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This board is where LitKicks members can post stories of any kind. Fiction, satire, autobiography, meta-fiction and any other kind of prose is welcomed.

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This is my first attempt at a story, please tell me if I should bother finishing by fabled construct Nov 29, 2003 3:15 PM
here come the reply by scannerdarkly Nov 29, 2003 4:14 PM
well... you've got my attention by anniefay Nov 30, 2003 4:52 AM
i may have by fabled construct Nov 30, 2003 12:55 PM
quite normal to not know where the story's gonna go by searching Nov 30, 2003 2:10 PM
Enjoyable by Alvaro Nov 30, 2003 8:01 PM
How do you know it is not finished? by zero hero Dec 1, 2003 11:50 PM
... by jota Nov 29, 2003 12:01 PM
Daer Siht by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 30, 2003 12:13 PM
well by jota Nov 30, 2003 12:59 PM
here's the original post by jota Nov 30, 2003 1:06 PM
I'm going to restructure by jota Nov 30, 2003 1:07 PM
i like it by searching Nov 30, 2003 2:23 PM
Is this by Billectric Dec 3, 2003 11:27 AM
CALL FOR SUBMISSIONS!! by zygotenmycoffee Nov 29, 2003 1:29 AM
(True Story) We Were In The Belly Of The Beast... by Billectric Nov 29, 2003 10:15 AM
(True Story) I Was In the Belly of the Beast by Billectric Nov 28, 2003 2:01 PM
back the truck up by um Nov 28, 2003 5:24 PM
andy griffith ! by Billectric Nov 28, 2003 5:51 PM
you are a very brave man... by anniefay Nov 29, 2003 5:30 AM
Confidence in your writing... by Alvaro Nov 29, 2003 7:28 AM
mainly, by Billectric Nov 29, 2003 10:07 AM
Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...... (my workshop piece) by anniefay Nov 28, 2003 12:13 PM
Whooooooosssssshhhhhhhhhh (a workshop extra piece) by anniefay Nov 28, 2003 12:38 PM
Great! by Billectric Nov 28, 2003 2:05 PM
Honor and Fast Cars (2) (PC) by searching Nov 27, 2003 8:40 PM
The Virgin Queen (Pleeze Critique) by Alvaro Nov 27, 2003 5:30 PM
maybe by searching Nov 27, 2003 8:48 PM
Could be a start by Van Gogh's Ear Nov 28, 2003 1:45 PM
Two divergent responses...but I'm encouraged and will chip away further... by Alvaro Nov 28, 2003 5:12 PM
PC F Equals Fear by wam4764 Nov 27, 2003 12:34 PM
It's so cold in Scotland by ValdeZZ Nov 27, 2003 10:16 AM
Coramano (1) by searching Nov 26, 2003 2:13 PM
insanity goes astray by firsty Nov 26, 2003 6:25 AM
Pentagrammon (The Story) -- P.C. by zen_ Nov 25, 2003 4:32 PM
interesting by Lightning Rod Nov 26, 2003 12:08 PM
There's much about everyone here that I'd like to know by zen_ Nov 26, 2003 4:04 PM
now it's becoming intense by judih. Nov 26, 2003 7:32 PM
Honor and Fast Cars (1) (Please comment) by searching Nov 25, 2003 2:33 PM
yeah by slog Nov 25, 2003 2:56 PM
thoughts by dreamofconsciousness Nov 25, 2003 12:36 PM
sing pc by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:38 AM
well by JacopoBelbo84 Dec 4, 2003 10:12 AM
i hate by slog Dec 4, 2003 11:04 AM
the hangover king -pc by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:33 AM
heh by firsty Nov 26, 2003 5:53 AM
Happy Accidents Please Critique by LOSTPOET1 Nov 25, 2003 8:16 AM
hmm by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:07 AM
Hard to read? by LOSTPOET1 Nov 25, 2003 11:21 AM
kamma by slog Nov 25, 2003 12:05 PM
