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Feral, Firecracker, and the Columbians by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 8:52 AM
writing the next part now by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 9:09 AM
The Next Part by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 9:44 AM
i just edited this a minute ago by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 12:24 PM
Bill...! by m.t.mynd Jun 30, 2002 2:41 PM
you should tell them yourself by Billectric Jun 30, 2002 2:51 PM
you sick fuck... by feral Jun 30, 2002 7:52 PM
My employers will pay you to say nothing of this. by Billectric Jul 1, 2002 5:45 AM
Here is an important part I just added to the story! by Billectric Jul 1, 2002 5:44 AM
In Reality by the bastard child Jun 29, 2002 6:56 AM
In reality (the next post) by the bastard child Jun 30, 2002 12:12 AM
Everything about the girl by embryo Jun 28, 2002 1:52 PM
so there i was... by feral Jun 28, 2002 6:32 AM
ok, i have an idea by Billectric Jun 28, 2002 9:27 AM
words by the bastard child Jun 27, 2002 9:47 PM
it's not you it's me by the bastard child Jun 27, 2002 9:46 PM
something we can all relate to... by soozy Jun 28, 2002 12:12 AM
she hates summer (a sketch) by jamelah Jun 27, 2002 4:18 PM
I guess you're gone now... by mtmynd Jun 28, 2002 8:34 AM
cecil by jamelah Jul 2, 2002 6:58 PM
Like Cecil says by fallerte Jun 28, 2002 8:51 AM
thank you terry by jamelah Jul 2, 2002 7:00 PM
Vomit Taking Shape (PC!) by benwelsh Jun 27, 2002 3:38 PM
EEEEeeeeeeeuuuuuwwwwww by Billectric Jun 27, 2002 6:52 PM
I touch lightly her shoulder (PC_+_) by 1969 Jun 27, 2002 12:32 PM
Dear Winston: by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jun 25, 2002 8:17 PM
The Trail of the Feral Peril by Billectric Jun 24, 2002 8:48 AM
i just edited this 5 minutes ago by Billectric Jun 24, 2002 2:13 PM
No by fallerte Jun 27, 2002 7:28 AM
straight up and on the rocks by widowmaker Jun 27, 2002 9:35 AM
okay, that's it... by feral Jun 25, 2002 5:26 AM
hey, when you're news, you're news by Billectric Jun 25, 2002 7:54 AM
national inquirer headlines... by feral Jun 25, 2002 7:56 AM
we'll be the judge of that by Billectric Jun 25, 2002 8:51 AM
You probably by fallerte Jun 27, 2002 7:26 AM
are you in the mood for messin', old man? by feral Jun 27, 2002 8:23 AM
Times by fallerte Jun 28, 2002 8:25 AM
Burger King fast food restaurants by widowmaker Jun 27, 2002 9:39 AM
dog food... by feral Jun 27, 2002 11:09 AM
god willing by palafax Jun 26, 2002 6:09 AM
I will accept an offering of by Billectric Jun 26, 2002 9:26 AM
don't be ashamed... by palafax Jun 27, 2002 11:42 AM
I'm still thinking by fallerte Jun 27, 2002 7:25 AM
Milo (PC...Please) by Kubla Kahn Jun 23, 2002 11:28 PM
this time last year by piph Jun 23, 2002 4:37 PM
vomit prose (pc) by benwelsh Jun 21, 2002 1:18 PM
Caliscouri -that vampire story by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 4:35 PM
actually, that whole 6-11 stretch by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 4:41 PM
from The Legend. by IRIS Jun 20, 2002 3:13 PM
love (PC PLEASE) by ModernAncient Jun 20, 2002 10:23 AM
of the unrequited variety by benwelsh Jun 20, 2002 10:35 AM
Vomit PC by benwelsh Jun 20, 2002 10:23 AM
there will be some pits by Billectric Jun 24, 2002 2:14 PM
so you're saying by benwelsh Jun 25, 2002 11:49 AM
i'm saying by Billectric Jun 27, 2002 6:53 PM
what i did when i was stood up by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 9:48 AM
Dilemma by newSkinjoy98 Jun 20, 2002 8:51 AM
THAAAATATATT by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 9:14 AM
