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Board Archive  •  Poetry  •  June 2004
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This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


What is love? by Chipzee Jun 30, 2004 7:10 AM
Interesting by beat_fan Jun 30, 2004 10:33 AM
not sure by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:49 AM
Love is by Beth Vieira Jun 30, 2004 2:55 PM
not enough people listen to sonic youth by malign Jun 30, 2004 12:52 AM
I think by Silas Jun 30, 2004 12:58 AM
And there you have it by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:50 AM
it ought to be a haiku by Beth Vieira Jun 30, 2004 2:52 PM
Stormy weather by Chipzee Jun 30, 2004 9:58 PM
frail reality by Silas Jun 30, 2004 12:14 AM
... by Jazz Messiah Jun 30, 2004 6:43 AM
reply by malign Jun 30, 2004 11:12 AM
Philosophical and Honest by beat_fan Jun 30, 2004 2:16 PM
frail reality by Beth Vieira Jun 30, 2004 2:50 PM
Re do by Silas Jun 30, 2004 11:51 PM
: ) by Jazz Messiah Jul 1, 2004 1:28 AM
Frail reality by Hester Prynne Jul 2, 2004 6:52 PM
back, not back (PC) by Knip Jun 29, 2004 11:54 PM
just a few little suggestions by ellipsis Jun 30, 2004 9:02 AM
back by Beth Vieira Jun 30, 2004 2:45 PM
I think it's a great idea by luckystrikes Jul 1, 2004 6:02 PM
Watch Your Step ( P C ) by CHILDS74 Jun 29, 2004 10:49 PM
built in 1860 by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 11:05 PM
E.E.M. by CHILDS74 Jun 29, 2004 11:16 PM
apology accepted by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:28 AM
When work becomes play becomes life by Chipzee Jun 29, 2004 9:02 PM
when work becomes play becomes life by shield is held Jun 29, 2004 10:32 PM
welcome to Litkicks by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 10:40 PM
Thanks for by Chipzee Jun 30, 2004 7:00 AM
interesting technique by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 10:38 PM
I intentionally broke out of the by Chipzee Jun 30, 2004 6:59 AM
why by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:30 AM
Of course by Chipzee Jun 30, 2004 10:01 PM
at the risk of beating a horse to death by zen_ Jul 1, 2004 1:02 AM
modify this sentence by doreen peri Jun 29, 2004 8:53 PM
apparently, you've been taking corporate personality tests again~ by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 10:20 PM
the last time.. by doreen peri Jun 30, 2004 6:56 AM
corporate personality? by Mie Jun 30, 2004 7:00 AM
is the test they give you when applying for a job by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:35 AM
I failed one o'those at TGIF by Mie Jun 30, 2004 1:24 PM
"The Corporation" is a movie by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:38 AM
if i was by Silas Jul 1, 2004 12:05 AM
CHAOS by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 8:19 PM
nice. by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 10:43 PM
thanks zen by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 2:00 PM
Gorgeous by abcrystcats Jul 2, 2004 5:25 PM
Along a busy street. by R D Eckart Jun 29, 2004 5:21 PM
lonely man by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 8:12 PM
Cliff dream (feedback welcome) by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 4:44 PM
gelatinous! by Victor Abruzzi Jun 29, 2004 5:44 PM
well, i really dig this by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 5:55 PM
exactly by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 6:01 PM
wow! by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 6:18 PM
effective by Mie Jun 30, 2004 6:57 AM
thanks for all your comments by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 2:08 PM
"within this watery world I wish to die..." by abcrystcats Jul 2, 2004 5:03 PM
good criticisms by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 5:12 PM
Ahhh ... by abcrystcats Jul 2, 2004 5:27 PM
Demonstration of the theorem by Victor Abruzzi Jun 29, 2004 3:31 PM
sternum by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 4:50 PM
yes Beth, by Victor Abruzzi Jun 29, 2004 5:30 PM
direct experience by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 6:23 PM
Hi Zen, by Victor Abruzzi Jun 29, 2004 6:57 PM
once knew a man by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 10:46 PM
Alcoholic Father with Baby Blues by Jazz Messiah Jun 29, 2004 1:00 PM
blues by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 4:56 PM
Arrival (PC) by Jazz Messiah Jun 29, 2004 12:54 PM
rhyme by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 5:02 PM
Echo of Hope (PC!!!!) by Mie Jun 29, 2004 12:36 PM
the sun is too alive by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 5:06 PM
:) by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 5:40 PM
is there an echo in here-- by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 5:39 PM
...edit pending by Mie Jun 29, 2004 8:43 PM
Echo - take two by Mie Jun 30, 2004 6:51 AM
bravo by zen_ Jun 30, 2004 11:45 AM
Doublecrossing Jordan by Honus Jun 29, 2004 10:14 AM
crossing Jordan by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 5:16 PM
FLOATING (PC) by CHILDS74 Jun 28, 2004 11:01 PM
in the mirror by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 11:18 PM
... by Mie Jun 29, 2004 8:39 AM
RE!Mie by CHILDS74 Jun 29, 2004 8:44 AM
purple light by Beth Vieira Jun 29, 2004 5:21 PM
re:purple light by CHILDS74 Jun 29, 2004 9:43 PM
You hollow me with glances by Beth Vieira Jun 28, 2004 10:55 PM
Not Hollow by CHILDS74 Jun 28, 2004 11:08 PM
This is an excellent voice by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 6:09 PM
I love this ... by abcrystcats Jun 29, 2004 9:34 PM
and ... by abcrystcats Jun 29, 2004 9:36 PM
abcrystcats by Beth Vieira Jul 2, 2004 12:40 PM
Welcome, and ... by abcrystcats Jul 2, 2004 4:25 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 28, 2004 10:01 PM
...(another set of dots)... by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 11:10 PM