This 'should' enlighten you...it didn't me by JacopoBelbo84 Dec 4, 2003 10:15 AM
She by dreamofconsciousness Nov 24, 2003 7:54 PM
fight it, girl by judih. Nov 24, 2003 8:03 PM
excellent... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:20 PM
thanks by dreamofconsciousness Nov 25, 2003 11:55 AM
thanks by Holden Nov 26, 2003 1:25 AM
Caulfield by dreamofconsciousness Dec 4, 2003 9:05 PM
lets talk sometime.... by Holden Dec 5, 2003 8:56 PM
Brilliant... by Bianca Nov 25, 2003 1:53 AM
AmA by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 25, 2003 6:33 AM
Outstanding! by Brdseyevu Dec 8, 2003 2:18 PM
She Looks and Smiles in the Mirror (PC) by slog Nov 24, 2003 4:20 PM
2 cents... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:16 PM
bukowski? by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 25, 2003 6:38 AM
bukowski by slog Nov 25, 2003 7:15 AM
sleaze by slog Nov 25, 2003 7:08 AM
there is a conflict here by firsty Nov 25, 2003 7:35 AM
thanks for the extended kritik by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:03 AM
Georgia Peach PC by Holden Nov 24, 2003 1:13 PM
nice by judih. Nov 24, 2003 8:01 PM
thanks... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:22 PM
first of all, by firsty Nov 25, 2003 7:57 AM
thanks... by Holden Nov 26, 2003 1:33 AM
well i liked the 1st paragraph, by firsty Nov 26, 2003 5:23 AM
okay by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:10 AM
you are correct... by Holden Nov 26, 2003 1:37 AM
i dig a pony by slog Dec 5, 2003 11:21 AM
okay by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:10 AM
Pubic Prose by Illuminara Nov 23, 2003 8:20 PM
dry and no chance of rain by judih. Nov 23, 2003 8:51 PM
just by Illuminara Nov 23, 2003 9:06 PM
2 cents... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:25 PM
raise you a nickel by zero hero Jan 28, 2004 10:10 AM
pubic rose by zero hero Jan 28, 2004 12:22 AM
Otward bound-Part 2 (PC) by shem Nov 23, 2003 3:14 PM
It was hard for me to read... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:27 PM
A Rebel Without Balls by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 2:49 PM
I am lost.... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:28 PM
I don't know by zero hero Nov 25, 2003 6:17 AM
Text Box 23 by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 6:15 AM
PC by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 11:46 AM
i think this belongs in poesy by slog Nov 25, 2003 11:14 AM
say thanks by zero hero Dec 7, 2003 6:47 PM
Dolefulness by stiffupperlip Nov 22, 2003 4:46 PM
Eternal Return theNirvana-principle by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 6:26 AM
Ghost Eyes by Bianca Nov 21, 2003 5:44 AM
I loved your story just thinking out loud by zero hero Nov 21, 2003 7:02 PM
Pretty good by Alvaro Nov 21, 2003 9:04 PM
very true by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 6:11 AM
WOW.... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:32 PM
Thanks! by Bianca Nov 25, 2003 1:03 AM
good but by firsty Nov 25, 2003 8:30 AM
Happy Accidents P C by LOSTPOET1 Nov 20, 2003 11:53 PM
A Fugal Sex Abreaction - by PhilipHarris Nov 19, 2003 3:24 PM
I really liked this piece... by Holden Nov 24, 2003 10:35 PM
Phillip lad.. by Alex Uziel Nov 26, 2003 3:10 AM
Thank you by PhilipHarris Nov 26, 2003 1:47 PM
