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The Desert Chronicle by IDunno08 Jan 31, 2003 7:36 AM
THE DESERT, THE INICIATIC TRIP, THE OCEAN, THE PARADISE... by Arcadia Feb 17, 2003 8:17 AM
Parable on Terrorism by Lightning Rod Jan 31, 2003 7:29 AM
un-parably breathtaking by firsty Jan 31, 2003 7:35 AM
terror by Feign Feb 7, 2003 8:56 PM
Mirror, mirror. by Rickety Jan 31, 2003 2:52 AM
Review. by TheCritic Feb 1, 2003 3:24 AM
Gideon's Koran (in progress) by Jim Furnish Jan 30, 2003 4:00 PM
Review (sorta). by TheCritic Jan 31, 2003 2:10 AM
Review (really). by TheCritic Jan 31, 2003 2:16 AM
jim by shishi Feb 16, 2003 4:29 AM
shishi by Jim Furnish Feb 17, 2003 2:04 PM
thinking about the scarlet letter by stilltrucking Feb 22, 2003 11:35 PM
A little less conversation. by WALLY Jan 30, 2003 11:50 AM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 31, 2003 1:22 AM
JUST by WALLY Jan 31, 2003 6:21 AM
come now, by marty Feb 1, 2003 4:49 PM
Prompt. by sasha Jan 30, 2003 10:37 AM
this was cool: by firsty Jan 31, 2003 4:10 AM
Writer's Self Portriate by sasha Jan 30, 2003 10:14 AM
sasha by in_extremis Jan 30, 2003 10:57 AM
sasha, by firsty Jan 30, 2003 11:42 AM
my - by PhilipHarris Jan 30, 2003 2:52 PM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 31, 2003 1:16 AM
this: by Illuminara Mar 14, 2003 4:24 PM
basement chat by papillon_8hr Jan 30, 2003 3:19 AM
I like it. by Billectric Jan 30, 2003 5:49 AM
thank you by papillon_8hr Jan 30, 2003 11:16 AM
constructive (i hope) by firsty Jan 30, 2003 7:29 AM
basis by papillon_8hr Jan 30, 2003 9:54 AM
critique by shamatha Jan 30, 2003 8:20 AM
the direction by papillon_8hr Jan 30, 2003 9:57 AM
thank you all by papillon_8hr Jan 30, 2003 9:51 AM
Conversation #1 by PhilipHarris Jan 29, 2003 5:09 PM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 30, 2003 2:14 AM
this is good by firsty Jan 30, 2003 6:36 AM
thanks for reading... by PhilipHarris Jan 30, 2003 8:14 AM
This road... by artguy Jan 29, 2003 8:32 AM
Critique - by PhilipHarris Jan 29, 2003 8:58 AM
Thanks... by artguy Jan 29, 2003 2:06 PM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 30, 2003 2:20 AM
Raven by artguy Jan 30, 2003 6:11 AM
my thoughts by firsty Jan 30, 2003 6:45 AM
Input... by artguy Jan 30, 2003 7:04 AM
grammar is by firsty Jan 30, 2003 7:15 AM
This is where we go to be lost (pc) by shamatha Jan 28, 2003 9:27 PM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 28, 2003 10:39 PM
blue by firsty Jan 29, 2003 3:40 AM
liked this by firecracker Jan 29, 2003 8:30 PM
Thanks all by shamatha Jan 30, 2003 7:31 AM
you really caught by firsty Jan 30, 2003 7:50 AM
Untitled (PC) by a majority of one Jan 28, 2003 8:49 PM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 28, 2003 10:48 PM
Gazing at the Starlight (PC) by a majority of one Jan 28, 2003 8:40 PM
Apparitions 4 by Feign Jan 27, 2003 1:20 AM
Review. by TheCritic Jan 28, 2003 11:00 PM
Critique by Feign Jan 29, 2003 8:32 PM
Reply. by TheCritic Jan 30, 2003 2:22 AM
Bad sci-fi, poor conception of physics. by Rickety Jan 27, 2003 12:26 AM
That woke me up this morning by Billectric Jan 28, 2003 4:56 AM
if 2 comets by firsty Jan 28, 2003 6:15 AM
yowzer by firsty Jan 28, 2003 6:13 AM
Writer's Self Portrait ('story challenge'?) by snuffbox Jan 26, 2003 11:59 PM
Me. by Rickety Jan 27, 2003 12:38 AM
me I suppose by AdamKadmon Jan 27, 2003 12:59 PM
Life Story by The Flaming Red Head Jan 27, 2003 4:07 PM
Message Misread by AdamKadmon Jan 27, 2003 4:43 PM
