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myselfish (critic welcome) by michaelsferrell Jul 22, 2004 3:47 AM
At Work by the mingo Jul 22, 2004 1:28 AM
Saint to Sinner, Sinner to Saint by Sacredburro Jul 22, 2004 12:43 AM
angel plummage by Silas Jul 21, 2004 11:02 PM
General George Patton by Chipzee Jul 21, 2004 9:34 PM
Oh my lord. by Chipzee Jul 21, 2004 9:20 PM
Holy land of asphalt deams by monkriot Jul 21, 2004 9:01 PM
On The Hunt by MentalTraveller14 Jul 21, 2004 7:41 PM
Mentally stronger by luckystrikes Jul 21, 2004 7:50 PM
Unable to Thrive by Kristopher Jul 21, 2004 5:35 PM
july second two thousand and four by uncle lloyd Jul 21, 2004 2:24 PM
One day. by R D Eckart Jul 21, 2004 10:57 AM
naked by 4 degrees Jul 21, 2004 2:38 PM
Your metal chains once headgear by Chipzee Jul 21, 2004 10:11 AM
punk rock reasoning by zen_ Jul 21, 2004 1:40 PM
pantomime by ~K Jul 21, 2004 3:49 AM
you love the one you hurt the most by Sin Jul 21, 2004 12:38 AM
that's brutal -- this might be as well.... by zen_ Jul 21, 2004 1:44 PM
Hopeless poet by Chipzee Jul 20, 2004 11:39 AM
bobbing for truth by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:21 PM
Toothless? by Chipzee Jul 21, 2004 9:17 AM
I read correctly by zen_ Jul 21, 2004 11:09 AM
perhaps, by zen_ Jul 21, 2004 11:15 AM
Your Waters [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 20, 2004 11:04 AM
this is the worst thing I've ever read in my life by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:23 PM
honesty is the best policy by Beth Vieira Jul 21, 2004 12:30 PM
thank ya kindlee, maam by zen_ Jul 21, 2004 1:31 PM
Poetry Is Priceless by Poetnwrite Jul 20, 2004 10:46 AM
The New Beat - A Tribute To LitKicks ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 20, 2004 10:26 AM
Suitcases [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 20, 2004 10:19 AM
arising by universe=one-song Jul 20, 2004 10:04 AM
"Abandonment Issues" by arcanewun Jul 20, 2004 9:25 AM
beggar's ballad by Rudra Jul 20, 2004 8:54 AM
In Torment by joshuagriffin Jul 20, 2004 8:04 AM
My Blood Will Spill This Love... by majic Jul 20, 2004 7:43 AM
why yes I do... by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:24 PM
My Blood Will Spill This Love... by majic Jul 20, 2004 7:43 AM
nice. by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:26 PM
not yet by majic Jul 21, 2004 3:47 AM
hmmm....well, I can see your point. by zen_ Jul 21, 2004 1:33 PM
A True Test Of Faith by majic Jul 20, 2004 7:39 AM
Virgin (p c) by Jonny Jul 20, 2004 2:40 AM
Lost Poet (pc) by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:56 PM
whiteware by Silas Jul 19, 2004 10:53 PM
"CRASH!" by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:01 PM
now WW by Silas Jul 19, 2004 11:11 PM
Sound of china breaking by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:17 PM
god that's happening by Silas Jul 19, 2004 11:32 PM
not anymore by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:34 PM
yes.. by mnaz Jul 19, 2004 11:17 PM
The train conductor by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:19 PM
Casey Jones? by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:21 PM
The only one who knew... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:26 PM
Hell... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:28 PM
to hell with ALL of IT by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:29 PM
NO NO - by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:33 PM
I am a desserted Isle by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:35 PM
No one... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:36 PM
then they can FREEZE their BALLS OFF by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:37 PM
Iam.... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:38 PM
Good luck! by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:25 PM
it's unforseeable man by Silas Jul 19, 2004 11:30 PM
whiteware dishes are the sign of resignation by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:19 AM
Oh yeah - by CHILDS Jul 20, 2004 12:21 AM
microwavable by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:24 AM
LostPoet ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 10:49 PM
Stay lost... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:53 PM
It seems like a wonder-ful place... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 10:54 PM
Obviously I wasn't... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:55 PM
Be cautious.... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:57 PM
One Man's Reality (please critique) by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 9:55 PM
Must we REALLY? by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:01 PM
Besides... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:03 PM
Ya know WW... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 10:33 PM
Yer too kind.... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:43 PM
Whatcha so pissed off about? by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 10:46 PM
I am pissed at the WHOLE WORLD! by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:51 PM
It happened to me recently too... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 10:56 PM
I'll have a reminder by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:00 PM
hmm... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:03 PM
Don't ask.... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:07 PM
Everybody... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:09 PM
Use a blunt-edged boulder then.... by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:11 PM
Which ancestors? by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:15 PM
Yeah by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:18 PM