Uncle Fred's Funeral by shyster Nov 19, 2003 3:05 PM
beautiful by jim vinny Nov 19, 2003 3:17 PM
Next time I by Christian Silver Nov 24, 2003 12:18 PM
nice one by shyster Nov 26, 2003 3:00 AM
time manipulation, or how to be a clock dominatrix (PC) by lily m Nov 19, 2003 12:11 PM
The - by PhilipHarris Nov 19, 2003 4:00 PM
juxtaposition by firsty Nov 20, 2003 7:53 AM
I LIKED THE CAPS by zero hero Nov 23, 2003 2:57 PM
... by lily m Nov 24, 2003 6:53 PM
mystique by amory Nov 18, 2003 11:07 PM
yeah by Sidis68 Nov 19, 2003 3:33 PM
you look pretty good in black, a fragment of a grandfather's tale by zero hero Nov 18, 2003 8:31 AM
Yeah - by PhilipHarris Nov 19, 2003 3:04 PM
offhand by zero hero Nov 20, 2003 9:55 AM
but then again you may not know what the heck you are talking about by zero hero Nov 20, 2003 10:03 AM
I have - by PhilipHarris Nov 20, 2003 11:09 AM
on the other hand by zero hero Nov 20, 2003 7:21 PM
sorry about the rough ride by zero hero Nov 21, 2003 6:46 PM
Tokyo Flight 49 - by PhilipHarris Nov 17, 2003 4:29 PM
A real pleasure to read by zero hero Nov 18, 2003 9:13 PM
Temporary - by PhilipHarris Dec 16, 2003 9:35 AM
Short Bursts of Indecision(more 'Songs') P C by LOSTPOET1 Nov 17, 2003 10:37 AM
The Honeymooners by zero hero Nov 17, 2003 9:19 AM
Great in moderate amounts. by Alvaro Nov 20, 2003 9:14 AM
How to not pick up the woman you want: by ValdeZZ Nov 17, 2003 7:07 AM
:) by Rosie Nov 17, 2003 9:32 AM
Latitudes of Loss by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 12:29 AM
You should by SivadBop Nov 17, 2003 1:16 AM
why by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 9:26 AM
hi illuminara by judih. Nov 17, 2003 10:57 AM
actually nothing could be lower by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 11:42 AM
it is? by judih. Nov 17, 2003 11:48 AM
yeah by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 11:52 AM
efl by judih. Nov 17, 2003 11:56 AM
don't tell no body my life story, I won't tell nobody that you care by zero hero Nov 17, 2003 12:24 PM
um, by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 12:39 PM
I should look before I leap to a post by zero hero Nov 17, 2003 8:28 PM
ha by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 9:19 PM
Trying to visualize you in a habit and you do look pretty good in black by zero hero Nov 17, 2003 11:25 PM
sorry judih by zero hero Nov 17, 2003 8:32 PM
no problem, zero h by judih. Nov 18, 2003 10:18 AM
Say by zero hero Nov 18, 2003 9:18 PM
beautiful by shyster Nov 22, 2003 5:00 AM
i'll show you mine if you show me yours by SivadBop Nov 16, 2003 7:52 PM
Nocturne for Three Airships by beatvibe Nov 16, 2003 7:23 PM
i like the word by SivadBop Nov 16, 2003 8:18 PM
Of Course - by PhilipHarris Nov 17, 2003 5:11 PM
The Lean Cuisine Version by beatvibe Nov 17, 2003 8:09 PM
Salt Wars and Desperados by buddhabitch Nov 16, 2003 6:37 PM
life is more risky by Illuminara Nov 17, 2003 12:52 AM
great description... by anniefay Nov 17, 2003 7:56 AM
fake old town by judih. Nov 17, 2003 10:52 AM
when fog spreads its silence by panta rhei Nov 17, 2003 11:41 AM
twas a good one............ by WIREMAN Nov 18, 2003 3:39 PM
Better than two aspirin by zero hero Nov 19, 2003 12:55 PM
Message 17 by Tulate Nov 16, 2003 12:07 PM
Outward-bound(part 1) PLEASE critique! by shem Nov 15, 2003 9:45 PM
