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3rd period American History by greenteaFRK May 31, 2002 6:38 AM
You really should get out more.... by BuddhistPunk May 31, 2002 6:50 AM
the last time i climbed a tree... by feral911 May 31, 2002 7:02 AM
We should never have by BuddhistPunk May 31, 2002 7:16 AM
fucked if i know... by feral911 May 31, 2002 7:23 AM
Wish I was, by BuddhistPunk May 31, 2002 7:31 AM
2pm today... by feral May 31, 2002 7:57 PM
PC - A short story about a real evening by Lescuyer May 30, 2002 2:44 PM
Olivier's reply by 1969 Jun 5, 2002 1:35 PM
wOrk by izzzy May 30, 2002 11:37 AM
Spanish Period 4 by greenteaFRK May 29, 2002 6:13 AM
You are a freak by OneSickPuppy May 29, 2002 9:08 AM
sweaty clowns... by twotymer97 May 30, 2002 9:33 AM
Nightlife - (its just two paragraphs but I want citque on HOW I write.. PC!! :) by Harry May 28, 2002 3:43 PM
you're style by Curly May 29, 2002 3:47 AM
agreed... by Stark May 29, 2002 3:50 PM
Thanks by Harry May 29, 2002 8:04 PM
this is by josh tonkin Jun 1, 2002 5:11 AM
If you like this... by Harry Jun 1, 2002 6:25 AM
More of the story... Just a few more paragraphs.... by Harry Jun 1, 2002 6:23 AM
i liike the scenes and the characters by Billectric Jun 17, 2002 5:47 AM
i like the way you write by lomein Jun 4, 2002 9:42 PM
how could I forget by Harry Jun 6, 2002 3:46 PM
Media Productions I- 2nd period (part 2) by greenteaFRK May 28, 2002 1:39 PM
Media Productions I - 2nd period (part one) ( please read and critique) by greenteaFRK May 28, 2002 1:27 PM
prelude to doom. (criticise this please.) by josh tonkin May 28, 2002 5:23 AM
Well Josh by BuddhistPunk May 28, 2002 5:28 AM
well josh... by feral911 May 28, 2002 5:34 AM
i think by greenteaFRK May 28, 2002 1:17 PM
lighten up? by feral911 May 28, 2002 3:00 PM
dear gtfreak by jota May 28, 2002 3:59 PM
thanks jota... by feral911 May 29, 2002 3:52 AM
critique or criticise by josh tonkin May 29, 2002 4:58 AM
well by jota May 29, 2002 5:32 AM
in regards to feral's abusing this board by Anntelope Jun 22, 2002 7:48 AM
prelude to doom by Anntelope Jun 1, 2002 11:56 AM
Changing Channels (pc) by newSkinjoy98 May 27, 2002 9:32 PM
Watertown, Chapter Eleven by jota May 27, 2002 10:36 AM
Welcome back, Jack.. by mtmynd May 27, 2002 12:31 PM
great details by judih. May 27, 2002 7:16 PM
it's about time... by feral911 May 28, 2002 5:12 AM
good to see by panta rhei May 29, 2002 5:58 AM
Hmmmmm by Mob May 29, 2002 6:16 AM
yay by jamelah May 29, 2002 6:29 AM
and many moons later.. by mudshark May 29, 2002 9:00 AM
Action Story by Stark May 27, 2002 10:27 AM
The room is pure white, Angel Visions fill his sight, by Stark May 27, 2002 10:34 AM
and there she stands, back straight, looking in through the door by Stark May 27, 2002 10:49 AM
He grins, gently, as he raises himself up. by Stark May 27, 2002 11:18 AM
all a long silence by Stark May 27, 2002 11:38 AM
three ways by Stark May 27, 2002 11:54 AM
she takes him outside. by Stark May 27, 2002 12:23 PM
forest romance by Stark May 27, 2002 12:46 PM
The Chase by Stark May 27, 2002 1:11 PM
Epiphany by Stark May 27, 2002 1:21 PM
Finsihed by Stark May 27, 2002 1:23 PM
i bloody well enjoyed reading it! by sister moon Jul 14, 2002 2:22 PM
nice one! by Stark Jul 14, 2002 3:47 PM
even better by sister moon Jul 15, 2002 10:23 PM
i like to read a lot... by Stark Jul 16, 2002 4:35 PM
hey,interesting by sister moon Jul 17, 2002 12:04 PM
Farwell Party by BuddhistPunk May 27, 2002 2:38 AM
sex, drugs & r'n'r by papillon_8hr May 27, 2002 2:43 AM
once again by lomein Jun 4, 2002 9:57 PM
IGUANA DREAMS FRAGMENT by Danton Thorne May 26, 2002 8:25 PM
CACTUS HEADS by dkeenan May 26, 2002 1:03 PM
sample 2 from "Whoremoans" - (about "the life") by Anntelope May 26, 2002 5:41 AM
