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Poetry

This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

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Freddy Kruger's Hands by scannerdarkly Nov 30, 2003 9:40 AM
freestyle writing workshop submission: by flood Nov 30, 2003 9:14 AM
similar to Cold Blured form but on reading henry miller by Birdland Nov 30, 2003 8:46 AM
en route by Illuminara Nov 30, 2003 12:55 AM
Taylors Mistake Bay by Silas Nov 29, 2003 7:13 PM
poet on the lam by bullphrog Nov 29, 2003 2:57 PM
great great great by fabled construct Nov 29, 2003 3:25 PM
grazias by bullphrog Nov 29, 2003 3:52 PM
yehay by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 30, 2003 12:09 PM
OK, by c.w. williams Dec 1, 2003 2:20 PM
Hell in Fall by Poet of the Damned Nov 29, 2003 1:56 PM
No Title by Poet of the Damned Nov 29, 2003 1:51 PM
hell, yes by shem Nov 29, 2003 9:54 PM
nice nice by bennat Nov 30, 2003 8:21 PM
My by c.w. williams Dec 1, 2003 2:13 PM
The Beach in Daytona (Midnight) by Poet of the Damned Nov 29, 2003 1:48 PM
Prose poem by Poet of the Damned Nov 29, 2003 1:32 PM
baby boy by barquedust Nov 29, 2003 1:07 PM
naked nerve by barquedust Nov 29, 2003 12:56 PM
Thanksgiving Poem by M.Clearwater Nov 29, 2003 10:16 AM
Possible dream in which we find a place (PC) by fabled construct Nov 29, 2003 9:06 AM
Nikita the perspex by GG_train Nov 29, 2003 2:23 AM
Hard Time Learnin' by Dead burroughs Nov 29, 2003 2:02 AM
CALL FOR SUBMISSIONS!! by zygotenmycoffee Nov 29, 2003 1:27 AM
Lucky Charm [happy alien edit] by Silas Nov 29, 2003 1:00 AM
seems like by jessa_lynne Dec 11, 2003 4:20 AM
Moth and beetle by fabled construct Nov 28, 2003 10:31 AM
I came, I saw, I read by Professor Gloom Nov 28, 2003 10:47 AM
SSSsssh! by Cotton Mouth Soldier Nov 29, 2003 7:34 AM
sharer/non sharer? by fabled construct Nov 29, 2003 8:43 AM
66,600 mph by bullphrog Nov 27, 2003 7:03 PM
funky rhymin by judih. Nov 27, 2003 7:11 PM
phunk physics by bullphrog Nov 27, 2003 7:49 PM
and einstein'd be proud by judih. Nov 27, 2003 8:14 PM
Cynical shine by Cotton Mouth Soldier Nov 27, 2003 5:32 PM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 28, 2003 12:09 PM
you know by searching Nov 29, 2003 3:35 PM
closer to her through closure by c.w. williams Nov 27, 2003 2:16 PM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 28, 2003 11:54 AM
A closed, guarded, caveman ethic. by pole Nov 27, 2003 1:38 PM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 28, 2003 12:24 PM
Read my lips asshole... (comments and critisicism welcome) by fulcrum Nov 27, 2003 12:04 PM
gayness? by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 28, 2003 4:08 AM
yeah by fulcrum Nov 28, 2003 5:57 AM
as men made up of glass by bullphrog Nov 27, 2003 10:26 AM
erm by fulcrum Nov 27, 2003 12:11 PM
squirmmmm by bullphrog Nov 27, 2003 12:53 PM
infinite by pole Nov 27, 2003 1:44 PM
flaw by rain70 Dec 1, 2003 11:00 AM
a frosted bus stand is where i left my heart by GG_train Nov 27, 2003 2:15 AM
How many latinos do you know of speak latin? PC by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 3:29 PM
you can by GG_train Nov 27, 2003 2:19 AM
HAHAHAAHHAHHHHHHHHHHHH by jamesdean Nov 27, 2003 2:45 PM
Jonquils and daffodils is where i chopped her fucking head off... by GG_train Nov 26, 2003 2:11 PM
Cute by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 2:38 PM
your by GG_train Nov 27, 2003 2:02 AM
middle west travel warning by c.w. williams Nov 26, 2003 2:03 PM
I think we have a winner....... by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 2:45 PM
thanks, by c.w. williams Nov 27, 2003 12:39 PM
excellent by dreamofconsciousness Nov 26, 2003 10:34 PM
That Ra Ra Sundance Closing Time Smell (please slag) by GG_train Nov 26, 2003 1:59 PM
Im sorry, i have no more wits left for you...... by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 2:52 PM
Thelonious Monk by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 11:40 AM
just a thought by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 2:55 PM
thank by fabled construct Nov 27, 2003 1:49 AM
