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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  November 2001
Poetry

This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


what do i expect? by judih. Nov 30, 2001 10:13 AM
belfast 1999 by ventzpent Nov 30, 2001 7:39 AM
The description by surfermike Nov 30, 2001 8:55 AM
Good one by Jarrett Nov 30, 2001 2:57 PM
cheers by ventzpent Nov 30, 2001 5:03 PM
wow by mindchef Nov 30, 2001 5:27 PM
It Came to me in a Dream by EugeneG Nov 30, 2001 6:01 AM
Living? by mindchef Nov 29, 2001 5:16 PM
Wishing In an Alley by Drewc Nov 29, 2001 8:46 AM
Horizon's Last Glance by myndzeye Nov 29, 2001 5:24 AM
a sentence on z outskirts of z dream by ventzpent Nov 29, 2001 3:44 AM
GOOD POTATOS by WIREMAN Nov 28, 2001 3:46 PM
RUNNING by ollin Nov 28, 2001 12:41 PM
I want to speak sparks, by tantricslide Nov 28, 2001 1:10 AM
ah by onthebus2002 Nov 28, 2001 1:15 AM
woops by tantricslide Nov 28, 2001 12:18 PM
woops by michaelsferrell Nov 30, 2001 5:42 PM
Hey man, sorry by tantricslide Dec 11, 2001 12:19 PM
Crazy! by matthewcelis Feb 8, 2002 3:33 PM
Baffled by Jarrett Dec 1, 2001 1:32 AM
Now this I enjoyed by matthewcelis Feb 8, 2002 3:32 PM
sparks and spoken explosions by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:47 AM
perfect from now on by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:46 AM
To shame by Jarrett Nov 30, 2001 3:03 PM
my it's not me by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:42 AM
Fucking great by Jarrett Nov 30, 2001 3:02 PM
jarrett by michaelsferrell Nov 30, 2001 5:24 PM
I surely will by Jarrett Nov 30, 2001 8:03 PM
rolling by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:41 AM
blessed, and seldom yourself by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:40 AM
kick myself for being like everyone else by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:37 AM
sick fickle fucker by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:32 AM
heavy syrup by michaelsferrell Nov 28, 2001 12:23 AM
paragraphs shrunken by edward_simpleton Nov 27, 2001 11:19 PM
doog si egnahc (change is good) by surfride81 Nov 27, 2001 11:21 PM
gracias para sus palabras (thank you for your words) by edward_simpleton Nov 27, 2001 11:27 PM
Press ForWord by jonathan Nov 27, 2001 9:45 PM
thanks for the link by lazloholyfield Nov 30, 2001 6:10 PM
ZATOICHI by WIREMAN Nov 27, 2001 6:34 PM
i dont know what this means by edward_simpleton Nov 27, 2001 11:33 PM
ZATOICHI by WIREMAN Nov 28, 2001 1:42 AM
MY PARENTS by vaga Nov 27, 2001 6:23 PM
wow by lazloholyfield Nov 27, 2001 6:39 PM
yeah.. by vaga Nov 27, 2001 7:39 PM
This was very good by surfermike Nov 27, 2001 11:10 PM
good to know by vaga Nov 28, 2001 8:35 PM
going on my way...... by Uncle B Nov 27, 2001 5:32 PM
yes by lazloholyfield Nov 27, 2001 6:30 PM
Butterflies tugging by lazloholyfield Nov 27, 2001 5:00 PM
Inspired by post 267(?), The Promise Land by Influenza Shine Nov 27, 2001 6:37 AM
The Fountain. For Jim Morrison and Nico by Influenza Shine Nov 27, 2001 6:21 AM
Agrarian Night Lullaby by HepKat Nov 27, 2001 6:00 AM
oh by onthebus2002 Nov 27, 2001 6:14 AM
Dear Haze by HepKat Nov 27, 2001 8:27 AM
