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dragonslayer... by feral Feb 28, 2003 5:50 AM
nice!!! by John B. Feb 28, 2003 1:48 PM
sneaking out in the middle of the night by jamelah Feb 28, 2003 2:11 PM
yeah, maybe... by feral Mar 1, 2003 2:40 AM
so... by firecracker Feb 28, 2003 2:46 PM
A Fever Dream (PC) by JonnyMetro Feb 27, 2003 7:00 AM
Very cool! by John B. Feb 28, 2003 1:58 PM
Michel Marshall Smith... by JonnyMetro Mar 2, 2003 6:01 PM
he writes modern sci-fi by John B. Mar 3, 2003 4:32 AM
Based on your recomendations... by JonnyMetro Mar 3, 2003 5:24 PM
sweet... by John B. Mar 10, 2003 6:04 AM
Winter on a summers night (pc) by Season#5 Feb 27, 2003 3:46 AM
Very Nice by JonnyMetro Feb 27, 2003 7:23 AM
chronic night by for the love of hank Feb 27, 2003 2:08 AM
okay (not as in okay as a value judgement but as segue) by pelerine Feb 27, 2003 4:04 PM
chronic fear of time by stilltrucking Feb 28, 2003 4:06 AM
Afternoon Showers to Reassure My Sanity by fovum me Feb 26, 2003 11:50 AM
mother's milk by Aki Feb 26, 2003 11:17 AM
aki... by stevadore Feb 27, 2003 7:36 AM
God! by Baby2 Feb 27, 2003 9:07 AM
Getting Over by Raistlin Feb 26, 2003 9:22 AM
:) by Baby2 Feb 27, 2003 9:26 AM
my Deus Theory, Part One - Why belief in a god is NOT rationally unsound by foolish_Paeter Feb 25, 2003 6:08 PM
Interesting story... by mtmynd Feb 25, 2003 7:44 PM
the tao of physics by foolish_Paeter Feb 25, 2003 8:05 PM
i saw that book... by mtmynd Feb 25, 2003 8:10 PM
well by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 8:12 PM
what do you mean? by foolish_Paeter Feb 25, 2003 8:21 PM
what i mean by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 8:40 PM
you're right... by mtmynd Feb 25, 2003 8:41 PM
i think you're by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 8:44 PM
hi 'cracker.. by mtmynd Feb 25, 2003 8:46 PM
wait a second by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 8:48 PM
hey you! by mtmynd Feb 25, 2003 8:52 PM
i like your logic by atlanticqueen Feb 25, 2003 8:11 PM
foolish Paeter by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 8:49 PM
yes, by foolish_Paeter Feb 26, 2003 5:06 AM
sounds cool by firecracker Feb 26, 2003 6:18 AM
here's a thought to think about by the bastard child Feb 26, 2003 2:29 AM
i by foolish_Paeter Feb 26, 2003 5:01 AM
does the creator by stevadore Feb 26, 2003 9:13 AM
why by foolish_Paeter Feb 26, 2003 3:55 PM
............. by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 11:44 AM
i'm by foolish_Paeter Feb 26, 2003 3:50 PM
yeah by ellipsis Feb 26, 2003 9:43 PM
Here's my favorite...PARTICLE or WAVE ? by Billectric Feb 27, 2003 1:13 PM
that is such a ridiculous thing. by foolish_Paeter Feb 28, 2003 6:10 AM
That makes sense, but tell me... by Billectric Mar 3, 2003 8:39 AM
A story about Bartholomew, or an ODE TO SID by Umberto Feb 25, 2003 6:14 AM
this is cute by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 9:02 PM