i like by SivadBop Nov 15, 2003 10:11 PM
hmm, yeah, read this by JacopoBelbo84 Nov 16, 2003 8:16 AM
selections from part one, criticize my ass by SivadBop Nov 15, 2003 2:26 PM
never was anything sexual about Gilroy curves, just an eeirie calm and by zero hero Nov 15, 2003 3:51 PM
History of the Atom Bomb, part II by SivadBop Nov 15, 2003 4:23 PM
no no by zero hero Nov 15, 2003 10:29 PM
Homeboy (edited) by zero hero Nov 16, 2003 12:38 AM
no no by zero hero Nov 16, 2003 12:42 AM
Part One! by SivadBop Nov 15, 2003 12:55 PM
SivadBop by winterocean Nov 16, 2003 7:11 AM
unfortunately by SivadBop Nov 16, 2003 1:51 PM
PC - The Con of the Century by wam4764 Nov 15, 2003 12:17 PM
hi winston by firsty Nov 20, 2003 7:43 AM
Con of the Century by wam4764 Nov 21, 2003 4:05 PM
I fooled around and fell in love by zero hero Nov 15, 2003 11:37 AM
Ferlinghetti's train cut and paste by zero hero Nov 15, 2003 11:00 PM
, by zero hero Nov 16, 2003 12:49 AM
beautiful words by jessa_lynne Nov 18, 2003 6:54 AM
thank you by zero hero Nov 19, 2003 1:24 AM
Kit by jota Nov 15, 2003 10:30 AM
enjoyed by cabledog Nov 20, 2003 8:07 PM
Okay again, by welded sprocket Nov 15, 2003 5:01 AM
Tech Tree by foolish_Paeter Nov 15, 2003 1:07 AM
i am thoroughly by welded sprocket Nov 15, 2003 4:58 AM
thanks by foolish_Paeter Nov 15, 2003 3:27 PM
"Sandpaper" by Captain_Backfire Nov 14, 2003 7:43 PM
(Working Title) by BuddhistPunk Nov 14, 2003 6:31 AM
wow by shishi Nov 14, 2003 7:31 AM
me by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 9:32 AM
heh by Knip Nov 14, 2003 7:38 AM
bizarre ending ! by Billectric Nov 14, 2003 8:17 AM
man am i glad to hear you say that by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 9:26 AM
wow! by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 8:44 AM
the shakes by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 9:35 AM
!! by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 6:06 PM
My hysterical family by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 7:21 PM
it could be true by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 9:29 AM
for some reason your story reminded me of this. by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 7:13 PM
heroically offbeat by shyster Nov 22, 2003 5:16 AM
not sure if this should go here or in poetry by shishi Nov 14, 2003 3:47 AM
back stabbers by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 12:17 AM
the pen by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 8:32 AM
charlie chan says "words don't cook rice" by zero hero Nov 14, 2003 8:41 AM
last chance (almost) to join Freestyle by LitKicks Staff Nov 13, 2003 4:58 PM
missed the almost and freaked by zero hero Nov 13, 2003 9:42 PM
Homeboy's sophmore year , a reply by zero hero Nov 13, 2003 1:25 PM
Not a story so much (PC) by jessa_lynne Nov 13, 2003 7:37 AM
The BLIMP (intro) by foolish_Paeter Nov 12, 2003 8:07 PM
The BLIMP: Doc's Office by foolish_Paeter Nov 12, 2003 8:29 PM
(notes) by foolish_Paeter Nov 12, 2003 8:31 PM
The BLIMP: The Major's New Girlfriend by foolish_Paeter Nov 12, 2003 8:55 PM
this story meant a lot to me by zero hero Nov 13, 2003 10:28 PM
thanks man by foolish_Paeter Nov 14, 2003 1:53 PM
We Were Merely Freshman (PC) by AbeyForrest Nov 12, 2003 8:04 PM
PC by zero hero Nov 12, 2003 11:29 PM