please help with line by anotherbum Nov 26, 2001 7:22 PM
hair on his toes by Influenza Shine Nov 27, 2001 6:25 AM
the shadows dont cover him anymore than the... by professor Nov 27, 2001 10:14 PM
thanks by anotherbum Nov 28, 2001 4:08 PM
The Mystical One by Ace Nov 26, 2001 4:46 PM
Killing me. by surfermike Nov 26, 2001 10:45 AM
Lotus Flower Princess by Uncle B Nov 25, 2001 1:11 PM
pleading ,you are by mudshark Nov 25, 2001 2:13 PM
insight by Uncle B Nov 26, 2001 11:00 AM
poetry by Nais Nov 29, 2001 7:02 AM
cancer opened him up by wantabeurdog Nov 24, 2001 5:44 PM
I've read it four times. by surfermike Nov 26, 2001 9:30 AM
Thank you by wantabeurdog Nov 26, 2001 4:02 PM
As Of Today by surfermike Nov 28, 2001 10:14 PM
dead dogs by lazloholyfield Nov 24, 2001 5:05 PM
Wonderful, Lazlo by Influenza Shine Nov 27, 2001 6:29 AM
thanks by lazloholyfield Nov 27, 2001 12:28 PM
Words by wantabeurdog Nov 24, 2001 4:17 PM
Drift - I'd like some feedback if possible by lrw Nov 24, 2001 2:45 PM
Reply by lazloholyfield Nov 24, 2001 3:46 PM
feedback by professor Nov 27, 2001 10:31 PM
Inside out by wantabeurdog Nov 24, 2001 12:29 PM
oops by wantabeurdog Nov 24, 2001 12:33 PM
Inside out by wantabeurdog Nov 24, 2001 12:28 PM
sing-song with no title by unknownpoet Nov 23, 2001 7:11 PM
road trip by unknownpoet Nov 23, 2001 6:56 PM
Bed Warmer by vaga Nov 23, 2001 11:15 AM
I'd like some feedback if possible by Jerk Kerouac Nov 22, 2001 10:32 PM
It was by Happas Nov 23, 2001 1:38 AM
shotgun by searchingseeking Nov 22, 2001 6:02 PM
You said it by piph Nov 22, 2001 10:08 PM
Just the way I feel by vaga Nov 23, 2001 11:00 AM
Your Heart by Happas Nov 22, 2001 5:31 PM
Please Tell me - Should I send this to my Ex-girlfriend by Happas Nov 22, 2001 5:52 PM
if she's ex by judih. Nov 22, 2001 7:02 PM
Yeah but by Happas Nov 23, 2001 8:49 PM
three weeks turn to thirty by judih. Nov 25, 2001 7:02 PM
To leave by vaga Nov 22, 2001 2:54 PM
Castles of Maginta by Insane Theater Nov 22, 2001 11:05 AM
Poem by Insane Theater Nov 22, 2001 10:58 AM
HOLY WARS by stevend Nov 21, 2001 7:08 AM
Love after death by bradley_the_buyer Nov 21, 2001 5:50 AM
Open Letter by taxitv Nov 20, 2001 8:03 AM
Sojourn by Jarrett Nov 19, 2001 9:14 PM
Sand by beatvibe Nov 19, 2001 5:29 PM
this poem by jamelah Nov 19, 2001 5:42 PM
Interesting... by beatvibe Nov 21, 2001 6:16 PM
indeed by jamelah Nov 21, 2001 7:37 PM
i love you,man by mudshark Dec 27, 2001 7:51 AM
Uh... by beatvibe Dec 28, 2001 1:54 PM
Sleek by Jarrett Nov 19, 2001 5:29 PM
Once More by nomadyarber Nov 19, 2001 2:11 PM
Second Time by twotymer97 Nov 21, 2001 11:21 AM
it is here... by m.t.mynd Nov 19, 2001 10:58 AM
simple by twotymer97 Nov 21, 2001 11:24 AM
here by firecracker Nov 19, 2001 9:31 AM
Breakfast Metaphysics by HepKat Nov 19, 2001 6:24 AM
a hypertextual danish sidedish by m.t.mynd Nov 19, 2001 7:31 AM
beautiful by HepKat Nov 19, 2001 8:19 AM
Desiderata by bradley_the_buyer Nov 19, 2001 1:45 AM
Thanks... by m.t.mynd Nov 19, 2001 7:26 AM
My lips will always .. by vaga Nov 18, 2001 10:42 PM
Eroticism at its finest by surfride81 Nov 18, 2001 10:44 PM
Ditto.. by twotymer97 Nov 21, 2001 11:11 AM
Thank you plus a link to "The Love Book" by Lenore Kandel by vaga Nov 22, 2001 11:37 AM