thank you by Umberto Mar 2, 2003 9:23 PM
felt like sketching by in_extremis Feb 24, 2003 12:44 PM
in extremis by firecracker Feb 24, 2003 6:20 PM
what's the matter here? by hypatia Feb 23, 2003 7:17 PM
I like the chest by The Flaming Red Head Feb 24, 2003 8:25 AM
i remember by hypatia Feb 24, 2003 8:43 AM
Winnie the Pooh by The Flaming Red Head Feb 24, 2003 11:15 AM
oh my by hypatia Feb 24, 2003 1:47 PM
some comments by in_extremis Feb 24, 2003 1:19 PM
dear, dear angus by pelerine Feb 24, 2003 1:41 PM
hey by in_extremis Feb 24, 2003 2:06 PM
i wanted the dresser by hypatia Feb 24, 2003 1:50 PM
if indeed by in_extremis Feb 24, 2003 2:09 PM
sweetness by pelerine Feb 24, 2003 2:16 PM
no need by in_extremis Feb 24, 2003 2:22 PM
Bluebrightdarklight by for the love of hank Feb 23, 2003 4:46 PM
ahhh what to do by pelerine Feb 23, 2003 5:26 PM
woo hoo by hypatia Feb 23, 2003 7:30 PM
wow by atlanticqueen Feb 27, 2003 3:53 PM
The Segment by beatvibe Feb 23, 2003 1:11 PM
This is what happens... by beatvibe Feb 24, 2003 4:20 PM
doe nurse rachet by um Feb 28, 2003 4:41 AM
Practical Apparel by beatvibe Feb 28, 2003 7:08 AM
It really wouldn't surprise me by Billectric Feb 25, 2003 4:35 PM
beatvibe by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 6:12 PM
make sure by um Feb 28, 2003 4:43 AM
vignette (edited-PC-honestly) by Illuminara Feb 23, 2003 12:26 PM
Zlatko's comments by Zlatko Waterman Feb 24, 2003 8:21 AM
you're a gem by Illuminara Feb 24, 2003 9:19 AM
Crow Colloquy PLEASE critque by Sabertash Feb 23, 2003 11:47 AM
reply by Illuminara Feb 23, 2003 11:50 PM
Colloquay of the crows (revised) PC by Sabertash Feb 25, 2003 12:18 PM
The Silence Of The Clams by Jim Furnish Feb 22, 2003 4:48 PM
excellent storytelling... by feral Feb 22, 2003 9:08 PM
hey jason by Jim Furnish Feb 22, 2003 10:50 PM
well, well, well... by feral Feb 23, 2003 5:01 AM
blue world order by jota Feb 23, 2003 7:13 AM
it wuz a good 'un... by feral Feb 23, 2003 8:47 AM
i'm beaming by jota Feb 23, 2003 9:02 AM
deep water fearless hearts by stilltrucking Feb 22, 2003 11:25 PM
jesus by for the love of hank Feb 23, 2003 4:55 PM
ah jim, you're brilliant by piph Feb 23, 2003 11:17 PM
after morrissey he sang, "hang the d.j., hang the d.j., hang the d.j..." by hypatia Feb 22, 2003 12:23 PM
God your good! by The Flaming Red Head Feb 22, 2003 5:35 PM
heh by pelerine Feb 22, 2003 5:57 PM
good, good, very good. by for the love of hank Feb 23, 2003 4:52 PM
AQ's 1st EVER story challenge by atlanticqueen Feb 22, 2003 9:08 AM
Of bungee jumping and grapefruit by tkeiser Feb 22, 2003 7:39 PM
mmhmm by atlanticqueen Feb 23, 2003 7:21 PM
Sucking by maidblue Feb 23, 2003 3:29 AM
and by maidblue Feb 23, 2003 3:30 AM
wonderful by atlanticqueen Feb 23, 2003 7:21 PM
Watertown, Chapter Seventeen (new full version) by jota Feb 22, 2003 8:14 AM
can't think of a snappy post title... by feral Feb 22, 2003 8:26 AM
yeah, i know by jota Feb 22, 2003 8:33 AM
