, 2001 1:39 PM
A (sort of) Mountain Love Song by unknownpoet Jul 29, 2001 6:08 PM
fortunes by judih Jul 30, 2001 10:54 PM
Woodstock Rumination - the human condition by xyzauto Jul 29, 2001 9:27 AM
May i say by Bobo Jul 30, 2001 6:49 PM
Thank you kindly by xyzauto Jul 31, 2001 6:35 PM
closers song what the fuck by Bobo Aug 1, 2001 7:49 AM
sorry chris if you read that by Bobo Aug 3, 2001 10:46 PM
The poetry of Fear by xyzauto Jul 29, 2001 8:53 AM
3 new poems! by AngelHeadedHipster Jul 29, 2001 8:01 AM
yes i know those places by try Jul 30, 2001 8:05 AM
spam on hotmail.com by marianne Jul 29, 2001 8:00 AM
blind date by judih Jul 29, 2001 9:53 AM
Marianne why not try..... by barry9393 Jul 29, 2001 11:30 PM
In The Waste Lands by stevend Jul 29, 2001 7:32 AM
Cre-action by judih Jul 29, 2001 4:34 AM
profound by marianne Jul 29, 2001 3:25 PM
A Cannibal Vow by stevend Jul 29, 2001 2:55 AM
Soupremacy by judih Jul 29, 2001 10:31 AM
Death is a Stupid Cunt by stevend Jul 29, 2001 2:52 AM
yeah by marianne Jul 29, 2001 4:21 AM
Thank you marianne by stevend Jul 29, 2001 7:12 AM
Female sword swallower by judih Jul 29, 2001 10:41 AM
Crack Crowley by stevend Jul 29, 2001 2:50 AM
step on it by subalias Jul 29, 2001 3:06 AM
you must be another disgruntled OTO drop out by barry9393 Jul 29, 2001 12:52 PM
Castration in a Futuristic Society by stevend Jul 29, 2001 2:45 AM
Balance by wijola Jul 29, 2001 12:14 AM
i guess... by wijola Jul 31, 2001 12:47 PM
Wind by wijola Jul 29, 2001 12:12 AM
young two by judih Jul 28, 2001 8:44 PM
dig. by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 10:14 PM
Why do I bother? by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 8:39 PM
comment by judih Jul 28, 2001 8:47 PM
sheepish by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 10:13 PM
most people? by judih Jul 28, 2001 10:19 PM
well by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 10:31 PM
i thought you thought by judih Jul 28, 2001 10:43 PM
yes. by wijola Jul 29, 2001 12:36 AM
my mind is like a billiard ball by Sharik Jul 29, 2001 10:46 AM
virtual safari by judih Jul 29, 2001 10:59 AM
That is why I'm here. by wijola Jul 29, 2001 12:43 AM
It's simple by stevend Jul 29, 2001 2:36 AM
but isn't it by marianne Jul 29, 2001 4:24 AM
no title by wijola Jul 29, 2001 9:57 AM
Note to Tim by Sharik Jul 29, 2001 11:03 AM
the boy who could see air by markk Jul 28, 2001 8:26 PM
how bout some faith for the human experience by tomverve Jul 28, 2001 11:50 PM
Marcel Proust by judih Jul 29, 2001 12:00 AM
ah yes.. by tomverve Jul 29, 2001 1:02 AM
air made visible. by Sharik Jul 29, 2001 11:18 AM
indeed by tomverve Jul 29, 2001 1:49 PM
What a Great Link! by Sharik Jul 29, 2001 6:48 PM
elliptical digression by tomverve Jul 30, 2001 12:54 PM
Bill Blake's ad copy by Sharik Jul 30, 2001 6:29 PM
Note to Tom by Sharik Jul 29, 2001 12:02 PM
The Trail of Beauty by Sharik Jul 29, 2001 12:11 PM
thanks by tomverve Jul 29, 2001 2:01 PM
Lennon's tomb by jotadavida Jul 28, 2001 7:34 PM
none by wijola Jul 29, 2001 12:47 AM
you can suck my cock by Bobo Aug 1, 2001 7:51 AM