thanks by AbeyForrest Nov 13, 2003 6:20 AM
Go Ask Alice by zero hero Nov 13, 2003 9:48 PM
Children's lit by Rosie Nov 12, 2003 12:06 PM
smooth sailing, rosie by judih. Nov 12, 2003 7:11 PM
:) by Rosie Nov 12, 2003 10:42 PM
oops! by Rosie Nov 12, 2003 10:41 PM
"my pappy told me that if I came home with any medals he was gonna shoot me by zero hero Nov 13, 2003 11:30 PM
heh, heh! by Rosie Nov 14, 2003 8:26 AM
have I come to this, no no by zero hero Nov 12, 2003 8:28 AM
Hello this is Homeboy speaking by zero hero Nov 16, 2003 12:52 AM
For The Likes Of John Condon by BuddhistPunk Nov 12, 2003 1:24 AM
A good way to remember by Browncat Nov 12, 2003 2:28 AM
Short Story Writing Resource Web Sites by SixString Nov 11, 2003 3:46 AM
if not this one... by pelerine Nov 11, 2003 6:40 AM
Plea for resources by Grendel48 Nov 10, 2003 2:36 PM
remote nyc blues by lebris Nov 10, 2003 12:19 PM
this made me want to cry in my soup by rjd2 Nov 10, 2003 1:13 PM
i think i know what is up your sleeve by lebris Nov 10, 2003 2:31 PM
chewed up by jota Nov 10, 2003 1:37 PM
nice poem by lebris Nov 10, 2003 2:31 PM
this is by jamelah Nov 10, 2003 2:23 PM
yeah, by lebris Nov 10, 2003 2:32 PM
yeah by jamelah Nov 10, 2003 6:42 PM
inferiority feelings about NYC by zero hero Nov 10, 2003 11:13 PM
that is a mess by zero hero Nov 10, 2003 11:22 PM
just to clarify by lebris Nov 11, 2003 6:26 AM
10-4 by zero hero Nov 11, 2003 11:58 AM
I don't know if I will ever see New York but... by Browncat Nov 11, 2003 3:30 AM
thanks by lebris Nov 11, 2003 6:28 AM
'Fitness for Purpose' (PC) by Siege Nov 10, 2003 5:18 AM
nice by lebris Nov 10, 2003 1:44 PM
I see that office work is getting to you. Cool work. by Browncat Nov 11, 2003 3:16 AM
thanks Cat / thanks lebris... by Siege Nov 11, 2003 3:40 AM
Bolex Memory (circa 1933) by beatvibe Nov 9, 2003 9:10 PM
in the moment/rerun (very short sketch) by jamelah Nov 9, 2003 6:06 PM
Most of it was pretty good. by Alvaro Nov 9, 2003 7:17 PM
hi by jamelah Nov 10, 2003 6:22 PM
messy knot by judih. Nov 9, 2003 7:39 PM
a comfortable mess by jamelah Nov 10, 2003 6:27 PM
Nicely written, Jamelah by Billectric Nov 10, 2003 1:39 PM
yes, it makes sense by jamelah Nov 10, 2003 6:41 PM
Your sketch by mtmynd Nov 10, 2003 7:31 PM
hey cecil by LitKicks Staff Nov 11, 2003 10:21 AM
whoops by jamelah Nov 11, 2003 10:21 AM
yes, i like it by judih. Nov 10, 2003 7:48 PM
haikuing out by jamelah Nov 11, 2003 10:29 AM
it sure works now by zero hero Nov 10, 2003 10:50 PM
hey by jamelah Nov 11, 2003 10:29 AM
Going for the Kill (PC) by Alvaro Nov 9, 2003 3:00 PM
Hmmm by Billectric Nov 10, 2003 1:41 PM
Going for the Kill by wam4764 Dec 30, 2003 9:06 AM
Just a..... by mtmynd Nov 9, 2003 1:12 PM
head by jota Nov 9, 2003 1:19 PM
i know you said 'just a........' by judih. Nov 9, 2003 7:42 PM
tricks by zero hero Nov 12, 2003 10:50 AM
dam good case of the mexacali blues by zero hero Nov 12, 2003 10:49 AM
Colors of Music by Billectric Nov 9, 2003 11:20 AM
Love it. by Divine_Mendacity Nov 9, 2003 11:40 AM
Yeeeaaaaaah, my day is complete. by Billectric Nov 9, 2003 12:47 PM
I went back and corrected by Billectric Nov 9, 2003 12:52 PM
would you like corn nuts? by jota Nov 9, 2003 1:18 PM
Gary Bussey by Billectric Nov 9, 2003 4:35 PM
Two more, Bill... by mtmynd Nov 9, 2003 1:15 PM
