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Bill Brown's Dead: A Fragment for Vinny and Slunk (rough) by Holygoof Apr 30, 2003 10:17 AM
Ya keep it crackalackin with the shizzle dizzle.. by feloniousslunk Apr 30, 2003 10:39 AM
you by jim vinny Apr 30, 2003 11:54 AM
Satiric prose... by beatvibe Apr 29, 2003 9:19 AM
This just in... by stevadore Apr 29, 2003 6:48 AM
first chapter of a novel entitled "An Epic Tale of Nothing Much" (PC) by a majority of one Apr 28, 2003 6:48 PM
You're right: by Julba Apr 30, 2003 3:09 PM
yea by a majority of one Apr 30, 2003 11:09 PM
Me, the Bird, and Doreen's Hair by Knip Apr 28, 2003 10:19 AM
you think maybe... by stevadore Apr 28, 2003 11:27 AM
Galattica vs Atlantis: The final showdown (PC) by the bastard child Apr 27, 2003 9:56 PM
Five Fairy Tales (PC) by the bastard child Apr 27, 2003 9:49 PM
Vision Of Meat Factory Workers by BrainSalad Apr 26, 2003 3:47 PM
Revising chapter 21 underway by jota Apr 26, 2003 11:34 AM
pointing a what? by judih. Apr 26, 2003 12:19 PM
i been watching too much tony soprano by jota Apr 26, 2003 2:07 PM
this time by jamelah Apr 26, 2003 3:35 PM
Drowning? by Billectric Apr 27, 2003 6:49 AM
didn't dig it? i did by judih. Apr 28, 2003 12:48 PM
Short story - San Francisco PC by sequin Apr 24, 2003 2:26 PM
I liked it by The Flaming Red Head Apr 28, 2003 4:51 AM
his hands shook by Rosie Apr 24, 2003 1:20 PM
this by Julba Apr 24, 2003 1:26 PM
always by Rosie Apr 24, 2003 1:29 PM
your picture by Rosie Apr 24, 2003 2:12 PM
How bout now??? by Julba Apr 24, 2003 2:24 PM
yeah by Rosie Apr 24, 2003 2:30 PM
(smile) by Julba Apr 24, 2003 2:34 PM
oh no! by Rosie Apr 24, 2003 2:36 PM
Hey, that's ok. by Julba Apr 24, 2003 2:40 PM
oh, I get it, by Julba Apr 24, 2003 2:40 PM
lol! by Rosie Apr 24, 2003 3:27 PM
Interesting... by RichLewis Jun 25, 2003 6:56 PM
:) by Rosie Jul 3, 2003 12:18 PM
THE DAY I GOT SNOTTED by pointybird Apr 24, 2003 8:39 AM
the by smg Apr 24, 2003 10:14 AM
well.... by pointybird Apr 24, 2003 10:19 AM
POINTY by smelt Apr 26, 2003 2:34 AM
the thing is by pointybird Apr 26, 2003 4:09 AM
i've got a happy but by smelt Apr 27, 2003 4:28 AM
Mayor's Death by I Skreem Apr 23, 2003 6:24 PM
Amigo by pointybird Apr 24, 2003 9:00 AM
tee hee hee by I Skreem Apr 24, 2003 10:46 AM
iscreem for crow by pointybird Apr 26, 2003 12:14 AM
66th and 5th by Emelia Apr 22, 2003 7:37 PM
april 2003 by Emelia Apr 22, 2003 6:47 PM
He Draws (PC) by ModernAncient Apr 22, 2003 6:26 PM
great by smg Apr 23, 2003 10:42 AM
HELP WANTED by stevadore Apr 22, 2003 10:35 AM
ouch! (I love it!) by Julba Apr 23, 2003 2:14 PM
chap 11 by stevadore Apr 24, 2003 8:01 AM
Not bad, stevedore by I Skreem Apr 23, 2003 3:35 PM
i'm from by stevadore Apr 24, 2003 8:04 AM
Joi-sey? by I Skreem Apr 24, 2003 8:29 AM
sorry, that ain't jersey by stevadore Apr 24, 2003 8:41 AM
That's not joi-sey? by I Skreem Apr 24, 2003 9:08 AM
(disregard) by I Skreem Apr 23, 2003 3:43 PM
I swerved into the parking lot... by feloniousslunk Apr 22, 2003 8:21 AM
The day i left the world behind. by sonofthesun Apr 22, 2003 1:26 AM
Are you talking about........ by Twisted Hair Feb 21, 2004 12:37 AM
new smut!!! PC by smg Apr 21, 2003 7:34 PM