JC is the reason by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:18 PM
OK WW by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:20 PM
I'm not talking to any of them by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:10 PM
Well the girl I'm talking about... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:14 PM
Tell your fiancee to help you by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:23 PM
Oh, she has... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:26 PM
so you think by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:28 PM
Oh no... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:31 PM
Well, then by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:32 PM
Good night, WW - by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:35 PM
not if I move to the left by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 11:39 PM
See that's the silliness... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:41 PM
bahaha by Chipzee Jul 19, 2004 8:27 PM
Ubiquity of mind by zen_ Jul 19, 2004 8:19 PM
ZEN_ I LOVE THIS! by majic Jul 20, 2004 7:38 AM
unorthodox style~~ by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:18 PM
The Tide’s Delirium [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 19, 2004 1:26 PM
If I could have one hour of the tides delerium I'd collect every word ever been by zen_ Jul 19, 2004 8:29 PM
Click by Hester Prynne Jul 19, 2004 12:08 PM
The wonders by Chipzee Jul 19, 2004 8:37 PM
No lie by Hester Prynne Jul 19, 2004 9:17 PM
A few things.. by mnaz Jul 20, 2004 12:03 AM
I heartily agree by Hester Prynne Jul 20, 2004 6:00 PM
O, God I love thee by Chipzee Jul 19, 2004 12:04 PM
Blasted rain by Chipzee Jul 19, 2004 11:49 AM
The First Valley Girl Died Today by Dave The Dov Jul 19, 2004 10:58 AM
Ha Ha Ha! by CHILDS Jul 20, 2004 12:06 AM
once again by Jonny Jul 19, 2004 7:53 AM
..if you would not mind.. (please critique) by Jonny Jul 19, 2004 7:52 AM
masochistic smile by Sin Jul 19, 2004 12:59 AM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 19, 2004 7:04 AM
I agree by zen_ Jul 19, 2004 8:38 PM
..... by Sin Jul 21, 2004 12:32 AM
tattood acroff the foft fkin ov yer back by zen_ Jul 19, 2004 8:38 PM
So find someone else by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:16 PM
vampires by zen_ Jul 19, 2004 11:22 PM
BLA BLA BLA... by CHILDS Jul 19, 2004 11:24 PM
i vant to coin a cliche by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:08 AM
Niiiice! by CHILDS Jul 20, 2004 12:10 AM
that would seem like an obvious statement by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:27 AM
oh yes by Sin Jul 21, 2004 12:30 AM
a machine gun & a box of matches by Silas Jul 19, 2004 12:03 AM
One Man's Reality ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 18, 2004 10:58 PM
agent of karma (scared of the dark) by Silas Jul 18, 2004 10:24 PM
wonderful poem(s), mr. spade by Rudra Jul 19, 2004 8:07 AM
put it on my tab by Silas Jul 19, 2004 1:46 PM
Yes I agree with Rudra by Hester Prynne Jul 19, 2004 11:20 AM
Ah, Hest by Silas Jul 19, 2004 1:49 PM
The $7 smile by a majority of one Jul 18, 2004 3:47 PM
Wow.... by wonder_woman Jul 18, 2004 9:19 PM
What a waste of a decade by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:09 PM
:) by zen_ Jul 20, 2004 12:28 PM
A breath in time (critiqe) by Jonny Jul 18, 2004 2:50 PM
The Riverside Motel by mr.mudd Jul 18, 2004 12:58 PM
61 by mr.mudd Jul 18, 2004 12:57 PM
kentucky derby day by mr.mudd Jul 18, 2004 12:56 PM
The end by Brage Jul 18, 2004 11:10 AM
Gun Metal Blues by wonder_woman Jul 18, 2004 8:15 AM
www.destiny.com by CHILDS Jul 18, 2004 11:08 PM
Great! by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:07 PM
The Sacerdotal Agapet's Diplomatic Immunity by Christ was a Socialist Jul 18, 2004 5:32 AM
Reality ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 17, 2004 10:41 PM
a moment in transit. by Rudra Jul 17, 2004 6:00 PM
nice by ellipsis Jul 17, 2004 7:47 PM
thanks for reading, 'ipsis. by Rudra Jul 19, 2004 8:13 AM
this is my favourite poem for weeks by Silas Jul 19, 2004 1:53 PM
If I were a cougar.. by mnaz Jul 17, 2004 4:25 PM
Wild grasses(edit) by Sylph Jul 17, 2004 10:26 AM
Fisherman [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 17, 2004 8:49 AM
good poem. by Rudra Jul 17, 2004 6:33 PM
Unentitled by Dead burroughs Jul 17, 2004 7:47 AM
The Phantom ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 16, 2004 10:04 PM
Eventually he surfaces by wonder_woman Jul 16, 2004 10:20 PM
P.S. Alternative ending by wonder_woman Jul 16, 2004 10:31 PM
To tell ya the truth... by CHILDS Jul 16, 2004 11:35 PM
following some half-assed tradition of loneliness by jessa_lynne Jul 16, 2004 9:24 PM
following some half-assed tradition of loneliness by jessa_lynne Jul 16, 2004 9:24 PM
dying of heartbreak in the bathrooms of foreign hotels.... by Rudra Jul 17, 2004 6:58 PM
after finishing Crime and Punishment by Ishmael9 Jul 16, 2004 8:00 PM
brilliant. by Rudra Jul 17, 2004 7:07 PM
Dark Death by coolazice Jul 16, 2004 7:20 PM
The shamrocks by garoche Jul 16, 2004 5:13 PM
Meaning of life by Chipzee Jul 16, 2004 10:56 AM
suspended animation by Sin Jul 16, 2004 2:55 AM
Ravenous fingers by wonder_woman Jul 16, 2004 4:56 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 16, 2004 11:52 PM
Sorry by wonder_woman Jul 17, 2004 9:53 PM
... by Sin Jul 19, 2004 1:13 AM
empty eyes by Sin Jul 18, 2004 10:59 PM
That's EXACTLY where to look by wonder_woman Jul 19, 2004 10:13 PM
Innervision ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 15, 2004 11:04 PM
Outer vision by wonder_woman Jul 16, 2004 4:50 PM
song by meng Jul 15, 2004 9:43 PM
Summer Storm by itanjo Jul 15, 2004 4:42 PM
Goyim, gay 'em, just don't cha splay 'em by Quill Sprout Jul 15, 2004 1:06 PM
the rhthym, man, the rhthym by schmoogie Jul 15, 2004 2:29 PM