... by indian`double`pink Jun 29, 2004 9:19 AM
.------.-------. by judih. Jun 29, 2004 9:44 AM
judih by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 6:35 PM
Shh...my darling by mise_en_place Jun 28, 2004 7:54 PM
Thats SO RAVEN! by luckystrikes Jun 28, 2004 8:04 PM
CK by luckystrikes Jun 28, 2004 8:07 PM
Indigo Island by balsa Jun 28, 2004 3:03 PM
... and also double check for repetitions by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 8:57 PM
Eye Waves Open Sea by balsa Jun 28, 2004 1:55 PM
You Deserve More by LadyLazurus3 Jun 28, 2004 1:08 PM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:18 PM
Anti-Portrait by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 12:28 PM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:24 PM
I'm trying to read this by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 11:41 PM
The Clock Tower is Finished by Scone_Dog Jun 28, 2004 12:15 PM
dog has wolves in her jeans by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:27 PM
Bad Kitty by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 9:43 AM
but in this case i think there's like a part 2 by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 9:46 AM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:38 PM
no can do by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 8:48 PM
meow by 4 degrees Jun 28, 2004 10:05 PM
!^.^! by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 11:23 PM
...... by 4 degrees Jun 29, 2004 8:46 AM
i'm full of shit too by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 5:00 PM
When a lover leaves. (Am I getting better at writting poetry?) by Chipzee Jun 28, 2004 9:25 AM
(hehe) I'd have to say yes by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 9:51 AM
p.s. by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 9:58 AM
... by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:34 PM
This is by Silas Jun 29, 2004 2:57 AM
Beer and Eggs by soyblood Jun 28, 2004 8:21 AM
Analysis by JaxonMayerick Jun 28, 2004 8:40 AM
beer and analysis by soyblood Jun 28, 2004 9:07 AM
man on the corner by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:48 PM
Magic Wolves by the mingo Jun 28, 2004 3:05 AM
silver bullets by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:45 PM
slivers of silver by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 11:26 PM
Here's my throat by Silas Jun 28, 2004 12:33 AM
i really like this poem. by zen_ Jun 28, 2004 8:20 AM
Not your throat by mise_en_place Jun 28, 2004 7:27 PM
not your throat? by balsa Jun 28, 2004 7:53 PM
not your throat? by shield is held Jun 29, 2004 10:44 PM
comments reflected upon by Silas Jun 28, 2004 9:58 PM
strong but.. by Mie Jun 29, 2004 8:42 AM
grudgingly (-hehe-) I agree by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 10:56 PM
Circumlocution by Lightswitch Jun 27, 2004 11:06 PM
gorged by 4 degrees Jun 27, 2004 9:12 PM
the things we do by zen_ Jun 27, 2004 10:25 PM
Temporary by Chipzee Jun 28, 2004 9:33 AM
I bought a kite this weekend by zen_ Jun 29, 2004 6:40 PM
if you can't love by indian`double`pink Jun 27, 2004 10:41 AM
Friday Night (aka: He Touched Me...There Goes Another Marriage) by zen_ Jun 27, 2004 9:11 AM
zen by judih. Jun 27, 2004 7:59 PM
no, I mean to write "frest" by zen_ Jun 27, 2004 10:22 PM
Trying to fall asleep by Chipzee Jun 27, 2004 8:09 AM
I really like this, I admit with a susurrous sigh, by zen_ Jun 27, 2004 11:29 PM
selfmade prophet by michaelsferrell Jun 27, 2004 2:34 AM
Beauti-ous! by mise_en_place Jun 28, 2004 7:29 PM
pleasure head seeds by michaelsferrell Jun 27, 2004 1:38 AM
#3 by the mingo Jun 27, 2004 1:17 AM
Stagnant (Ode to Writer's Block) critique me by CHILDS74 Jun 26, 2004 8:59 PM
Abrasions by JaxonMayerick Jun 26, 2004 4:42 PM
yo, jaxon by violet9ish Jun 28, 2004 10:07 PM
Zero isn't nothing pc by Beth Vieira Jun 26, 2004 3:23 PM
... by pottygok Jun 27, 2004 5:50 AM
"so maybe i could call you?" by SLucia Jun 26, 2004 12:59 PM
dear sLucia, by violet9ish Jun 26, 2004 6:02 PM
round 2: by SLucia Jun 27, 2004 5:07 PM
there's something by violet9ish Jun 27, 2004 7:27 PM
round 3 by SLucia Jun 27, 2004 8:37 PM
ROUND 3!!! I LOVE THIS! by mise_en_place Jun 28, 2004 8:01 PM
slick by violet9ish Jun 28, 2004 10:01 PM
If rain covered all by Chipzee Jun 26, 2004 9:37 AM
Good poem by JaxonMayerick Jun 26, 2004 4:55 PM
Thankyou by Chipzee Jun 27, 2004 7:51 AM
Goggles by Chipzee Jun 26, 2004 7:58 AM
The Hunters by the mingo Jun 26, 2004 3:06 AM
your poem by THEUSURPER Jun 26, 2004 5:38 AM
Carry an Air of Obligatory Reason by LadyLazurus3 Jun 26, 2004 1:15 AM
poem by THEUSURPER Jun 26, 2004 5:40 AM
floors #666.033 by michaelsferrell Jun 25, 2004 11:34 PM
what is this poem about? by THEUSURPER Jun 26, 2004 5:42 AM
fists and hip by michaelsferrell Jun 25, 2004 11:21 PM
love in the time of spaceships (PLEASE critique) by violet9ish Jun 25, 2004 10:06 PM
i don't think it works by Knip Jun 25, 2004 10:13 PM
could you tell me by violet9ish Jun 25, 2004 10:20 PM
sure by Knip Jun 25, 2004 10:27 PM
Yes, Neil Armstrong by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 10:20 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:43 PM
the title alone was inspiring... by purple shower Jun 26, 2004 5:22 AM
good by THEUSURPER Jun 26, 2004 5:55 AM
love in the time of spaceships (NEW VERSION...PC) by violet9ish Jun 26, 2004 5:51 PM
on that hill by the library by Crackpot Jenkins Jun 25, 2004 8:02 PM
hey CJ ... by the mingo Jun 26, 2004 2:38 AM
MUSELESS by seajay1221 Jun 25, 2004 6:22 PM
Untamed Muse and Spun Sugar Magick by luckystrikes Jun 25, 2004 7:23 PM
more people, myself included, by THEUSURPER Jun 26, 2004 5:51 AM
you by Mie Jun 28, 2004 6:58 AM
Then you are bound to miss the best part by mise_en_place Jun 28, 2004 7:47 PM
steel blue pc by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 4:23 PM