how about by Illuminara Feb 23, 2003 12:38 PM
jota .....hey! by judih. Feb 22, 2003 12:46 PM
done! by jota Feb 22, 2003 1:33 PM
anywhere, anytime by judih. Feb 22, 2003 7:19 PM
this might be by firecracker Feb 24, 2003 6:48 PM
The Fun Never Ends by the bastard child Feb 21, 2003 6:13 PM
Echoes of Donald Barthelme: The day Australia Mourned by the bastard child Feb 21, 2003 6:12 PM
bastard child... by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 9:05 PM
Something Bad by shyster Feb 21, 2003 4:04 PM
bottles of ZIN by WALLY Feb 21, 2003 12:28 PM
and so begineth... by feral Feb 21, 2003 4:57 PM
Rain dancing on concrete. by for the love of hank Feb 20, 2003 11:46 PM
it's important to record these moments hanky by smelt Feb 22, 2003 4:40 AM
yeah by pelerine Feb 22, 2003 10:16 AM
hmmm by piph Feb 25, 2003 6:10 PM
I will have my revenge on the bastard tree that broke the neck of Albert Camus by betabandido Feb 20, 2003 12:20 PM
An antichrist mary poppins... by Sabertash Feb 24, 2003 8:19 AM
this is quite a wild ride by firecracker Feb 24, 2003 6:33 PM
betabandido by shishi Feb 26, 2003 9:27 PM
well shucks... by betabandido Mar 14, 2003 4:07 PM
she munched on me by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Feb 19, 2003 4:24 PM
creepy by pelerine Feb 19, 2003 6:04 PM
this really happened to me last week by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Feb 19, 2003 7:25 PM
The room and the light and the water. (revised) by mindlosing Feb 19, 2003 4:12 PM
I'm impressed by this by conked Feb 19, 2003 8:56 PM
BLOODY HELL by for the love of hank Feb 20, 2003 7:46 PM
that was fantastic. by shyster Feb 21, 2003 4:10 PM
Mental Monkey by mrleyman Feb 19, 2003 11:24 AM
Fucking Justin - Inspired by Smelt's excellent writing. by for the love of hank Feb 19, 2003 12:43 AM
Justin's a wanker by smelt Feb 19, 2003 12:59 AM
lol by for the love of hank Feb 19, 2003 1:40 AM
Foreplay. by smelt Feb 18, 2003 8:33 PM
Thanks for the groovey by scootertrash Feb 18, 2003 10:57 PM
kickarse pussy power by for the love of hank Feb 19, 2003 12:15 AM
big happy now by smelt Feb 19, 2003 12:46 AM
loved the raw power by atlanticqueen Feb 19, 2003 6:23 AM
YES! by sasha Feb 19, 2003 12:26 PM
He took my sanity and tucked it safely in his soul. by comfortchaos Feb 18, 2003 8:22 PM
Grilling to Beat Whale by Billectric Feb 17, 2003 5:31 AM
I do not eat toads. Nor do I eat horned whale by firecracker Feb 25, 2003 6:15 PM
Your grandma eats horned whale ? by Billectric Feb 27, 2003 1:15 PM
Professor Seward Digresses by beatvibe Feb 16, 2003 5:05 PM
That was cool by Billectric Feb 17, 2003 5:23 AM
The Professor's Eccentricities by beatvibe Feb 17, 2003 7:17 AM
yeah like by um Feb 17, 2003 4:59 PM
cardioectomy by um Feb 17, 2003 5:35 AM
They submitted my poems as further evidence... by beatvibe Feb 17, 2003 7:13 AM
In the interest of science and knowledge by Billectric Feb 17, 2003 8:42 AM