thelonius monk composition ! by Birdland Nov 27, 2003 11:36 AM
are you sure that isn't by fulcrum Nov 27, 2003 12:05 PM
Today Was Everyday (PC) by PainKiller Nov 26, 2003 11:12 AM
..... by PainKiller Nov 26, 2003 12:53 PM
yep... by GG_train Nov 26, 2003 2:27 PM
artifictial web convulsion (pc, danke) by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 26, 2003 9:27 AM
.. by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 10:31 AM
thanks for responding by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 26, 2003 10:43 AM
I by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 11:14 AM
Guten tag! by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 2:46 PM
sorry guv', me jerry ain' wat it oughta be... by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 27, 2003 4:36 AM
Ahhhh.....Smoke by noangel Nov 26, 2003 8:19 AM
the by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 8:26 AM
The similarity between this... by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 26, 2003 9:03 AM
I must say by PainKiller Nov 26, 2003 9:29 AM
haha, you've got me there... by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 26, 2003 10:16 AM
be strong and by PainKiller Nov 26, 2003 11:01 AM
clandestine. by Ambon Pereira Nov 26, 2003 3:09 AM
I love Cap'n Crunch by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 3:01 PM
Yard Furr (PC) by noangel Nov 25, 2003 3:09 PM
Yard Furr by QnWitc Nov 25, 2003 3:28 PM
You're to... by noangel Nov 26, 2003 8:02 AM
I by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 8:22 AM
Thank you by noangel Nov 29, 2003 1:32 PM
The comfort of pulp when confronted with suede (PC) by fabled construct Nov 25, 2003 1:57 PM
The hazed yellow sun and the bright fine rain!From the sea, in the sky, and made by GG_train Nov 26, 2003 2:16 PM
.. by GG_train Nov 26, 2003 2:16 PM
good title by GG_train Nov 26, 2003 2:17 PM
i don't know by Rosie Nov 25, 2003 12:50 PM
awww by PainKiller Nov 25, 2003 1:28 PM
:) by Rosie Nov 29, 2003 9:15 PM
Bop-Samba please critique by LOSTPOET1 Nov 25, 2003 11:19 AM
i like by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 8:44 AM
Today by PainKiller Nov 25, 2003 9:36 AM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 28, 2003 11:40 AM
the heart often lends itself difficulties by Andrew Lundwall Nov 25, 2003 8:05 AM
can i touch it by Andrew Lundwall Nov 25, 2003 8:08 AM
haha by PainKiller Nov 25, 2003 9:09 AM
gob govt. gritz suck(plz. evaluate!) by marquis of green willows Nov 25, 2003 7:14 AM
Shaken not stirred by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 7:54 AM
Slight jealousy of the next largest town...(fiddled) by fabled construct Nov 25, 2003 5:12 AM
Response by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 5:43 AM
ok by fabled construct Nov 25, 2003 8:11 AM
the lines by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 8:23 AM
thank by fabled construct Nov 25, 2003 8:48 AM
Good, solid: and some suggestions by chrispoet Nov 26, 2003 12:25 PM
cheers! by fabled construct Nov 26, 2003 1:10 PM
Oh, by the way: I Like the Title by chrispoet Nov 26, 2003 12:33 PM
Song for Mary Jo by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 4:09 AM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 28, 2003 11:28 AM
New house (please comment) by fabled construct Nov 25, 2003 1:24 AM
Talentless Wonder by somnambulist Nov 24, 2003 9:26 PM
Totally with you! by Siege Nov 25, 2003 2:16 AM
Existential Transcendentalism by Saint41 Nov 24, 2003 8:13 PM
Comment by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 5:53 AM
Hopscotch by poildecarotte Nov 24, 2003 7:50 PM
mother of thousand by jamesdean Nov 24, 2003 4:11 PM
JD, my friend... by Siege Nov 25, 2003 2:10 AM
thank you, truly. by jamesdean Nov 26, 2003 2:28 PM
Cold, Blurred Form by Birdland Nov 24, 2003 1:52 PM
i really by fabled construct Nov 24, 2003 1:59 PM
I didn't by Birdland Nov 24, 2003 2:05 PM
yes.. by fabled construct Nov 24, 2003 2:14 PM
Hey mate! by Siege Nov 25, 2003 2:19 AM
A pebble and its egg (PleaseComment) by fabled construct Nov 24, 2003 1:36 PM
