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What Is This Place by BuddhistPunk Apr 30, 2002 4:18 AM
In the Beginning (edited) by magic love Apr 30, 2002 2:17 AM
A story from an as yet unknown member...(PC) by slurpy Apr 29, 2002 9:33 PM
interpretable (a word?) in so many ways...i like! by DizzyKicks May 1, 2002 11:36 AM
The fourth seasons (PC) by JCalhoun Apr 29, 2002 6:33 AM
. by tantricslide Apr 29, 2002 2:59 AM
I Like You But You Talk Too Much or Why Don't I Shut Up and Kiss You? by Jade Apr 29, 2002 2:07 AM
Shut Up And Kiss Me Then ..... by BuddhistPunk Apr 29, 2002 3:11 AM
What do you call it then? by Jade Apr 30, 2002 1:50 AM
We called it ... by BuddhistPunk Apr 30, 2002 2:09 AM
wow...that took me back by magic love Apr 30, 2002 2:39 AM
Silver blade and silver spoon by shishi Apr 29, 2002 1:25 AM
very interesting... by newSkinjoy98 Apr 30, 2002 2:31 PM
indeed.... by aliengrove Apr 30, 2002 3:56 PM
thanks.... by shishi May 1, 2002 1:27 AM
IGUANA DREAMS - Part 1 by Danton Thorne Apr 28, 2002 6:10 PM
Black Cat Inn . .. by Jim Furnish Apr 28, 2002 11:16 PM
The rules for humanity by Tim Cunningham Apr 28, 2002 1:48 PM
Better not Said by Harry Apr 28, 2002 11:03 AM
Road Story by artguy Apr 28, 2002 9:35 AM
statues over easy by ezrachen Apr 27, 2002 9:03 PM
The Morbid Decay by beatvibe Apr 27, 2002 8:35 PM
artificial means by um Apr 27, 2002 11:48 PM
Ever the Sociopath by beatvibe Apr 28, 2002 4:13 PM
ahhhh by um Apr 29, 2002 2:14 AM
Well-Kept by beatvibe Apr 29, 2002 10:22 AM
of course by um May 1, 2002 3:34 AM
more statues by ezrachen Apr 26, 2002 9:47 PM
tiltowhirl faster by jota Apr 27, 2002 2:27 PM
yeah, this is good by judih. Apr 30, 2002 4:26 AM
Part of somthing...(PC) by Sabertash Apr 26, 2002 8:51 PM
Dont make me beg by Sabertash Apr 28, 2002 1:06 AM
i'm printing it to read later by Billectric Apr 28, 2002 10:24 AM
I really like this and here's why by Billectric Apr 28, 2002 3:34 PM
want some spelling errors? by Sabertash Apr 30, 2002 4:43 PM
i couldn't have done better myself by Billectric May 4, 2002 9:49 AM
oh and by Sabertash Apr 30, 2002 4:46 PM
where's the statuary? by ezrachen Apr 25, 2002 10:59 PM
Reposted to mark the LA riot anniversary or where i was when my city burned by jota Apr 25, 2002 8:57 PM
Jesus, Jota. . . by Jim Furnish Apr 26, 2002 3:26 PM
thanks jim by jota Apr 26, 2002 3:44 PM
thats what i needed by Robertsnw Apr 27, 2002 11:44 AM
write-on by jota Apr 28, 2002 9:44 AM
Incredible by Mordou Apr 27, 2002 3:19 PM
boarder by jota Apr 28, 2002 9:37 AM
jota by firecracker Apr 30, 2002 5:17 AM
and you by jota May 5, 2002 6:09 PM
Shadows Falling by ShatteredHorizon Apr 25, 2002 6:56 PM
The Cracked Bowl by Happas Apr 25, 2002 3:36 PM
sometimes... by feral911 Apr 26, 2002 2:45 PM
The Letter. by IRIS Apr 25, 2002 3:16 PM
Our Father by jota Apr 25, 2002 3:01 PM
the statue got me high by ezrachen Apr 25, 2002 12:56 AM
interesting by Happas Apr 25, 2002 5:10 PM
umm. quaint? by ezrachen Apr 25, 2002 5:22 PM
quaint by Happas Apr 25, 2002 8:23 PM