yes, it works by Lightning Rod Jun 25, 2004 5:19 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 6:26 PM
so it was by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 6:34 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 6:42 PM
green salt (revision) by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 8:41 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 9:44 PM
well, I'll be by Beth Vieira Jun 25, 2004 9:57 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 10:18 PM
Sanctuary by mise_en_place Jun 25, 2004 2:51 PM
those last five lines ... by the mingo Jun 25, 2004 4:50 PM
Last Kiss by mise_en_place Jun 25, 2004 5:51 PM
by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 10:50 AM
you didn't place PC in your subject line by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 1:54 PM
thank you, by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 2:02 PM
you're very welcome by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:12 PM
man! by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 2:20 PM
well.. by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:31 PM
well, well... by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 2:36 PM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 2:39 PM
you don't by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 2:46 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 7:24 PM
never by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 2:32 PM
heh by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:35 PM
... by 4 degrees Jun 25, 2004 2:37 PM
Glad to see by zen_ Jun 27, 2004 9:01 AM
Panic: waking up with an all consuming hangover by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 7:29 AM
Analysis by JaxonMayerick Jun 25, 2004 9:38 AM
analysis of analysis by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 10:27 AM
"most surrealist poems (at least by less-experienced poets) tend to be rubbish" by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 10:31 AM
... by JaxonMayerick Jun 26, 2004 1:48 PM
i have an odd reaction to this by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:00 PM
i suppose that is a bit muddy by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 2:14 PM
ahhh by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:19 PM
i think that by firsty Jun 25, 2004 2:17 PM
i think my problem is by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:21 PM
just wait by firsty Jun 25, 2004 2:23 PM
huh by ellipsis Jun 25, 2004 2:25 PM
thanks by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 2:48 PM
Target by the mingo Jun 25, 2004 1:05 AM
mr mingo by Sylph Jun 25, 2004 6:55 AM
nice to ... by the mingo Jun 25, 2004 4:44 PM
moths like us by Silas Jun 24, 2004 10:58 PM
don't stare by Sylph Jun 25, 2004 6:53 AM
hmmm by Silas Jun 25, 2004 7:51 PM
SUNGRAZING ( P C ) by nightbird Jun 24, 2004 10:49 PM
i don't like to critique by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 5:52 AM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 12:17 PM
The Storm Before the Storm by Sylph Jun 24, 2004 9:57 PM
our restlessness by Silas Jun 24, 2004 10:44 PM
Hey Si by Sylph Jun 25, 2004 6:47 AM
The Last Submission by smArtAttack Jun 24, 2004 9:34 PM
if you put that gun in your mouth, I'll kill you by Lightning Rod Jun 25, 2004 5:27 AM
this was a great read by Bennie Jun 25, 2004 5:47 AM
An Excuse For Writer's Block by soyblood Jun 24, 2004 8:20 PM
sprinting towards destiny by seajay1221 Jun 24, 2004 8:01 PM
rock on by Crackpot Jenkins Jun 25, 2004 8:34 PM
rick rubin (pc) by slog Jun 24, 2004 7:46 PM
Dont compromise by Chipzee Jun 26, 2004 7:51 AM
i never by slog Jun 26, 2004 9:58 AM
Some Other Landscape PC by Beth Vieira Jun 24, 2004 5:42 PM
point lobos by Knip Jun 24, 2004 7:33 PM
Cleaning my closet by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 3:14 PM
Not A Name by LadyLazurus3 Jun 24, 2004 3:03 PM
cloud: ode to a hazy self by seajay1221 Jun 24, 2004 11:26 AM
Secrets by the mingo Jun 24, 2004 9:59 AM
Park by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 9:50 AM
Analysis by JaxonMayerick Jun 24, 2004 12:51 PM
Thankyou by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 1:15 PM
possibly by zen_ Jun 24, 2004 1:22 PM
Streetlamp Cameo - Any criticism welcome by Jazz Messiah Jun 24, 2004 7:53 AM
Analysis by JaxonMayerick Jun 24, 2004 9:18 AM
fun by Knip Jun 24, 2004 7:40 PM
then by hiawasee Jun 23, 2004 9:09 PM
keeping the rain out by SLucia Jun 23, 2004 8:31 PM
shallow soul foul fly going up the river, brother (PC) by slog Jun 23, 2004 8:05 PM
v2 (PC) by slog Jun 23, 2004 8:12 PM
re: by Arcadia Jun 24, 2004 11:20 AM
i like by Knip Jun 24, 2004 7:36 PM
yeah by slog Jun 24, 2004 7:44 PM
Why is it you don’t like this poetry? (PC) by slog Jun 23, 2004 8:04 PM
Skin Diving pc by Beth Vieira Jun 23, 2004 7:01 PM
Analysis by JaxonMayerick Jun 24, 2004 9:37 AM
wow by Beth Vieira Jun 24, 2004 4:37 PM
Heart by the mingo Jun 23, 2004 6:20 PM
Mingo.... by Hester Prynne Jun 24, 2004 12:05 AM
thanks hest ... by the mingo Jun 24, 2004 9:58 AM
ready to go on by Kristopher Jun 23, 2004 4:37 PM
tomato by doreen peri Jun 23, 2004 1:23 PM
google image search: unenhanced tomato by jamelah Jun 23, 2004 4:15 PM
yikes! by doreen peri Jun 23, 2004 5:14 PM
just a by jamelah Jun 24, 2004 6:24 AM
hey, that's cute! by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 10:37 PM
She has a baby, but it ain't mine by Dead burroughs Jun 23, 2004 11:12 AM
The Projectionist by betabandido Jun 23, 2004 8:10 AM
First kiss. by Chipzee Jun 23, 2004 7:09 AM
..... by 4 degrees Jun 23, 2004 6:02 PM
.................................more dots than you.................. by Chipzee Jun 23, 2004 6:07 PM
lemons by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 6:37 PM
.... by 4 degrees Jun 23, 2004 6:52 PM
globes by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 7:11 PM
...........offended by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 9:35 AM
