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continuing... by Baby2 Mar 31, 2003 10:42 AM
thanks by Himali Apr 1, 2003 9:36 PM
yes by Baby2 Apr 4, 2003 10:33 AM
d--i-v-o-r-c-e by picasso Mar 31, 2003 8:26 AM
it's a paradox by Billectric Mar 31, 2003 9:06 AM
divorce by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Apr 1, 2003 10:18 AM
Wisdom by Ozgarth Apr 1, 2003 9:11 PM
52 (The Clutch) by the mingo Mar 31, 2003 8:23 AM
I really like this by Billectric Mar 31, 2003 9:12 AM
thanx, bill ... by the mingo Apr 1, 2003 3:39 AM
And, I must add by Billectric Apr 1, 2003 5:42 AM
I really like it tooo by Hester Prynne Mar 31, 2003 10:51 AM
hi hest ... by the mingo Apr 1, 2003 3:47 AM
nice... by Kreddible Trout Mar 31, 2003 5:59 PM
thanx , kt ... by the mingo Apr 1, 2003 3:51 AM
wow! by Himali Apr 2, 2003 10:44 PM
Trevor and Alexis by sasha Mar 30, 2003 7:02 PM
My chance to cross gross obesity from the list of body types I hadn't yet scored by Robert Levin Mar 30, 2003 3:16 PM
gad by Vaselina Mar 30, 2003 5:16 PM
holy cow by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 30, 2003 6:31 PM
your candor by stevadore Mar 31, 2003 6:16 AM
Big Crocodile. Name of Percy. by Christian Silver Mar 30, 2003 9:24 AM
Used 2 by aliengrove Mar 30, 2003 4:03 PM
ha by Himali Mar 31, 2003 4:33 AM
ferocity of an epilectic Tyrannosauras Rex by Billectric Mar 31, 2003 9:14 AM
GREAT to see a Silver story again by losetowin Apr 1, 2003 1:41 PM
What A Wonderful War This Will Be by Feign Mar 29, 2003 8:01 PM
good by Vaselina Mar 30, 2003 11:42 AM
this prayer I say by violet9ish Mar 30, 2003 11:49 AM
yes by pelerine Mar 30, 2003 12:02 PM
I keep watching by violet9ish Mar 30, 2003 12:46 PM
you got it by aliengrove Mar 30, 2003 3:13 PM
Scum by aliengrove Mar 29, 2003 5:58 PM
New Roof Chronicles by Billectric Mar 29, 2003 1:47 PM
with out a net by thunder chicken Mar 29, 2003 3:25 PM
hehehe, I like that . . . by Billectric Mar 29, 2003 5:27 PM
then my wife's cousin grinned by jota Mar 29, 2003 5:39 PM
Mel Brooks def. of comedy and tragedy by thunder chicken Mar 29, 2003 9:14 PM
Nose bubble by Billectric Mar 30, 2003 9:04 AM
man, bill by jamelah Mar 29, 2003 5:41 PM
I stood up, puked, and staggered... by firecracker Mar 30, 2003 9:04 AM
thanks for reading, fc by Billectric Mar 30, 2003 9:09 AM
New Roof by Billectric Mar 29, 2003 1:46 PM
africa - 3 maasailand by darkstar Mar 28, 2003 6:04 PM
please by stevadore Mar 31, 2003 5:59 AM
thank you by darkstar Apr 1, 2003 10:54 AM
Why breed when our children render us obsolete? by Robert Levin Mar 28, 2003 1:11 PM
my novel. chapters 9 and 10 (PC) by sasha Mar 28, 2003 9:58 AM
pretty by Crimson War Goddess Mar 28, 2003 10:03 AM
where's - by PhilipHarris Mar 28, 2003 10:08 AM
chapter 8 is by sasha Mar 28, 2003 10:14 AM
No by PhilipHarris Mar 28, 2003 10:22 AM
my novel. chapter 7. (PC)` by sasha Mar 28, 2003 9:56 AM
my novel. chapter 6. (PC) by sasha Mar 28, 2003 9:55 AM
my novel. chapter 5. (PC) by sasha Mar 28, 2003 9:50 AM
wild bird flying by mudshark Mar 28, 2003 9:19 AM
A Dream by slog Mar 27, 2003 1:44 PM
i always knew i was going to go to college. by Baby2 Mar 27, 2003 10:21 AM
wow! by Himali Mar 28, 2003 12:16 AM
Please do - by PhilipHarris Mar 28, 2003 10:12 AM
Nina and The Jets-An excerpt from the novel by Jam Mar 26, 2003 11:28 PM