UMm, interesting by ShatteredHorizon Apr 25, 2002 6:07 PM
something of a response by ezrachen Apr 25, 2002 10:43 PM
Ahh by ShatteredHorizon Apr 26, 2002 11:18 AM
look above by ezrachen Apr 26, 2002 12:25 PM
Umm, i think this is decent by ShatteredHorizon Apr 24, 2002 8:35 PM
Critique. by James Jones Apr 25, 2002 12:18 AM
Yeah by ShatteredHorizon Apr 25, 2002 9:31 AM
i feel your pain by Buddy Glass May 1, 2002 9:22 PM
110th.......................Please Critique by James Jones Apr 24, 2002 1:41 AM
Critique ..... by BuddhistPunk Apr 24, 2002 8:30 AM
Second installment, hope you enjoy!! by James Jones Apr 25, 2002 3:10 AM
Drain by beatvibe Apr 23, 2002 6:26 PM
got by um Apr 25, 2002 4:43 AM
My Uninvited Guest. by IRIS Apr 23, 2002 3:31 PM
thanks by stilltrucking Apr 23, 2002 4:10 PM
Yeah, the ending by Billectric Apr 23, 2002 4:38 PM
Quite tasty! by Billectric Apr 23, 2002 4:37 PM
by the grace of Grace by buddhabitch Apr 23, 2002 6:21 PM
An attempt at something.. Please Criticize by ShatteredHorizon Apr 23, 2002 1:46 PM
Re: bounce- back by Croman Apr 23, 2002 3:40 PM
A Gift on Father's Day by Croman Apr 23, 2002 12:51 PM
The Head. by James Jones Apr 23, 2002 3:53 AM
I understand by jota Apr 23, 2002 6:11 AM
Jota by Billectric Apr 22, 2002 5:59 PM
this is all i have so far, Bill by jota Apr 22, 2002 9:05 PM
Damn Bill... by buddhabitch Apr 22, 2002 9:39 PM
I was reading it by Billectric Apr 23, 2002 5:36 PM
Trapped I'm My In by Billectric Apr 22, 2002 5:57 PM
A yobbo's knavery of the heart by Happas Apr 22, 2002 3:37 PM
The Great Chocolate Frenzy by EugeneG Apr 22, 2002 8:30 AM
A May Day Tale by Happas Apr 21, 2002 3:40 PM
sammie the commie by jota Apr 21, 2002 5:33 PM
your right by Happas Apr 22, 2002 3:34 PM
wait a minute by jota Apr 24, 2002 5:48 PM
simply by shishi Apr 25, 2002 4:23 AM
thankyou by Happas Apr 25, 2002 3:35 PM
a pice right out o' the middle by Sabertash Apr 20, 2002 10:36 AM
(PC) by Sabertash Apr 20, 2002 10:38 AM
Anything?! by Sabertash Apr 22, 2002 5:21 PM
&glittertrash (pc) by Fae Apr 20, 2002 8:36 AM
this i like by Croman Apr 29, 2002 10:51 PM
Thinking of John by anniefay Apr 20, 2002 5:34 AM
will it matter? by judih. Apr 20, 2002 12:17 PM
every spark by jotadavida Apr 21, 2002 6:39 AM
hereditary virtuoso vile lance and lube by subterrissole Apr 21, 2002 6:49 AM
I copped on poe but I dont care...not done and it will never be...but what by mindlosing Apr 19, 2002 8:07 PM
THERE WERE NOT MANY STEPS by NIGHTTIME Apr 19, 2002 4:52 PM
But they were by Billectric Apr 19, 2002 6:30 PM
whoa by lililiII Apr 17, 2002 11:21 AM
Saying everything by Mordou Apr 19, 2002 3:38 AM
The End of Eveything-Please critique by Mordou Apr 16, 2002 2:57 PM
Oh, please, oh please critique by Mordou Apr 19, 2002 4:01 PM
critique by Buddy Glass Apr 21, 2002 2:29 PM
Thank you by Mordou Apr 21, 2002 4:04 PM
Your 'last three chapters' by Croman Apr 26, 2002 1:48 AM
I'm ecstatic by Mordou Apr 27, 2002 5:42 AM
Jurassic Elvis by BuddhistPunk Apr 16, 2002 6:19 AM