thanks billectric by newSkinjoy98 Jun 21, 2002 7:03 AM
Do I need to tell you? by stellar Jun 20, 2002 9:23 AM
thanks stellar by newSkinjoy98 Jun 21, 2002 7:04 AM
Cut Up by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 7:34 AM
or maybe NOT continued - PC by Billectric Jun 20, 2002 3:24 PM
that was... by feral Jun 21, 2002 6:40 AM
teeth? what? by Billectric Jun 21, 2002 7:01 AM
whoops... by feral Jun 22, 2002 4:05 AM
i'm sure the thing will by Billectric Jun 22, 2002 10:48 AM
you crazy bastard... by feral Jun 22, 2002 12:44 PM
don't mock the earth, son by Billectric Jun 24, 2002 1:59 PM
We can't stop here man, this is Bristol by Randall Jun 19, 2002 12:41 PM
here comes some more vomit by benwelsh Jun 19, 2002 12:40 PM
Everything by onthebus2002 Jun 19, 2002 12:25 PM
Pulled by elemental123 Jun 19, 2002 1:08 PM
Undercurrents (PC) by elemental123 Jun 19, 2002 12:16 PM
Anatomy of a Breakdown (a rough draft of a literary experiement--(PC)) by elemental123 Jun 19, 2002 12:12 PM
vomit prose (let me know what you think!) by benwelsh Jun 19, 2002 8:26 AM
This is the kind of prose by Tim Cunningham Jun 19, 2002 8:49 AM
a strory for you (please critique) by the bastard child Jun 19, 2002 6:14 AM
i like this by Billectric Jun 19, 2002 9:44 AM
a collaborative piece: by jamelah Jun 18, 2002 5:36 PM
part two: by jamelah by jamelah Jun 18, 2002 5:36 PM
part three: by piph by jamelah Jun 18, 2002 5:37 PM
part four: by jamelah by jamelah Jun 18, 2002 5:37 PM
part five: by piph by jamelah Jun 18, 2002 5:38 PM
"knock, knock!" by Billectric Jun 19, 2002 10:26 AM
The first disillusion of sex by Tim Cunningham Jun 18, 2002 8:01 AM
good original idea . . . by Billectric Jun 18, 2002 8:12 AM
Next time by elemental123 Jun 20, 2002 11:08 AM
thanks by Tim Cunningham Jun 20, 2002 11:22 AM
HAHAHA by MandyFlyMe Jun 22, 2002 4:16 AM
Had to read this by MandyFlyMe Jun 22, 2002 4:15 AM
Conscious Rejection of “The Game” (please review) by writersblock886 Jun 17, 2002 9:55 PM
yeah i liked it by josh tonkin Jun 18, 2002 1:24 AM
ginsberg's theory by benwelsh Jun 19, 2002 9:19 AM
maybe there is no 'why' by piph Jun 17, 2002 8:36 PM
One wrong can make two rights by magic love Jun 17, 2002 8:35 PM
... by magic love Jun 17, 2002 8:56 PM
... by magic love Jun 17, 2002 9:11 PM
... by magic love Jun 17, 2002 9:28 PM
... by magic love Jun 17, 2002 9:39 PM
... by magic love Jun 17, 2002 9:46 PM
Fini by magic love Jun 17, 2002 9:53 PM
On Your Story by TwistedFlop Jun 18, 2002 7:50 AM
Thanks by magic love Jun 19, 2002 2:49 PM
collouy (Please critque, please?) by Sabertash Jun 17, 2002 5:12 PM
sup? by $B-Love$ Jun 17, 2002 9:45 PM
yeah by josh tonkin Jun 18, 2002 1:27 AM
just a part by Sabertash Jun 18, 2002 4:37 PM
Gone Fishing--please critique by eostar Jun 17, 2002 11:25 AM
Very nice by Doberman8 Jun 17, 2002 8:34 PM
Fresh by $B-Love$ Jun 17, 2002 9:31 PM
Memory in 3 parts by anniefay Jun 16, 2002 2:06 PM
Ernie's Story by anniefay Jun 16, 2002 2:07 PM
The end of the memory by anniefay Jun 16, 2002 2:08 PM
Kalik, Cowbells, Junkanoo, Beer and the Bahamian experience in The Bahamas by zephyr Jun 14, 2002 3:40 PM
On working and other such sufferings... by boodashark Jun 14, 2002 2:57 PM
Some sEmblance of noRm by Billectric Jun 14, 2002 10:06 AM
as of right now i just added to this by Billectric Jun 14, 2002 12:27 PM
yes indeed by firecracker Jun 14, 2002 1:18 PM
crushed ribs by age Jun 13, 2002 7:05 PM
just as short by age Jun 13, 2002 6:48 PM
Pyscho Leaves by FunstONO Jun 13, 2002 6:59 PM
What i did when i was stood up by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jun 13, 2002 10:03 AM
i really by izzzy Jun 13, 2002 10:47 AM
