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falling when you know you shouldn't by soozy Mar 31, 2002 9:22 AM
privilaged person by soozy Mar 31, 2002 9:15 AM
remote island by soozy Mar 31, 2002 9:14 AM
story so far by soozy Mar 31, 2002 9:13 AM
dusk at dawn by lomein Mar 31, 2002 12:17 AM
a drunken essay while raping the moon by Desired Username Mar 30, 2002 9:08 PM
if you raped with a spoon by subterrissole Apr 3, 2002 7:09 PM
between the time i was alive and the the time i would be dead by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 3:16 PM
keep it on the road by Billectric Mar 31, 2002 2:12 PM
fuzzbucket is an intergalactic jerk. by wil t. Mar 30, 2002 2:57 PM
delectable madness by subterrissole Apr 3, 2002 7:12 PM
thanks by wil t. Apr 5, 2002 10:55 AM
thas what i thought bout my stuuf too by subterrissole Apr 21, 2002 6:17 AM
Watertown by jotadavida Mar 29, 2002 9:41 PM
great by bigguy Mar 29, 2002 11:07 PM
... by feral911 Mar 30, 2002 12:30 AM
can't help but identify by anniefay Mar 30, 2002 4:19 AM
... by jotadavida Mar 30, 2002 5:22 AM
damn by anniefay Mar 30, 2002 5:46 AM
El Gharib by anniefay Mar 30, 2002 5:51 AM
... by feral911 Mar 30, 2002 7:25 AM
drat... by anniefay Mar 30, 2002 4:21 AM
hey shweethaht by judih. Mar 30, 2002 7:40 AM
. by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 2:32 PM
just an old beatnick by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 2:36 PM
just say no by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 2:53 PM
don't get it by ModernAncient Mar 30, 2002 3:01 PM
to piss you off by jamelah Mar 30, 2002 4:16 PM
now you tell me by stilltrucking Apr 1, 2002 4:12 PM
whoops by um Mar 30, 2002 9:14 PM
! by tantricslide Mar 30, 2002 11:28 PM
Roticism-B (explicit) by beatvibe Mar 29, 2002 5:12 PM
This one goes deep by atom tan Mar 30, 2002 2:15 PM
Beneath the Surface by beatvibe Mar 31, 2002 3:32 PM
Literal? by atom tan Mar 31, 2002 4:09 PM
Literal Response: On Pushing Buttons by beatvibe Mar 31, 2002 8:45 PM
redundant by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 2:22 PM
Curious... by beatvibe Mar 31, 2002 3:12 PM
so now i know by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 2:23 PM
whore house when i was 15 by stilltrucking Mar 30, 2002 2:27 PM
Neal and Bukowski revisited (PC) by Robipoet Mar 29, 2002 5:46 AM
Good one Robbie by surfermike Mar 29, 2002 10:13 AM
the state of a winter station by Desired Username Mar 29, 2002 3:15 AM
let it ferment by lomein Mar 29, 2002 1:01 AM
let it ferment by lomein Mar 29, 2002 12:59 AM
green is cathartic pc by lomein Mar 28, 2002 8:46 PM
green is cathartic pc by lomein Mar 28, 2002 8:45 PM
green is cathartic by lomein Mar 28, 2002 8:41 PM
very real by mist Mar 28, 2002 9:36 PM
what i was going for by lomein Mar 28, 2002 11:51 PM
April's thoughts in dream by mist Mar 28, 2002 7:34 PM
cool by jr_macd Mar 28, 2002 7:53 PM
For Beauty I Live (PC) by GreyDreams Mar 28, 2002 8:45 AM
On Down Another Road by artguy Mar 27, 2002 8:26 AM
A Fight With Full Stops (PC) by OneSickPuppy Mar 27, 2002 2:31 AM
One wild and crazy ride by GreyDreams Mar 28, 2002 11:17 AM
One wild and crazy ride by GreyDreams Mar 28, 2002 11:17 AM
Freeze Frame by GreyDreams Mar 26, 2002 8:56 AM
Liquid Motion by dorian Mar 26, 2002 3:54 PM
long but by tantricslide Mar 27, 2002 4:56 PM
:o) by GreyDreams Mar 28, 2002 8:22 AM