ever-ready! black n decker! penthouse forum! the world is yers by Vlad99 Apr 21, 2003 9:11 PM
taking the chance by Argonauta Apr 21, 2003 9:15 PM
thanks by learned Apr 22, 2003 6:21 AM
yes, thank you by Rosie Apr 26, 2003 1:41 AM
well by learned Jul 11, 2004 1:09 PM
wow.. by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 28, 2003 7:13 PM
Thom Faynes meets death and a juggler (PC) (Pretty Please?) by Julba Apr 21, 2003 5:45 AM
hmm by smg Apr 21, 2003 12:32 PM
All I can by Julba Apr 21, 2003 12:53 PM
great idea, by stevadore Apr 22, 2003 7:42 AM
thanks by Julba Apr 22, 2003 2:13 PM
School of Nights - 2 by foolish_Paeter Apr 20, 2003 9:00 PM
This is by Julba Apr 21, 2003 6:24 AM
i would say by foolish_Paeter Apr 21, 2003 8:37 AM
can't wait. by Julba Apr 21, 2003 8:48 AM
Darkest Before Dawn by HepKat Apr 20, 2003 5:11 PM
KAT ! This is Tops ! by Billectric Apr 21, 2003 11:29 AM
Thank You :) by HepKat Apr 22, 2003 5:43 AM
--- by mindlosing Apr 23, 2003 12:46 PM
The Viper Room by HepKat Apr 20, 2003 5:08 PM
All 3 of these stories by Billectric Apr 22, 2003 5:30 AM
Night Train by HepKat Apr 20, 2003 4:44 PM
Man! by strangeways Apr 22, 2003 5:39 AM
This made me think of Samuel Beckett and laugh (PC) by a majority of one Apr 20, 2003 4:27 PM
I like. by Julba Apr 21, 2003 6:28 AM
choking (PC) by ModernAncient Apr 20, 2003 9:37 AM
blah by oisin Apr 20, 2003 12:43 PM
The Unsatisfied Pornstar by ModernAncient Apr 20, 2003 2:15 PM
I like it by Billectric Apr 20, 2003 3:17 PM
First chapter of my second novel (PC) by oisin Apr 20, 2003 8:40 AM
School of Nights - 1 by foolish_Paeter Apr 19, 2003 11:36 PM
"Whittlebone's Walk / School of Nights" - tie-in poem by foolish_Paeter Apr 19, 2003 11:43 PM
Untitled Spontaneity by frontal-abstraction Apr 19, 2003 9:10 AM
this morning by frontal-abstraction Apr 20, 2003 6:06 AM
Avenal notes by Vlad99 Apr 18, 2003 5:55 PM
Prelude to Avenal by Vlad99 Apr 18, 2003 7:44 PM
lookin forward to it by judih. Apr 19, 2003 9:25 AM
Detour by Vlad99 Apr 19, 2003 9:52 PM
are you by Kreddible Trout Apr 19, 2003 11:39 PM
What you've written so far by Billectric Apr 20, 2003 6:09 AM
X-tian digression, revised by Vlad99 Apr 20, 2003 9:25 AM
Yeah, this is good. by Billectric Apr 21, 2003 6:24 AM
Reception by Vlad99 Apr 22, 2003 12:08 AM
hmmm by pointybird Apr 22, 2003 3:39 AM
champ, by Vlad99 Apr 22, 2003 8:56 AM
This sounds like it could turn into a book by Billectric Apr 22, 2003 5:37 AM
Red Woman (PC) by Rhinehart Apr 18, 2003 3:47 AM
Rhinehart - by PhilipHarris Apr 18, 2003 5:47 PM
You wouldn't believe me even if I told you. by elemental123 Apr 18, 2003 1:06 AM
a day after the world ended by thunder chicken Apr 18, 2003 1:58 AM
hey by stevadore Apr 18, 2003 9:13 AM
I do believe you by frontal-abstraction Apr 19, 2003 10:47 AM
in the unearthing of certain liars by ellipsis Apr 17, 2003 5:02 PM
a crackerjack story by thunder chicken Apr 17, 2003 5:15 PM
that's how they get'cha! by Kreddible Trout Apr 17, 2003 6:48 PM
This is very funny by Billectric Apr 18, 2003 8:42 AM
the pink floaty floyd pig flew by pelerine Apr 18, 2003 10:17 AM
* big grin * by untitledpoet Apr 19, 2003 3:48 PM
That is quite possibly........... by jason is Apr 28, 2003 4:31 PM
Novel Introduction by earth guru Apr 16, 2003 6:00 PM