male prostitutes by The Flaming Red Head Jan 27, 2003 6:12 PM
Cut Up Two by Alicia C. Deathkiss Jan 26, 2003 12:34 AM
I bow before you ms. deathkiss by PAWBoy Jan 29, 2003 5:44 PM
well.... by Alicia C. Deathkiss Apr 7, 2004 12:32 PM
keep in touch by PAWBoy Jan 29, 2003 5:54 PM
A Night With…? by PAWBoy Jan 29, 2003 6:00 PM
Cut Up One by Alicia C. Deathkiss Jan 26, 2003 12:32 AM
The other end of the spectrum by Tim Cunningham Jan 25, 2003 4:27 PM
Royaume De L'éthéré by Alicia C. Deathkiss Jan 25, 2003 4:12 PM
he by Yabyum Jan 24, 2003 3:05 PM
I hope by Kitzbuhel Jan 25, 2003 5:20 PM
Continued by Kitzbuhel Jan 25, 2003 6:45 PM
i dont know....... by Yabyum Jan 26, 2003 6:25 AM
fair enough by Kitzbuhel Jan 26, 2003 6:56 AM
fictional observations. by sasha Jan 24, 2003 11:07 AM
I love... by PhilipHarris Jan 28, 2003 2:34 PM
these descriptions by firecracker Jan 29, 2003 8:32 PM
Woodcutter on the Road (needs to be re-written, but hey) by foolish_Paeter Jan 23, 2003 8:30 PM
Ye olde fiction... by PhilipHarris Jan 28, 2003 2:30 PM
oh hey by foolish_Paeter Feb 7, 2003 2:27 PM
Confessions of a Retail Clerk #1 by Vaselina Jan 23, 2003 10:26 AM
Ugh... by JonnyMetro Jan 24, 2003 8:16 AM
wait till i tell ya by Vaselina Jan 24, 2003 1:42 PM
my boots by Kreddible Trout Jan 26, 2003 4:31 PM
ha! by pelerine Jan 29, 2003 6:15 PM
Getting Screwed by The Flaming Red Head Jan 23, 2003 10:24 AM
good deal by smg Jan 23, 2003 1:34 PM
Thanks for the excellent and honest critique by The Flaming Red Head Jan 23, 2003 4:20 PM
ahh by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jan 24, 2003 6:20 PM
ThIs iS BrIlLiAnTe ! ~Tay! ~*~ by Billectric Jan 24, 2003 9:43 PM
Reconciliation by the bastard child Jan 22, 2003 4:28 PM
Aftermath by the bastard child Jan 22, 2003 4:25 PM
thank you, sir/madame by PAWBoy Jan 29, 2003 5:36 PM
rushing headlong into it (pc) by firsty Jan 22, 2003 11:12 AM
I'm a little confused. by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 1:28 PM
a question: by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jan 22, 2003 4:01 PM
yeah, see by firsty Jan 22, 2003 5:02 PM
Shmmmepp! by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Jan 22, 2003 5:20 PM
No, it's a great story! by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 6:46 PM
mr. firsty by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 6:45 PM
jamelah says it by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 6:48 PM
both you two: by firsty Jan 23, 2003 4:38 AM
more later, but for now by in_extremis Jan 23, 2003 9:21 AM
makes sense by firsty Jan 23, 2003 9:35 AM
Did I Tell You About Old Plank's Mouse ? (PC) by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 9:39 AM
God Dammit, Bill... by PhilipHarris Jan 22, 2003 3:43 PM
the santa clause effect by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 6:50 PM
you need to learn by firsty Jan 23, 2003 8:46 AM
You're right. I might have by Billectric Jan 23, 2003 8:58 AM
darkness has soft edges by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 7:59 AM
sweet mood by firsty Jan 22, 2003 8:06 AM
well, mr. firsty on the scene by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 9:53 AM
the name by firsty Jan 22, 2003 10:03 AM
wow by mistyblueeyes Jan 22, 2003 8:08 AM
thanks by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 9:54 AM
Another gem, J. by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 9:34 AM
i got ya by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 9:56 AM
well done by in_extremis Jan 22, 2003 2:01 PM