Who did it? (We need a detective) by Tim Cunningham Mar 26, 2002 7:11 AM
You are by BuddhistPunk Mar 26, 2002 7:15 AM
Don't you by Tim Cunningham Mar 26, 2002 7:17 AM
I'm all for by BuddhistPunk Mar 26, 2002 7:26 AM
great read by tantricslide Mar 27, 2002 4:21 PM
Memories of a kid by BuddhistPunk Mar 26, 2002 4:44 AM
nice by Tim Cunningham Mar 26, 2002 6:41 AM
On my Road by artguy Mar 25, 2002 7:21 AM
like it by mist Mar 25, 2002 4:40 PM
I loved it by ruby tuesday Mar 25, 2002 8:17 PM
new unfinished and unedited story fragment by elemental123 Mar 24, 2002 11:31 PM
Seductively Quantifying the Ether in PL19 by beatvibe Mar 24, 2002 8:38 PM
perspicacity by um Mar 24, 2002 10:30 PM
"...(1640) : of acute mental vision or discernment : KEEN..." by beatvibe Mar 25, 2002 3:24 PM
Not-So-Random Thoughts on the Nature of Love and Humanity by beatvibe Mar 26, 2002 10:36 AM
smart and beautiful by um Mar 27, 2002 4:28 AM
Intelligent Women... by beatvibe Mar 27, 2002 3:01 PM
i guess by um Mar 28, 2002 5:00 AM
On Dr. Kördann's Use of Caffeine by beatvibe Mar 28, 2002 7:49 AM
On Dr. Kördann's Poetry by beatvibe Mar 28, 2002 7:49 AM
On Dr. Kördann's Beauty by beatvibe Mar 28, 2002 7:54 AM
Yorke by Tim Cunningham Mar 24, 2002 1:02 PM
i really like what you're saying... by pollet Mar 26, 2002 3:37 AM
You know by Tim Cunningham Mar 26, 2002 7:16 AM
in my shoes by losergirl Mar 24, 2002 9:46 AM
wow by Tim Cunningham Mar 24, 2002 10:11 AM
actually by losergirl Mar 24, 2002 11:31 AM
actually by losergirl Mar 24, 2002 11:31 AM
Let me change your name ..... to by surfermike Mar 27, 2002 1:24 PM
^_^ by losergirl Apr 1, 2002 8:17 AM
Adultery, Ballroom Dancing, and Toasted Bread (PC) by GreyDreams Mar 23, 2002 10:20 PM
great story by um Mar 24, 2002 5:05 AM
The first time I told a lie. by IRIS Mar 23, 2002 3:22 PM
My Last Day At School. by IRIS Mar 23, 2002 2:45 PM
Watertown, Chapter Twenty-Five by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 9:30 AM
jota.......chapter 25 ........? by judih. Mar 23, 2002 10:30 AM
well by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 10:32 AM
i know what you mean by judih. Mar 23, 2002 10:36 AM
backfill... by mtmynd Mar 23, 2002 10:36 AM
dear judih and cecil lee by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 10:39 AM
go go go by judih. Mar 23, 2002 10:52 AM
perhaps... by mtmynd Mar 23, 2002 10:53 AM
digest by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 11:00 AM
digesting by judih. Mar 23, 2002 11:35 AM
digest by jotadavida Mar 27, 2002 9:06 AM
twenty-five by jamelah Mar 23, 2002 10:39 AM
dear jammie et al by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 10:44 AM
Dexter.. by surfermike Mar 22, 2002 2:15 PM
sudan... by feral911 Mar 23, 2002 4:02 AM
keep on the telling surfer mike by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 11:11 AM
yeah mike by um Mar 24, 2002 4:35 AM
I could've been a hero by jr_macd Mar 22, 2002 12:49 PM
unbelievable yet true by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 11:10 AM
yup its true by jr_macd Mar 23, 2002 10:55 PM
Oh, man....! ! ! by Jim Furnish Mar 24, 2002 11:25 AM
Yeah by um Mar 24, 2002 10:42 PM
by losergirl Mar 22, 2002 8:26 AM
The Mad Hungarian by jr_macd Mar 21, 2002 9:37 PM
more pudding sir by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 11:34 AM