A short story inspired by an unrelated conversation (PC) by a majority of one Apr 15, 2003 12:20 PM
Very nice ! by Billectric Apr 16, 2003 1:16 PM
Title less short story (PC) by AgnosticExtremist Apr 14, 2003 10:31 PM
thoughts by piph Apr 14, 2003 11:10 PM
Yeah.... by AgnosticExtremist Apr 15, 2003 5:38 PM
I hear that! by torchboy Apr 18, 2003 12:41 AM
Sex and drugs by AgnosticExtremist Apr 19, 2003 9:59 PM
Sex does sell by torchboy Apr 21, 2003 11:30 PM
the dinnertime famine (don't read if.............)(PC) by Maree Hagar Apr 14, 2003 12:15 PM
I think by Julba Apr 15, 2003 3:35 PM
why by Maree Hagar Apr 15, 2003 5:24 PM
well by Julba Apr 16, 2003 4:13 AM
hmmm..... by Maree Hagar Apr 16, 2003 6:20 AM
The ObSeRvEr(an idea) by joshuagriffin Apr 14, 2003 11:58 AM
interesting by Billectric Apr 14, 2003 5:19 PM
meth-florescents and Jose and myself - by PhilipHarris Apr 14, 2003 10:50 AM
21 by artguy Apr 13, 2003 5:49 PM
The Gluttony of Nora Thistle (PC...my first story posted) by Julba Apr 13, 2003 5:48 PM
it's by Maree Hagar Apr 15, 2003 12:09 PM
Watertown, Chapter Twenty by jota Apr 13, 2003 2:16 PM
time out by thunder chicken Apr 14, 2003 1:16 AM
Easter sunday morning two hours till sunrise by thunder chicken Apr 20, 2003 1:28 AM
One Morning by jota Apr 20, 2003 5:50 PM
nice by thunder chicken May 14, 2003 11:50 PM
good craft by mudshark Apr 14, 2003 2:00 AM
gettin my boots and climbin the highest tree by judih. Apr 14, 2003 2:12 AM
Jota, I continue to enjoy the hell out of this story! by Billectric Apr 15, 2003 7:01 AM
suzanna (sunset pain cont'd......for untitledpoet)...PC by Maree Hagar Apr 13, 2003 10:55 AM
Say something, please!! (PC) (Or if not PC have fun!)(edited) by Ozgarth Apr 12, 2003 8:51 PM
Ozgarth, by Holygoof Apr 13, 2003 6:38 AM
i am just by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 13, 2003 7:18 AM
actually ghc, I by Ozgarth Apr 13, 2003 7:57 AM
Ozgarth by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 13, 2003 8:18 AM
Oh, the Agony of Closed-Eye Coming by Billectric Apr 12, 2003 1:16 PM
hmm by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 13, 2003 9:00 AM
when by thunder chicken Apr 13, 2003 11:27 PM
BIG VOLCANIC IDIOT DAY, A SORTA STORY (p.c.) by Holygoof Apr 11, 2003 2:42 PM
Rereading my paw-print: by Holygoof Apr 11, 2003 5:01 PM
A Goof's life.... by Hester Prynne Apr 11, 2003 7:23 PM
That's the shit part: by Holygoof Apr 12, 2003 8:42 AM
baby love...finished by Aki Apr 11, 2003 11:25 AM
dear by Himali Apr 11, 2003 9:58 PM
and by Himali Apr 11, 2003 10:14 PM
aki by ellipsis Apr 11, 2003 11:37 PM
buried alive by learned Apr 11, 2003 1:45 AM
oh, yeah by Billectric Apr 11, 2003 6:34 AM
thanks by learned Apr 11, 2003 7:11 AM
Distinguishing Debts by Ozgarth Apr 10, 2003 8:31 PM
ozgarth by Himali Apr 10, 2003 9:54 PM
sunset pain (pc) by Maree Hagar Apr 10, 2003 4:28 PM
just by untitledpoet Apr 12, 2003 11:35 AM
****** by Maree Hagar Apr 13, 2003 8:44 AM
don't read by untitledpoet Apr 13, 2003 11:23 AM
read by untitledpoet Apr 13, 2003 11:24 AM
Snippet (PC) by ModernAncient Apr 10, 2003 1:54 PM
a question of representation -or- confession by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 9:20 AM