Revelation by Buddy Glass Apr 15, 2002 8:37 PM
Critique by Mordou Apr 16, 2002 3:17 PM
Critique Critique by Pandy Apr 18, 2002 6:23 PM
Nerd's opinion by Pandy Apr 18, 2002 6:34 PM
Thanks by Buddy Glass Apr 20, 2002 4:25 PM
More Stories by Mordou Apr 21, 2002 1:11 AM
I really like it a lot by Billectric Apr 21, 2002 11:05 AM
Small Beginnings - Just the start of something by lost Apr 15, 2002 6:33 PM
all of them vanish by Yabyum Apr 15, 2002 6:36 PM
Time fadEs Into Next - CONCLUSION - (pc) by Billectric Apr 15, 2002 6:27 PM
I meant to say by Billectric Apr 19, 2002 7:01 PM
AND . . .Spanish, not British soldiers by Billectric Apr 19, 2002 7:14 PM
never disappointed by jay Apr 21, 2002 7:07 AM
time fades by jay Apr 21, 2002 7:10 AM
Geno M. by surfermike Apr 15, 2002 12:38 AM
Lit Kicks Spring Peace Poetry Happening April 29 New York City by brooklyn Apr 14, 2002 8:50 PM
512: Extended Version (Including the Act, the Intrigue, and the Aside) by beatvibe Apr 14, 2002 10:51 AM
I like it by Billectric Apr 15, 2002 6:36 PM
Time faDes Into Next (PART 5 and rushing to conclusion?) by Billectric Apr 14, 2002 8:38 AM
bill you are 5150: a danger to yourself and others by jota Apr 14, 2002 10:00 AM
i can't express by Billectric Apr 14, 2002 11:06 AM
gratitude by jay Apr 15, 2002 3:53 PM
velouria by lomein Apr 13, 2002 4:05 PM
Lomein by BuddhistPunk Jun 7, 2002 1:36 AM
Think rainy afternoons are boring? by Tim Cunningham Apr 13, 2002 1:49 PM
wow by Billectric Apr 14, 2002 9:48 AM
Time fAdes Into Next (PART 4) pc by Billectric Apr 11, 2002 3:43 PM
you sure are electrified , that is by jay Apr 11, 2002 4:55 PM
Jump in! by Billectric Apr 11, 2002 6:49 PM
noticed this one too by stilltrucking Apr 12, 2002 9:52 AM
keep it by mountain goat Apr 12, 2002 11:35 PM
thanks. by Billectric Apr 14, 2002 11:07 AM
Times Fade Into Next - PART 3 - (pc) by Billectric Apr 10, 2002 1:54 PM
I changed a couple of things by Billectric Apr 10, 2002 6:59 PM
jesus christ! by feral911 Apr 11, 2002 1:27 AM
i'm electrifried by Billectric Apr 11, 2002 3:37 PM
just noticed by stilltrucking Apr 12, 2002 9:48 AM
the bird story by bebop_uk Apr 13, 2002 9:59 AM
Thanks. . . by Billectric Apr 22, 2002 5:53 PM
an eastcoast journey through easter ll by mudshark Apr 10, 2002 9:58 AM
dude by jota Apr 10, 2002 9:42 PM
Time Fades Into Next PART 2 (PC) by Billectric Apr 9, 2002 7:16 PM
thanks by stilltrucking Apr 12, 2002 9:49 AM
I can't express by Billectric Apr 14, 2002 9:53 AM
A Life Called Mine - PC by sendroverover Apr 9, 2002 6:02 PM
good life by stilltrucking Apr 12, 2002 10:15 AM
wow. by sendroverover Apr 13, 2002 8:10 AM
hey sendroverover by judih. Apr 12, 2002 10:24 AM
new? by sendroverover Apr 13, 2002 8:08 AM
Time Fades Into Next (PC) by Billectric Apr 8, 2002 6:57 AM
Correcting a double post by Billectric Apr 8, 2002 6:53 AM
e-mail (names and place names have been changed) by john_cervantes Apr 7, 2002 4:24 PM
PC by john_cervantes Apr 7, 2002 5:21 PM
My Name is Raymond Barry by Happas Apr 7, 2002 4:18 PM