Odd Pentameter... by jamesdean Nov 24, 2003 4:03 PM
It is Better to Write by PainKiller Nov 24, 2003 1:10 PM
OUTLET by PainKiller Nov 24, 2003 12:38 PM
are you by fabled construct Nov 24, 2003 1:42 PM
well by PainKiller Nov 25, 2003 6:37 AM
yeah by fabled construct Nov 25, 2003 7:45 AM
that makes me happy by PainKiller Nov 25, 2003 8:58 AM
Answer me please by fabled construct Nov 24, 2003 12:10 PM
I don't know the answer but I think it is by PainKiller Nov 24, 2003 12:40 PM
? by fabled construct Nov 24, 2003 2:34 PM
every so once in a while by PainKiller Nov 25, 2003 8:57 AM
Sybil. by Ambon Pereira Nov 24, 2003 8:21 AM
in reply by PainKiller Nov 24, 2003 12:51 PM
I applaud by Elgi Jan 4, 2004 11:18 PM
Crossing In the Night by Professor Gloom Nov 24, 2003 5:31 AM
welcome by ellipsis Nov 24, 2003 6:58 AM
Thank you by Professor Gloom Nov 24, 2003 8:21 AM
comment by PainKiller Nov 24, 2003 12:47 PM
Actually by Professor Gloom Nov 24, 2003 12:53 PM
what else can i say? by jamesdean Nov 24, 2003 5:01 PM
Thanks by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 7:47 AM
li po? by marquis of green willows Nov 25, 2003 6:37 AM
Li Bia, Drinking and the Moon by Professor Gloom Nov 25, 2003 7:46 AM
The Thief by Siege Nov 24, 2003 1:48 AM
damn by rain70 Nov 24, 2003 9:36 AM
Cheers Rain. by Siege Nov 25, 2003 2:23 AM
ohchrist........ by jamesdean Nov 24, 2003 4:20 PM
To Cuzco! by bennat Nov 24, 2003 12:53 AM
Leather Apron by acidmoves Nov 24, 2003 12:26 AM
Cute by jamesdean Nov 24, 2003 4:33 PM
Street Standing Poetry by Mage Nov 23, 2003 11:58 PM
Rooftop Poetry by LOSTPOET1 Nov 24, 2003 11:46 AM
Love Notes by ruby tuesday Nov 23, 2003 10:02 PM
My Loving Parasite by somnambulist Nov 23, 2003 8:18 PM
untitled by spaceboy381 Nov 23, 2003 7:18 PM
don't look by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 23, 2003 5:18 PM
excellent by Ambon Pereira Nov 24, 2003 8:33 AM
... by rain70 Nov 24, 2003 9:33 AM
[energy/2] by rain70 Nov 23, 2003 1:20 PM
**** by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 23, 2003 5:28 PM
burning eyes. by Ambon Pereira Nov 24, 2003 8:39 AM
those 4 poems below by bennat Nov 23, 2003 1:13 PM
ode to high art by bennat Nov 23, 2003 1:11 PM
yo dude by jonathankyou Nov 23, 2003 9:53 PM
thanks by bennat Nov 23, 2003 10:19 PM
I think... by c.w. williams Nov 24, 2003 10:50 AM
silly love poem by bennat Nov 23, 2003 1:09 PM
ass-suckers by bennat Nov 23, 2003 1:09 PM
specials by bennat Nov 23, 2003 1:07 PM
Mutter / Further by Ambon Pereira Nov 23, 2003 11:42 AM
Groan and Grumble by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 11:53 AM
(& spectacle(s) by rain70 Nov 23, 2003 1:31 PM
thank you by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 2:43 PM
yes, by Ambon Pereira Nov 24, 2003 8:28 AM
GRANDiloquent by Ambon Pereira Nov 23, 2003 11:26 AM
* * * * by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 23, 2003 8:01 PM
This by rain70 Nov 24, 2003 9:28 AM
Bop a Lot P C by LOSTPOET1 Nov 23, 2003 10:36 AM
Rakish alterations by dumb Nov 23, 2003 10:16 AM
A singling out by fabled construct Nov 23, 2003 8:57 AM
Its the by Silas Nov 23, 2003 10:33 AM
polre by dumb Nov 23, 2003 11:20 AM
Paused by the letters on his street by fabled construct Nov 23, 2003 7:59 AM
run into the hills by kodachrome Nov 22, 2003 7:31 PM
yes, it's a problem by judih. Nov 22, 2003 7:50 PM
inspiration for the hungover by kodachrome Nov 23, 2003 8:26 AM
Lucky charm by Silas Nov 22, 2003 3:15 PM
yes by fabled construct Nov 23, 2003 8:04 AM
I think by Silas Nov 23, 2003 10:29 AM
yeah by dumb Nov 23, 2003 11:06 AM
smothered by it by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 22, 2003 12:31 PM
something to think about by c.w. williams Nov 22, 2003 10:27 AM
so by searching Nov 22, 2003 4:26 PM
a universal disorder by somnambulist Nov 22, 2003 7:00 PM
Tension in Elevators by somnambulist Nov 22, 2003 10:17 AM
that by c.w. williams Nov 22, 2003 10:29 AM
great subject by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 22, 2003 12:40 PM
evolution of thought by somnambulist Nov 22, 2003 6:46 PM