sorry by zen_ Jun 24, 2004 12:39 PM
Ahah by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 12:49 PM
well, by zen_ Jun 24, 2004 12:59 PM
Never a hard feeling shall be juiced onto another by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 1:23 PM
it seems by zen_ Jun 24, 2004 1:33 PM
the kiss by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 7:17 PM
Well said by Chipzee Jun 24, 2004 9:40 AM
regardless by zen_ Jun 24, 2004 12:56 PM
Under Floorboard Hearts by LadyLazurus3 Jun 23, 2004 12:51 AM
soul with a white wine sauce by Silas Jun 22, 2004 11:19 PM
O.K. ONE MORE by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 8:53 PM
heeeere's another one!!! ( P C ) by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 8:00 PM
O My Friend(PC) by rube lindale Jun 22, 2004 7:47 PM
Ah, but a few queries(PC) by rube lindale Jun 22, 2004 7:30 PM
... by pottygok Jun 23, 2004 12:16 PM
Hey Potty by nightbird Jun 23, 2004 8:45 PM
... by pottygok Jun 24, 2004 7:22 AM
ah hem by rube lindale Jun 24, 2004 7:08 PM
OK - by nightbird Jun 24, 2004 8:47 PM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 1:03 AM
yes, potty I understand - by nightbird Jun 25, 2004 10:21 AM
... by pottygok Jun 25, 2004 11:42 AM
Hmm... by nightbird Jun 26, 2004 8:23 PM
Not a poem, really ...- by abcrystcats Jun 22, 2004 6:56 PM
... by pottygok Jun 22, 2004 10:14 PM
good grief by abcrystcats Jun 23, 2004 7:35 AM
I'll be sure by violet9ish Jun 23, 2004 6:52 PM
lesson learned by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 10:20 PM
thank you by abcrystcats Jun 24, 2004 7:24 AM
i'm assuming by zen_ Jun 24, 2004 12:44 PM
The town where I live. by R D Eckart Jun 22, 2004 6:29 PM
Indignant blood by Hester Prynne Jun 22, 2004 2:30 PM
Good by abcrystcats Jun 22, 2004 7:04 PM
The Lofted Arc (or 'This is a sick-up') by Siege Jun 22, 2004 7:48 AM
i like by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 10:39 PM
Flirtation on a couch by Chipzee Jun 22, 2004 5:42 AM
milton bradley by kairo Jun 22, 2004 6:59 PM
I just don't understand your comments motives. by Chipzee Jun 22, 2004 8:38 PM
hmmm, this "writer" is torn by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 10:28 PM
Inevitable by the mingo Jun 22, 2004 4:57 AM
New Version: When I Think of Heartbreak (PC) by violet9ish Jun 21, 2004 10:59 PM
... by pottygok Jun 22, 2004 4:50 PM
wow! by violet9ish Jun 22, 2004 7:01 PM
Overall, this is better by abcrystcats Jun 22, 2004 6:46 PM
... by pottygok Jun 22, 2004 10:00 PM
yes, you have it. by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 10:32 PM
The Fate of Dreams by Lightning Rod Jun 21, 2004 7:35 PM
Like Your Rhymes by abcrystcats Jun 22, 2004 7:15 PM
poet's rules by Lightning Rod Jun 23, 2004 12:26 AM
Yes, me too by abcrystcats Jun 24, 2004 7:28 AM
forgery by jamelah Jun 21, 2004 4:24 PM
a kiss is negation by in_extremis Jun 21, 2004 4:47 PM
okay by jamelah Jun 21, 2004 7:15 PM
sizzzzzzzzzzz... by the mingo Jun 21, 2004 5:38 PM
hi there by jamelah Jun 21, 2004 7:22 PM
... i'm dealing ... by the mingo Jun 22, 2004 4:53 AM
this is a by Lightning Rod Jun 21, 2004 7:46 PM
damn girl! by doreen peri Jun 21, 2004 7:51 PM
hey jamelah by violet9ish Jun 21, 2004 11:13 PM
autumn heights by in_extremis Jun 21, 2004 4:22 PM
well, in_ex by jamelah Jun 21, 2004 4:48 PM
actually, upon further reflection, by jamelah Jun 21, 2004 6:53 PM
trope (PC) by slog Jun 21, 2004 3:51 PM
hey slog by in_extremis Jun 21, 2004 4:32 PM
thanks by slog Jun 21, 2004 6:37 PM
You'll Be Alright by LadyLazurus3 Jun 21, 2004 2:41 PM
well by in_extremis Jun 21, 2004 4:52 PM
well..... by LadyLazurus3 Jun 21, 2004 10:54 PM
hop on board the corpse train by totenkopf Jun 21, 2004 2:05 PM
i think by in_extremis Jun 21, 2004 4:35 PM
Seahorse pc by Beth Vieira Jun 21, 2004 12:59 PM
dear beth by violet9ish Jun 21, 2004 11:21 PM
thanks by Beth Vieira Jun 22, 2004 11:29 AM
you are totally by violet9ish Jun 23, 2004 6:53 PM
Ignore this by Chipzee Jun 21, 2004 7:42 AM
Meet me at the dusk of my eternity by Chipzee Jun 21, 2004 7:40 AM
I am all things by Siege Jun 21, 2004 7:34 AM
A Little Boat by Siege Jun 21, 2004 7:33 AM
Tangented Badly (Climbing the Greasy Pole) by Siege Jun 21, 2004 7:24 AM
hey Siege.... by Hester Prynne Jun 21, 2004 12:08 PM
Squirrels in my house by Chipzee Jun 21, 2004 7:16 AM
Boylston Street Station by Jukebox Graduate Jun 21, 2004 6:43 AM
azdel by waitress Jun 21, 2004 6:01 AM
sasled by waitress Jun 21, 2004 6:13 AM
Bow Chica BoW WOW. Common, check it out! by Harry Jun 21, 2004 1:39 AM
(in a dream there are no closed brackets by Silas Jun 20, 2004 10:50 PM
Bones and memory in a neutral ground. by Hester Prynne Jun 20, 2004 1:01 PM
sparkle ... by the mingo Jun 21, 2004 1:56 AM
I'm just a by Hester Prynne Jun 21, 2004 11:58 AM
you're ... by the mingo Jun 21, 2004 5:35 PM
wow by slog Jun 21, 2004 4:09 PM
heh, hardly..... by Hester Prynne Jun 21, 2004 4:38 PM
yeah by slog Jun 21, 2004 6:35 PM
In the Now by mtmynd Jun 20, 2004 11:21 AM
dry white toast by Brage Jun 20, 2004 11:00 AM
am feast by gaishia Jun 19, 2004 11:33 PM
Duet In The Aftermath (P C ) by nightbird Jun 19, 2004 9:42 PM
... by pottygok Jun 21, 2004 12:42 AM
thanks potty - by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 6:34 PM
... by pottygok Jun 22, 2004 6:58 PM
ok - by nightbird Jun 22, 2004 7:18 PM
Apperations in a Photograph by little_boy_lost Jun 19, 2004 4:22 PM
Critique and Suggested Edit by champagne1982 Jun 20, 2004 11:29 AM
Thank you so much. by little_boy_lost Jun 21, 2004 3:15 PM
When Bubbles Burst by itanjo Jun 19, 2004 11:50 AM
thank you by little_boy_lost Jun 19, 2004 5:15 PM
Three Beats by LadyLazurus3 Jun 18, 2004 4:30 PM
Hi LadyLazarus, by LitKicks Staff Jun 18, 2004 4:40 PM
Mo-Dig (edited) by Andeh Jun 18, 2004 4:11 PM
this by little_boy_lost Jun 19, 2004 5:24 PM
O.K. by Andeh Jun 20, 2004 1:15 AM