Mind demons by piph Nov 18, 2001 10:31 PM
Well said by surfride81 Nov 18, 2001 10:33 PM
in response to teddie bear patriarchie by xspacex2 Nov 18, 2001 3:34 PM
acceptance by firecracker Nov 17, 2001 8:21 PM
fc by jamelah Nov 17, 2001 8:38 PM
who is god? by Uncle B Nov 17, 2001 6:58 PM
God is.. by bradley_the_buyer Nov 19, 2001 3:45 AM
The Boxes by StarryClaire Nov 17, 2001 1:11 PM
better said.. by m.t.mynd Nov 17, 2001 1:59 PM
it's not by judih. Nov 17, 2001 6:19 AM
swirl of lips without moisture by m.t.mynd Nov 17, 2001 9:03 AM
Go! (for you [whoever you are]) by mindchef Nov 16, 2001 8:17 PM
Silk Sea's and Arctic Flowers by HepKat Nov 16, 2001 9:47 AM
is there life at forty below? by judih. Nov 16, 2001 8:24 PM
jealousy by EugeneG Nov 16, 2001 6:29 AM
On Top by Plo Nov 16, 2001 5:07 AM
Quietly Shaken by BobColewater Nov 16, 2001 2:32 AM
Quietly Stirred by buddhabitch Nov 16, 2001 9:54 AM
AFTERNOON DOLOR by BobColewater Nov 16, 2001 2:30 AM
Raceme of Words by BobColewater Nov 16, 2001 2:27 AM
CARS by woodpeeker Nov 15, 2001 7:10 PM
Head pt. 2 by mindchef Nov 15, 2001 5:48 PM
interestingly refreshing... by oakland jones Nov 15, 2001 6:39 PM
alcohol is always involved...why is that? by piph Nov 15, 2001 3:50 PM
If it weren’!t for you I might have missed it by piph Nov 15, 2001 3:39 PM
so stupid by piph Nov 15, 2001 3:28 PM
Echo In the Throat by Plo Nov 15, 2001 10:42 AM
Dead by yblock8 Nov 15, 2001 10:23 AM
Languid by bradley_the_buyer Nov 15, 2001 6:49 AM
Wondering by luisa Nov 15, 2001 5:43 AM
letter to my father by piph Nov 14, 2001 11:10 PM
Two for one by yblock8 Nov 14, 2001 7:52 PM
42197986 by oakland jones Nov 14, 2001 6:09 PM
Sun smile guardian angel by bradley_the_buyer Nov 14, 2001 4:05 AM
bradley...this is amazing by firecracker Nov 14, 2001 5:40 AM
Cheers! by bradley_the_buyer Nov 14, 2001 7:38 AM
wonderful read! by buddhabitch Nov 14, 2001 8:04 AM
nice by tantricslide Nov 15, 2001 5:26 PM
Thank you by bradley_the_buyer Nov 16, 2001 2:30 AM
Herman Hesse ... thats the only thing i understood .... by tantricslide Nov 17, 2001 1:21 AM
I was just commenting... by bradley_the_buyer Nov 19, 2001 12:46 AM
I just hate mornings like that! by tantricslide Nov 20, 2001 11:51 AM
white bred by oakland jones Nov 13, 2001 6:32 PM
blind by jules27 Nov 13, 2001 1:59 PM
A Prayer to Deaf Ears by EugeneG Nov 13, 2001 6:15 AM
Problem Title poetry by Uncle B Nov 12, 2001 9:32 PM
Subway Exit by MoJ Nov 12, 2001 6:33 AM
Peekaboo! by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Nov 11, 2001 8:47 PM
Is it safe to go to utterances? by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Nov 11, 2001 8:52 PM
most problems fixed, go try ... by brooklyn Nov 11, 2001 11:17 PM
Fear by piph Nov 11, 2001 6:49 PM
the sun..... by doreen peri Nov 11, 2001 8:41 PM
Alexander Pope- Windsor-Forest by kabeman Nov 11, 2001 10:49 AM
William Carlos Williams poem Paterson by kabeman Nov 11, 2001 10:46 AM
yes! by mindchef Nov 12, 2001 4:15 PM
Newsful Link by Plo Nov 11, 2001 7:38 AM
Pome by Oscar_Wildebeest Nov 10, 2001 1:47 PM
Warning by jotadavida Nov 10, 2001 11:52 AM
that's what i suspected by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 11:55 AM