powerful perfume by um Nov 23, 2003 2:30 AM
Ignoring The by fabled construct Nov 22, 2003 3:01 AM
It's nice by zen_ Nov 23, 2003 3:03 AM
love made some discovery of me by michaelsferrell Nov 21, 2003 5:45 PM
Morning Gift by nahui'sdaughter Nov 21, 2003 1:46 PM
did you know by R.K.H Nov 24, 2003 9:33 AM
sorry, Kate by c.w. williams Nov 21, 2003 12:48 PM
Brand New Day by dumb Nov 21, 2003 11:35 AM
.. by Cotton Mouth Soldier Feb 1, 2004 3:07 PM
Lost and Found by fabled construct Nov 21, 2003 10:47 AM
nice by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 22, 2003 6:14 AM
the 'lick the wall' man by anewday Nov 21, 2003 10:30 AM
(red head) by rain70 Nov 21, 2003 8:46 AM
**** by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 22, 2003 12:55 PM
... by rain70 Nov 23, 2003 12:32 PM
nice to meet u... by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 23, 2003 5:31 PM
like by rain70 Nov 24, 2003 9:35 AM
is this how i want to present myself? by jonathankyou Nov 21, 2003 8:43 AM
ontology of a revelation by tomverve Nov 21, 2003 8:04 AM
Puppy Love by zen_ Nov 21, 2003 3:33 AM
thick puppy poem by judih. Nov 21, 2003 3:52 AM
Thank you by zen_ Nov 21, 2003 4:21 AM
Steal this poem! by jamesdean Nov 20, 2003 4:34 PM
What? by b Nov 22, 2003 7:37 AM
No, i really do know what it means by jamesdean Nov 24, 2003 3:58 PM
$$ @s @rt by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 20, 2003 3:55 PM
well... by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 21, 2003 4:00 AM
Interesting by zen_ Nov 21, 2003 4:24 AM
Canada by b Nov 22, 2003 7:39 AM
i would have to say by Darwin's_Nephew Nov 22, 2003 12:25 PM
jibberish by Kristopher Nov 20, 2003 3:03 PM
i like the end by jamesdean Nov 20, 2003 4:24 PM
i agree by b Nov 22, 2003 7:44 AM
February 2001 by fabled construct Nov 20, 2003 1:36 PM
the truth by jonathankyou Nov 20, 2003 12:59 PM
sorry but... by dumb Nov 20, 2003 1:09 PM
engraved... by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 21, 2003 4:23 AM
nice... by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 21, 2003 4:28 AM
as always, by jessa_lynne Nov 21, 2003 6:36 AM
Cassie by fabled construct Nov 20, 2003 12:31 PM
Post! by fabled construct Nov 20, 2003 12:25 PM
dirty old town (a song for cleveland) by feed_yr_head Nov 20, 2003 12:15 PM
she didn't get it by c.w. williams Nov 20, 2003 11:34 AM
these people by psychomuse Nov 20, 2003 7:31 AM
mmhmm by ellipsis Nov 20, 2003 8:42 AM
Focus. by Ambon Pereira Nov 20, 2003 4:20 AM
gaga over manna by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 20, 2003 10:21 AM
Penned by runshadow Nov 20, 2003 1:53 AM
Torment by sensitive ninja Nov 19, 2003 11:42 PM
Sex Life (requiem for a happy relationship) by somnambulist Nov 19, 2003 7:48 PM
Like A Womb Ripped by jim vinny Nov 19, 2003 2:46 PM
hide.. by feloniousslunk Nov 19, 2003 12:46 PM
i guess you like thelonious monk? by fabled construct Nov 20, 2003 2:32 PM
you think too much of me by slog Nov 19, 2003 11:54 AM
i like by searching Nov 19, 2003 2:35 PM
keep the pennies, give me the silver by c.w. williams Nov 19, 2003 10:58 AM
spontaneous prosetry by Yabyum Nov 18, 2003 9:43 PM
marble wandering by rain70 Nov 18, 2003 11:34 AM
"something blue the skin floats over" by Ambon Pereira Nov 19, 2003 2:06 AM
burning snow by sjensen500 Nov 18, 2003 11:27 AM
Aunty Worr, Marches. by Ambon Pereira Nov 18, 2003 6:18 AM
heh! by rain70 Nov 18, 2003 11:26 AM
That was Great by Dead burroughs Nov 19, 2003 10:46 AM
Experience. by Ambon Pereira Nov 18, 2003 6:07 AM
re: by rain70 Nov 18, 2003 11:27 AM
Life by walkentl97 Nov 18, 2003 4:08 AM
waiting for what. by anewday Nov 17, 2003 2:04 PM
i like by searching Nov 17, 2003 2:32 PM
My word is stronger than my own desire to break it. by Kristopher Nov 17, 2003 1:50 PM
yes by searching Nov 17, 2003 2:30 PM
its good by Kristopher Nov 18, 2003 1:49 PM
you think too much of me (revise) pc by slog Nov 17, 2003 12:42 PM
i like how by searching Nov 17, 2003 2:25 PM
she by slog Nov 18, 2003 7:47 AM
krista by slog Nov 18, 2003 11:34 AM