Edit and Critique by champagne1982 Jun 20, 2004 10:24 AM
Well, thank ya (edited) by Andeh Jun 20, 2004 10:58 AM
well then... (edited at 12:41pm 20 Jun 04) by champagne1982 Jun 20, 2004 11:33 AM
MaD MotIvAtion by R D Eckart Jun 18, 2004 3:58 PM
Great Line by little_boy_lost Jun 19, 2004 5:30 PM
O K by R D Eckart Jun 22, 2004 6:19 PM
That Girl In Blue by LadyLazurus3 Jun 18, 2004 2:47 PM
Jelly Red Door by LadyLazurus3 Jun 18, 2004 2:42 PM
My Demise by LadyLazurus3 Jun 18, 2004 2:35 PM
A Heart In A Hole by LadyLazurus3 Jun 18, 2004 2:32 PM
My You by LadyLazurus3 Jun 18, 2004 2:26 PM
Old Memories and a Backache by little_boy_lost Jun 18, 2004 11:21 AM
Prey (pc) -- Warning: Containing subject matter of an adult nature by champagne1982 Jun 18, 2004 9:27 AM
... by pottygok Jun 21, 2004 12:24 AM
...too by champagne1982 Jun 22, 2004 8:29 PM
... by pottygok Jun 22, 2004 9:56 PM
Poem Assembled in Five Minutes Using Subject Lines on Utterances by The Fish Jun 18, 2004 8:32 AM
poem assembled in x number of minutes using subject lines on fw&d by ellipsis Jun 18, 2004 10:22 AM
Hey! by The Fish Jun 19, 2004 2:14 PM
haha...that's great! by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 10:51 PM
Poem assembled in about five minutes using subject lines on Stories by Bennie Jun 18, 2004 11:40 AM
Yours Too! by The Fish Jun 19, 2004 2:14 PM
that was great by Silas Jun 18, 2004 8:13 PM
Thanks! by The Fish Jun 19, 2004 2:15 PM
yes... nice idea by Mob Jun 19, 2004 3:59 AM
Well, Thank by The Fish Jun 19, 2004 2:15 PM
Broken Down (PC) by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 12:34 AM
Imagery by little_boy_lost Jun 18, 2004 12:38 AM
... by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 1:17 AM
Broken Down (Again) by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 10:26 AM
When I think of Heartbreak (PC) by violet9ish Jun 17, 2004 11:28 PM
Personally, by little_boy_lost Jun 18, 2004 12:30 AM
... by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 1:05 AM
version 2 by violet9ish Jun 18, 2004 8:34 AM
Comparison by abcrystcats Jun 18, 2004 9:35 AM
a beautiful exit by Silas Jun 17, 2004 10:25 PM
Silas by ~K Jun 17, 2004 10:51 PM
Vitamin K, by Silas Jun 18, 2004 8:07 PM
2nd to last line by abcrystcats Jun 18, 2004 9:39 AM
Yes by Silas Jun 18, 2004 8:09 PM
even better by Jespah Jun 21, 2004 3:05 AM
Cannot Tell (PC) by nightbird Jun 17, 2004 8:05 PM
... by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 1:12 AM
Revised by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 10:17 AM
... by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 11:54 AM
The Obliquity of Abalone pc by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 2:35 PM
absolutely by Sylph Jun 17, 2004 2:57 PM
this is a nice, enigmatic by perezoso Jun 17, 2004 5:14 PM
beauty was not ... by the mingo Jun 17, 2004 7:58 PM
well by kairo Jun 17, 2004 5:41 PM
Six inches by Zlatko Waterman Jun 17, 2004 7:19 PM
Righteous Beth just righteous... by the mingo Jun 17, 2004 8:13 PM
The Martyrs by little_boy_lost Jun 17, 2004 2:11 PM
... by student so and so Jun 17, 2004 9:46 PM
Thanks for the response by little_boy_lost Jun 18, 2004 12:23 AM
Sorry by student so and so Jun 28, 2004 5:21 PM
Eroding Sunday by little_boy_lost Jun 17, 2004 2:06 PM
... by student so and so Jun 17, 2004 9:48 PM
Thanks for the response by little_boy_lost Jun 18, 2004 12:22 AM
Eroding? by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 12:27 AM
Snake's apple by little_boy_lost Jun 18, 2004 12:33 AM
Hero (PC) by young one Jun 17, 2004 11:47 AM
dear young one by violet9ish Jun 17, 2004 11:25 PM
dear young one by violet9ish Jun 17, 2004 11:25 PM
... by pottygok Jun 18, 2004 1:22 AM
i hate doing this... by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 11:11 PM
p.s. by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 11:11 PM
Hero (PC) by young one Jun 17, 2004 11:46 AM
The Light by the mingo Jun 17, 2004 2:45 AM
i don't care by frontal-abstraction Jun 17, 2004 8:00 AM
... by the mingo Jun 17, 2004 7:41 PM
a whisp of light by judih. Jun 17, 2004 8:13 AM
thanks judih ... by the mingo Jun 17, 2004 7:43 PM
the artist's goal by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 8:32 PM
voice by little_boy_lost Jun 17, 2004 2:26 PM
Another Day at the Vet's Office (pc) by e_dog Jun 16, 2004 2:57 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:22 AM
The smells are not my favorite part, but by abcrystcats Jun 18, 2004 9:47 AM
uh by e_dog Jun 20, 2004 8:44 AM
OK ...???? by abcrystcats Jun 20, 2004 3:18 PM
non sequitur by e_dog Jun 21, 2004 3:29 PM
Rules for Joining the Beat Poet of the Month Club by bottleaire Jun 16, 2004 2:25 PM
Swim pc by Beth Vieira Jun 16, 2004 1:43 PM
I Like by The Fish Jun 16, 2004 1:54 PM
hi beth by jamelah Jun 16, 2004 2:00 PM
Good Point. by The Fish Jun 16, 2004 2:02 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:37 AM
thanks by Beth Vieira Jun 17, 2004 11:46 AM
Throwaway #1 by The Fish Jun 16, 2004 12:22 PM
Throwaway #2 by The Fish Jun 16, 2004 12:44 PM
... by young one Jun 17, 2004 11:51 AM
wordlessly loving by anewday Jun 16, 2004 11:53 AM
Good... by Mayo Jun 17, 2004 10:27 AM
Benny by archie Jun 15, 2004 8:14 PM
Why doesen't anyone ever comment on my poems? by Chipzee Jun 15, 2004 6:21 PM
because we're selfish self-absorbed egomaniacs who only respond to responses to by 4 degrees Jun 15, 2004 7:07 PM
cute by judih. Jun 15, 2004 8:06 PM
chipzee by judih. Jun 15, 2004 8:08 PM
done by ellipsis Jun 15, 2004 8:31 PM
i read your dancing poem by doreen peri Jun 16, 2004 11:55 AM
... by pottygok Jun 16, 2004 2:46 PM
PC is Please Critique by doreen peri Jun 16, 2004 9:09 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:07 AM
replies by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 6:42 PM
La Gran Puta de Babilon en LA by perezoso Jun 15, 2004 2:28 PM