X-STATIC by zygotenmycoffee Apr 10, 2003 10:28 AM
zygote by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 10:43 AM
I don't know whether to by Billectric Apr 10, 2003 11:02 AM
hi bill by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 11:10 AM
well, don't decimate it by Billectric Apr 10, 2003 11:48 AM
thanks in_ex by pelerine Apr 10, 2003 11:15 AM
thanks pel by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 11:22 AM
this is not exactly feedback by firecracker Apr 10, 2003 11:22 AM
hmmm by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 11:23 AM
protest by ellipsis Apr 10, 2003 11:34 AM
goddammit, i quit by jamelah Apr 10, 2003 3:29 PM
thanks jam by in_extremis Apr 11, 2003 8:16 AM
no i haven't replied by learned Apr 10, 2003 3:32 PM
learned by in_extremis Apr 11, 2003 8:17 AM
i hope by learned Apr 11, 2003 9:02 AM
always by in_extremis Apr 11, 2003 9:14 AM
Exuberant and True! by Holygoof Apr 10, 2003 3:34 PM
Beautiful Words by catharsis Apr 10, 2003 7:12 PM
I just wanted to tell you... by Crimson War Goddess Apr 12, 2003 12:01 AM
the christmas ring by jota Apr 9, 2003 11:01 PM
Cool by Billectric Apr 10, 2003 11:04 AM
'A Better Day...' by PhilipHarris Apr 9, 2003 9:39 AM
baby love...con't by Aki Apr 9, 2003 1:41 AM
why by Himali Apr 10, 2003 9:56 PM
INTERVIEW OF ZYGOTE(aka BRIAN FUGETT) from BABEL MAGAZINE by zygotenmycoffee Apr 8, 2003 11:01 PM
Brian by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 9, 2003 10:42 AM
GOTH by zygotenmycoffee Apr 10, 2003 9:56 AM
well by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 10:47 AM
This interview made me a 31-year-old orphan... by zygotenmycoffee Apr 10, 2003 11:10 AM
hmmm by firecracker Apr 10, 2003 11:23 AM
yeah by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 11:27 AM
maybe they will gradually realize by Billectric Apr 10, 2003 11:34 AM
THAT's what I tried to explain by zygotenmycoffee Apr 10, 2003 12:04 PM
damn by in_extremis Apr 10, 2003 11:26 AM
I have the same mentality when it comes to art... by zygotenmycoffee Apr 10, 2003 11:58 AM
. by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 10, 2003 11:42 AM
i'd like to, umm, adopt you, by stevadore Apr 11, 2003 7:53 AM
Recreational copulation! it is always a possibility... by zygotenmycoffee Apr 17, 2003 2:40 PM
Noir comics by neoreality Apr 10, 2003 11:31 AM
I dig by zygotenmycoffee Apr 10, 2003 11:36 AM
I'm all fired up now by Billectric Apr 10, 2003 11:32 AM
good read by mtmynd Apr 11, 2003 8:27 AM
i don't think by um Apr 12, 2003 3:19 AM
thing is zyggy by smelt Apr 16, 2003 5:15 AM
acid house by smelt Apr 16, 2003 6:20 AM
SMELT by zygotenmycoffee Apr 17, 2003 2:18 PM
Million a Minute Crusade (PC) by weezer Apr 8, 2003 9:21 AM
hello! by sumrof41 Apr 8, 2003 10:03 AM
and by weezer Apr 11, 2003 12:29 PM
Well said - by PhilipHarris Apr 9, 2003 9:46 AM
History, Perspective, and Why We're OK by Knip Apr 8, 2003 7:53 AM
have you considered by atlanticqueen Apr 9, 2003 9:42 AM
baby love...MY baby love... by Aki Apr 8, 2003 2:53 AM
Another Short Story by Kubla Kahn Apr 7, 2003 10:36 PM
to clam or not to clam... part 1 by piph Apr 7, 2003 6:07 PM
If by thunder chicken Apr 9, 2003 3:10 PM
Shelove by ModernAncient Apr 7, 2003 5:09 PM