i honestly wouldnt know by searching Nov 19, 2003 2:26 PM
yeah by slog Nov 21, 2003 7:59 AM
thoughts. by Kristopher Nov 17, 2003 11:34 AM
what is beauty by slog Nov 17, 2003 12:43 PM
Senorita Sexy - Groove P C by LOSTPOET1 Nov 17, 2003 11:00 AM
!!! by slog Nov 17, 2003 12:46 PM
Re - Visions by LOSTPOET1 Nov 17, 2003 10:29 AM
if it makes me bad by jessa_lynne Nov 17, 2003 6:20 AM
i think by jonathankyou Nov 17, 2003 10:28 AM
that by searching Nov 17, 2003 2:21 PM
What Good Anyhow: Or, by Ambon Pereira Nov 17, 2003 2:03 AM
you by jessa_lynne Nov 17, 2003 6:48 AM
Trishna* by rain70 Nov 17, 2003 10:32 AM
how might i obtain by Ambon Pereira Nov 19, 2003 2:10 AM
I'm finishing by rain70 Nov 19, 2003 3:38 PM
yes, by Ambon Pereira Nov 20, 2003 4:23 AM
To Buk by c.w. williams Nov 16, 2003 3:02 PM
Where the fuck did you come from... by feloniousslunk Nov 16, 2003 3:38 PM
yep by um Nov 16, 2003 6:10 PM
I'm humbled by c.w. williams Nov 17, 2003 10:31 AM
yeah, i like this by judih. Nov 16, 2003 7:47 PM
i agree with mr. slunk by SivadBop Nov 16, 2003 8:54 PM
Again... by c.w. williams Nov 17, 2003 10:47 AM
loved this by Rosie Nov 17, 2003 8:59 AM
A Druken letter to an ex-girlfriend by Dead burroughs Nov 16, 2003 3:02 PM
this reminded me by Rosie Nov 17, 2003 9:37 AM
I really by c.w. williams Nov 17, 2003 12:37 PM
I agree... by rain70 Nov 17, 2003 1:00 PM
A drunken girlfriend with an ex's letter. by rain70 Nov 17, 2003 12:58 PM
Thank you by Dead burroughs Nov 17, 2003 11:42 PM
What? by Dead burroughs Nov 16, 2003 2:17 PM
fat and fuzzy on a furry lawn(PC) by noangel Nov 16, 2003 12:36 PM
Bubbly Dumb Bubbles (PC) by noangel Nov 16, 2003 12:23 PM
Put not your faith in someone else's song by Boom tin dog Nov 16, 2003 11:58 AM
i got up by um Nov 16, 2003 6:06 PM
sever and insert by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 16, 2003 8:07 AM
Pull my trigger by jota Nov 16, 2003 7:40 AM
Morning honey.. by feloniousslunk Nov 16, 2003 7:27 AM
a replacement for hues by son_of_sham Nov 16, 2003 1:36 AM
intense! by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 1:59 AM
That's intense by zen_ Nov 16, 2003 2:16 AM
:) by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:37 AM
And I by zen_ Nov 16, 2003 2:20 AM
aww thanks by son_of_sham Nov 16, 2003 1:05 PM
NICE! by Dead burroughs Nov 16, 2003 3:00 PM
!! by misshit Nov 17, 2003 1:41 AM
please read by son_of_sham Nov 21, 2003 8:43 PM
fuck bill by jonathankyou Nov 15, 2003 11:31 PM
kill bill by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:07 AM
in that order. by rain70 Nov 16, 2003 12:14 PM
mmm im dubious by son_of_sham Nov 16, 2003 1:18 PM
i thank by jonathankyou Nov 16, 2003 7:22 PM
YES! by rain70 Nov 17, 2003 9:54 AM
Everyone's needs by a majority of one Nov 15, 2003 2:36 PM
awed by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:13 AM
a dream by Spazmatical Nov 15, 2003 12:36 PM
nightmares by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:33 AM
yes by Spazmatical Nov 18, 2003 9:13 PM
2 h by darkblood Nov 15, 2003 11:36 AM
wow by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:25 AM
thanks by darkblood Nov 16, 2003 3:10 AM
Hotels in Florida by somnambulist Nov 15, 2003 8:28 AM
"The boredom hurts like a jelly fish sting" by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:44 AM
:) by somnambulist Nov 16, 2003 4:39 AM
thought about by c.w. williams Nov 22, 2003 10:49 AM
the lesson by Rosie Nov 15, 2003 2:01 AM
sappho by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 1:44 AM
Funny by zen_ Nov 16, 2003 2:23 AM
true by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 2:52 AM
that poem by zen_ Nov 16, 2003 2:30 AM
smut... by Rosie Nov 16, 2003 3:36 AM
Dear Jamie, by R.K.H Nov 14, 2003 11:00 PM
To Jamie by nahui'sdaughter Nov 21, 2003 1:34 PM
No more by notimefornow Nov 14, 2003 9:34 PM
Napoleon’s footprints by flood Nov 14, 2003 5:13 PM
cursed by judih. Nov 14, 2003 9:50 PM
Marred (a poet speaks to his wife) by mindchef Nov 14, 2003 5:04 PM
Poetry in the nth degree by ghostwalker Dec 21, 2003 9:07 AM
Art Imitating Life by Kristopher Nov 14, 2003 2:41 PM