ok by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 5:04 PM
first paragraph edit. yeah. by jamelah Jan 23, 2003 9:04 PM
ok can i say something? by firsty Jan 23, 2003 9:08 PM
so what you're saying by jamelah Jan 23, 2003 9:15 PM
it makes absolute sense (edited) by firsty Jan 23, 2003 9:22 PM
no, you make sense by jamelah Jan 23, 2003 9:35 PM
i guess you have to by firsty Jan 23, 2003 9:40 PM
well... by jamelah Jan 24, 2003 6:59 AM
Did I Tell You About the Zaffer Colonic ? (PC) by Billectric Jan 21, 2003 1:52 PM
i suppose this belongs by Billectric Jan 22, 2003 6:52 PM
i'm not squeamish by jamelah Jan 22, 2003 6:57 PM
no, it's too late for pity... by Billectric Jan 23, 2003 6:43 AM
On second thoughts by the bastard child Jan 19, 2003 4:15 PM
Homage, 3 dreams in bright technicolour by the bastard child Jan 19, 2003 4:14 PM
Minsk Schminsk by Feign Jan 19, 2003 11:32 AM
sheer brutality by atlanticqueen Jan 19, 2003 5:15 PM
21... by artguy Jan 18, 2003 6:49 AM
Story Challenge - Blue Fog by Feign Jan 17, 2003 6:27 PM
Story Challenge by maidblue Jan 17, 2003 3:55 PM
my epic by AdamKadmon Jan 22, 2003 12:59 PM
Alone/Lonely by maidblue Jan 17, 2003 3:52 PM
isolation by John B. Jan 18, 2003 5:42 AM
Friday Night by maidblue Jan 17, 2003 3:47 PM
The tentative by John B. Jan 18, 2003 5:40 AM
Tommy Gun Angels by Mage Jan 17, 2003 3:41 PM
yabyums' challenge number one by Yabyum Jan 15, 2003 8:09 PM
Here it goes by elemental123 Jan 15, 2003 10:40 PM
bad acoustics by Kitzbuhel Jan 16, 2003 5:00 PM
Challenges by Feign Jan 17, 2003 6:49 PM
Number One by sasha Jan 18, 2003 12:16 PM
response by Vaselina Jan 18, 2003 3:39 PM
to you all....... by Yabyum Jan 18, 2003 4:22 PM
Short Story---"Bones" (PC) by Observer Jan 15, 2003 2:42 PM
fantastic by stevadore Jan 23, 2003 7:08 AM
Only In Ireland by BuddhistPunk Jan 15, 2003 6:54 AM
awesome by smg Jan 16, 2003 1:01 PM
nice by Himali Feb 13, 2003 4:23 AM
Cherub, Wisconsin (PC) by snuffbox Jan 15, 2003 4:37 AM
Rainforest Revelries (PC) by Kitzbuhel Jan 14, 2003 3:04 PM
WOW! by elemental123 Jan 15, 2003 11:04 PM
steamy!! by Baby2 Jan 16, 2003 1:18 PM
thanks, but, by Kitzbuhel Jan 16, 2003 2:39 PM
building a bridge to the moon by Alienamigo Jan 14, 2003 3:42 AM
An essay illustrating the excessive nature of possessive pronouns, or... by the bastard child Jan 13, 2003 5:30 PM
Valedictory by Christian Silver Jan 13, 2003 3:55 PM
The master returns... by losetowin Jan 14, 2003 12:20 PM
The Unmentionable Flounder (PC) by Kitzbuhel Jan 13, 2003 3:18 PM
story challenge 1/13/03 by smg Jan 13, 2003 1:39 PM
lethargic butterworms by Kitzbuhel Jan 13, 2003 3:28 PM
lethargic butterworms by atlanticqueen Jan 13, 2003 4:33 PM
yes! by sasha Jan 14, 2003 4:28 PM
perfect by Yabyum Jan 14, 2003 9:12 PM
lethargic butterworms by Situationist Jan 14, 2003 2:00 AM
silly putty pimp. by sasha Jan 14, 2003 4:30 PM
perfect two by Yabyum Jan 14, 2003 9:13 PM
lethargic butterworms by sasha Jan 14, 2003 4:25 PM
like this....especially by atlanticqueen Jan 14, 2003 4:31 PM
that was by Yabyum Jan 14, 2003 9:16 PM
rather by smg Jan 16, 2003 12:43 PM
Lethargic Butterworms by PhilipHarris Jan 14, 2003 5:45 PM
gotta by smg Jan 16, 2003 12:45 PM
lethargic butterworms by Yabyum Jan 14, 2003 9:08 PM
LeThArGiC BuTtErWoRmS.. by searchingme Jan 15, 2003 1:02 PM
i can by smg Jan 16, 2003 12:56 PM
umm by smg Jan 16, 2003 12:55 PM
Regarding the relationship between straight lines and circles PC by the bastard child Jan 13, 2003 2:16 AM