thanks, mt. by Billectric Nov 9, 2003 4:31 PM
of course your eyes were closed by judih. Nov 9, 2003 7:36 PM
bill, ya twisted bastard by jamelah Nov 9, 2003 8:12 PM
Psychdelic Coffee by LOSTPOET1 Nov 10, 2003 6:43 AM
Thanks, and by Billectric Nov 10, 2003 7:44 AM
Bill by LOSTPOET1 Nov 10, 2003 3:41 PM
I read and replied by Billectric Nov 12, 2003 8:29 AM
Great except for one line. by Alvaro Nov 12, 2003 6:06 AM
Yeah, I kind of got lazy with that line by Billectric Nov 12, 2003 8:07 AM
Writing and the House of Cards by Alvaro Nov 12, 2003 2:01 PM
I agree. by Billectric Nov 14, 2003 7:08 AM
The Portier ( Quest-Conversation) by panta rhei Nov 9, 2003 12:49 AM
emergency by judih. Nov 9, 2003 11:59 AM
-ll by Divine_Mendacity Nov 9, 2003 12:03 PM
roll'd by judih. Nov 9, 2003 7:52 PM
god by jota Nov 9, 2003 12:13 PM
ahhhh... by mtmynd Nov 9, 2003 1:27 PM
Letter With Purple Cursive by Billectric Nov 8, 2003 9:46 PM
will you find thanksgiving? by judih. Nov 9, 2003 7:32 PM
A stuffed wolf mounted on a tree stump speaks to me. by firecracker Nov 10, 2003 6:51 AM
yep... by Siege Nov 10, 2003 6:59 AM
[conversation]: Knowing by firecracker Nov 8, 2003 12:00 PM
conversation: [Growing] by jota Nov 8, 2003 12:05 PM
thanks dude by firecracker Nov 10, 2003 6:47 AM
hey by jamelah Nov 9, 2003 8:17 PM
thanks by firecracker Nov 10, 2003 6:48 AM
Maybe knowing what comes next would help? by Siege Nov 10, 2003 7:01 AM
hey siege! by firecracker Nov 10, 2003 7:41 AM
Having just re-read it... by Siege Nov 10, 2003 8:03 AM
Shattered in 32 Places by jota Nov 8, 2003 4:35 AM
jota by stevadore Nov 10, 2003 7:25 AM
A Conversation in the Park (Week 2) by Andeh Nov 7, 2003 6:45 PM
circumstance by judih. Nov 7, 2003 8:00 PM
Biology is not our fate ? (week II, for Judih) by ARAHH Nov 7, 2003 1:27 PM
a quilt in 3 dimensions by judih. Nov 7, 2003 7:55 PM
and that's nature's by ARAHH Nov 10, 2003 2:45 AM
i love all of these pieces by ellipsis Nov 7, 2003 9:01 PM
When shall i wake from that one ? (week I, for Judih) by ARAHH Nov 7, 2003 1:10 PM
and is this how Arahh dreams by judih. Nov 7, 2003 7:49 PM
What Jim did (and said). by the printer salesman Nov 7, 2003 12:53 PM
What?... by LOSTPOET1 Nov 7, 2003 1:06 PM
what he said by the printer salesman Nov 7, 2003 1:11 PM
thanks by LOSTPOET1 Nov 7, 2003 1:45 PM
Good by The Critic Nov 26, 2003 4:51 AM
(MYSTERIOSO) PLEASE CRITIQUE by LOSTPOET1 Nov 7, 2003 9:47 AM
a cold shower by jota Nov 9, 2003 1:21 PM
Fine writing, I must say. by Billectric Nov 12, 2003 8:27 AM
WOW by LOSTPOET1 Nov 12, 2003 9:49 AM
Whatsisname (Week 2) by midnite Nov 7, 2003 8:31 AM
yes, sure I remember the Jims by judih. Nov 7, 2003 10:17 AM
thank you judih by midnite Nov 7, 2003 10:28 AM
New Years Mourning (per Judihdot) by mtmynd Nov 7, 2003 8:11 AM
a touching turn of life by judih. Nov 7, 2003 8:19 AM
After the pain... by mtmynd Nov 7, 2003 8:32 AM
weeping by jota Nov 8, 2003 5:27 AM
The Girl Who Chased After Us by Andeh Nov 7, 2003 8:05 AM
Alfa & Ol' Mago (per Judihdot) by mtmynd Nov 7, 2003 7:52 AM
alf o' mago iz good e nuff four me by judih. Nov 7, 2003 8:14 AM
WORLD OF CARPETS pc by Browncat Nov 7, 2003 5:53 AM
well by ~K Nov 8, 2003 12:16 AM
Thanks by Browncat Nov 8, 2003 2:59 PM
Extreme Make-over by Rosie Nov 7, 2003 12:38 AM
wow (edit) by ~K Nov 7, 2003 12:48 AM