"She loves snow and August. I love her" by ellipsis Apr 8, 2003 12:16 AM
this is by Maree Hagar Apr 11, 2003 12:55 PM
Tired of Living (Edited) - PC by Billectric Apr 7, 2003 4:02 PM
This gives new meaning to the phrase by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 7, 2003 4:17 PM
right now by Himali Apr 7, 2003 10:15 PM
bill by ellipsis Apr 8, 2003 12:10 AM
but billectric by Knip Apr 8, 2003 9:21 AM
You know, I should go back and explain that. Thanks. by Billectric Apr 8, 2003 9:52 AM
ok, i went back and added a couple of sentences. by Billectric Apr 8, 2003 9:55 AM
My life was saved by by Holygoof Apr 8, 2003 10:14 AM
By all means, post whatever you'd like... by Billectric Apr 8, 2003 11:01 AM
Made me laugh by midnite Apr 8, 2003 10:17 AM
Not a bad idea by Billectric Apr 8, 2003 11:02 AM
this is great bill, by Hester Prynne Apr 8, 2003 11:20 AM
Thanks, Hester by Billectric Apr 8, 2003 1:28 PM
great storytelling by surfermike Apr 8, 2003 3:41 PM
I wonder if I'm too old to learn how to surf by Billectric Apr 8, 2003 6:07 PM
I go out walking after midnight by thunder chicken Apr 8, 2003 7:36 PM
Ramble anytime, my friend by Billectric Apr 10, 2003 6:08 AM
Her suicide note by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 6, 2003 5:29 PM
With an axe? by Billectric Apr 7, 2003 5:55 AM
Captain Joshua Slocum by thunder chicken Apr 7, 2003 6:16 AM
This is just a story by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 7, 2003 11:07 AM
and a good story at that by thunder chicken Apr 7, 2003 12:07 PM
lucy by ellipsis Apr 8, 2003 12:13 AM
new by Knip Apr 8, 2003 9:39 AM
Orbit Head by Billectric Apr 6, 2003 11:02 AM
Bill by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 6, 2003 4:36 PM
Walking in the Rain by Dave L Apr 5, 2003 8:10 PM
hayman by jota Apr 5, 2003 8:18 PM
short cuts by thunder chicken Apr 7, 2003 10:59 AM
I've been on that ferry by Dave L Apr 8, 2003 8:16 AM
fridayjabber by ModernAncient Apr 4, 2003 3:18 PM
Atoka Oklahoma by thunder chicken Apr 5, 2003 2:19 PM
Damn! by ValdeZZ May 27, 2003 6:36 AM
The Runaways by anniefay Apr 4, 2003 10:27 AM
absolutely by Himali Apr 4, 2003 10:36 PM
the strawberry vine by brooklyn Apr 4, 2003 8:43 AM
be here by mtmynd Apr 4, 2003 11:20 PM
sitting in my brother's kitchen thinking about a strawberry by thunder chicken Apr 5, 2003 3:28 PM
i have something similar by Vaselina Apr 6, 2003 8:26 AM
In the moment by Billectric Apr 6, 2003 10:01 AM
Question: by Billectric Apr 6, 2003 10:04 AM
i don't remember by brooklyn Apr 6, 2003 7:19 PM
see.. by mudshark Apr 6, 2003 3:00 PM
heh by pelerine Apr 10, 2003 1:19 PM
Rig Up A Mic by Billectric Apr 4, 2003 8:04 AM
U.N.C.L.E. by thunder chicken Apr 5, 2003 5:19 PM
it doesn't hurt to wish by Billectric Apr 6, 2003 10:05 AM
Sunoco by slackmeisterPA Apr 3, 2003 6:50 PM
MONTPARNASSE by nocturne 17 Apr 3, 2003 7:58 AM
Iguana Rains, Deep in the shit with boy scouts by weezer Apr 3, 2003 7:14 AM
yeah by jota Apr 5, 2003 8:48 PM
House Party (Critique) by ModernAncient Apr 2, 2003 6:51 PM
ya boy by weezer Apr 4, 2003 7:58 AM
Flood (Please Critique) by ModernAncient Apr 2, 2003 6:49 PM
you've by Himali Apr 3, 2003 1:35 AM


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