otro miembro de litkicks escribiendo en español, bravooo!! by Arcadia Jun 16, 2004 4:08 PM
Dark Place - please critique by nightbird Jun 15, 2004 1:17 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:22 AM
Blake? by nightbird Jun 17, 2004 12:44 AM
you know, nightbird by violet9ish Jun 17, 2004 11:36 PM
I Know by nightbird Jun 18, 2004 10:56 AM
Chomp On This One... (First thought/Best thought)critique if u dare by nightbird Jun 15, 2004 10:47 AM
I like it by archie Jun 15, 2004 6:53 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:18 AM
Thanks Potty... by nightbird Jun 17, 2004 12:36 AM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:39 AM
so i went camping on saturday... by SLucia Jun 15, 2004 9:55 AM
This One Is About You by The Fish Jun 15, 2004 9:36 AM
Metamorphosis by Sylph Jun 15, 2004 5:54 AM
I sympathize with your search, Sylph by Victor Abruzzi Jun 18, 2004 10:28 AM
noahs ark is a spaceship by Silas Jun 14, 2004 11:49 PM
interesting reading by Victor Abruzzi Jun 18, 2004 10:19 AM
the garden by slog Jun 14, 2004 10:37 PM
rain sex (pc) by slog Jun 14, 2004 10:36 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 11:29 PM
okay....so here's what i saw in this. by SLucia Jun 15, 2004 10:03 AM
This... by nightbird Jun 15, 2004 10:34 AM
Your... by nightbird Jun 15, 2004 10:37 AM
mostly i write prose by slog Jun 15, 2004 8:34 PM
HMMMMM... by nightbird Jun 16, 2004 11:57 PM
... by pottygok Jun 17, 2004 12:12 AM
splashing through by champagne1982 Jun 18, 2004 10:40 AM
the optimistic suicide note by a devil in the woods Jun 14, 2004 8:35 PM
Dancing by Chipzee Jun 14, 2004 5:37 PM
just for starters by ellipsis Jun 15, 2004 8:28 PM
I am a spelling maniac by Chipzee Jun 16, 2004 5:55 AM
... by pottygok Jun 16, 2004 2:59 PM
Once Written: by Kristopher Jun 14, 2004 5:16 PM
century of mourning: an info sampler (pc) by info Jun 14, 2004 12:52 PM
A Brief Confession by The Fish Jun 14, 2004 12:50 PM
Laws by mtmynd Jun 14, 2004 9:52 AM
. by Victor Abruzzi Jun 14, 2004 12:31 PM
Undoubtedly by mtmynd Jun 15, 2004 7:44 AM
Nice vatic, oracular stuff, Mr. Texas Gautama . . . by Zlatko Waterman Jun 14, 2004 12:33 PM
G'day, Z'ko! by mtmynd Jun 15, 2004 7:48 AM
Ghosts of Rage by archie Jun 14, 2004 9:31 AM
Regretful by KMH260 Jun 14, 2004 8:27 AM
What You Got by archie Jun 14, 2004 7:42 AM
Stripped by Bianca Jun 14, 2004 3:56 AM
hey ... by the mingo Jun 14, 2004 9:53 AM
Grazie by Bianca Jun 15, 2004 4:10 AM
city lines by Silas Jun 14, 2004 12:17 AM
What do you talk about when the day is done? by doreen peri Jun 13, 2004 8:59 PM
i re-read my own poetry by doreen peri Jun 14, 2004 2:48 PM
funny, i was thinking the same thing by Bennie Jun 14, 2004 4:03 PM
well bennie by doreen peri Jun 14, 2004 7:49 PM
The Night by Heartstarter205 Jun 13, 2004 7:50 PM
A Tribute to the Victorious Revolution of the DVD by e_dog Jun 13, 2004 6:23 PM
Opportunity (PC) by violet9ish Jun 13, 2004 6:08 PM
Ambition by !8.5! Jun 13, 2004 6:47 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 12:56 AM
actually by violet9ish Jun 14, 2004 10:29 AM
Actually, by info Jun 14, 2004 12:22 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 12:47 AM
version 2 by violet9ish Jun 14, 2004 10:42 AM
la logique cruel de la capitalisme (translated into english by e_dog Jun 13, 2004 1:53 PM
a pleasure to read by Silas Jun 14, 2004 12:20 AM
My Tribute To Ronald Reagan by Dave The Dov Jun 13, 2004 11:37 AM
A fine tribute to a great... by Dead burroughs Jun 13, 2004 11:58 AM
hey now... by mnaz Jun 13, 2004 12:34 PM
That's a contrast... by andyw Jun 13, 2004 5:54 PM
deconstruction by 4 degrees Jun 12, 2004 8:54 PM
BVD beasty... by luckystrikes Jun 12, 2004 9:30 PM
it's the smells by zen_ Jun 23, 2004 6:49 PM
"Your parents must be proud" by Dead burroughs Jun 12, 2004 12:50 PM
i love it by j_daniels Jun 12, 2004 9:25 PM
The Small Conquest of Malta by Plo Jun 12, 2004 10:37 AM
. by Victor Abruzzi Jun 14, 2004 12:40 PM
The day I found out that I am a jeanius. by Chipzee Jun 12, 2004 6:37 AM
This by Dead burroughs Jun 12, 2004 12:52 PM
What and How much Longer? (o psychic lover) by judih. Jun 11, 2004 9:50 PM
silent agreement speaking loudly by 4 degrees Jun 11, 2004 10:56 PM
Fantasy by artguy Jun 12, 2004 7:56 AM
nature's eyes by jota Jun 12, 2004 12:24 PM
ego beaver by jota Jun 12, 2004 12:29 PM
in lovers honor by jota Jun 12, 2004 1:12 PM
soft bravo, jota by judih. Jun 12, 2004 8:08 PM
quickie by The Flaming Red Head Jun 13, 2004 5:43 AM
Mom macked sapphic at the park by phonzy Jun 13, 2004 3:00 PM
Healed After India by Zlatko Waterman Jun 11, 2004 2:28 PM
snapped shut by judih. Jun 11, 2004 8:02 PM
This is Good by abcrystcats Jun 22, 2004 7:30 PM
Stone Angels by the mingo Jun 11, 2004 12:25 PM
There's a spurt of power in the middle here, Ming, by Zlatko Waterman Jun 11, 2004 5:05 PM
Z ... by the mingo Jun 12, 2004 2:57 AM
a? by jota Jun 12, 2004 12:59 PM
Humm by Dead burroughs Jun 12, 2004 12:56 PM
Liebfraumilch by Geordiepete Jun 11, 2004 5:42 AM
Liebfraumilch by Arcadia Jun 11, 2004 10:13 AM
If it mattered that much by ~K Jun 11, 2004 1:11 AM
it does by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 9:11 AM
awww... by Createyers Jun 11, 2004 10:53 AM
THUNDER & LIGHTNING (please critique) by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 12:46 AM
ok by ~K Jun 11, 2004 1:21 AM
Countryside Heritage Development by Geordiepete Jun 11, 2004 5:50 AM
Your words... by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 9:08 AM
i tried to write in blood once by Bennie Jun 11, 2004 7:24 AM
OUCH! by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 9:13 AM
I hear by judih. Jun 11, 2004 9:09 PM
THAT... by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 10:11 PM
cool - glad we connected by judih. Jun 11, 2004 10:13 PM
Very cool by nightbird Jun 11, 2004 10:38 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 12:25 PM