simply by greatfulldead Apr 8, 2002 12:33 AM
fantastic by ruby tuesday Apr 8, 2002 1:15 PM
thanks by Happas Apr 9, 2002 3:31 PM
"His name is... by atom tan Apr 9, 2002 5:35 PM
Watching Valerie by aliengrove Apr 6, 2002 5:56 PM
Work in progress...PC by ruby tuesday Apr 5, 2002 6:13 PM
yay by sendroverover Apr 9, 2002 6:10 PM
Open Doors, "Chapter One, from the view of JulieAnne" PC by lost Apr 5, 2002 3:46 PM
"Quiet was lurking in them"... by mist Apr 6, 2002 1:20 AM
Short Story About Age And Wisdom by BuddhistPunk Apr 5, 2002 5:04 AM
Nice story... by mtmynd Apr 6, 2002 10:26 AM
Mud On The Tracks by BuddhistPunk Apr 5, 2002 3:32 AM
awesome by lomein Apr 5, 2002 10:36 AM
Wow ..... by BuddhistPunk Apr 12, 2002 9:39 AM
rhymes by barstool Apr 6, 2002 3:52 PM
The sound of music? (please critique) by weezer Apr 4, 2002 5:30 PM
spooky weezer by mist Apr 6, 2002 5:10 PM
a mix by weezer Apr 7, 2002 10:15 AM
an hour later never the same....P.C by thevagabond Apr 4, 2002 4:04 PM
chikensoup by natrium Apr 4, 2002 11:16 PM
yeah by mindlosing Apr 4, 2002 11:48 PM
Is this interesting enough to continue writing about?...Feedback appreciated! by ARC Apr 4, 2002 11:29 AM
I like it by Billectric Apr 6, 2002 8:31 AM
Thanks! by ARC Apr 8, 2002 10:51 AM
Cast off. by Jade Apr 4, 2002 3:03 AM
A Tale by Rosalind Keltia Apr 3, 2002 10:23 PM
here again by subterrissole Apr 3, 2002 6:42 PM
the Crush - please leave your thoughts by sendroverover Apr 3, 2002 3:53 PM
To Live Up To by ARC Apr 3, 2002 11:03 AM
"Bleesed are those that have not see yet believe" by stilltrucking Apr 3, 2002 1:37 PM
BeCoMiNg PiCaSsO by picasso Apr 3, 2002 10:38 AM
cubed by Jade Apr 4, 2002 3:10 AM
an eastcoast journey through easter by mudshark Apr 3, 2002 7:52 AM
Mommy's Girl by emotion970 Apr 2, 2002 10:11 PM
Divisions of Tangier on Floor Nine by beatvibe Apr 2, 2002 9:26 PM
Self-Critique (excerpt) by beatvibe Apr 2, 2002 9:52 PM
Answer (extension)... by feral911 Apr 3, 2002 1:45 AM
Ay, what a legacy... by beatvibe Apr 4, 2002 9:19 PM
ay... by feral911 Apr 5, 2002 12:38 AM
For the record... by beatvibe Apr 2, 2002 9:57 PM
cheap rhyme with your titles by um Apr 6, 2002 1:51 AM
Very Nice (And about my vice...) by beatvibe Apr 6, 2002 11:59 AM
no no by um Apr 7, 2002 12:08 AM
tell by um Apr 6, 2002 1:52 AM
Local News by OneSickPuppy Apr 2, 2002 7:05 AM
Are you five foot six by BuddhistPunk Apr 5, 2002 6:06 AM
A Fight With Full Stops ( Part 2 ) by OneSickPuppy Apr 2, 2002 6:49 AM
Angela (PC) by picasso Apr 2, 2002 6:28 AM
gentle soul by mist Apr 6, 2002 1:00 AM
Unfinished- lost energy but any willing please critique by mindlosing Apr 1, 2002 8:45 PM
Well I can by jr_macd Apr 2, 2002 9:57 PM
thanks by mindlosing Apr 2, 2002 10:16 PM
Yeah thats why by jr_macd Apr 3, 2002 7:15 PM
i see what you mean by mindlosing Apr 4, 2002 9:59 PM
For VIC by WALLY Apr 1, 2002 12:52 PM
haha by JavierJenkins Apr 1, 2002 7:24 PM
i had a feeling... by feral911 Apr 2, 2002 4:18 AM


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