! by Rosie Nov 7, 2003 3:46 PM
i'm hungry. by Rosie Nov 8, 2003 1:37 PM
When Angels Fall (Week 2) by ~K Nov 7, 2003 12:11 AM
optimism on toast by judih. Nov 7, 2003 1:33 AM
:) by ~K Nov 7, 2003 1:49 AM
Yes I like that by Browncat Nov 7, 2003 2:04 AM
Hey by ~K Nov 7, 2003 2:16 AM
when you get up... by Browncat Nov 7, 2003 7:48 AM
finkle is einhorn by jota Nov 9, 2003 1:23 PM
A Purgatory (PC) by Alvaro Nov 6, 2003 6:30 PM
King of the Dishwashers (for Judih) by jota Nov 6, 2003 6:07 PM
ah ha, o hota bro by judih. Nov 6, 2003 8:45 PM
273 Words by shamatha Nov 6, 2003 5:06 PM
really cool by ~K Nov 7, 2003 12:33 AM
Spring Water (Revised QUEST Week 1 Morning Piece) PC by Will Burrows Nov 6, 2003 4:52 PM
holy dredlocks and bagels by judih. Nov 6, 2003 8:30 PM
Week Two - Heart to Heart (as per judih's request) by Knip Nov 6, 2003 12:42 PM
woah by NinePages Nov 6, 2003 1:44 PM
one talks, one listens, one watches by judih. Nov 6, 2003 8:27 PM
Great Knip! by ~K Nov 7, 2003 12:38 AM
yeah by Another Scribbler Nov 7, 2003 12:49 AM
how many by Knip Nov 7, 2003 3:26 AM
week one - Sailor Awoke (as per judih's request) by Knip Nov 6, 2003 12:41 PM
i liked it a lot by NinePages Nov 6, 2003 1:48 PM
great writing by judih. Nov 6, 2003 8:25 PM
week 3: we flow as beauty (as per judih's request) by ellipsis Nov 6, 2003 10:45 AM
such a gentle read by judih. Nov 6, 2003 10:56 AM
thanks, judih by ellipsis Nov 6, 2003 11:17 AM
A agree by Intense_Apathy Mar 22, 2004 5:28 PM
ellipsis, by NinePages Nov 6, 2003 1:41 PM
gah by ellipsis Nov 7, 2003 10:14 AM
ellipsis ! by ARAHH Nov 7, 2003 11:45 AM
CHAPTER ONE (MYSTERIOSO...)Please Critique by LOSTPOET1 Nov 6, 2003 10:10 AM
Me age 14 pc by Browncat Nov 6, 2003 9:29 AM
browncat by Lawless Nov 8, 2003 8:13 AM
Thanks by Browncat Nov 8, 2003 2:55 PM
Teenage Fire Alarm by Another Scribbler Nov 6, 2003 12:16 AM
I suspect father wants to kill me by Another Scribbler Nov 6, 2003 12:13 AM
PC - The Big Yawn by wam4764 Nov 5, 2003 5:35 AM
a c by pelerine Nov 5, 2003 6:14 AM
The Big Yawn by wam4764 Nov 6, 2003 6:28 AM
CITY TRIP - PC by LOSTPOET1 Nov 4, 2003 11:45 AM
It kept my interest by Billectric Nov 5, 2003 7:26 AM
interested? by LOSTPOET1 Nov 5, 2003 8:42 PM
Looking forward to reading more. by Billectric Nov 6, 2003 5:28 AM
the pink shoe in my stomach by j.r. Nov 4, 2003 7:33 AM
he was cheating on me in another forum! by j.r. Nov 4, 2003 8:26 AM
if you get so angry about reading a book by a bad writer, by lebris Nov 7, 2003 5:51 AM
The Nazi Party PC by Browncat Nov 4, 2003 6:14 AM
eurggh by Lawless Nov 5, 2003 6:27 AM
To Hate the Day by Tulate Nov 4, 2003 6:07 AM
“You think it’s ok to kill someone?” by frontal-abstraction Nov 3, 2003 6:02 AM
Wow - tackle subject well by Billectric Nov 3, 2003 8:21 AM
'rocky prose' by frontal-abstraction Nov 4, 2003 3:44 AM
my opinion by zero hero Nov 3, 2003 6:29 PM
i tend to agree by frontal-abstraction Nov 4, 2003 3:53 AM
Hey frontal-abstraction - by Billectric Nov 4, 2003 11:15 AM
Bill! (edit) by frontal-abstraction Nov 4, 2003 3:41 PM
A Eulogy by a majority of one Nov 1, 2003 6:33 PM
tone, tempo, flow by soiled napkin Nov 2, 2003 1:58 AM
hmmm by shishi Nov 3, 2003 5:11 PM
Thanks by a majority of one Nov 3, 2003 5:23 PM


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