Silence by Arunima Jul 15, 2004 12:33 PM
Bill by William Trevis Jul 15, 2004 12:04 PM
A Nursery Rhyme by William Trevis Jul 15, 2004 11:51 AM
i like:) by Arunima Jul 15, 2004 2:24 PM
"The At Bat"..a little league poem (PC) by Caper Jul 15, 2004 10:16 AM
Infierno, X by kilmes Jul 15, 2004 11:05 AM
Rumble of tracks with no train. by Jon Converse Jul 15, 2004 3:06 AM
kerouac (please critique) by sheer boredom Jul 15, 2004 12:49 AM
It's good, but... by CHILDS Jul 15, 2004 1:53 PM
Mutiny ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 14, 2004 11:06 PM
i like it... by Caper Jul 15, 2004 10:38 AM
I like that line myself... by CHILDS Jul 15, 2004 1:51 PM
fawning* by rain70 Jul 14, 2004 10:47 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 14, 2004 11:14 PM
Hello rain... by starsailor Jul 15, 2004 6:26 AM
Two years!!!!!! Good for you! by luckystrikes Jul 16, 2004 2:40 PM
Light by mtmynd Jul 14, 2004 9:54 PM
Poetic idiot am I by Tulate Jul 15, 2004 5:25 AM
Cecil by starsailor Jul 15, 2004 6:24 AM
the pulse at the base of my throat by SLucia Jul 14, 2004 9:03 PM
the pulse at the base of my throat by schmoogie Jul 15, 2004 4:07 AM
class war. by Kristopher Jul 14, 2004 3:41 PM
death of a sea otter by uncle lloyd Jul 14, 2004 3:06 PM
Mediocre by beat_fan Jul 14, 2004 3:55 PM
Read and critique... pwease by Chipzee Jul 14, 2004 12:14 PM
Very thoughtful. by beat_fan Jul 14, 2004 4:03 PM
Good call by Chipzee Jul 14, 2004 9:04 PM
Good... by beat_fan Jul 16, 2004 2:49 PM
:) by luckystrikes Jul 16, 2004 2:54 PM
Questions Seeking Answers by starsailor Jul 14, 2004 9:12 AM
STAR - by CHILDS Jul 14, 2004 9:21 AM
CHILDS by starsailor Jul 14, 2004 9:27 AM
Sorry, only one typo... by CHILDS Jul 14, 2004 9:31 AM
I guess by starsailor Jul 14, 2004 9:37 AM
Big Yellow Eye ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 13, 2004 11:42 PM
... by pottygok Jul 14, 2004 11:24 AM
Perceptions (PC) by beat_fan Jul 13, 2004 7:26 PM
Wildly Passionate! by CHILDS Jul 13, 2004 11:46 PM
Thanks! by beat_fan Jul 14, 2004 3:53 PM
love love love by Chipzee Jul 13, 2004 7:18 PM
Indeed... by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 7:25 PM
More precise by Chipzee Jul 14, 2004 7:57 AM
Clearly stated, please...... by scooter_betty Jul 14, 2004 1:48 PM
But what of yesteryear? by Chipzee Jul 14, 2004 2:21 PM
Hold er' til... by scooter_betty Jul 14, 2004 4:18 PM
reword by Chipzee Jul 14, 2004 9:05 PM
It seems incoclusive, by beat_fan Jul 13, 2004 7:28 PM
NEW BEAT - (PC) DEDICATED TO ALL MY FELLOW LIT-KICKERS! by CHILDS Jul 13, 2004 7:11 PM
OK by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 7:20 PM
Seems like it would be corny, by beat_fan Jul 13, 2004 7:33 PM
Makes a loud statement by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 7:38 PM
The Hammer by itanjo Jul 13, 2004 6:25 PM
A Little too conventional, by beat_fan Jul 13, 2004 7:59 PM
The Harem to God by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 5:14 PM
the face behind the mask by starsailor Jul 13, 2004 4:36 PM
I dont know you either.... by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 5:06 PM
Knowledge by starsailor Jul 14, 2004 9:19 AM
And he vanishes again.... by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 6:13 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 13, 2004 2:03 PM
Why? by schmoogie Jul 13, 2004 2:35 PM
Understood by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 3:33 PM
Just know this.... by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 3:36 PM
TREES by schmoogie Jul 13, 2004 1:56 PM
trees indeed by SLucia Jul 15, 2004 1:37 PM
Thank You!! by schmoogie Jul 15, 2004 2:36 PM
Up and down by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 1:30 PM
Good simplicity. by beat_fan Jul 13, 2004 7:37 PM
Prose inspired by ''crayolas gliding silently...'' by Bennie Jul 13, 2004 12:33 PM
tears inspired by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 1:00 PM
thanks, hest by Bennie Jul 13, 2004 1:44 PM
Change? by Chipzee Jul 13, 2004 12:24 PM
Change by kilmes Jul 13, 2004 5:29 PM
The Accent of Cicadas [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 13, 2004 6:39 AM
Interesting by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 1:13 PM
I'm in the bedroom with you by Silas Jul 12, 2004 8:33 PM
The Bedroom by luckystrikes Jul 12, 2004 9:37 PM
THE NEW BEAT - ( P C ) Dedicated to all my fellow Lit-Kickers!! by CHILDS Jul 12, 2004 7:41 PM
i'm jazzed up by Billectric Jul 13, 2004 7:16 AM
That's the spirit I was talkin' about Bill... by CHILDS Jul 13, 2004 5:25 PM
England in Customs by headburner Jul 12, 2004 6:59 PM
confessions of a coward by LankyAl Jul 12, 2004 6:01 PM
This is sad, but splendid by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 5:08 PM
no 1 by james_dean Jul 12, 2004 5:18 PM
sorry by james_dean Jul 12, 2004 5:20 PM
Shake it off by Hester Prynne Jul 12, 2004 1:47 PM
Shake it off by Hester Prynne Jul 12, 2004 1:46 PM
Oooh Hester... by CHILDS Jul 12, 2004 7:24 PM
Yes, by all means by luckystrikes Jul 12, 2004 9:26 PM
oh by Hester Prynne Jul 12, 2004 11:42 PM
Bitter, Party of One! by luckystrikes Jul 13, 2004 5:53 AM
"life under by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 10:54 AM
Good by luckystrikes Jul 13, 2004 12:21 PM
what's by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 12:51 PM
My brain hurts.... by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 3:32 PM
yo betty.... by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 5:12 PM
psychotic? naw........ by scooter_betty Jul 13, 2004 5:20 PM
The Hero (revised) by young one Jul 12, 2004 12:29 PM
wow by Hester Prynne Jul 13, 2004 1:50 PM
... by pottygok Jul 14, 2004 11:38 AM
The Drum by the mingo Jul 12, 2004 3:16 AM
I Like It!!!! by Dave The Dov Jul 12, 2004 11:20 AM