I don't by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 10:55 PM
... by pottygok Jun 15, 2004 1:15 AM
... by pottygok Jun 13, 2004 2:33 PM
Potty... by nightbird Jun 13, 2004 11:08 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 12:22 PM
POTTY - by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 11:01 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 11:16 PM
(look down) by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 11:52 PM
... by pottygok Jun 15, 2004 1:18 AM
HA by nightbird Jun 15, 2004 10:18 AM
... by pottygok Jun 16, 2004 2:42 PM
hmm by violet9ish Jun 14, 2004 3:57 PM
Thunder & Lightning (revised) Thank you... by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 11:20 PM
.... by pottygok Jun 15, 2004 1:12 AM
asparagus (PC) by violet9ish Jun 10, 2004 11:49 PM
This by ~K Jun 11, 2004 12:03 AM
aw (edited) by ellipsis Jun 11, 2004 8:17 AM
Fun by Agustlime Jun 11, 2004 9:15 AM
cliche? by ellipsis Jun 11, 2004 10:14 AM
anyone care about content? by lekr20 Jun 12, 2004 1:11 AM
... by pottygok Jun 13, 2004 2:49 PM
hmm by violet9ish Jun 13, 2004 6:06 PM
... by pottygok Jun 13, 2004 9:15 PM
new draft by violet9ish Jun 13, 2004 6:12 PM
... by pottygok Jun 13, 2004 9:23 PM
thanks for all the detail, here we go by violet9ish Jun 13, 2004 9:47 PM
... by pottygok Jun 14, 2004 12:33 AM
another draft by violet9ish Jun 14, 2004 10:53 AM
Would you if I could (please critique) by Kristopher Jun 10, 2004 9:13 PM
dear Kristopher by violet9ish Jun 10, 2004 11:57 PM
... by pottygok Jun 13, 2004 2:45 PM
Outside The Angelica Theatre by Heartstarter205 Jun 10, 2004 7:01 PM
... by Createyers Jun 11, 2004 10:56 AM
Reality by ragamuffin923 Jun 14, 2004 9:47 PM
the hours by darkblood Jun 10, 2004 4:30 PM
If I could but be so tragic by caoimhinm Jun 10, 2004 1:38 PM
wonderful by ~K Jun 11, 2004 1:17 AM
That dress by Sylph Jun 10, 2004 12:30 PM
tell me a new tale by caoimhinm Jun 10, 2004 12:18 PM
my name by ~K Jun 11, 2004 1:30 AM
live by caoimhinm Jun 10, 2004 12:15 PM
Snazzy by Agustlime Jun 15, 2004 7:46 AM
minute by caoimhinm Jun 10, 2004 12:13 PM
My Unpolished Campaign for Presidency of the USA by Createyers Jun 10, 2004 7:41 AM
i'd by 4 degrees Jun 10, 2004 7:49 AM
! by Createyers Jun 10, 2004 9:14 AM
I think my poem by Createyers Jun 11, 2004 6:33 AM
Vote by ragamuffin923 Jun 14, 2004 9:54 PM
Ragamuffins by Createyers Jun 17, 2004 6:22 AM
Have i by Jon Converse Jun 10, 2004 1:29 AM
letter to america by Silas Jun 9, 2004 11:00 PM
Tragically, by Createyers Jun 10, 2004 6:45 AM
man,not america by caoimhinm Jun 10, 2004 1:36 PM
this was by Silas Jun 10, 2004 10:59 PM
anger by caoimhinm Jun 11, 2004 11:14 AM
but! by caoimhinm Jun 11, 2004 11:15 AM
yea by Createyers Jun 11, 2004 12:00 PM
? by caoimhinm Jun 11, 2004 5:24 PM
what happened by Silas Jun 13, 2004 2:21 PM
I have by Createyers Jun 14, 2004 6:22 AM
THUNDER & LIGHTNING ( P C ) by nightbird Jun 9, 2004 10:33 PM
a healing wilderness. pc by ModernAncient Jun 9, 2004 9:07 PM
I'm glad you by Silas Jun 9, 2004 10:44 PM
i wrote this after Reagan procession down Constitution lane (?) reflecting by malign Jun 9, 2004 6:38 PM
farewell by pharroh Jun 9, 2004 2:09 PM
‘BOULEVARD MELANCHOLIA’ by soulsdecay Jun 9, 2004 12:04 PM
I missed the sun again by soulsdecay Jun 9, 2004 11:56 AM
there is by Arcadia Jun 9, 2004 12:47 PM
gris by Arcadia Jun 9, 2004 1:13 PM
thank you by soulsdecay Jun 12, 2004 11:23 AM
First Light by the mingo Jun 9, 2004 2:42 AM
... by ~K Jun 11, 2004 12:07 AM
Alone, Here. by Jon Converse Jun 9, 2004 1:55 AM
the jetty at the end of the universe by Silas Jun 8, 2004 11:52 PM
I really like this. by ~K Jun 10, 2004 12:11 AM
Transcendentally by AlienOnAcid Jun 10, 2004 11:17 AM
Myriad Acts of Creation by ~K Jun 8, 2004 6:43 PM
this by Silas Jun 8, 2004 11:56 PM
Thanks by ~K Jun 11, 2004 12:11 AM
& then by ~K Jun 11, 2004 12:15 AM
ah, me by caoimhinm Jun 8, 2004 10:04 AM
there's by Silas Jun 9, 2004 12:35 AM
Death's Door by Bennie Jun 8, 2004 7:56 AM
hey by ~K Jun 10, 2004 11:56 PM
why by Createyers Jun 11, 2004 11:04 AM
The Sanctuary of Midnight Imaginings by Netzari5730 Jun 7, 2004 11:08 PM
you've taken me. by Jon Converse Jun 9, 2004 1:58 AM
Taxi Drivers - PC by Mie Jun 7, 2004 10:08 PM
dear mie by violet9ish Jun 10, 2004 11:58 AM
thanks! by Mie Jun 11, 2004 7:11 AM
I will be looking forward by violet9ish Jun 11, 2004 10:23 AM
Taste Of Summer by Heartstarter205 Jun 7, 2004 9:55 PM
YES! by Bennie Jun 8, 2004 10:17 AM
that is by Glorious Amok Jun 8, 2004 12:28 PM
ouch! by luckystrikes Jun 10, 2004 9:54 PM
1st entry, "Brethren of the Coast" by donthepoet Jun 7, 2004 7:12 PM
Pas de deux by Sylph Jun 7, 2004 6:29 PM
Binocular by the mingo Jun 7, 2004 4:41 PM
Monocular by rain70 Jun 8, 2004 7:31 PM
and then ... by the mingo Jun 9, 2004 2:35 AM
serene crypticality by e_dog Jun 7, 2004 3:38 PM
Brave! by Chipzee Jun 7, 2004 2:34 PM
And Everything In Between by origin Jun 7, 2004 11:04 AM
How beautiful. by ~K Jun 8, 2004 12:52 AM
Break room musings by zil Jun 7, 2004 6:20 AM
Imagination by mtmynd Jun 7, 2004 5:54 AM
attrition by 4 degrees Jun 6, 2004 10:17 PM
confirmation by Kristopher Jun 6, 2004 9:15 PM
red little pony by lotusgrl Jun 6, 2004 8:13 PM
Burned into eternity! by Chipzee Jun 6, 2004 8:28 AM
not to be rude by livingston Jun 6, 2004 2:06 PM
not to be rude... by zen_ Jun 8, 2004 2:01 AM
Re: Ass by nightbird Jun 6, 2004 10:38 PM
you're an ass man by zen_ Jun 8, 2004 1:58 AM
bello impossibile by Clamence Jun 6, 2004 3:44 AM
If You Take Away The Stars... ( P C ) by roaringthunder Jun 5, 2004 11:16 PM
stars in your eyes by sharon eiser Jun 6, 2004 12:22 AM
You sit to close by Kristopher Jun 5, 2004 10:09 PM
kris by jessa_lynne Jun 5, 2004 10:15 PM
sure do by Kristopher Jun 5, 2004 10:17 PM
at where? by jessa_lynne Jun 5, 2004 10:18 PM
at by Kristopher Jun 6, 2004 3:09 PM
Basementality by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:31 PM