great passage by Kitzbuhel Jan 13, 2003 4:12 PM
time for beginnings by the bastard child Jan 12, 2003 2:31 PM
Watertown, Chapter Seventeen by jota Jan 11, 2003 4:14 PM
good morning, Watertown by judih. Jan 11, 2003 7:08 PM
i knew you'd be out there by panta rhei Jan 13, 2003 7:31 AM
Requiem by the secular apostle Jan 10, 2003 9:56 AM
8:: ^ ( by PhilipHarris Jan 10, 2003 10:24 AM
Read this! by The Flaming Red Head Jan 14, 2003 4:17 PM
Holy, Holy, Holy. by dionisio Jan 10, 2003 2:23 AM
metaphors by Nia Jan 10, 2003 10:27 AM
nia by dionisio Jan 12, 2003 3:20 PM
On a Friday- PC PC PC....this is the 1st story ive ever written by Situationist Jan 9, 2003 10:31 PM
hardly bullshit by AdamKadmon Jan 11, 2003 3:55 PM
More of ON THE ROAD by Nia Jan 9, 2003 10:09 AM
truth- PC by ska! Jan 8, 2003 8:22 PM
transferred by o.fortune Jan 9, 2003 10:21 AM
indeed by ska! Jan 9, 2003 1:18 PM
sketched this last night killing time downtown by in_extremis Jan 8, 2003 9:49 AM
Delusion, Delirium and Disorder - Why I Failed Psychology by Happas Jan 8, 2003 2:29 AM
you know what annoys me by Happas Jan 8, 2003 3:35 AM
excellent skills by The Flaming Red Head Jan 8, 2003 7:30 PM
well by Happas Jan 9, 2003 3:49 AM
Thoughts of a summers day by the bastard child Jan 7, 2003 8:30 PM
Early Morning Reflections by the bastard child Jan 7, 2003 8:28 PM
hey bastard by in_extremis Jan 8, 2003 10:01 AM
i like by firecracker Jan 9, 2003 6:27 PM
The Beginning of the End (pt 1) (PC) by elemental123 Jan 7, 2003 7:44 PM
The Beginning of the End (conclusion) (PC) by elemental123 Jan 7, 2003 7:53 PM
17th floor (smut) PC PC PC PC PC PC by smg Jan 5, 2003 5:22 PM
I... by PhilipHarris Jan 5, 2003 6:23 PM
oh my... by jamelah Jan 5, 2003 6:33 PM
whoops by smg Jan 5, 2003 7:45 PM
heh by jamelah Jan 6, 2003 5:41 AM
dear penthouse... by firecracker Jan 5, 2003 6:35 PM
well by piph Jan 5, 2003 7:26 PM
you know that by Vaselina Jan 7, 2003 9:56 PM
I suppose... by rastaruined Jan 5, 2003 2:02 PM
A gift- PC by ska! Jan 4, 2003 10:47 AM
now this by justalil Jan 5, 2003 12:18 PM
the colony by new.skin.joy Jan 3, 2003 1:59 PM
read this a couple of times by justalil Jan 5, 2003 12:17 PM
thanks alicia, by new.skin.joy Jan 5, 2003 10:02 PM
Mr. Peepers by Picasso's husband by picasso Jan 3, 2003 1:34 PM
thanks for the clarification... by PhilipHarris Jan 3, 2003 1:53 PM
Second Coming by PhilipHarris Jan 3, 2003 12:30 PM
hailmarymotherofgrace... by sasha Jan 4, 2003 8:41 PM
I've always been afraid... by PhilipHarris Jan 4, 2003 9:04 PM
Damn by elemental123 Jan 7, 2003 2:01 AM
A Report: The Modern Agent (PC) by Rhinehart Jan 3, 2003 3:45 AM
A little boy by Baby2 Jan 2, 2003 2:49 PM
snakes by stevadore Jan 3, 2003 6:19 AM
:) by Baby2 Jan 3, 2003 9:30 AM
i'll tell you what it means by firsty Jan 3, 2003 7:29 AM
actually by stevadore Jan 3, 2003 7:50 AM
yes by Baby2 Jan 3, 2003 9:38 AM
That's very similar by BuddhistPunk Jan 3, 2003 7:40 AM
whatever rolls your ball by Baby2 Jan 3, 2003 9:26 AM
u can take by um Jan 4, 2003 9:29 PM
The Tao Party (p/c?) by Vaselina Jan 1, 2003 8:03 PM
vaselina thats... by PhilipHarris Jan 1, 2003 8:38 PM
yes by furiousthemonkeyboy Jan 2, 2003 3:01 AM
i can by Vaselina Jan 2, 2003 5:48 AM
I don't go to raves that much anymore by elemental123 Jan 7, 2003 1:51 AM
Theres still beauty (PC) by weezer Jan 1, 2003 3:46 PM
theres still beauty... by PhilipHarris Jan 1, 2003 4:15 PM
well by weezer Jan 1, 2003 5:07 PM


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