Dark Days by jim vinny Mar 26, 2003 8:22 AM
Thanks for sharing that by Billectric Mar 26, 2003 3:25 PM
yeah, good by learned Mar 26, 2003 3:47 PM
super by pelerine Mar 26, 2003 6:40 PM
the abyss... by Feign Mar 27, 2003 11:58 AM
my hand out by greek to me Mar 28, 2003 6:21 AM
First Chapter of a Novel - - The Girl in Love with Death by GoddessMarianne Mar 25, 2003 6:45 PM
im scared by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 25, 2003 7:28 PM
Thanks. by GoddessMarianne Mar 28, 2003 10:49 PM
marianne. by sasha Mar 28, 2003 9:20 AM
Cool by GoddessMarianne Mar 28, 2003 10:51 PM
africa part 2- tarangire by darkstar Mar 25, 2003 10:18 AM
you write well by learned Mar 26, 2003 10:05 AM
reminds me by stevadore Mar 26, 2003 11:02 AM
this is by darkstar Mar 28, 2003 4:53 AM
when by stevadore Mar 28, 2003 9:20 AM
june by darkstar Mar 28, 2003 4:11 PM
Logue's Night by earth guru Mar 24, 2003 10:30 PM
Experiments in sound by the bastard child Mar 24, 2003 4:43 PM
i don't get it by Billectric Mar 26, 2003 3:36 PM
the idea behind by the bastard child Mar 26, 2003 4:06 PM
africa by darkstar Mar 24, 2003 12:12 PM
ha! by stevadore Mar 25, 2003 6:33 AM
i by foolish_Paeter Mar 26, 2003 10:14 AM
this by Himali Mar 28, 2003 2:31 AM
joe tried to o.d. awhile ago, but fucked it up as usual by pelerine Mar 23, 2003 3:01 PM
that story made me cry... by feral Mar 23, 2003 9:38 PM
so you're that guy by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 6:11 PM
it made me pee- by Jam Mar 23, 2003 10:23 PM
pee by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 6:08 PM
somehow I feel better after reading ur story by thunder chicken Mar 23, 2003 11:28 PM
good by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 6:07 PM
What I noticed in the story by Billectric Mar 24, 2003 6:45 AM
lol by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 6:05 PM
Watertown, Chapter Nineteen by jota Mar 23, 2003 1:46 PM
jota, did i ever tell you by Billectric Mar 23, 2003 3:06 PM
and you know what by jota Mar 24, 2003 8:25 AM
don't be fooled... by feral Mar 25, 2003 9:01 PM
10-4 by thunder chicken Mar 29, 2003 4:53 PM
chapter 19! by judih. Apr 14, 2003 2:05 AM
The Neighborhood Ditch by Billectric Mar 23, 2003 8:06 AM
sex in a ditch... by stevadore Mar 24, 2003 7:57 AM
how old was i? by Billectric Mar 26, 2003 11:20 AM
the shooting by pelerine Mar 23, 2003 7:21 AM
whoa. by Vaselina Mar 23, 2003 2:55 PM
wow by pelerine Mar 23, 2003 3:04 PM
phew... by atlanticqueen Mar 23, 2003 5:06 PM
i'm glad by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 6:02 PM
my god! by stevadore Mar 24, 2003 7:54 AM
thanks by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 6:03 PM
shame by stevadore Mar 25, 2003 6:28 AM
ooof! by Himali Mar 26, 2003 11:58 PM
My coolskin. by Rickety Mar 22, 2003 7:14 PM
we represent by Hester Prynne Mar 22, 2003 7:35 PM
only selfmade, not sold by coffee Mar 25, 2003 4:53 AM
Coolskin continues on. by Rickety Mar 26, 2003 8:44 PM
the last morning's wind by hypatia Mar 22, 2003 2:14 PM
Or maybe...he could buy it for someone else.... by SebDaez. Mar 22, 2003 2:20 PM
heh by hypatia Mar 22, 2003 2:29 PM
Hey..Im here For YOU! by SebDaez. Mar 22, 2003 2:35 PM
Besides, by SebDaez. Mar 22, 2003 2:39 PM
this scent by greek to me Mar 24, 2003 5:46 AM
l.o.m.l. by hypatia Mar 24, 2003 6:15 PM