you must be the russel crowe of aussie literature by jotadavida Aug 1, 2001 2:01 PM
A first date sushi breath kiss by fatinspanish Jul 28, 2001 7:17 PM
second date tofu breath kiss by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 8:42 PM
beneath the stars is a landscape far removed from the one I know by day. by unknownpoet Jul 28, 2001 4:48 PM
yes! by tomverve Jul 29, 2001 12:01 AM
...y una cancion desperada by lazy tim Jul 29, 2001 1:28 AM
Plowman by jotadavida Jul 28, 2001 10:31 AM
geosynchronous orbits by stevend Jul 28, 2001 6:33 AM
On the Cynthianne Road bridge (over I-69) by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 2:32 AM
the kiss by pieces Jul 27, 2001 7:11 PM
New York City Serenade by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 2:21 AM
jesus by tomverve Jul 29, 2001 12:10 AM
beautiful by wijola Jul 29, 2001 1:07 AM
Boss by lazy tim Jul 29, 2001 1:16 AM
title? by wijola Jul 29, 2001 1:47 AM
yeah, but it's socialistic. by lazy tim Jul 30, 2001 11:52 AM
I remember by wijola Jul 31, 2001 1:09 PM
oh, and... by wijola Jul 31, 2001 1:11 PM
who is... by tomverve Jul 29, 2001 2:18 AM
yeah, by wijola Jul 29, 2001 10:00 AM
rebuke by fatinspanish Jul 27, 2001 6:18 PM
simple. good. by lazy tim Jul 28, 2001 2:23 AM
here, here by wijola Jul 29, 2001 1:08 AM
Jimi(27 in the sky pt1) by joshuagriffin Jul 27, 2001 1:49 PM
plaster casters,master blasters, and all things bright and beautiful...... by barry9393 Jul 27, 2001 2:27 PM
memories by joshuagriffin Jul 27, 2001 9:57 PM
get yer hashpipes out, peeple, by unknownpoet Jul 27, 2001 12:54 PM
wait a moment........ by barry9393 Jul 27, 2001 1:06 PM
rising slowly by judih Jul 27, 2001 9:47 PM
I can almost remember.... by wijola Jul 29, 2001 1:38 AM
untitled by unknownpoet Jul 27, 2001 12:07 PM
strawberries by marianne Jul 27, 2001 3:14 PM
the night the war ended by barry9393 Jul 27, 2001 11:15 AM
i liked the optimistic by marianne Jul 27, 2001 11:52 AM
cheers... by barry9393 Jul 27, 2001 1:07 PM
I like how by lazy tim Jul 29, 2001 1:23 AM
maybe more than a sly hint.... by barry9393 Jul 29, 2001 1:51 AM
recruiting our citizens? by judih Jul 29, 2001 3:12 AM
hi by barry9393 Jul 29, 2001 12:56 PM
the menstruation blues ( from the 'both side of the fence' dialogues) by barry9393 Jul 27, 2001 8:56 AM
when auntie comes a calling once a month by jotadavida Jul 27, 2001 10:43 AM
thanks by barry9393 Jul 27, 2001 11:27 AM
so funny by marianne Jul 27, 2001 11:46 AM
Thank God I was born with a weinie by Sharik Jul 28, 2001 2:44 PM
the clean-up part one by marianne Jul 27, 2001 7:20 AM
Night in America by jotadavida Jul 27, 2001 6:46 AM
Le Clochard (the pimp) by jotadavida Jul 27, 2001 6:39 AM
my father the stand-up comedian by marianne Jul 27, 2001 4:44 AM
homo habilis by stevend Jul 27, 2001 4:32 AM
wow by marianne Jul 27, 2001 6:22 AM
I gave up a promising career as a madman by unknownpoet Jul 27, 2001 12:53 PM
Rosina Love Song by stevend Jul 27, 2001 4:24 AM
ah by violet9ish Jul 29, 2001 5:04 PM
poverty by stevend Jul 27, 2001 3:49 AM