awesome honesty by livingston Jun 6, 2004 2:12 PM
hope by ragamuffin923 Jun 14, 2004 10:11 PM
juxtapositions by soluspoeta Jun 5, 2004 6:45 PM
The Imagery... by nightbird Jun 6, 2004 10:48 PM
Head Games (please critique my work. I am 14. Thanks) by drew` Jun 5, 2004 7:46 AM
head games: the Dance by arielWN Jun 5, 2004 10:49 AM
lovely by sharon eiser Jun 6, 2004 12:17 AM
1st Critique by nightbird Jun 6, 2004 10:44 PM
the gene genie by Silas Jun 4, 2004 9:42 PM
Mountains Out of Molehills by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 11:49 AM
hrmm... by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:34 PM
inherited by rain70 Jun 4, 2004 8:31 AM
Right On. by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 12:19 PM
nice by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:45 PM
On Reexamining One's Spirit In Light of Life Altering Changes by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 8:09 AM
On Coming to Terms With Non-Existence by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 6:35 AM
communication from the lucid state by malign Jun 4, 2004 3:05 AM
drunk by malign Jun 4, 2004 2:30 AM
utter madness by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:38 PM
Sky by the mingo Jun 4, 2004 1:21 AM
Lovely by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 5:52 AM
hi by jamelah Jun 5, 2004 5:10 AM
Astral by ~K Jun 4, 2004 12:27 AM
this IS by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:42 PM
cool by ~K Jun 8, 2004 12:57 AM
Netherworld ceiling by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 9:31 PM
wuthering heights by Silas Jun 3, 2004 10:59 PM
To Hester: by Zlatko Waterman Jun 4, 2004 7:39 PM
Hold them fold them walk away by Kristopher Jun 3, 2004 5:29 PM
this isn't about gambling by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:51 PM
Untitled. by Kristopher Jun 3, 2004 5:13 PM
"like wells collecting by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 9:43 PM
hest by Kristopher Jun 3, 2004 9:57 PM
love nothing by Mystic Jun 3, 2004 4:46 PM
Whoa.... by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 9:33 PM
Not a poem, but info on a young Russian poet! by kkizer Jun 3, 2004 2:37 PM
Wandering In Her Neighbourhood by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 2:07 PM
I absolutely by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 8:36 PM
Thanks Hester by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 5:28 AM
Beautiful by ragamuffin923 Jun 14, 2004 10:25 PM
memories of modern life by Silas Jun 3, 2004 1:49 PM
This just by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 9:35 PM
Indefatigable by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 7:32 AM
tight by Silas Jun 3, 2004 1:56 PM
Thanks very much! by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 2:12 PM
amazing timing..... by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 9:48 PM
Nice! by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 5:29 AM
I heard it by Hester Prynne Jun 4, 2004 5:18 PM
Biènvenue à Quebec by Glorious Amok Jun 3, 2004 7:18 AM
I like this by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 7:36 AM
Purdy? by Glorious Amok Jun 4, 2004 10:10 AM
sacrebleu! by Sylph Jun 3, 2004 1:03 PM
je suis by Glorious Amok Jun 4, 2004 10:06 AM
de by Sylph Jun 4, 2004 12:04 PM
beautiful by Hester Prynne Jun 3, 2004 9:38 PM
thanks Hester! by Glorious Amok Jun 4, 2004 10:09 AM
1973 – 20?? by Sean McGahey Jun 3, 2004 6:31 AM
Skeleton (Don't be fooled, it's some sappy bullshit) *you have been forewarned by Createyers Jun 3, 2004 6:29 AM
I like sappy... n/t by Netzari5730 Jun 5, 2004 2:26 PM
what by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 6:22 AM
The end of the nutmeg days by brussels charles Jun 3, 2004 3:22 AM
Cut up 1 by brussels charles Jun 3, 2004 3:18 AM
can't help you by fingurz Jun 5, 2004 7:57 PM
who is echo the dolphin? by brussels charles Jun 6, 2004 3:19 PM
he is by fingurz Jun 6, 2004 8:36 PM
indeed by brussels charles Jun 7, 2004 3:30 AM
not as bad by fingurz Jun 14, 2004 8:52 PM
Anchor by brussels charles Jun 3, 2004 3:17 AM
out for love by brussels charles Jun 3, 2004 3:15 AM
The Blather by Oquaga Jun 3, 2004 2:28 AM
I loved this! by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 11:10 AM
Hey, radio wave by Silas Jun 3, 2004 12:39 AM
this by Sylph Jun 3, 2004 4:30 AM
a great song by Silas Jun 3, 2004 1:27 PM
yeah. by mnaz Jun 3, 2004 5:23 AM
telemetry by Silas Jun 3, 2004 1:29 PM
yes.. by mnaz Jun 3, 2004 5:05 PM
ghosts by itanjo Jun 2, 2004 10:23 PM
... by the mingo Jun 3, 2004 6:25 AM
semi-blind-date by SLucia Jun 2, 2004 5:43 PM
lost compass syndrome by Mystic Jun 2, 2004 3:29 PM
arousal* by rain70 Jun 2, 2004 1:19 PM
rain ya ol' graveyard ghos' ... by the mingo Jun 3, 2004 6:00 AM
hey cap'n by rain70 Jun 3, 2004 1:44 PM
did i mention by Silas Jun 9, 2004 12:52 AM
Wow! by rain70 Jun 12, 2004 7:29 PM
Foreign Body by The Fish Jun 2, 2004 12:09 PM
hnmmm by SLucia Jun 2, 2004 5:54 PM
Thanks! by The Fish Jun 3, 2004 5:49 AM
Great poem by itanjo Jun 4, 2004 12:04 PM
Thank you very much! by The Fish Jun 4, 2004 12:22 PM
i am a sucker by doreen peri Jun 11, 2004 2:01 PM
The Sea ~ An Impression by Netzari5730 Jun 2, 2004 10:21 AM
this stanza by Createyers Jun 7, 2004 11:07 AM
BLUE PANTIES (after Wallace Stevens) by donthepoet Jun 2, 2004 7:55 AM
LIGHTNING SANDWICHES by donthepoet Jun 2, 2004 7:54 AM
I REMEMBER (after Joe Brainard) by donthepoet Jun 2, 2004 7:53 AM
RARA AVIS by donthepoet Jun 2, 2004 7:52 AM
"from RED WEATHER (in-progress)" by donthepoet Jun 2, 2004 7:51 AM
man by Sylph Jun 2, 2004 5:22 PM
dtp by rain70 Jun 2, 2004 11:47 PM
Sign of the times… by Sean McGahey Jun 2, 2004 5:37 AM
Swallow by Sin Jun 1, 2004 11:51 PM
... by the mingo Jun 3, 2004 6:05 AM
She told me I smelt of the sea by kernowtom Jun 1, 2004 2:44 PM


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