really. . . by Jim Furnish May 26, 2002 7:47 PM
A start to something new | I'd love input by ms_anthrope May 26, 2002 5:03 AM
Giant shoulders and killer legs by Robipoet May 25, 2002 5:48 AM
beautifully written by Danton Thorne May 26, 2002 10:23 PM
"Caberet" a story about the life by Anntelope May 24, 2002 8:12 AM
Ann by judih. May 24, 2002 8:18 AM
cabaret by Anntelope May 25, 2002 7:05 PM
Kissing the Ice Maiden I by twotymer97 May 23, 2002 4:02 PM
II by twotymer97 May 24, 2002 10:32 PM
III by twotymer97 May 24, 2002 10:39 PM
IV by twotymer97 May 24, 2002 10:46 PM
V by twotymer97 May 24, 2002 10:56 PM
alone isn't so bad... by piph May 26, 2002 6:34 PM
reply to by um May 26, 2002 12:00 AM
A New Whiff Of Smoke In The 8th Arrondisement Of Paris by rube lindale May 23, 2002 3:08 PM
man, that was good. by Billectric Jun 16, 2002 6:12 PM
The marshmellow plant, turns to face the sun :) by onthebus2002 May 23, 2002 1:36 PM
WOW by magic love May 24, 2002 1:25 AM
electric snakes in the kitchen by stilltrucking May 23, 2002 12:51 PM
Gotta do what u gotta do by Billectric May 25, 2002 8:08 AM
high on fever by mudshark May 23, 2002 4:48 AM
fokking brilliant by jota May 23, 2002 7:40 AM
sounds like by picasso May 23, 2002 9:52 AM
te next day by mudshark May 23, 2002 10:12 PM
And so on... (Howie Becksty's final Years)PC by Harry May 21, 2002 5:24 PM
More: by Harry May 22, 2002 2:51 PM
A Nostalgic Dr. Kördann Reflects on the Eisinbrüge Maneuver by beatvibe May 19, 2002 11:34 AM
wow by um May 19, 2002 11:35 PM
Behind The Story by richardporter42 May 19, 2002 10:31 AM
Part two "Dulce est desipere" Critique, please? by Sabertash May 17, 2002 9:14 PM
Please give me sumpthin'! by Sabertash May 20, 2002 5:38 PM
the study by Illuminara May 15, 2002 8:56 PM
full by smhppp May 17, 2002 10:39 AM
Post 3000 something from the slush pile by Danton Thorne May 15, 2002 7:12 PM
first chapter of "neckties..." by smhppp May 15, 2002 11:10 AM
seed by Illuminara May 15, 2002 10:21 PM
you're right by smhppp May 17, 2002 10:44 AM
Ooh Baby! by Lord.Ausch Nov 1, 2002 12:35 PM
Growing Up In Public (PC) by Jesse85 May 14, 2002 7:40 PM
terrific by bluemonk May 17, 2002 8:32 AM
thanks by Jesse85 May 18, 2002 2:20 PM
the sneeze by Gothic-Hippie-Chic May 13, 2002 4:00 PM
God Bless You by Danton Thorne May 13, 2002 9:41 PM
short blurbish thing. by sweptlikeash May 13, 2002 2:39 PM
Hot Air: The Play! (PC) by slurpy May 12, 2002 9:03 PM
go slurpy by tantricslide May 12, 2002 10:15 PM
IGUANA DREAMS #3 - KETCHUM IDAHO 1978 by Danton Thorne May 12, 2002 8:33 AM
Hem by fallerte May 12, 2002 3:33 PM
Hem... hum... for real... by Danton Thorne May 12, 2002 6:39 PM
The Happy Gun Book (OPC) thats Oh Please Critique by slurpy May 12, 2002 1:50 AM
Sea Lions and C-Lions by Danton Thorne May 11, 2002 2:35 PM
statues of the west (PC) by ezrachen May 11, 2002 2:03 AM
Political Ambiguity by slurpy May 10, 2002 9:56 PM
Damion and the Nymph by Danton Thorne May 10, 2002 9:28 PM
this is by ~K Jul 8, 2002 2:27 AM
The Strangest Harmonica I ever knew (PC) by slurpy May 10, 2002 12:01 AM
The Party (Horror Story ) by pinkhairedpunk May 9, 2002 5:55 PM
wow. .. by Jim Furnish May 10, 2002 2:57 PM
Awesome by Danton Thorne May 11, 2002 5:40 PM
That was good by Billectric Jun 6, 2002 4:34 PM
Moral Dillema No. 1 ( my seventh grade journal entry) by Gothic-Hippie-Chic May 9, 2002 5:26 PM
birth by jota May 11, 2002 8:28 PM
GHC by picasso May 23, 2002 9:48 AM
roses by youngrobert May 9, 2002 12:26 PM
Dawn by James Jones May 9, 2002 10:02 AM
good death by stilltrucking Aug 13, 2002 6:50 AM
the magic 8-ball (explicit)... by feral911 May 8, 2002 7:57 AM
You gotta by elemental123 May 9, 2002 3:06 AM