got a lot to boom about by judih. Jul 12, 2004 11:28 AM
ha by young one Jul 12, 2004 12:30 PM
The New Beat - ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 10:38 PM
King of the World! by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:44 PM
southern discomfort by 4 degrees Jul 11, 2004 9:50 PM
Sounds of the mighty YAWLP! by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:07 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 11, 2004 10:14 PM
Im sorry.... by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:17 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 11, 2004 10:19 PM
I did not know by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:20 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 11, 2004 10:22 PM
Yup by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:24 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 11, 2004 10:29 PM
Struck the match by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:32 PM
YAWLP!!!! by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 10:25 PM
Hey you.... by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:26 PM
One in the same by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:27 PM
Check out... by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 10:28 PM
That's what I meant by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:29 PM
Thank You by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:35 PM
Sleeping's over-rated, isn't it? by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 10:27 PM
Novel is writing itself by luckystrikes Jul 11, 2004 10:28 PM
: )! by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 10:29 PM
hello 4 by young one Jul 12, 2004 12:34 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 12, 2004 1:37 PM
He said, Bear..... by luckystrikes Jul 12, 2004 9:28 PM
Under the Elm by SLucia Jul 11, 2004 7:55 PM
mmmmm by son_of_sham Jul 11, 2004 8:06 PM
Sawdust by rennoc Jul 11, 2004 6:50 PM
powder by SLucia Jul 11, 2004 8:08 PM
Uffizi (pc if ya like) by eggnoize Jul 11, 2004 6:47 PM
i likes it by young one Jul 12, 2004 12:45 PM
strange parting. by Rudra Jul 11, 2004 4:36 PM
belief by doreen peri Jul 11, 2004 2:04 PM
I Love Your Poetry... by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 10:20 PM
well thanks by doreen peri Jul 12, 2004 6:02 AM
If it's any consolation to you by luckystrikes Jul 12, 2004 7:06 AM
skin by doreen peri Jul 11, 2004 2:04 PM
these three posts... by young one Jul 12, 2004 12:52 PM
shoes by doreen peri Jul 11, 2004 2:02 PM
i for one by SLucia Jul 14, 2004 9:11 PM
boogieman by doreen peri Jul 11, 2004 2:01 PM
Bring Da Beats Back - Boyeeeeee! ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 11, 2004 12:03 PM
The Needles Eye by WIREMAN Jul 11, 2004 7:04 AM
deathly puppets by weezer Jul 10, 2004 12:07 PM
end of the world ( Please Critique ) by CHILDS Jul 10, 2004 10:37 AM
and by learned Jul 11, 2004 11:48 AM
Passion by majic Jul 10, 2004 5:25 AM
*Detail* by fabled construct Jul 10, 2004 2:34 AM
slave by Sin Jul 10, 2004 2:03 AM
... by 4 degrees Jul 10, 2004 12:48 PM
Today I'm 30 - P C by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 11:53 PM
it's all just by mnaz Jul 10, 2004 2:48 AM
! ) by CHILDS Jul 10, 2004 9:35 AM
Cold Comfort (please critique) by violet9ish Jul 9, 2004 10:51 PM
Cornucopia of the mind by Steve Plonk Jul 10, 2004 6:50 AM
thanks by violet9ish Jul 10, 2004 10:50 PM
critique by mtmynd Jul 10, 2004 8:50 PM
thanks by violet9ish Jul 10, 2004 10:50 PM
visually ya took...... by WIREMAN Jul 11, 2004 6:59 AM
Wow by schmoogie Jul 13, 2004 2:06 PM
newvoice message by rain70 Jul 9, 2004 10:23 PM
Remember this... by headburner Jul 9, 2004 11:02 PM
we... by the mingo Jul 10, 2004 5:21 AM
the end of the world as we... ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 9:26 PM
Rock'n'Roll Love by headburner Jul 9, 2004 9:25 PM
Point taken..... by luckystrikes Jul 12, 2004 7:08 AM
love letters to a queen by soluspoeta Jul 9, 2004 9:12 PM
You're not only a poet... by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 9:24 PM
... by soluspoeta Jul 9, 2004 9:27 PM
two households by Glorious Amok Jul 11, 2004 4:30 PM
Farm (A Ready Made) by headburner Jul 9, 2004 9:09 PM
very by rain70 Jul 9, 2004 10:11 PM
Rain! Ma Bro' by headburner Jul 9, 2004 10:16 PM
Dig! by rain70 Jul 9, 2004 10:39 PM
What's the color of air? by headburner Jul 9, 2004 10:55 PM
A curtain, or a curse? PC by weezer Jul 9, 2004 8:40 PM
Hunter-Gatherer by headburner Jul 9, 2004 8:07 PM
even by rain70 Jul 9, 2004 10:13 PM
Tssstststststs.... by headburner Jul 9, 2004 10:23 PM
family by rain70 Jul 9, 2004 10:42 PM
goZen round by mtmynd Jul 9, 2004 3:50 PM
This poem kind of bores me, by beat_fan Jul 9, 2004 7:48 PM
thx, b/f... by mtmynd Jul 10, 2004 8:10 AM
The Step by the mingo Jul 9, 2004 12:59 PM
Wow! by beat_fan Jul 9, 2004 7:54 PM
thanks beat... by the mingo Jul 10, 2004 6:48 AM
Yyyyyyyyyyhaaaahhhhhh.... by headburner Jul 9, 2004 8:52 PM
hell i must not ... by the mingo Jul 10, 2004 5:53 AM
Ya got ta see th'm birds.... by headburner Jul 12, 2004 6:14 PM
Yay hiss!!! by rain70 Jul 9, 2004 10:46 PM
thanks rain ... by the mingo Jul 10, 2004 6:06 AM
Yesterday by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 11:23 AM
... by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 11:49 AM
and it's true by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 11:55 AM
Body Parts erotica (sense you us) thread by judih. Jul 9, 2004 10:02 AM
Let My fingers Dance by judih. Jul 9, 2004 10:03 AM
WOW! by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 10:09 AM
record those steps for us Childs by judih. Jul 9, 2004 10:10 AM
OOOH Yeah... by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 11:17 AM
Mouth by champagne1982 Jul 9, 2004 10:14 AM