Wrote this while sleepwalking PC by GreyDreams Mar 21, 2002 4:16 PM
An exerpt..... by artguy Mar 21, 2002 2:17 PM
Three dots by Tim Cunningham Mar 21, 2002 2:07 PM
It's Not Everyday You Clean Out Your Trash Can (PC) by Billectric Mar 21, 2002 9:36 AM
oysters! by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 11:37 AM
always a pleasure, Jota by Billectric Mar 24, 2002 8:38 AM
Skewered by Jade Mar 20, 2002 10:35 PM
a visit to grandma by jamelah Mar 20, 2002 6:49 PM
sounds like visits I've had with my grandmother by bigguy Mar 20, 2002 7:33 PM
Damn Jam! by mtmynd Mar 22, 2002 6:02 PM
you put me there by jotadavida Mar 23, 2002 10:24 AM
Fell I was Lazy Jumpin' by Billectric Mar 20, 2002 6:25 PM
huh? by bigguy Mar 20, 2002 7:22 PM
maybe i didn't by Billectric Mar 21, 2002 5:44 PM
Really liked your bio by Billectric Mar 21, 2002 5:46 PM
Sinto by Fina Mar 20, 2002 5:32 PM
Dear Journal of a girl by losergirl Mar 20, 2002 3:50 PM
nice by Harry Mar 21, 2002 12:54 PM
Judgment by ModernAncient Mar 21, 2002 1:38 PM
yes by Tim Cunningham Mar 21, 2002 1:58 PM
yes by losergirl Mar 22, 2002 8:01 AM
A farewell letter by Tim Cunningham Mar 20, 2002 2:34 PM
well now... by piph Mar 21, 2002 2:20 PM
A Story - what I have so far anyway by Harry Mar 19, 2002 12:53 PM
:-) by losergirl Mar 19, 2002 3:23 PM
a'righ? by shanders Mar 19, 2002 4:46 PM
more of "a story" by Harry Mar 20, 2002 9:39 AM
Ironic Love by Harry Mar 19, 2002 9:13 AM
yep by losergirl Mar 19, 2002 3:41 PM
Floating Life by jr_macd Mar 18, 2002 9:02 PM
st. patricks night in the town. by shanders Mar 18, 2002 5:23 PM
This story by Tim Cunningham Mar 18, 2002 10:54 PM
heat... (as read by marty in battle creek) by feral911 Mar 18, 2002 7:32 AM
actually by jamelah Mar 18, 2002 8:25 AM
you are... by feral911 Mar 18, 2002 8:31 AM
hmmmm by jamelah Mar 18, 2002 8:34 AM
True? by surfermike Mar 19, 2002 8:42 PM
terry... by feral911 Mar 19, 2002 11:09 PM
Bubbles? by Jade Mar 17, 2002 10:55 PM
Delicious and Decadent by GreyDreams Mar 22, 2002 12:07 AM
Consumer (includes bonus quote from Dr. Seward) by beatvibe Mar 17, 2002 8:46 PM
marc... by feral911 Mar 18, 2002 7:53 AM
Uh... by beatvibe Mar 18, 2002 10:51 AM
A morning of reprise (full version of falling facts) Please critique by weezer Mar 17, 2002 6:56 PM
crit? by Stark Mar 17, 2002 7:11 PM
Now that I've slept... by Stark Mar 18, 2002 6:16 AM
uhhh, wow. . . by Jim Furnish Mar 17, 2002 9:28 PM
Freedom by Stark Mar 17, 2002 5:03 PM
Context = my grandmother's favourite notion...when she was 16 by Stark Mar 17, 2002 7:19 PM
An Experience Named David by surfermike Mar 17, 2002 2:17 AM
wow mike by um Mar 17, 2002 3:09 AM
mike you said it by judih. Mar 17, 2002 5:17 AM
that makes me by Billectric Mar 17, 2002 9:15 AM
gosh by soozy Mar 17, 2002 3:20 PM
Man... by Stark Mar 17, 2002 5:18 PM
Mike. . . by Jim Furnish Mar 17, 2002 9:11 PM
chalk up another one... by feral911 Mar 22, 2002 2:44 AM
A summer not soon forgotten (please critique) by weezer Mar 16, 2002 6:55 PM
we all have those summers!!! by soozy Mar 16, 2002 9:41 PM
Swimming by aliengrove Mar 16, 2002 4:01 PM
Yesterday's Gone by Chinaskified Mar 16, 2002 7:35 AM
We Carry the body, but we did not Murder it by ModernAncient Mar 15, 2002 5:00 PM
kids by flightermouse Mar 15, 2002 5:20 PM
Sometimes by Stark Mar 17, 2002 5:27 PM
oops by subterrissole Mar 15, 2002 11:37 PM