Interesting read by BuddhistPunk May 9, 2002 3:13 AM
I heard a story... by mindlosing May 9, 2002 4:57 PM
charming as always by mudshark May 9, 2002 7:02 PM
i wish... by feral911 May 10, 2002 3:36 AM
nexttime by um May 10, 2002 4:05 AM
thanks, man... by feral911 May 10, 2002 4:33 AM
did you by um May 11, 2002 4:50 AM
i've always wondered... by feral911 May 11, 2002 5:14 AM
must have by um May 13, 2002 1:46 AM
maybe by um May 13, 2002 1:47 AM
All That Matters by barstool May 7, 2002 7:16 PM
more than a start, less than a story by lost May 7, 2002 3:23 PM
just a start... let me know what you think. by mulligan stew May 6, 2002 5:29 PM
SAT ALONE WITH HIS COMPUTER by Links May 6, 2002 12:56 PM
Bonfire (not yet revised) by barstool May 5, 2002 10:11 PM
SWAMP HOLLOW XMAS by Danton Thorne May 5, 2002 9:19 PM
once you start, its no stopping..read it folks! by mudshark May 7, 2002 2:58 PM
Thanks Mudshark... by Danton Thorne May 8, 2002 9:07 PM
nice.. by Jim Furnish May 8, 2002 11:44 PM
Thanks Jim... by Danton Thorne May 9, 2002 9:51 PM
Hell of a read there Danton... by BuddhistPunk May 9, 2002 3:09 AM
Enoch... by Danton Thorne May 9, 2002 9:53 PM
Song of a Misspent Youth - part one of a trilogy by jota May 5, 2002 5:23 PM
Jota - Watertown's great by Billectric May 5, 2002 12:43 PM
hey bill, thanks by jota May 5, 2002 6:00 PM
the wonderous pharmecuticals by Billectric May 6, 2002 4:19 PM
please,please oh PLEASE give me some feedback by Sabertash May 5, 2002 11:23 AM
Critique is on the way by Billectric May 5, 2002 12:57 PM
Critique by Mordou May 5, 2002 3:21 PM
Sacrifice by Mordou May 5, 2002 3:23 PM
At one point in the story by Billectric May 6, 2002 4:16 PM
Rage rage rage by Danton Thorne May 9, 2002 10:03 PM
The Dark Ones (PC) by slurpy May 5, 2002 1:21 AM
Ohhhhh the road....... by artguy May 4, 2002 7:36 PM
My Bedroom by beatvibe May 4, 2002 5:27 PM
new roads by mudshark May 7, 2002 2:35 PM
Just a diversion... by beatvibe May 8, 2002 8:31 PM
when i saw my best concert by mudshark May 4, 2002 12:55 PM
the beat farmers, huh? by feral911 May 10, 2002 10:20 AM
oo yeah by mudshark May 12, 2002 2:52 PM
Aunt Phobe . part 2. by IRIS May 4, 2002 12:03 PM
Aunt Phoebe. by IRIS May 4, 2002 11:33 AM
Human Sacrifice in the Modern World--please,please critique! by Mordou May 4, 2002 1:12 AM
Vivid by Sabertash May 8, 2002 4:40 PM
Interesting by pinkhairedpunk May 9, 2002 9:02 PM
Will I ever.... by onthebus2002 May 3, 2002 4:17 PM
Curtain Call... by Danton Thorne May 3, 2002 9:50 PM
statues as beacons (pc) by ezrachen May 3, 2002 12:00 PM
Iguana Dreams #2 - OIL IS KING by Danton Thorne May 3, 2002 8:13 AM
dante by jota May 3, 2002 8:48 PM
I WILL... I WILL... I WILL by Danton Thorne May 3, 2002 9:44 PM
April Snow-- would REALLY appreciate honest critique of this. by RevelationNC May 3, 2002 4:27 AM
amy what cha wanna do by jota May 3, 2002 8:52 PM
thanks by RevelationNC May 4, 2002 9:14 AM
The Success of a Marriage by barstool May 2, 2002 9:18 PM
Hi, barstool by junio May 3, 2002 4:55 AM
there are some things around here by jota May 4, 2002 11:07 AM
a fish story by jota May 4, 2002 11:08 AM
thank you by barstool May 4, 2002 3:39 PM
Ode to Mental Anguish (PC) by slurpy May 2, 2002 8:41 PM
Musings on the Cereal conspiricy (PC) by slurpy May 2, 2002 8:32 PM
The Finishing Touch--short story(PC) by Mordou May 2, 2002 4:00 AM
Everyboady's least favorite drunk by slurpy May 1, 2002 11:23 PM
Love the ending! by Mordou May 2, 2002 4:02 AM
Lunch is on her - revised by Jade May 1, 2002 9:10 PM
and somthing new (PC2) by Sabertash May 1, 2002 8:56 PM
What's a guy gotta do by Sabertash May 3, 2002 5:00 PM
something old... (PC) by Sabertash May 1, 2002 8:50 PM


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