Can I help it If I get it? by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 11:44 AM
ahhh by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 10:18 AM
and by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 10:41 AM
the ocean's door by Glorious Amok Jul 9, 2004 3:43 PM
earthen where by judih. Jul 10, 2004 10:29 AM
earthen whore by Glorious Amok Jul 11, 2004 4:20 PM
laughter in a pecan by judih. Jul 11, 2004 7:02 PM
:) by luckystrikes Jul 13, 2004 5:57 AM
lips by mtmynd Jul 9, 2004 5:22 PM
la lips by judih. Jul 10, 2004 10:31 AM
Mutiny ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 9:51 AM
Beauti-ous! by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 9:58 AM
By the way... by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 10:01 AM
I will make it up to you.... by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 10:04 AM
What exactly do you mean by that, Lucky? by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 10:07 AM
Meaning... by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 11:08 AM
The Great Karma - by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 11:18 AM
Indeed it does my friend by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 11:25 AM
"HAHA", he laughed... by CHILDS Jul 9, 2004 11:27 AM
Yup by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 11:35 AM
flameless by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 8:15 AM
Spent Matches by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 8:36 AM
spent by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 8:58 AM
I would, If I could.... by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 9:09 AM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 9:23 AM
Think from today on.... by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 9:35 AM
...... by 4 degrees Jul 9, 2004 9:58 AM
You are extremely creative! by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 10:00 AM
U by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 9:56 AM
On Marlon Brando by voschmid Jul 9, 2004 7:23 AM
It's nice to see... by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 8:49 AM
Poem Left Nearby an Amsterdam Canal [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 8, 2004 11:33 PM
i think... by soluspoeta Jul 9, 2004 9:24 PM
Het zou dom, maar kunnen klinken... by headburner Jul 9, 2004 11:16 PM
dank u maar by Beth Vieira Jul 10, 2004 7:41 AM
Sorry for being daft.... by headburner Jul 12, 2004 5:56 PM
From the outside, your mansion looks so imposing. by Silas Jul 8, 2004 10:47 PM
Silas by Hester Prynne Jul 9, 2004 12:21 AM
thanks again by Silas Jul 9, 2004 6:28 PM
From the inside, it's so inviting by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 8:52 AM
you by Silas Jul 9, 2004 6:30 PM
I dont want to be a bad influence by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 10:35 PM
Passing on by Chipzee Jul 8, 2004 9:48 PM
seagulls by zen_ Jul 8, 2004 10:06 PM
My freedom bell - or, An abstraction in irrelevance. by R D Eckart Jul 8, 2004 4:50 PM
I've never been mean to a kitten. by R D Eckart Jul 8, 2004 4:33 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 8, 2004 4:36 PM
4!!!!! by R D Eckart Jul 8, 2004 4:52 PM
... by 4 degrees Jul 8, 2004 4:55 PM
C U by R D Eckart Jul 8, 2004 4:59 PM
this isn't as bad by zen_ Jul 8, 2004 10:09 PM
Excuse me.. by R D Eckart Jul 19, 2004 6:42 PM
Smack of the Masses by claudiaalick Jul 8, 2004 4:21 PM
Survival - revised( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 8, 2004 8:59 AM
Nice rythym by beat_fan Jul 8, 2004 9:13 AM
Oh yeah... by CHILDS Jul 8, 2004 9:58 AM
Jello and Jazz by luckystrikes Jul 8, 2004 11:13 AM
Today I Rise Up by Createyers Jul 8, 2004 7:57 AM
Just knowing... by luckystrikes Jul 8, 2004 8:01 AM
I'm glad by Createyers Jul 8, 2004 12:47 PM
Didn't know by abcrystcats Jul 8, 2004 8:31 AM
I'm sure by Createyers Jul 8, 2004 10:35 AM
You realized the secret... by CHILDS Jul 8, 2004 9:05 AM
So by Createyers Jul 8, 2004 12:48 PM
Something like that... by CHILDS Jul 8, 2004 11:00 PM
An Atheist Thinks Of God Thinking by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:36 AM
Hi Michael -- by LitKicks Staff Jul 8, 2004 5:51 AM
Sorry by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:55 AM
The Glory Of The Stars by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:35 AM
hehe...you're reading my mind by zen_ Jul 8, 2004 10:15 PM
Red Sunset by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:34 AM
The Problem With The World Today by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:33 AM
that is by Silas Jul 8, 2004 5:52 PM
This is awesome ... by abcrystcats Jul 8, 2004 8:02 PM
Hiding and Pretending by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:32 AM
another by abcrystcats Jul 8, 2004 8:06 PM
Poetry by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:31 AM
The Possibility by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:30 AM
"Im the one who's loved you for years"..... by luckystrikes Jul 8, 2004 6:10 AM
If my life were like your life by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:29 AM
The Pub by MichaelAMichael Jul 8, 2004 5:29 AM
I want to be him by Silas Jul 8, 2004 4:28 AM
Bring it on! by luckystrikes Jul 8, 2004 6:07 AM
sage advice by Silas Jul 8, 2004 2:43 PM
Funny that by Siege Jul 8, 2004 4:03 AM
This Little Adventure by Siege Jul 8, 2004 4:02 AM
RE: Stunt Devils by luckystrikes Jul 8, 2004 6:03 AM
In between neighboring worlds by Hester Prynne Jul 8, 2004 12:17 AM
Yep! by Siege Jul 8, 2004 3:59 AM
Dawn of the New Colour by son_of_sham Jul 7, 2004 9:39 PM
Careful... by luckystrikes Jul 7, 2004 9:50 PM
I'm a fan of Ogden Nash. by doreen peri Jul 7, 2004 8:36 PM
Bravo! by Hester Prynne Jul 7, 2004 9:09 PM