memories of my grandfather by soozy Mar 15, 2002 12:48 PM
Soozy... by surfermike Mar 15, 2002 4:35 PM
thanks by soozy Mar 15, 2002 4:38 PM
No accident by surfermike Mar 16, 2002 1:25 AM
I spun (pleae critique) by weezer Mar 15, 2002 12:05 PM
"The Sky is Falling" by Harry Mar 15, 2002 9:31 AM
How bout some feedback Eh? by Sabertash Mar 14, 2002 10:22 PM
mafia by bigguy Mar 12, 2002 8:51 PM
wow by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 13, 2002 7:32 AM
Falling Facts part 1 (please critique) by weezer Mar 12, 2002 7:35 PM
..... by Stark Mar 17, 2002 5:42 PM
it by weezer Mar 17, 2002 5:57 PM
the words in my arm by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 12, 2002 2:37 PM
I by bigguy Mar 12, 2002 8:41 PM
really? by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 14, 2002 8:06 AM
You've by surfermike Mar 13, 2002 9:44 PM
thank you my sweet surfermike by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 14, 2002 8:05 AM
I have been that down by surfermike Mar 19, 2002 2:04 AM
my left hand by Umberto Mar 14, 2002 2:32 AM
........ by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 14, 2002 8:03 AM
when i was 15 by piph Mar 17, 2002 7:35 PM
Sadness and Fun by Happas Mar 12, 2002 2:06 PM
A Tribute To Truth by surfermike Mar 12, 2002 5:48 AM
mike by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 12, 2002 12:34 PM
Sweet girl... by surfermike Mar 12, 2002 12:52 PM
hey ghc by bluemonk Mar 12, 2002 1:36 PM
thank you by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 12, 2002 2:48 PM
so glad.. by IRIS Mar 12, 2002 3:18 PM
iris by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 13, 2002 7:33 AM
I couldn't dance (please critique) by weezer Mar 11, 2002 6:32 PM
I can relate by Billectric Mar 13, 2002 4:08 PM
Finder's Fee by vincy Mar 11, 2002 2:53 PM
Kidnapping my child by Tim Cunningham Mar 11, 2002 2:12 PM
tim by dorian Mar 12, 2002 9:44 AM
Thanks, but one question by Tim Cunningham Mar 12, 2002 10:47 AM
sorry by dorian Mar 12, 2002 1:18 PM
yet the gods mock me by WALLY Mar 11, 2002 11:05 AM
A Day in the Life by ruby tuesday Mar 10, 2002 10:58 PM
Amazing! by twotymer97 Mar 11, 2002 9:36 AM
thank you by ruby tuesday Mar 11, 2002 9:50 AM
great story by bluemonk Mar 12, 2002 6:40 AM
Special Report to the Trilateral Commission by beatvibe Mar 10, 2002 8:04 PM
Ahh. . . by Jim Furnish Mar 11, 2002 1:06 PM
the knife in my wrist by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 10, 2002 2:48 PM
that gave me chills by Billectric Mar 10, 2002 5:09 PM
Sometimes the purpose by surfermike Mar 11, 2002 1:11 AM
Life Defining..please critique by twotymer97 Mar 10, 2002 1:38 PM
nice writing by um Mar 11, 2002 2:17 AM
Thanks by twotymer97 Mar 11, 2002 11:36 AM
Wishing I Could Sleep Soundly (Please critique) by ModernAncient Mar 10, 2002 1:28 PM
Man... by twotymer97 Mar 10, 2002 1:46 PM
this by weezer Mar 10, 2002 2:32 PM
Wow! by FernandoPoo Mar 10, 2002 4:31 PM
You love & Care by surfermike Mar 11, 2002 1:21 AM
Memories of Anne - Part 4 by FernandoPoo Mar 10, 2002 4:41 AM
Watertown, Chapter Ten by jotadavida Mar 9, 2002 9:39 PM
chapter ten by judih. Mar 10, 2002 3:45 AM
... by jotadavida Mar 9, 2002 8:32 PM
... by jotadavida Mar 9, 2002 8:46 PM
typo... by feral911 Mar 9, 2002 9:02 PM
Watertown, Chapter Nine by jotadavida Mar 9, 2002 5:02 PM