Pock marked boy in the alley by Billectric Feb 16, 2003 10:19 AM
quelle by jota Feb 22, 2003 2:09 PM
in the moment by hypatia Feb 15, 2003 7:17 PM
Inner dialogue/ very dramatic (Nicely done) by The Flaming Red Head Feb 16, 2003 6:52 AM
thanks, f.r.h. by hypatia Feb 16, 2003 6:59 AM
glad by hypatia Feb 19, 2003 5:48 AM
I'm just a gigolo and every where i go by for the love of hank Feb 15, 2003 2:33 AM
hank by shishi Feb 16, 2003 4:31 AM
Dead Wrong by xone Feb 13, 2003 5:23 PM
Great story by Lexy Feb 13, 2003 6:50 PM
thanks and yes by xone Feb 14, 2003 6:21 AM
If I die before I wake....... by for the love of hank Feb 13, 2003 3:47 PM
for the luva PETE, good story by Billectric Feb 17, 2003 3:53 PM
thanxs hotty m'totty by for the love of hank Feb 17, 2003 6:33 PM
She fucked death one night. by for the love of hank Feb 13, 2003 2:05 AM
fucked by satan by Vaselina Feb 13, 2003 5:44 PM
lets here it then by for the love of hank Feb 13, 2003 6:58 PM
Portrait of a loser by for the love of hank Feb 12, 2003 11:00 PM
love her, squeeze her, just don't call her plain jane by Jam Feb 12, 2003 11:12 PM
television... internet... by feral Feb 13, 2003 12:50 AM
A profound observation by for the love of hank Feb 13, 2003 1:34 AM
Ain't you da bomb! by Jam Feb 13, 2003 11:54 AM
scary by Himali Feb 13, 2003 4:28 AM
hank by shishi Feb 16, 2003 3:54 AM
Springs of Youth by Jam Feb 12, 2003 9:35 PM
got me broiling.. by bumblefish Feb 12, 2003 10:37 PM
Very nice by for the love of hank Feb 12, 2003 10:49 PM
first novel by Jam Feb 12, 2003 11:00 PM
it has been published? by for the love of hank Feb 12, 2003 11:03 PM
Yes Hank, there is a publisher by Jam Feb 12, 2003 11:39 PM
A great resource for writers & poets by rdaub82 Feb 12, 2003 6:35 PM
HaVe YoU EvEr WoNdErEd? by for the love of hank Feb 11, 2003 3:57 PM
thank fucking god by pelerine Feb 11, 2003 5:59 PM
and bastard he is by for the love of hank Feb 11, 2003 10:42 PM
Youth by mindlosing Feb 11, 2003 7:44 PM
drive like fangio - drink jack daniels... by feral Feb 10, 2003 1:24 AM
malfeascance - by Billectric Feb 10, 2003 8:21 AM
Sometimes I wonder by Billectric Feb 10, 2003 8:22 AM
it begins... by feral Feb 10, 2003 8:25 AM
australiana (ed) by conked Feb 11, 2003 12:48 AM
i gotta by um Feb 11, 2003 1:11 AM
fablus by mudshark Feb 12, 2003 8:35 AM
HA!!! by Jim Furnish Feb 12, 2003 9:00 AM
Do you see double when you're wasted? by Jam Feb 12, 2003 8:57 PM
man, i gotta be yer publicist by jota Feb 22, 2003 2:12 PM
An Absence of Escalation (reportage) by pelerine Feb 9, 2003 7:47 PM
"but it was gettin there that was always interesting" by sonofthesun Feb 11, 2003 2:19 AM
it did really happen by pelerine Feb 11, 2003 5:57 PM
gotcha, by sonofthesun Feb 11, 2003 10:03 PM
V-Glam's 1st Story Challenge! by Vaselina Feb 9, 2003 6:26 PM
Story by Donnis Feb 9, 2003 8:25 PM
To Live, and Love, in the Night Perpetual by beatvibe Feb 9, 2003 10:09 PM