Well... by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jun 13, 2002 8:58 PM
under the influence of RB. Please Critique... by jackson king Jun 13, 2002 6:36 AM
RB = Richard Brautigan? by jessica_p Jun 14, 2002 7:53 AM
on the nose... by jackson king Jun 14, 2002 1:52 PM
Animal Power of Drums(PC) by slurpy Jun 12, 2002 9:17 PM
whoa by $B-Love$ Jun 17, 2002 9:52 PM
The Ripeness of Day by Sheherazade Jun 12, 2002 8:21 PM
I by stellar Jun 12, 2002 8:25 PM
oh hey by jamelah Jun 13, 2002 6:39 AM
a known unknown place by emotion970 Jun 12, 2002 7:43 PM
goodbye, sharon by GordonWilson Jun 12, 2002 6:55 AM
I'm in the same boat by surfermike Jun 12, 2002 7:31 AM
...... by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jun 12, 2002 7:55 AM
Gordon... by mtmynd Jun 12, 2002 8:13 AM
weowewow by picasso Jun 12, 2002 8:35 AM
a few thoughts by jota Jun 12, 2002 8:36 AM
yes, jota by GordonWilson Jun 12, 2002 9:16 AM
kewl by jota Jun 12, 2002 9:19 AM
gordon by panta rhei Jun 12, 2002 9:08 AM
oh yes by GordonWilson Jun 12, 2002 9:25 AM
yes by panta rhei Jun 12, 2002 9:40 AM
wise woman by GordonWilson Jun 12, 2002 9:42 AM
will check it out by panta rhei Jun 12, 2002 9:44 AM
deeply touched. by ebonyis Jun 12, 2002 9:18 AM
everyone, i would like it by GordonWilson Jun 12, 2002 9:34 AM
I'm like a damn shrink by Randall Jun 17, 2002 4:04 AM
gordon by piph Jun 12, 2002 3:23 PM
I've done it too man... by Sid Jun 12, 2002 5:02 PM
You are a stronger man than me... by evilkleg Oct 14, 2002 6:05 PM
the wasteland. (please tell me how i write) by josh tonkin Jun 12, 2002 6:17 AM
josh by judih. Jun 15, 2002 8:02 PM
Observations from a View Within by Sheherazade Jun 11, 2002 6:43 PM
s-- by jamelah Jun 11, 2002 6:49 PM
Thank you Jamelah by Sheherazade Jun 12, 2002 5:55 AM
i hate sitting in puddles by piph Jun 11, 2002 6:53 PM
Yes, that is true by Sheherazade Jun 12, 2002 5:55 AM
from a story i once lived by kairo Jun 11, 2002 7:10 PM
Kate by Sheherazade Jun 12, 2002 5:56 AM
the crazy heat by eostar Jun 11, 2002 7:41 AM
Turnabout Encounters (PC) by slurpy Jun 11, 2002 12:14 AM
Of Knights In Shining Armor (for the girls) by abbehill Jun 10, 2002 6:09 PM
brothers are impossible...but everything to you all at the same time by flowersinherhair Jun 11, 2002 6:58 PM
good stuff by boodashark Jun 17, 2002 9:57 AM
a happy night that makes me sad. by Parcival Jun 10, 2002 4:03 PM
now what did by Billectric Jun 10, 2002 5:38 PM
i don't know by Parcival Jun 10, 2002 6:28 PM
something i SHOULD do by Billectric Jun 16, 2002 3:46 PM
www.FreeStyleLiterature.com by Medaplor Jun 10, 2002 3:51 PM
ah ok will this work? by nocker Jun 10, 2002 1:02 PM
which instrument by Billectric Jun 10, 2002 5:39 PM
always a beginning by Robertsnw Jun 9, 2002 11:34 AM
Control. by ModernAncient Jun 8, 2002 5:12 PM
Don't give up on the Great American Novel by Doberman8 Jun 15, 2002 2:12 PM
part of somthing, please PLEASE critique by Sabertash Jun 8, 2002 1:14 PM
Here ya go by Doberman8 Jun 8, 2002 9:14 PM
Here ya go by Doberman8 Jun 8, 2002 9:14 PM
thanks by Sabertash Jun 8, 2002 9:49 PM
sketch of a wordless goodbye by jamelah Jun 8, 2002 6:12 AM
leaving behind by orphicgoblin Jun 8, 2002 6:17 AM
thanks by jamelah Jun 9, 2002 7:31 AM
good by buddhabitch Jun 8, 2002 6:56 AM
thank ya kindly by jamelah Jun 9, 2002 7:33 AM
good write by anniefay Jun 8, 2002 9:18 AM
hey, ma by jamelah Jun 9, 2002 7:33 AM
jamelah by firecracker Jun 9, 2002 7:17 AM
firecracker by jamelah Jun 9, 2002 7:36 AM
hmmm by firecracker Jun 9, 2002 10:42 AM
yeah, it all works out for you by jamelah Jun 9, 2002 11:29 AM