How do you spell war? [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 7:04 PM
I like this by abcrystcats Jul 7, 2004 9:02 PM
If God was your next door neighbor. by R D Eckart Jul 7, 2004 4:57 PM
AHHHHH!!!!!hahahaaaaa (damn!) by mise_en_place Jul 7, 2004 5:34 PM
OH, come ON! by abcrystcats Jul 7, 2004 9:04 PM
Oh yes... by luckystrikes Jul 7, 2004 9:13 PM
Im not getting on that bus again mister! by luckystrikes Jul 7, 2004 10:41 PM
God is the name for Chefs by luckystrikes Jul 7, 2004 9:31 PM
i'd throw rocks through his windows by zen_ Jul 8, 2004 4:40 PM
U by R D Eckart Jul 8, 2004 4:57 PM
as luck has it, by zen_ Jul 8, 2004 9:43 PM
There's a new Momma in town..... by luckystrikes Jul 9, 2004 8:57 AM
Envy by StopMakingSense Jul 7, 2004 3:32 PM
I heard... by mise_en_place Jul 7, 2004 5:37 PM
Interesting ... by abcrystcats Jul 7, 2004 9:10 PM
Story of my life.... by luckystrikes Jul 7, 2004 9:29 PM
World Word War by Hard Smoke Jul 7, 2004 11:54 AM
Word... by Hester Prynne Jul 7, 2004 8:43 PM
A little poem about love ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 7, 2004 10:01 AM
:) by mise_en_place Jul 7, 2004 2:03 PM
What's not to love about this thought? by luckystrikes Jul 7, 2004 5:54 PM
Trying (heavily edited) by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 8:40 AM
Editing by Hard Smoke Jul 7, 2004 12:20 PM
Squirrels by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 8:05 AM
acid love - PC by Mie Jul 7, 2004 7:22 AM
sadhotair (title edit--this is a piece of rubbish) by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 6:06 AM
word swing by doreen peri Jul 7, 2004 6:01 AM
Absolute Genius by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 6:10 AM
genius? lol... nah.... by doreen peri Jul 7, 2004 6:29 AM
Trying (edited ending etc) by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 5:53 AM
michael by doreen peri Jul 7, 2004 6:39 AM
the word by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 7:01 AM
wow... by Mie Jul 7, 2004 7:18 AM
Ode to Death (better title?) pc by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 2:43 AM
one more compliment from me....meant... by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 5:42 AM
wow by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 5:52 AM
when.. by doreen peri Jul 7, 2004 6:41 AM
Dang!!! by abcrystcats Jul 8, 2004 7:43 AM
Couples by Hester Prynne Jul 7, 2004 1:33 AM
snapshot by doreen peri Jul 7, 2004 6:10 AM
i agree by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 6:16 AM
Thank you by Hester Prynne Jul 7, 2004 10:15 AM
No Revolution ( P C ) by CHILDS Jul 6, 2004 11:48 PM
evolution by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 12:50 AM
: ) by CHILDS Jul 7, 2004 9:43 AM
Im not confused.... by mise_en_place Jul 7, 2004 1:55 PM
So full of rage... by CHILDS Jul 7, 2004 11:04 PM
Regression Under the Spell (Please Critique) by Situationist Jul 6, 2004 11:40 PM
this poem/song by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 12:43 AM
Thanks for the help...however... by Situationist Jul 7, 2004 1:47 AM
my small view by MichaelAMichael Jul 7, 2004 9:21 AM
Fruit flies by Chipzee Jul 6, 2004 11:13 PM
summer night by Chipzee Jul 6, 2004 10:59 PM
in retrospect by SLucia Jul 6, 2004 8:17 PM
I know whatcha mean..... by luckystrikes Jul 6, 2004 8:32 PM
It breathes the sea [pc] by Beth Vieira Jul 6, 2004 5:32 PM
quite beautiful by judih. Jul 6, 2004 7:56 PM
Echos from a Kitchen by Uncle B Jul 6, 2004 4:57 PM
cause # 133 (hell) by rain70 Jul 6, 2004 3:11 PM
It's my treat by Hester Prynne Jul 6, 2004 2:54 PM
nice.. by mnaz Jul 7, 2004 12:47 AM
Drink up ladies by Chipzee Jul 6, 2004 7:24 AM
Seldom Cared by majic Jul 6, 2004 6:40 AM
Linear (PC) by beat_fan Jul 5, 2004 6:50 PM
I think... by CHILDS Jul 5, 2004 11:13 PM
linear by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 12:55 AM
re:linear by beat_fan Jul 8, 2004 9:08 AM
Spirit-Walk ( P C ) by CHILDS74 Jul 5, 2004 1:40 PM
Fellow Spirit Walker by mise_en_place Jul 5, 2004 8:04 PM
Thanks A Lot... by CHILDS Jul 5, 2004 10:39 PM
I wish... by mise_en_place Jul 5, 2004 10:44 PM
I never did either... by CHILDS Jul 5, 2004 11:04 PM
Hey! by CHILDS Jul 5, 2004 11:06 PM
word choice by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 12:59 AM
I don't write by CHILDS Jul 7, 2004 9:45 AM
quixotic by 4 degrees Jul 5, 2004 7:47 AM
waking up by zen_ Jul 5, 2004 8:43 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 5, 2004 10:09 PM
reminds by Createyers Jul 6, 2004 6:46 AM
Waking from a long fight by Chipzee Jul 5, 2004 7:39 AM
Ode to "The Editor" by Sean McGahey Jul 5, 2004 5:05 AM
Whilst at lunch I.. by Sean McGahey Jul 5, 2004 5:03 AM
More Than I Appear To Be by majic Jul 5, 2004 1:12 AM
..... by 4 degrees Jul 5, 2004 5:45 AM
thank you by majic Jul 5, 2004 6:11 AM
yes, by 4 degrees Jul 5, 2004 7:19 AM
unable to be pleased by Brage Jul 5, 2004 1:02 AM
betting on horses (old one) by Brage Jul 5, 2004 1:01 AM
say Hello to Stanley (for Marlon Brando) by Silas Jul 4, 2004 11:01 PM
cool by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:06 PM
Hmm by Silas Jul 5, 2004 12:03 AM
Extreme Brando fan! by mise_en_place Jul 5, 2004 8:03 PM
Will do by Silas Jul 5, 2004 8:06 PM
Madame Butterfly by mise_en_place Jul 5, 2004 8:08 PM
is that the one by Silas Jul 5, 2004 9:53 PM
Well, Madame M is.... by mise_en_place Jul 5, 2004 10:46 PM
Role model by Chipzee Jul 4, 2004 9:26 PM
style by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:09 PM
It's very good by CHILDS74 Jul 4, 2004 11:14 PM
umm critique please by Chipzee Jul 4, 2004 9:13 PM
LOG by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:11 PM
choppy as hell by lividlips Jul 4, 2004 8:08 PM
throw me by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:16 PM