just one glass of red wine by searching Nov 14, 2003 2:30 PM
Very good, now mine. The Naturalist by Saint41 Nov 15, 2003 11:48 PM
i have by searching Nov 17, 2003 2:20 PM
and now one that doesn't suck (pc) by jessa_lynne Nov 14, 2003 12:46 PM
MORE (pc) by jessa_lynne Nov 14, 2003 12:46 PM
old crap-crap (pc) by jessa_lynne Nov 14, 2003 12:41 PM
re by Kristopher Nov 14, 2003 2:08 PM
Overdose Warning by Uncle B Nov 14, 2003 9:49 AM
keepsake by misshit Nov 14, 2003 8:23 AM
keep by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 9:17 AM
... by shishi Nov 14, 2003 6:01 PM
at school by mathias Nov 14, 2003 7:40 AM
:D by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 9:27 AM
thanks by mathias Nov 14, 2003 10:22 AM
keep writing by zen_ Nov 16, 2003 2:13 AM
angel on freud's table [if you would PC i would be much indebted] by shishi Nov 14, 2003 7:23 AM
a Comment by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 14, 2003 9:05 AM
last chance (almost) to join Freestyle by LitKicks Staff Nov 13, 2003 4:57 PM
Johnny got his gun...Again by backpocket Nov 13, 2003 3:51 PM
New by Kristopher Nov 13, 2003 2:53 PM
I loved this by jessa_lynne Nov 14, 2003 4:17 AM
re by Kristopher Nov 14, 2003 1:57 PM
i am definitely a better actor than most of the people on "the OC" by jonathankyou Nov 13, 2003 11:37 AM
yes by noangel Nov 13, 2003 1:58 PM
responce 101 by Kristopher Nov 13, 2003 4:39 PM
thanks! by jonathankyou Nov 13, 2003 9:49 PM
right on by bluesguitar87 Nov 14, 2003 3:31 PM
the things of the world could be descrided using the words of Mr. Close by thomas s. barnett Nov 13, 2003 10:56 AM
real world by hippigrrl Nov 13, 2003 10:18 AM
Love is in the corner of my mind... by majic Feb 2, 2004 12:45 AM
i had a dream by hippigrrl Nov 13, 2003 10:09 AM
November 13th's Poem by Kreddible Trout Nov 13, 2003 9:21 AM
i love this by judih. Nov 13, 2003 10:08 AM
thanks, by Kreddible Trout Nov 17, 2003 6:20 PM
Night by bluesguitar87 Nov 13, 2003 6:26 AM
out... by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 13, 2003 7:10 AM
i feel the same way by jonathankyou Nov 15, 2003 11:29 PM
untitled just like that... by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 13, 2003 12:21 AM
Locomotive blue jeans by backpocket Nov 12, 2003 5:26 PM
Trade rules by Arcadia Nov 12, 2003 5:59 PM
Bohemian Infancy by Saint41 Nov 12, 2003 6:16 PM
Hi! by Arcadia Nov 13, 2003 8:50 AM
Fools For Love by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:20 PM
like your style by backpocket Nov 12, 2003 5:46 PM
thank you by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 5:55 PM
Untitled by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:16 PM
Capture by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:12 PM
Religious Crush by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:11 PM
Untitled by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:09 PM
Welcome Back by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:08 PM
Birthsoil (needs revising) by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:04 PM
Off To The Races by DarkZenith Nov 12, 2003 4:02 PM
superman'snightmare by prettyvacant Nov 12, 2003 3:07 PM
we all die in the end by mindwash Nov 12, 2003 1:38 PM
we all die in the end or sometimes rather by DarkMatta-Legend Nov 13, 2003 1:42 AM
Possession with good intentions by Dead burroughs Nov 12, 2003 12:14 PM
First Winter Day by zen_ Nov 12, 2003 11:23 AM
Just submitted this to a contest by zen_ Nov 12, 2003 11:24 AM
poetry contests by SivadBop Nov 15, 2003 9:55 PM
Why, yes by zen_ Nov 16, 2003 2:07 AM
nice to kinda meet you too by SivadBop Nov 16, 2003 8:39 PM
test. by Ambon Pereira Nov 12, 2003 8:20 AM
Zen_ by zen_ Nov 12, 2003 11:27 AM
NO!!!! by zen_ Nov 12, 2003 11:44 AM
I liked it, but, admittedly, I don’t think I grasped the full meaning by Bobthegashuffer Nov 12, 2003 1:53 PM
Sure, it needs sanding by zen_ Nov 15, 2003 12:03 AM
Drifting Off by Mayo Nov 12, 2003 7:12 AM
drift... by LOSTPOET1 Nov 12, 2003 9:33 AM
I HOPE by Mayo Dec 9, 2003 2:27 PM
The Milestrane by Hester Prynne Nov 12, 2003 12:32 AM