oh grrrr by jamelah Nov 10, 2001 12:00 PM
I could not stay back and not defend my litkicking friends by jotadavida Nov 10, 2001 12:51 PM
Angel Jota by visions Nov 10, 2001 1:28 PM
gracias by jotadavida Nov 10, 2001 2:27 PM
Try Coming Back Over To Utterances by novalark Nov 10, 2001 11:20 AM
??? by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 11:43 AM
Strange Days by novalark Nov 10, 2001 11:14 AM
Hi my sweet wise one by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 11:20 AM
Just For You - The Story Of Da-Da-Da by novalark Nov 10, 2001 11:22 AM
;) by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 11:30 AM
utterances is now really screwed by DharmaPoet18 Nov 10, 2001 11:04 AM
how by emotion970 Nov 10, 2001 11:15 AM
PROBLEMS WITH LITKICKS by New Name B/c of problems Nov 10, 2001 6:45 AM
yeah by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 7:08 AM
Haze my dear by new name Nov 10, 2001 7:28 AM
rrrrrgh by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 7:41 AM
ok by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 8:13 AM
i think by MyOwnMind Nov 10, 2001 8:18 AM
k sweetie by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 8:25 AM
i wonder why by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 9:23 AM
i dont by MyOwnMind Nov 10, 2001 9:35 AM
??? by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 9:37 AM
you can by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 9:41 AM
oh, i didn't see that by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 9:45 AM
does levi know? by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 9:47 AM
i don't know if he knows yet by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 9:54 AM
I think by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 10:03 AM
hackers, no-lifes, low-lifes by doreen peri Nov 10, 2001 9:21 AM
i wish i had dropped by here before going to utterances by jamelah Nov 10, 2001 10:17 AM
hi by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 10:20 AM
yeah, i'm all right... by jamelah Nov 10, 2001 10:21 AM
smile by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 10:23 AM
exactly... by jamelah Nov 10, 2001 10:25 AM
well said by onthebus2002 Nov 10, 2001 10:27 AM
so... by jamelah Nov 10, 2001 10:30 AM
well, by jamelah Nov 10, 2001 10:43 AM
so... by violet9ish Nov 10, 2001 11:06 AM
for a while by piph Nov 9, 2001 5:12 PM
shades by beatvibe Nov 9, 2001 4:23 PM
late by luisa Nov 9, 2001 11:58 AM
for now by luisa Nov 9, 2001 11:53 AM
Hush! by mattfung Nov 9, 2001 9:12 AM
hey by Yolanda Nov 13, 2001 5:35 AM
In Memory of Billy Thomas, my ex-husband by mattfung Nov 9, 2001 9:00 AM
Remember the days? by mattfung Nov 9, 2001 8:49 AM
yo by Yolanda Nov 13, 2001 5:43 AM
Winter Midnight by HepKat Nov 9, 2001 7:49 AM
Leaves and flowers by bradley_the_buyer Nov 9, 2001 2:17 AM
lockdown by Adele Nov 8, 2001 9:49 PM
Click and Clack by MidnightEarth Nov 9, 2001 2:03 AM
But... by Yolanda Nov 8, 2001 7:52 PM
Fatalism by MidnightEarth Nov 9, 2001 1:30 AM
Romeo by Yolanda Nov 8, 2001 7:50 PM
Rapunzel by MidnightEarth Nov 9, 2001 1:27 AM
Expired (haiku) by Yolanda Nov 8, 2001 7:42 PM
the trip by Uncle B Nov 8, 2001 12:58 PM