jimmy page and me... by feral Mar 21, 2003 11:42 AM
I just bought a 68 chevy by thunder chicken Mar 21, 2003 8:23 PM
Zoso by Billectric Mar 22, 2003 6:21 AM
Musin's in front a the TV Set, by DeLurking Mar 20, 2003 5:10 PM
Tell you what DeLurking by BuddhistPunk Mar 21, 2003 6:10 AM
well damn man by DeLurking Mar 21, 2003 2:05 PM
loved it... by mnaz Mar 23, 2003 1:43 AM
driven to distraction by thunder chicken Mar 20, 2003 4:52 AM
A Rembrandt Self-Portrait by Zlatko Waterman Mar 19, 2003 7:04 AM
364 words that paint a picture by thunder chicken Mar 19, 2003 1:04 PM
Dear Zlatko: by headburner Mar 19, 2003 9:36 PM
Thanks, HB, and those are good suggestions. by Zlatko Waterman Mar 20, 2003 4:03 PM
this was beautiful... by stevadore Mar 20, 2003 7:30 AM
a slice of ice by thunder chicken Mar 18, 2003 10:41 PM
Man! That by Billectric Mar 19, 2003 5:29 AM
happy you noticed by thunder chicken Mar 19, 2003 9:41 PM
It can actually be fun to rewrite by Billectric Mar 22, 2003 6:27 AM
Any suggestions? Comments? by AgnosticExtremist Mar 18, 2003 8:58 PM
monologue #1: i like to die by jamelah Mar 18, 2003 5:35 PM
You have a knack for by Billectric Mar 18, 2003 6:15 PM
actually, i have a plan by jamelah Mar 19, 2003 5:09 AM
Good plan, J by Billectric Mar 19, 2003 9:01 AM
once again... by firecracker Mar 18, 2003 7:29 PM
thanks by jamelah Mar 19, 2003 5:18 AM
"don't tell nobody my life story and I want tell nobody that you care" by thunder chicken Mar 18, 2003 10:16 PM
hey by jamelah Mar 19, 2003 5:22 AM
work etiquette... by feral Mar 21, 2003 12:02 PM
finally... i had a chance to read this by anniefay Mar 22, 2003 4:49 AM
This is a story of a girl by for the love of hank Mar 18, 2003 3:55 PM
i by learned Mar 18, 2003 4:43 PM
hey there hank by pelerine Mar 24, 2003 7:43 PM
i replyed to the wrong thing by Intense_Apathy Sep 12, 2003 2:21 PM
the vaccum (or is it vacuum?) by learned Mar 18, 2003 11:31 AM
2:45 pm est by thunder chicken Mar 18, 2003 11:52 AM
1:59am another day by thunder chicken Mar 18, 2003 11:01 PM
finished once by st. jack Mar 20, 2003 5:00 AM
DIY by st. jack Mar 20, 2003 5:15 AM
This is what hurt. by Rickety Mar 17, 2003 10:12 PM
SAVIOUR by the bastard child Mar 17, 2003 5:43 PM
I'll keep that in mind.... by SebDaez. Mar 22, 2003 2:31 PM
Stranded: A fable by the bastard child Mar 17, 2003 5:41 PM
Transparency, The human psych and the postioning of our feet by the bastard child Mar 17, 2003 5:40 PM
The Return Part 1 PC by slog Mar 17, 2003 1:32 PM
Lines written on a train in Italy by Kubla Kahn Mar 17, 2003 11:09 AM
i like this by jamelah Mar 17, 2003 11:53 AM
Good Travelling Prose by Billectric Mar 17, 2003 12:05 PM
9 o'clock (Part 1) by sasha Mar 17, 2003 5:06 AM
fictional observations 2 by sasha Mar 17, 2003 4:49 AM
First of a Story (please give an opinion) by GoddessMarianne Mar 16, 2003 6:50 PM
its by Himali Mar 16, 2003 8:33 PM
Beautiful Brutality by beatrice vicious Mar 15, 2003 3:33 PM
reminds by Himali Mar 16, 2003 8:24 AM
The Granny Snuff Blues by betabandido Mar 15, 2003 3:11 PM
kinkkkyyyyy! by Himali Mar 16, 2003 1:10 AM
Forgettable Occurrences in the Office of the FBI (Satire Story) by Mage Mar 14, 2003 6:17 PM
I liked this... by mindlosing Mar 15, 2003 4:42 PM
reply by betabandido Mar 15, 2003 4:55 PM