past curfew by michaelsferrell Nov 11, 2003 10:12 PM
my own doubts and fears hold me back from reaching my full potential. by jonathankyou Nov 11, 2003 9:33 PM
Stay tuned for the blues by backpocket Nov 11, 2003 5:46 PM
In the pocket by LOSTPOET1 Nov 12, 2003 9:26 AM
existentialism. by Ambon Pereira Nov 11, 2003 4:38 AM
Get some clearisil! by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 11, 2003 6:14 AM
perhaps, my child, before you launched into an ad hominem attack, by Ambon Pereira Nov 11, 2003 7:07 AM
Arggghh by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 20, 2003 10:12 AM
a beautiful moment with myself by searching Nov 10, 2003 10:52 PM
Secular Millenium by Grendel48 Nov 10, 2003 5:39 PM
Secular Millenium by Grendel48 Nov 10, 2003 5:39 PM
Forgot to add PC by Grendel48 Nov 11, 2003 2:14 AM
... by pottygok Nov 13, 2003 1:11 PM
Slice Of Life or Something like it by Boom tin dog Nov 10, 2003 5:10 PM
Cliché X 2 by bitterweed cowboy Nov 10, 2003 4:46 PM
We practically live together by flood Nov 10, 2003 4:38 PM
liked it by Grendel48 Nov 10, 2003 5:35 PM
cosmic theory by snakhi Nov 10, 2003 3:47 PM
a lunar eclipse by auziea Dec 9, 2003 3:19 AM
propel yourself by snakhi Jan 21, 2004 8:55 AM
Seventh Son Rising (MP3 Blood Mix) by beatvibe Nov 10, 2003 2:39 PM
Chapter 10 (Bankruptcy) by Ambon Pereira Nov 10, 2003 3:55 AM
Ambon m'man... by rain70 Nov 10, 2003 4:36 PM
yep, I'm fresh off the boat like a bunch of bananas... by Ambon Pereira Nov 11, 2003 4:31 AM
Wit's Walking Blusters Brevity's Sole. by Ambon Pereira Nov 10, 2003 2:56 AM
ah... by Illuminara Nov 11, 2003 12:20 AM
difference in terms, etc. by Ambon Pereira Nov 11, 2003 4:29 AM
yes, I see by Illuminara Nov 11, 2003 1:52 PM
SLEEPWALKING by Bobthegashuffer Nov 9, 2003 1:45 PM
SLEEP, WOLVES, & REALITY by Bobthegashuffer Nov 9, 2003 1:44 PM
Naked Mind Poem by Bobthegashuffer Nov 9, 2003 1:39 PM
EVERY LITTLE GIRL NEEDS A DIRTY OLD MAN by Bobthegashuffer Nov 9, 2003 1:35 PM
Juegos de poder by chronicshankar Nov 9, 2003 2:13 PM
[my eve] by rain70 Nov 9, 2003 12:36 PM
rain!!! by runshadow Nov 16, 2003 7:44 AM
Wow by rain70 Nov 17, 2003 10:06 AM
wowman by runshadow Nov 20, 2003 1:39 AM
Rock of Ages by Feign Nov 9, 2003 6:31 AM
cymbals - a sonnet by doreen peri Nov 9, 2003 3:29 AM
the Medallion of Ages Pt II by son_of_sham Nov 9, 2003 1:31 AM
Ecliptic by um Nov 9, 2003 1:16 AM
Sophia by headburner Nov 9, 2003 12:54 AM
actually by Emelia Jan 25, 2004 7:47 PM
thoughts by hippigrrl Nov 8, 2003 9:12 PM
deranged by hippigrrl Nov 8, 2003 9:00 PM
:( by zero hero Nov 9, 2003 12:15 AM
Someone please pass a bill by Bobthegashuffer Nov 9, 2003 1:43 AM
just a lot a vanity on my part by zero hero Nov 17, 2003 8:44 PM
These lines are amazing by Bobthegashuffer Nov 9, 2003 1:36 AM
Marvellous stuff by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 10, 2003 12:03 PM
wow by misshit Nov 14, 2003 8:20 AM
grey jelly cage by Silas Nov 8, 2003 8:04 PM
powerful by somnambulist Nov 8, 2003 9:51 PM
The Infinite Whisper by Kristopher Nov 8, 2003 6:23 PM
f by Silas Nov 8, 2003 8:15 PM
I think by Halpert Albright Nov 8, 2003 11:43 PM
Thanks by Kristopher Nov 9, 2003 12:41 AM
5 mins alone by runshadow Nov 8, 2003 4:37 PM
this is good by Silas Nov 8, 2003 8:19 PM
thanks 4 feedback! made a revision. by runshadow Nov 9, 2003 8:49 AM
Ana's paper cuts by somnambulist Nov 8, 2003 3:48 PM
sleepwalker, by Silas Nov 8, 2003 8:09 PM
danke by somnambulist Nov 8, 2003 8:39 PM
the thesis of theseus, maze-maddened bullbait. by Ambon Pereira Nov 8, 2003 12:20 PM
filled with feelings (childs stomache eyes) by michaelsferrell Nov 7, 2003 4:43 PM
Another Ohio Poem (Please Critique) by chrispoet Nov 7, 2003 2:44 PM
rare by michaelsferrell Nov 7, 2003 5:35 PM
amen, by Ambon Pereira Nov 8, 2003 12:38 PM
in the middle of Nowhere by Andeh Nov 9, 2003 8:09 AM
... by pottygok Nov 9, 2003 9:19 PM
VISIONS Please Critique by LOSTPOET1 Nov 7, 2003 1:08 PM
ok by ~K Nov 8, 2003 1:08 AM
k by LOSTPOET1 Nov 8, 2003 9:15 AM
suggestion...???... by mindchef Nov 8, 2003 6:20 PM
... by pottygok Nov 9, 2003 8:56 PM