so, Todd's got some issues by judih. Mar 9, 2002 8:13 PM
todd is a realist by jotadavida Mar 9, 2002 8:19 PM
Only... by mtmynd Mar 9, 2002 8:28 PM
secrets by judih. Mar 9, 2002 8:32 PM
somewhere.... by mtmynd Mar 9, 2002 8:43 PM
Memories of Anne - Part 3 by FernandoPoo Mar 9, 2002 1:05 PM
i'm followin'... by mtmynd Mar 9, 2002 8:39 PM
Watertown, Chapter Eight by jotadavida Mar 9, 2002 6:00 AM
franny... by feral911 Mar 9, 2002 8:12 AM
yes, what to do by judih. Mar 9, 2002 8:15 AM
Jota! by mtmynd Mar 9, 2002 1:14 PM
Memories of Anne - Part 2 by FernandoPoo Mar 8, 2002 10:05 PM
Fernando... by mtmynd Mar 9, 2002 6:14 AM
Havanon The Bird by rubylexicon Mar 8, 2002 9:46 AM
Memories of Anne by FernandoPoo Mar 7, 2002 6:58 PM
Response by rubylexicon Mar 8, 2002 10:03 AM
I probably should be in a mental ward (please critique) by weezer Mar 6, 2002 5:06 PM
toe tally by subterrissole Mar 6, 2002 6:56 PM
the by weezer Mar 7, 2002 1:16 PM
wooo by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 7, 2002 1:24 PM
I by weezer Mar 7, 2002 4:01 PM
well, that by Billectric Mar 7, 2002 6:48 PM
THAT, my young scribe . . . by Billectric Mar 7, 2002 6:46 PM
dull by yohanson jerky boy Mar 6, 2002 3:55 PM
meeting lamantia by bluemonk Mar 6, 2002 2:11 AM
It's Back by Billectric Mar 5, 2002 7:01 PM
The GatorNationals by Billectric Mar 7, 2002 7:09 PM
The GatorNationals by Billectric Mar 7, 2002 7:10 PM
I Have a Cokebottle in the Attic by ModernAncient Mar 5, 2002 2:19 PM
i bet that bottle by Yabyum Mar 5, 2002 4:29 PM
Excellent keepsake by surfermike Mar 5, 2002 10:22 PM
i stood on the ship's bridge by marty Mar 6, 2002 7:58 AM
Let them eat cake by Jade Mar 4, 2002 9:56 PM
food for thought... by nikirby Mar 4, 2002 10:58 PM
i by Yabyum Mar 4, 2002 11:16 PM
holy horned lentil burgers batman by subterrissole Mar 4, 2002 11:24 PM
three minutes by nikirby Mar 4, 2002 6:30 PM
Nearly Deliverance by surfermike Mar 4, 2002 4:17 PM
that was by Yabyum Mar 4, 2002 11:22 PM
My Road by artguy Mar 4, 2002 6:30 AM
Notes from the Hotel, While Drinking and Watching Willy Wonka by RobotGoat Mar 3, 2002 11:49 PM
The Brain Ride, Part 2 (the exciting conclusion) by RobotGoat Mar 3, 2002 9:42 AM
dares... by mtmynd Mar 3, 2002 12:32 PM
i thought by RobotGoat Mar 3, 2002 10:44 PM
fear of flyin' by um Mar 3, 2002 1:52 AM
fear of disney world by bluemonk Mar 3, 2002 3:08 AM
thanks by um Mar 3, 2002 4:40 AM
Breaker Morant... by feral911 Mar 3, 2002 1:25 AM
went by um Mar 3, 2002 1:30 AM
the stuff... by feral911 Mar 3, 2002 1:33 AM
harry told the bastards by jotadavida Mar 3, 2002 3:55 AM
not my story... by feral911 Mar 3, 2002 4:02 AM
Watertown, Chapter Seven by jotadavida Mar 2, 2002 1:27 PM
up and down by judih. Mar 2, 2002 7:00 PM
PRAISE... by feral911 Mar 2, 2002 8:11 PM
keep truckin' by mtmynd Mar 3, 2002 9:39 AM
growth by Emelia Oct 11, 2002 7:23 PM
Watertown, Chapter Six by jotadavida Mar 2, 2002 11:25 AM
jota by jamelah Mar 2, 2002 1:23 PM
nicely placed by bluemonk Mar 3, 2002 1:09 AM
pitiful little tale by m.t.mynd Mar 2, 2002 7:03 AM
hey, goddamnit... by feral911 Mar 2, 2002 8:22 PM
Pay by buddhabitch Mar 2, 2002 8:30 PM
those that called me a nice young man... by feral911 Mar 2, 2002 11:47 PM
Butthole Ostrich by RobotGoat Mar 3, 2002 9:19 AM
Family Planning by Pandy Mar 1, 2002 1:12 PM


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