ahhh good point by firecracker Jun 9, 2002 11:36 AM
jamelah by picasso Jun 11, 2002 7:00 AM
a rain swept beach in barranquilla, columbia... by feral Jun 8, 2002 3:17 AM
high heel pumps and fishnet stockings... by buddhabitch Jun 8, 2002 6:50 AM
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha by anniefay Jun 8, 2002 9:16 AM
heh by firecracker Jun 9, 2002 6:08 AM
is that lip gloss? by Billectric Jun 9, 2002 7:02 PM
feral, you crazy bastard by jamelah Jun 9, 2002 7:30 AM
You may have escaped this time by Billectric Jun 9, 2002 6:59 PM
the long month by flowersinherhair Jun 7, 2002 10:14 AM
Farwell Party ( Story In Full ) ...... PC by BuddhistPunk Jun 7, 2002 3:49 AM
sounds like one hell of a party by firecracker Jun 7, 2002 4:35 AM
its only late till 3 and then its getting early by lomein Jun 9, 2002 7:03 PM
My Gold Fish Lays Eggs by OneSickPuppy Jun 6, 2002 8:22 AM
Eight stories short jump by stellar Jun 6, 2002 6:52 AM
now this i like by firecracker Jun 7, 2002 4:36 AM
The Lust Program by aliengrove Jun 6, 2002 3:05 AM
Not even a dry hump in the house by OneSickPuppy Jun 6, 2002 9:22 AM
hah! by firecracker Jun 7, 2002 4:39 AM
there's definitely something about this Mary! by anniefay Jun 5, 2002 11:05 AM
definitly something about... by Jim Furnish Jun 5, 2002 11:19 AM
well thank you, Jim... by anniefay Jun 5, 2002 11:32 AM
ah, mary by jamelah Jun 5, 2002 1:23 PM
anne, this is by firecracker Jun 7, 2002 4:31 AM
"You're Fit For Duty Son" by surfermike Jun 5, 2002 2:23 AM
very by shamatha Jun 7, 2002 2:03 PM
well done by playcebo Jun 11, 2002 6:01 PM
Just by surfermike Jun 12, 2002 1:49 AM
You should REALLY p/u that book! by Seb~ Jun 12, 2002 4:32 PM
Mourning by lomein Jun 4, 2002 10:34 PM
shisha by lomein Jun 4, 2002 10:39 PM
shisha scent by panta rhei Jun 5, 2002 8:02 AM
thats cool by Harry Jun 6, 2002 3:50 PM
Spoken Word by BuddhistPunk Jun 7, 2002 1:23 AM
shut the fuck up and go to bed (pc) by lomein Jun 4, 2002 9:27 PM
read this before the story by lomein Jun 4, 2002 9:32 PM
better... by aliengrove Jun 5, 2002 3:15 AM
heavy by Harry Jun 6, 2002 3:53 PM
Transition by Sleepy Jun 4, 2002 8:59 PM
After Work on My Front Steps by picasso Jun 4, 2002 9:14 AM
BucketHead - CONCLUSION by Billectric Jun 3, 2002 7:01 PM
Buckethead by Jim Furnish Jun 5, 2002 11:59 AM
Hmmm, Pale-face - not bad. and by Billectric Jun 6, 2002 4:30 PM
Envy and Love, a great rock show in a tired bar (please critique) by ModernAncient Jun 3, 2002 6:44 PM
Loved this by Doberman8 Jun 9, 2002 7:45 PM
Squat by aliengrove Jun 3, 2002 5:13 PM
I started reading this and I like it by Billectric Jun 3, 2002 7:13 PM
did..... by aliengrove Jun 4, 2002 7:33 AM
Yes, I did by Billectric Jun 4, 2002 6:57 PM
that.. by aliengrove Jun 5, 2002 3:09 AM
BucketHead - PART 4 by Billectric Jun 3, 2002 3:28 PM
Murder in a small town (PC) by Robipoet Jun 3, 2002 1:27 PM
Road..................... by artguy Jun 2, 2002 3:11 PM
Going by artguy Jun 2, 2002 3:09 PM
BucketHead - Part 3 by Billectric Jun 2, 2002 9:49 AM
hey bill by rookie writer Jun 2, 2002 10:10 AM
Thank you. I'll probably by Billectric Jun 2, 2002 4:29 PM
more! by piph Jun 3, 2002 3:12 PM
Jota, BucketHead PART II by Billectric Jun 1, 2002 4:51 PM
buckethead gets a jarheadlike haircut by jota Jun 1, 2002 4:56 PM
oh, BucketHead has a strong heart by Billectric Jun 1, 2002 4:58 PM
twisting the night away by jota Jun 1, 2002 5:06 PM
Watertown Chapter Twelve by jota Jun 1, 2002 3:43 PM
watertown on the map by judih. Jun 1, 2002 7:20 PM
the annotated watertown by jota Jun 2, 2002 6:22 AM
right by judih. Jun 2, 2002 7:59 AM


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