Reflections by MidnightEarth Nov 9, 2001 1:25 AM
Necessary declaration by bradley_the_buyer Nov 8, 2001 7:15 AM
Stststststutter by onthebus2002 Nov 8, 2001 10:18 AM
the ballad of death and thigh high war by versepoet Nov 8, 2001 6:40 AM
fall by luisa Nov 8, 2001 5:04 AM
Naked Love (head pt. 4) by mindchef Nov 7, 2001 6:14 PM
good by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Nov 8, 2001 1:14 PM
if a may be so blunt... by oakland jones Nov 15, 2001 6:45 PM
loss by luisa Nov 7, 2001 1:35 PM
A Complication I Would Have Loved by MidnightEarth Nov 9, 2001 1:21 AM
thank you... by luisa Nov 9, 2001 11:54 AM
Jack In Office by Plo Nov 6, 2001 11:11 PM
retchid luv poem(searching for yr thoughts on this one pleez.) by jaymz harrison Nov 6, 2001 8:37 PM
I like by mindchef Nov 7, 2001 6:41 PM
reading books at overlook, blue ridge parkway by Louisiana Mike Nov 6, 2001 6:03 PM
Unaware by luisa Nov 6, 2001 12:55 PM
:o) by bradley_the_buyer Nov 7, 2001 2:00 AM
please be honest by MarvinTheParanoidAndroid Nov 6, 2001 8:25 AM
Are you writing as a personification of Marvin? by MidnightEarth Nov 9, 2001 1:14 AM
a birthday poem by earth guru Nov 6, 2001 7:37 AM
validation by dimetrodon Nov 6, 2001 11:12 AM
For Baudelaire by HepKat Nov 6, 2001 6:53 AM
snack told me by wantabeurdog Nov 7, 2001 5:42 PM
Psychic Vampire Requiem by HepKat Nov 8, 2001 10:05 AM
The Flesh Called Man by Barry L. Nov 6, 2001 3:59 AM
About a girl by bradley_the_buyer Nov 6, 2001 3:10 AM
tis by onthebus2002 Nov 6, 2001 3:43 AM
run, devil, run by versepoet Nov 5, 2001 1:07 PM
Windsong by HepKat Nov 5, 2001 7:08 AM
Ah! HepKat by onthebus2002 Nov 5, 2001 3:05 PM
3 minute reflection by $B-Love$ Nov 5, 2001 12:43 AM
T.S. Eliot by novalark Nov 4, 2001 10:16 PM
doggedly defending dog-eared doggerel (wrong) by fast and bulbous Nov 4, 2001 2:34 PM
College Papers by Andy Cordle Nov 4, 2001 12:39 PM
indeed! by like an acrobat Nov 4, 2001 2:07 PM
melodic fragments by Barry L. Nov 4, 2001 11:35 AM
Million In My Pocket by Plo Nov 4, 2001 10:34 AM
Running away from everything by bea_rubinstein Nov 4, 2001 8:57 AM
Just a thought by Barry L. Nov 4, 2001 11:19 AM
choking pomp by versepoet Nov 3, 2001 9:48 PM
Shoot me in the legs. by versepoet Nov 3, 2001 9:37 PM
under the love light (spontaneous rant) by mindchef Nov 4, 2001 6:31 AM
infection by mindchef Nov 3, 2001 2:45 PM
public disclaimer(the author) by Barry L. Nov 3, 2001 10:46 AM
daddy, for c.p.j. by jamelah Nov 3, 2001 10:37 AM
Pass the Bread, the Spaghetti Rat Said by jotadavida Nov 3, 2001 7:08 AM
A little something by DistantSmoke Nov 2, 2001 9:27 PM
Beat & Love by sodajerk Nov 2, 2001 3:17 PM
Important Announcement by brooklyn Nov 2, 2001 9:18 AM
from,,, RAMBLE#2 by jwj Nov 2, 2001 8:11 AM
Subterranean Rats (poem from my short story Darkest Before Dawn) by HepKat Nov 2, 2001 6:55 AM
kate 5 by kairo Nov 1, 2001 4:31 PM
i think by firecracker Nov 5, 2001 7:54 PM
hmmm by kairo Nov 6, 2001 5:55 AM
Beautiful by bradley_the_buyer Nov 6, 2001 4:00 AM
well hello by kairo Nov 6, 2001 5:55 AM
Luna Luna by orphicgoblin Nov 1, 2001 3:36 PM
kate 4 by kairo Nov 1, 2001 1:23 PM
A!-U by mtmynd Nov 2, 2001 6:00 AM


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