the girl who thought she could fly by marianne Jul 27, 2001 1:59 AM
Re: the girl who . . . by stevend Jul 27, 2001 3:43 AM
in plain english by jotadavida Jul 27, 2001 10:46 AM
light flash minutes by joshuagriffin Jul 26, 2001 10:14 PM
melancholic and by marianne Jul 27, 2001 6:33 AM
marianne by joshuagriffin Jul 27, 2001 10:17 AM
forces by v gatrod Jul 26, 2001 9:07 PM
beachcombing by kairo Jul 26, 2001 8:22 PM
solitary requiem for big john by markk Jul 26, 2001 8:03 PM
remembering by Anya Jul 26, 2001 8:55 PM
hey by marianne Jul 27, 2001 6:37 AM
truckful of sailor by judih Jul 26, 2001 9:00 PM
ENIGMATIC RENDEZVOUS by dogma Jul 26, 2001 5:12 PM
COFFEE WITH JOE by dogma Jul 26, 2001 4:52 PM
spresso with god by judih Jul 28, 2001 12:01 AM
Spaghetti & Black Bean Soup by stevend Jul 26, 2001 11:00 AM
the rhythm by marianne Jul 26, 2001 12:48 PM
Eviloution No. 9 by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:52 AM
Night of the Iron Sausage by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:34 AM
a little message by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:30 AM
call me-? by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:29 AM
sometimes by marianne Jul 26, 2001 12:50 PM
Blue Tanerine by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:23 AM
For Dylan Thomas by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:21 AM
that must be a record by jotadavida Jul 26, 2001 10:35 AM
Dedicated to a Professor I dispise by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:18 AM
holy shitskes by jotadavida Jul 26, 2001 10:37 AM
Dedicated to Syliva Plath by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:13 AM
please by jotadavida Jul 26, 2001 10:37 AM
Re: post your bio by stevend Jul 26, 2001 10:57 AM
the mystery of odd stones by markk Jul 26, 2001 9:34 AM
Make light, the sun by jotadavida Jul 26, 2001 6:20 AM
Dreaming the New Australia by willber Jul 26, 2001 3:32 AM
willber by andya1974 Jul 26, 2001 3:44 AM
Glad by willber Jul 26, 2001 3:48 AM
applause in continual background by judih Jul 26, 2001 3:59 AM
standing ovation by marianne Jul 26, 2001 4:05 AM
Wonderful! by mtmynd Jul 26, 2001 5:33 AM
Overwhelmed by willber Jul 28, 2001 12:10 AM
. by lazy tim Jul 26, 2001 3:23 AM
chorus #2 by lazy tim Jul 26, 2001 3:22 AM
battered down spires, falling down walls by lazy tim Jul 26, 2001 3:19 AM
cooking instructions by marianne Jul 26, 2001 3:13 AM
um by andya1974 Jul 26, 2001 3:18 AM
marianne's been cookin by judih Jul 26, 2001 3:21 AM
it's strange but by marianne Jul 26, 2001 3:21 AM
this would be a fine.... by barry9393 Jul 26, 2001 3:31 AM
cool by marianne Jul 26, 2001 4:01 AM
its a new moon festival........... by barry9393 Jul 26, 2001 4:54 AM
JUST OFF by andya1974 Jul 26, 2001 12:05 AM
i wish i was in carrighfergus by unknownpoet Jul 26, 2001 12:23 AM
trust me by andya1974 Jul 26, 2001 2:01 AM
Stay There by willber Jul 26, 2001 3:25 AM
the american scream by marianne Jul 25, 2001 11:38 PM
yass,yass,yass! by unknownpoet Jul 26, 2001 12:10 AM
Marianne! I'm with you in Rockland by lazy tim Jul 26, 2001 3:12 AM