Teacher's Pet by LOSTPOET1 Nov 11, 2003 9:16 AM
Cosmic Bum Dance by Dead burroughs Nov 7, 2003 12:18 PM
Overtones PC by LOSTPOET1 Nov 7, 2003 12:13 AM
Poetry or music? by Zampano Nov 7, 2003 5:18 AM
you got it by LOSTPOET1 Nov 7, 2003 9:55 AM
... by pottygok Nov 9, 2003 9:11 PM
??? by LOSTPOET1 Nov 11, 2003 9:14 AM
If you want a grade... by pottygok Nov 11, 2003 11:42 PM
my twenty fourth birthday by jonathankyou Nov 6, 2003 10:11 PM
It's required of me to report by kodachrome Nov 6, 2003 9:00 PM
Lilith (poem 666) by headburner Nov 6, 2003 7:41 PM
... by ~K Nov 7, 2003 12:22 AM
You know what.... by headburner Nov 9, 2003 12:04 AM
I agree by ~K Nov 10, 2003 8:58 PM
excellent poem by Ambon Pereira Nov 8, 2003 12:25 PM
Hi Ambon! by headburner Nov 9, 2003 12:27 AM
oh, but it's even funnier than that, by Ambon Pereira Nov 10, 2003 2:07 AM
Tom's list by A. S. Sholes Nov 6, 2003 7:02 PM
A citizen reflects by Tim Cunningham Nov 6, 2003 5:13 PM
Right on by Dead burroughs Nov 8, 2003 12:04 PM
this is winter by Tim Cunningham Nov 6, 2003 7:13 AM
dublin, joyce, metempsychosis, xiao mao, etc. by Ambon Pereira Nov 6, 2003 2:36 AM
i tried a million times to write a poem tonight. by jonathankyou Nov 5, 2003 9:19 PM
..things between places.. by falbhanach Nov 5, 2003 8:51 PM
Skeleton trees, heart beat, and cinamon by Uncle B Nov 5, 2003 8:33 PM
comment by Deez Nov 6, 2003 6:25 AM
This was by Kristopher Nov 6, 2003 9:55 AM
early wine by daisyrain Nov 6, 2003 1:38 PM
mmmmmmm by Mayo Nov 12, 2003 6:46 AM
Too Bad by B3jamboree Nov 5, 2003 2:52 PM
Sample by Dead burroughs Nov 5, 2003 2:05 PM
verbally abusive boyfriend by Deez Nov 5, 2003 1:55 PM
Hull by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 5, 2003 10:54 AM
Porque tengo tú by Uncle B Nov 5, 2003 9:57 AM
Tener y no tener by Arcadia Nov 5, 2003 2:36 PM
re by fabled construct Nov 20, 2003 1:24 PM
Untitled by Siege Nov 5, 2003 1:40 AM
the Medallion of Ages by son_of_sham Nov 5, 2003 1:10 AM
always just another by anewday Nov 4, 2003 11:04 PM
i don't know by jonathankyou Nov 4, 2003 7:18 PM
To You. (version 2) by Kristopher Nov 4, 2003 5:58 PM
i love it by Intense_Apathy Nov 5, 2003 2:30 PM
Death Before Dishonour by jim vinny Nov 4, 2003 12:41 PM
Aw hell.. by feloniousslunk Nov 6, 2003 9:02 PM
my first poem as a member of this site by Zampano Nov 4, 2003 11:30 AM
House of flies by LOSTPOET1 Nov 4, 2003 11:49 AM
Thanks by Zampano Nov 4, 2003 12:49 PM
Nuns and bastards by Crimbobuline Nov 4, 2003 9:42 AM
E.R. by Tim Cunningham Nov 4, 2003 9:12 AM
V I S I O N S (PC) by LOSTPOET1 Nov 4, 2003 8:35 AM
Over the top mystical experience by Bobthegashuffer Nov 12, 2003 1:04 PM
You think too much of me-P.C. by slog Nov 4, 2003 6:53 AM
OK Slog, here it goes by Bobthegashuffer Nov 12, 2003 12:38 PM
the goal by slog Nov 13, 2003 7:42 AM
actually by slog Nov 13, 2003 7:43 AM
your right, I'm being a fucker... by Bobthegashuffer Nov 13, 2003 10:45 PM
thats more or less by slog Nov 17, 2003 8:14 AM
coffee and jazz by Thelwall Pleasance Nov 4, 2003 3:35 AM
c&j by LOSTPOET1 Nov 4, 2003 8:27 AM
to you. by Kristopher Nov 4, 2003 1:54 AM
good ole fashioned by jessa_lynne Nov 4, 2003 5:16 AM
=) by Kristopher Nov 4, 2003 5:28 PM
pinned to the world with a breath by Silas Nov 4, 2003 12:41 AM
silas by LOSTPOET1 Nov 4, 2003 12:46 AM
sexy by Thelwall Pleasance Nov 4, 2003 2:59 AM
I agree by somnambulist Nov 8, 2003 9:49 PM
thanks by Silas Nov 6, 2003 12:13 PM
GOLDEN by LOSTPOET1 Nov 3, 2003 8:26 AM
Emelia by Illuminara Nov 2, 2003 5:45 PM
Hi lumi. There's always... by headburner Nov 4, 2003 8:21 AM
hey burner by Illuminara Nov 4, 2003 9:35 AM
perched by son of poi Nov 2, 2003 5:32 PM
even by Rosie Nov 2, 2003 10:14 AM
rosie by LOSTPOET1 Nov 3, 2003 9:36 AM
you read my mind by Rosie Nov 3, 2003 7:58 PM
this computer by Rosie Nov 3, 2003 7:59 PM
eeek! by Rosie Nov 3, 2003 7:59 PM
My Favorite Misanthrope by flood Nov 2, 2003 3:01 AM
Winter, you glare at Me by Andeh Nov 1, 2003 11:32 PM
It's True by Feign Nov 1, 2003 12:02 PM


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