Portrait of the Artist as a Young Buddha (A very short story) by Ozgarth Mar 13, 2003 8:43 PM
SWANSEA'S DESERT COAST (WED.19.03.03) by Arcadia Mar 19, 2003 3:37 PM
"A Pound of Flesh" -- a tale of Nowhere by foolish_Paeter Mar 12, 2003 8:21 PM
notes. by foolish_Paeter Mar 12, 2003 8:28 PM
fp by Himali Mar 13, 2003 9:51 PM
thanks by foolish_Paeter Mar 14, 2003 10:26 PM
at by Himali Mar 14, 2003 11:14 PM
about the doctor by Himali Mar 14, 2003 11:20 PM
thanks again by foolish_Paeter Mar 15, 2003 8:13 AM
may be by Himali Mar 16, 2003 1:14 AM
and a question (please answer) by foolish_Paeter Mar 14, 2003 10:31 PM
shock by Himali Mar 14, 2003 11:15 PM
great! by foolish_Paeter Mar 15, 2003 8:14 AM
Just four nights by for the love of hank Mar 12, 2003 5:43 PM
Driver's Seat. by sasha Mar 12, 2003 3:44 PM
A Fire Across Time by Ozgarth Mar 12, 2003 10:11 AM
the quality by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 12, 2003 12:14 PM
Thank you-- by Ozgarth Mar 12, 2003 8:32 PM
One Day by Vaselina Mar 12, 2003 9:41 AM
oh happy day! by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 12, 2003 12:08 PM
Frontierless by mindlosing Mar 11, 2003 7:00 PM
thanks for posting this by bluemonk Mar 11, 2003 11:25 PM
- by mindlosing Mar 13, 2003 4:55 PM
Barry Gifford by bluemonk Mar 10, 2003 6:30 PM
bluemonk... by firecracker Mar 12, 2003 11:40 AM
My feelings for him (true story/journal entry) by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 10, 2003 5:32 PM
"im such a hopeless fool" by Ozgarth Mar 11, 2003 7:29 PM
Paradise by Lexy Mar 10, 2003 9:50 AM
colloquy of the crows (revised - PLEASE critique) by Sabertash Mar 10, 2003 8:03 AM
well by Illuminara Mar 12, 2003 4:50 PM
Thanks by Sabertash Mar 13, 2003 11:22 AM
maybe keep in mind... by Illuminara Mar 13, 2003 11:39 AM
I Have a Body, But I Am Not My Body... (PC) by a majority of one Mar 9, 2003 6:30 PM
A short story in 55 words by Observer Mar 9, 2003 1:51 PM
Tight by Sabertash Mar 10, 2003 8:11 AM
wow. by sasha Mar 10, 2003 8:25 PM
Excerpt from work-in-progress. by willyboy Mar 9, 2003 6:12 AM
hope by Baby2 Mar 9, 2003 1:04 PM
baby2 by willyboy Mar 10, 2003 2:29 AM
a c for the pc by hypatia Mar 9, 2003 5:32 PM
hypatia by willyboy Mar 10, 2003 2:28 AM
Just three nights by for the love of hank Mar 8, 2003 7:26 PM
so maybe my by hypatia Mar 8, 2003 10:39 PM
hey by Himali Mar 9, 2003 11:20 PM
In my own "back yard"! Woody Guthrie and Stetson Kenndey by Billectric Mar 8, 2003 1:53 PM
So far, so good by taborca Mar 10, 2003 5:34 AM
a week later by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 2:31 AM
a story without a moral, a day in dust by brooklyn Mar 7, 2003 10:32 AM
important by firecracker Mar 7, 2003 11:15 AM
i like the ambiguity by learned Mar 7, 2003 12:31 PM
levi by in_extremis Mar 7, 2003 1:06 PM
thank you, Levi by anniefay Mar 7, 2003 2:15 PM
thanks anne ... by brooklyn Mar 8, 2003 4:20 PM
Levi - You by Billectric Mar 7, 2003 8:36 PM
i never knew that, bill by brooklyn Mar 8, 2003 4:23 PM
you walked me through it by judih. Mar 7, 2003 8:39 PM
and yeah by Billectric Mar 7, 2003 8:46 PM
you by for the love of hank Mar 7, 2003 8:55 PM
yes by um Mar 8, 2003 2:43 AM
well, lotsa thoughts & thanks for posting this by pelerine Mar 8, 2003 4:42 PM
Levi by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 8, 2003 11:10 PM
levi... by jamelah Mar 9, 2003 1:49 PM