Very nice indeed by atom tan Feb 11, 2003 8:11 PM
beatvibe by um Feb 11, 2003 10:54 PM
I didn't know... by beatvibe Feb 12, 2003 7:54 AM
yeah by um Feb 13, 2003 12:24 AM
forthcoming by anti-ist-itis-eatis Feb 10, 2003 2:40 AM
Click. by Kreddible Trout Feb 10, 2003 6:46 PM
Very nicely done, Trout by Billectric Feb 11, 2003 6:29 PM
Thanks Bill... by Kreddible Trout Feb 11, 2003 8:11 PM
You must have gone back and added a word by Billectric Feb 12, 2003 5:40 AM
nah, by Kreddible Trout Feb 12, 2003 1:32 PM
well, it turned by Billectric Feb 12, 2003 6:31 PM
nice but... by um Feb 11, 2003 11:06 PM
this by sasha Feb 19, 2003 11:52 AM
thanks very much. by Kreddible Trout Feb 19, 2003 3:34 PM
this is what your rules made me write. It doesn't have a title. by gottasawalrus Feb 11, 2003 9:43 PM
how about by Vaselina Feb 12, 2003 3:02 PM
Valentines Day Massacre by SeraRojas Feb 9, 2003 6:09 PM
Sera - by PhilipHarris Feb 9, 2003 6:45 PM
Ghosts by Jaklar Feb 8, 2003 9:46 PM
Scratch (PC) by Jaklar Feb 8, 2003 9:08 PM
Invenomated! by beatvibe Feb 8, 2003 8:26 PM
Ed. Note by beatvibe Feb 9, 2003 1:07 PM
W and The Prophecies of Nostradamus (Satire) PC by The Flaming Red Head Feb 8, 2003 12:20 PM
Blackhart Joe by foolish_Paeter Feb 7, 2003 12:50 PM
i just saw the movie.. by doreen peri Feb 7, 2003 1:58 PM
wow thanks by foolish_Paeter Feb 7, 2003 2:19 PM
ironic.. by doreen peri Feb 7, 2003 3:30 PM
a good bard by foolish_Paeter Feb 8, 2003 2:07 PM
poem by foolish_Paeter Feb 7, 2003 2:30 PM
[my two cents] by PhilipHarris Feb 7, 2003 3:12 PM
thanks, man by foolish_Paeter Feb 8, 2003 2:15 PM
interesting by um Feb 8, 2003 3:44 AM
i use names by foolish_Paeter Feb 8, 2003 2:13 PM
in appreciation.. by Himali Feb 17, 2003 2:30 AM
in thanks.. by foolish_Paeter Feb 17, 2003 8:07 AM
That Monkey Stole our Peanuts!(pc) by shamatha Feb 6, 2003 9:13 PM
[my two cents] by PhilipHarris Feb 7, 2003 3:33 PM
well... by Kreddible Trout Feb 11, 2003 3:42 PM
?UESTION ! by Woody Feb 6, 2003 9:34 AM
it's a matter of determination by firsty Feb 6, 2003 10:19 AM
firsty, are you - by PhilipHarris Feb 6, 2003 10:30 AM
heh heh by firsty Feb 6, 2003 10:37 AM
The room and the light and the water by mindlosing Feb 5, 2003 12:17 PM
thank you by Baby2 Feb 6, 2003 10:13 AM
[my two cents] by PhilipHarris Feb 7, 2003 1:05 PM
more coming by mindlosing Feb 7, 2003 2:01 PM
Sullivan's Pond by Vaselina Feb 5, 2003 10:38 AM
[my two cents] by PhilipHarris Feb 7, 2003 12:49 PM
wow by Vaselina Feb 9, 2003 8:55 AM
Conversation #2 by PhilipHarris Feb 3, 2003 6:26 PM
Vida Voodoo (PC) by JonnyMetro Feb 3, 2003 11:02 AM
[my two cents] by PhilipHarris Feb 7, 2003 12:36 PM
Re: Your Two Cents by JonnyMetro Feb 7, 2003 2:20 PM
PC (pc) by Tim Cunningham Feb 2, 2003 7:11 AM
[my two cents] by PhilipHarris Feb 7, 2003 12:22 PM
hey tim by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Feb 7, 2003 2:49 PM


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