a return to litkicks... by jessa_lynne Jul 4, 2004 8:08 PM
This is... by CHILDS74 Jul 4, 2004 11:16 PM
thank you very much by jessa_lynne Jul 5, 2004 12:26 AM
vulnerable by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:21 PM
thank you by jessa_lynne Jul 4, 2004 11:34 PM
brought back by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:54 PM
thank you by jessa_lynne Jul 5, 2004 12:24 AM
I think.... by Mie Jul 6, 2004 6:42 AM
... by Mie Jul 6, 2004 6:44 AM
Soliloquy for Untold Situations by beatvibe Jul 4, 2004 1:01 PM
endorphin looking for frontal lobe by judih. Jul 4, 2004 8:03 PM
rush by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:38 PM
Friday 02 July by zen_ Jul 3, 2004 8:53 PM
well by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:33 PM
hosta= by zen_ Jul 5, 2004 8:20 PM
3:24 am 03 July 04 (scanning drive ... current process) by zen_ Jul 3, 2004 8:48 PM
scanning by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:30 PM
thank you Beth Viera by zen_ Jul 5, 2004 8:27 PM
I like by Beth Vieira Jul 5, 2004 8:29 PM
Catatonic Corundum Corvette!! ( please critique ) by CHILDS74 Jul 3, 2004 8:41 PM
scrambling by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:24 PM
No revelations by CHILDS74 Jul 4, 2004 11:38 PM
maybe by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:42 PM
Yes, I see by CHILDS74 Jul 5, 2004 12:04 AM
cat scan by Beth Vieira Jul 5, 2004 12:08 AM
Nope by CHILDS74 Jul 5, 2004 12:09 AM
The Fishing Derby by intangible goods Jul 3, 2004 1:41 PM
intangible by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:27 PM
Clarity by intangible goods Jul 5, 2004 2:05 PM
Gauguin’s Chair by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 1:13 PM
Hm by fabled construct Jul 3, 2004 2:18 PM
Van Gogh's POV by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 3:22 PM
this by Sylph Jul 3, 2004 7:38 PM
This poem shows a strong and clear by Zlatko Waterman Jul 4, 2004 3:54 PM
thanks for the comments by Beth Vieira Jul 4, 2004 11:03 PM
Paulk and Vincent by Brage Jul 5, 2004 2:37 AM
Amsterdam by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 1:06 AM
one of the better cities by Brage Jul 8, 2004 12:59 AM
Let Me Tell Ya... by CHILDS74 Jul 3, 2004 10:05 AM
Eternal Meow (please critique) by CHILDS74 Jul 3, 2004 10:00 AM
Hah! this is great! by abcrystcats Jul 3, 2004 10:13 AM
Cat lovers rule! by CHILDS74 Jul 3, 2004 10:19 AM
I tawt I taw a by abcrystcats Jul 3, 2004 12:20 PM
Buddha by Beth Vieira Jul 7, 2004 1:10 AM
HA HA ! ) by CHILDS Jul 7, 2004 9:47 AM
visitor by mtmynd Jul 3, 2004 8:31 AM
guest by judih. Jul 3, 2004 9:08 AM
live by mtmynd Jul 3, 2004 9:14 AM
Sadness overwhelming by Chipzee Jul 3, 2004 7:46 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 2:07 PM
The Crow by the mingo Jul 3, 2004 6:07 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 2:04 PM
... by the mingo Jul 4, 2004 9:10 AM
nice by Sylph Jul 3, 2004 7:22 PM
...- by the mingo Jul 4, 2004 9:11 AM
Vacancies (PC) by fabled construct Jul 3, 2004 3:11 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 2:01 PM
Thanks by fabled construct Jul 3, 2004 2:09 PM
... by pottygok Jul 7, 2004 7:19 AM
Thanks pottygok by fabled construct Jul 7, 2004 10:20 AM
revision by fabled construct Jul 12, 2004 11:15 AM
final image... by pottygok Jul 14, 2004 11:19 AM
the face by Brage Jul 3, 2004 1:41 AM
... by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 1:57 PM
arrigatto by Brage Jul 4, 2004 2:34 AM
I like this by beat_fan Jul 5, 2004 6:55 PM
boy by 4 degrees Jul 2, 2004 10:59 PM
made me smile by Sylph Jul 3, 2004 7:52 PM
They cry dove by Sylph Jul 2, 2004 9:07 PM
who by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 9:15 PM
glad by Sylph Jul 2, 2004 9:37 PM
Overtones (please critique) by CHILDS74 Jul 2, 2004 9:07 PM
very cool by mise_en_place Jul 2, 2004 9:15 PM
Hey! by CHILDS74 Jul 2, 2004 9:59 PM
music by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 9:19 PM
Thanks Beth - by CHILDS74 Jul 2, 2004 9:56 PM
yes by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 1:37 PM
: ) by CHILDS74 Jul 3, 2004 8:18 PM
Writers of Rhytoric... (please critique) by CHILDS74 Jul 2, 2004 8:50 PM
rhetoric by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 9:06 PM
I Understand - by CHILDS74 Jul 2, 2004 9:10 PM
In the Small Orb of One Particular Tear by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 8:36 PM
This is intense by Hester Prynne Jul 3, 2004 12:06 AM
too much pathos maybe? by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 12:11 AM
Beth ... by abcrystcats Jul 3, 2004 10:06 AM
great reading! by Beth Vieira Jul 3, 2004 1:36 PM
confrontation by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 2:51 PM
like rivers by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 6:28 PM
correction made... by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 7:04 PM
wasn't meanin by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 7:27 PM
it's cool... by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 7:39 PM
(it morphed into a rhyme) by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 2:00 PM
obviously by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 2:05 PM
yes... by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 2:17 PM
indeed by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 2:18 PM
you too? by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 2:35 PM
that was one of those poems by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 3:09 PM
hey Bennie by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 7:43 PM
rhyme blind by judih. Jul 2, 2004 7:44 PM
hah... yea. by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 7:46 PM
sleeping with birds by judih. Jul 2, 2004 7:52 PM
Now and Again. by Rudra Jul 2, 2004 12:02 PM