written on Nicolett Mall, Minneapolis by lazy tim Jul 25, 2001 11:26 PM
tourists thinking aloud by marianne Jul 25, 2001 11:41 PM
yea, by unknownpoet Jul 26, 2001 12:05 AM
Lazy tim answering in text by lazy tim Jul 26, 2001 2:45 AM
that sounds good by andya1974 Jul 26, 2001 2:58 AM
im just another reactionary poet by unknownpoet Jul 26, 2001 12:08 AM
the City.....the last few parts by joshuagriffin Jul 25, 2001 10:12 PM
I got the blues-and the reds and little white pills that dont do anything at all by unknownpoet Jul 25, 2001 9:30 PM
genius title by marianne Jul 25, 2001 11:19 PM
tanks by unknownpoet Jul 26, 2001 12:03 AM
weak?!? by lazy tim Jul 26, 2001 2:49 AM
Man and Woman by iamchris Jul 25, 2001 5:58 PM
Face Coal Cherry by earth guru Jul 25, 2001 2:49 PM
there's such peace in sadness by Sharik Jul 25, 2001 6:01 PM
suicide addiction by earth guru Jul 26, 2001 2:19 PM
dear earthguru, by judih Jul 26, 2001 11:07 PM
sky doesn't fool by judih Jul 26, 2001 2:18 AM
ebb and flow by tomverve Jul 25, 2001 12:18 PM
klimt sky of golden glinting kisses by kairo Jul 25, 2001 11:38 AM
gleam by tomverve Jul 25, 2001 12:31 PM
painting by judih Jul 26, 2001 2:57 AM
klimt? by stevadore Jul 26, 2001 11:48 AM
Gustav Klimt by judih Jul 26, 2001 12:26 PM
a million klimt thanks by kairo Jul 26, 2001 12:57 PM
hey sis... by stevadore Jul 26, 2001 1:35 PM
A Moment by iamchris Jul 25, 2001 12:01 AM
parachutes overhead by judih Jul 25, 2001 11:24 AM
peaceful by iamchris Jul 25, 2001 6:02 PM
the absent woman by v gatrod Jul 24, 2001 1:04 PM
jazz in deep cleveland by markk Jul 24, 2001 2:21 PM
excellent site by v gatrod Jul 24, 2001 3:17 PM
yessss Paris & the...... by barry9393 Jul 24, 2001 3:12 PM
cool by v gatrod Jul 24, 2001 5:27 PM
agrees by andya1974 Jul 26, 2001 2:11 AM
beautiful boy poets by kairo Jul 24, 2001 7:41 PM
wanting harmony by tomverve Jul 24, 2001 12:46 PM
soft wind chimes by kairo Jul 24, 2001 7:39 PM
the City.....polished and everything by joshuagriffin Jul 24, 2001 12:17 PM
I like the bus by middle voice Jul 24, 2001 5:54 PM
tripping by kairo Jul 24, 2001 7:34 PM
Hey by RevelationNC Jul 24, 2001 9:55 PM
great rhythm to the poem by Sharik Jul 25, 2001 5:51 PM
HEY ALL!!! by joshuagriffin Jul 26, 2001 1:37 AM
Approach by judih Jul 24, 2001 10:38 AM
subject by v gatrod Jul 24, 2001 5:35 PM
he objects by judih Jul 25, 2001 11:21 AM
studying by kairo Jul 24, 2001 7:31 PM
blushing in the glow of your soft words by judih Jul 25, 2001 11:20 AM
murmers & whispers under cloudcover by markk Jul 24, 2001 9:08 AM
inaugurate by stevadore Jul 24, 2001 9:38 AM
tks fer yr kind words! by markk Jul 25, 2001 4:37 AM
like this one marrk by barry9393 Jul 24, 2001 3:27 PM
tks barry by markk Jul 25, 2001 4:38 AM
yes markk by judih Jul 25, 2001 4:41 AM
marrk got yr email and....... by barry9393 Jul 25, 2001 7:57 AM
wordcombining by kairo Jul 24, 2001 7:30 PM
you know what to do by markk Jul 25, 2001 4:39 AM
nowhere to stay but here by judih Jul 25, 2001 4:43 AM
the first one by Elgi Jan 13, 2004 7:35 AM


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