dixie cups and a basket of clean towels, by thunder chicken Mar 12, 2003 4:28 PM
the folds of by Aki Mar 5, 2003 5:01 AM
how beautfiul by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 5, 2003 10:58 AM
Acorns, nuts, and things. by Ozgarth Mar 4, 2003 9:22 PM
A nice little vignette by Billectric Mar 5, 2003 7:39 AM
A neurotic Conversation by the bastard child Mar 4, 2003 7:09 PM
This is... by beatrice vicious Mar 8, 2003 5:31 PM
Hello Mr Bastard Child by betabandido Mar 15, 2003 4:41 PM
reply by betabandido Mar 15, 2003 4:45 PM
In a nut shell by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 11:15 PM
aboriginal bit by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 11:24 PM
embarassed by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 11:28 PM
"the rock" by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 11:32 PM
Xochi by Baby2 Mar 4, 2003 6:36 PM
a very by Himali Mar 5, 2003 1:00 AM
It Feels Like Pins (PC) by Billectric Mar 4, 2003 4:51 PM
WHAT by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 5, 2003 1:35 PM
Hey, GHC, speak up! by Billectric Mar 5, 2003 6:25 PM
The Cult of Iamweh (loosely based of a true story)(PC) by Ozgarth Mar 4, 2003 12:38 PM
very by Himali Mar 5, 2003 1:52 AM
that was hilarious! by stevadore Mar 5, 2003 9:16 AM
Yeah, by Ozgarth Mar 5, 2003 9:37 AM
Very thought provoking by Billectric Mar 6, 2003 5:20 AM
Just one night (a true story) by for the love of hank Mar 3, 2003 3:19 PM
oh man by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 3, 2003 3:58 PM
i did! by for the love of hank Mar 4, 2003 5:43 PM
great snapshot by pelerine Mar 3, 2003 4:41 PM
thanks luv by for the love of hank Mar 4, 2003 5:43 PM
so you're a woman are ya? by feral Mar 4, 2003 1:10 AM
oh da dee da by for the love of hank Mar 4, 2003 5:41 PM
just two nights by for the love of hank Mar 4, 2003 5:39 PM
Maybe you can cope. by Ozgarth Mar 4, 2003 8:29 PM
there's something by Himali Mar 5, 2003 12:48 AM
If your neck isn't on the line by Ozgarth Mar 5, 2003 10:27 AM
and i'm thinking by pelerine Mar 5, 2003 5:06 PM
hi pel by for the love of hank Mar 5, 2003 8:44 PM
JUST TWO AND A BIT NIGHTS by for the love of hank Mar 6, 2003 3:13 AM
I wish... by beatrice vicious Mar 8, 2003 5:43 PM
metafiscal homelessness , dedication (please do not reply still editing) by stilltrucking Mar 3, 2003 2:21 PM
suicide by embarassment by thunder chicken Mar 4, 2003 12:34 AM
How old was she? About two feet tall ,whatever age that is? by thunder chicken Mar 12, 2003 12:32 PM
metafiscal blues by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 11:37 PM
"she road with any driver who offered her a ride" by thunder chicken Mar 16, 2003 11:52 PM
links by st. jack Mar 20, 2003 5:24 AM
a start to something (pc) by ren Mar 3, 2003 1:37 PM
Looking into the mirror by mindlosing Mar 2, 2003 7:57 PM
A different bar and people who don't exist by Billectric Mar 2, 2003 11:56 AM
hahahaha... by feral Mar 2, 2003 9:37 PM
oh, and i left out by Billectric Mar 3, 2003 5:36 AM
The Brawl by BuddhistPunk Mar 2, 2003 7:22 AM
bloody hell by jota Mar 2, 2003 12:04 PM
typically irish... by feral Mar 2, 2003 9:42 PM
good, clean fun by Billectric Mar 3, 2003 5:42 AM
irked and full of song by hypatia Mar 1, 2003 3:08 PM


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