hm by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 12:11 PM
i really by Lightswitch Jul 2, 2004 4:02 PM
me too! by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 6:33 PM
thanks for reading, everyone-- by Rudra Jul 17, 2004 7:05 PM
Shame by Chipzee Jul 2, 2004 11:06 AM
haiku-like by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 11:54 AM
Wind's Fingers (pc) by champagne1982 Jul 2, 2004 10:43 AM
like mountain and rivers by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:49 AM
of maidens and songs by champagne1982 Jul 2, 2004 11:00 AM
... by Createyers Jul 2, 2004 11:04 AM
great language by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 11:29 AM
I like the way by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 2:47 PM
... by pottygok Jul 6, 2004 7:45 AM
It's a beautiful day in the neighborhood by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:24 AM
is this too weird to comment on? by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 12:43 PM
personal reaction (edited) by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 12:47 PM
got no rhythm by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 12:52 PM
yeah, i was thinking about suggesting to you by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 1:04 PM
The title by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 12:56 PM
the title by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 1:10 PM
yes by mtmynd Jul 2, 2004 1:14 PM
No biggie though..... by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 1:17 PM
I didn't really by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 1:29 PM
I've just re-read it by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 1:31 PM
I agree by abcrystcats Jul 2, 2004 5:17 PM
excellent criticisms by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 5:22 PM
sorry, I ... by abcrystcats Jul 2, 2004 5:36 PM
I'm thrilled by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 5:43 PM
"I took the one less traveled by......" by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 7:37 PM
Burned by Chipzee Jul 2, 2004 8:56 AM
tensing by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:20 AM
Sometimes/Somepeople.. by Createyers Jul 2, 2004 8:24 AM
great lines by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 8:33 AM
lines by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:28 AM
... by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 12:24 PM
In Response To Everyone Who Replied by Createyers Jul 6, 2004 6:38 AM
mirror, broken (pc) by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 8:09 AM
mirth by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 10:42 AM
thank you for the response by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 11:32 AM
ellipsis by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 11:52 AM
that makes sense by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 12:06 PM
I don't really like that word either: mirth by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 12:19 PM
objections to "mirth" (also for beth) by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 1:11 PM
who says by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 1:17 PM
miscommunication by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 1:22 PM
it was by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 1:25 PM
no it wasn't by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 1:27 PM
now you're by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 1:34 PM
Mirth is just... by Bennie Jul 2, 2004 1:20 PM
there you go by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 1:24 PM
well, I like this by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 12:37 PM
thank you, hester by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 1:17 PM
"a shrill red cry" by Rudra Jul 19, 2004 8:33 AM
The Talent You Need by itanjo Jul 2, 2004 5:14 AM
ha! by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 6:25 AM
The lure of the limerick by champagne1982 Jul 2, 2004 11:05 AM
Untitled by Brage Jul 2, 2004 2:59 AM
hm by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 6:28 AM
thank you by Brage Jul 2, 2004 10:55 AM
sound by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 11:23 AM
huh by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 11:37 AM
Sound would be by Brage Jul 2, 2004 12:11 PM
knirk by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 12:33 PM
yes, a sound (to ellipsis) by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 12:02 PM
16 cans of red stripe later (critic please) by joecunio Jul 2, 2004 2:05 AM
critique by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 8:29 AM
I think by Createyers Jul 2, 2004 11:11 AM
(Ardently, Passionately, Technicolor) by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 1:04 AM
full moon bliss by judih. Jul 2, 2004 1:24 AM
I was hoping.... by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 1:38 PM
couldn't keep me away, hester by judih. Jul 2, 2004 7:35 PM
hope by ellipsis Jul 2, 2004 8:12 AM
pessimism by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 1:40 PM
technicolor by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 1:00 PM
I wanted it by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 1:10 PM
going going gone by Chipzee Jul 1, 2004 10:01 PM
"V" or "I" ( the interpretation dillema) by Hips Like Marilyn Jul 1, 2004 9:59 PM
I am the figurehead by Chipzee Jul 1, 2004 9:45 PM
Time Of My Life ( P C ) by CHILDS74 Jul 1, 2004 8:27 PM
... by pottygok Jul 7, 2004 6:59 AM
and by jamelah Jul 8, 2004 1:52 PM
memories by LankyAl Jul 1, 2004 8:18 PM
Riding Home (Comments thoroughly welcome) by beat_fan Jul 1, 2004 2:25 PM
Home is where... you know. by CHILDS74 Jul 1, 2004 10:22 PM


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