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Fire by Ozgarth Mar 31, 2004 10:59 AM
Dont tell Me nothing About Nothing I might tell the truth by slog Mar 31, 2004 9:48 AM
2 C Everything by Mie Mar 30, 2004 11:30 PM
things you should always do by minfin Apr 4, 2004 8:27 AM
Wriggly Saint Milly by Billectric Mar 30, 2004 3:13 PM
what the? by feral Mar 31, 2004 7:50 AM
You're only coming through in waves by Billectric Mar 31, 2004 9:46 AM
a fantastic week spent trying to be (chapter 1) by Jazz Messiah Mar 29, 2004 12:43 PM
having fun by horsewithnoname Mar 29, 2004 11:32 PM
it's super important to me that i get some feedback... by jessa_lynne Mar 29, 2004 4:07 AM
great descriptions by slog Mar 29, 2004 10:45 AM
what do you mean by jessa_lynne Apr 1, 2004 4:08 AM
too blah blah by slog Apr 1, 2004 6:15 PM
group hug lol by horsewithnoname Mar 29, 2004 11:27 PM
revisied ending, just for you by jessa_lynne Apr 1, 2004 4:15 AM
i laughed my ass off by welded sprocket Apr 2, 2004 3:55 AM
well... by deadlyaddiction Mar 30, 2004 5:01 AM
thank by jessa_lynne Apr 1, 2004 4:09 AM
hm by firsty Apr 2, 2004 10:06 AM
hmmm by shamatha Apr 6, 2004 10:34 AM
Monday Morning by welded sprocket Mar 28, 2004 11:58 PM
workin on the capital eye by welded sprocket Mar 29, 2004 12:19 AM
something cinematographically by welded sprocket Mar 29, 2004 12:57 AM
I am also by zygotenmycoffee Mar 30, 2004 12:18 PM
Room 100 - The Chelsea Hotel. by feral Mar 28, 2004 4:28 AM
i didn't know these things by Billectric Mar 29, 2004 7:06 AM
rockets redglare... by feral Mar 29, 2004 8:44 AM
doreen and I by Lightning Rod Mar 29, 2004 10:39 AM
? by horsewithnoname Mar 29, 2004 11:38 PM
i'll explain this later, but nature is a wonderful amazing fucking force by seajay1221 Mar 28, 2004 1:22 AM
it is by Mie Mar 28, 2004 2:19 AM
Lockeroom Jazz by izeveryboyin Mar 27, 2004 8:19 PM
.... by 4 degrees Mar 27, 2004 8:26 PM
I know.. hehehe by izeveryboyin Mar 27, 2004 11:49 PM
Abuse by slog Mar 27, 2004 7:32 PM
more of post 3039, unfinished and involving some depictions of 'deviant' sex... by 4 degrees Mar 27, 2004 2:40 PM
Santa Claus the Speed Cook by Lightning Rod Mar 26, 2004 5:41 AM
why by foolish_Paeter Mar 29, 2004 10:16 PM
the beet generation -- in the men's restroom by e_dog Mar 25, 2004 10:51 PM
grin by welded sprocket Mar 25, 2004 11:31 PM
!!Answer!! by R D Eckart Mar 26, 2004 8:59 AM
Well i told by izeveryboyin Mar 27, 2004 8:10 PM
will they do that by slog Mar 27, 2004 6:48 PM
asparagus gum by jota Mar 27, 2004 9:54 PM
stressed by Rosie Mar 25, 2004 10:40 AM
gentle smile by horsewithnoname Mar 26, 2004 3:31 AM
sigh by Rosie Mar 26, 2004 9:22 AM
a story about what a story would be PC by jessa_lynne Mar 25, 2004 4:21 AM
very good, by elvin Jul 14, 2004 4:00 AM
squee - dipplin -dap- keoe - oe- oen by KHRISTOPHOROUS Mar 24, 2004 4:07 PM
I like it by R D Eckart Mar 24, 2004 4:19 PM
True life disappointment (PC) by R D Eckart Mar 24, 2004 3:48 PM
stop apartheid by welded sprocket Mar 24, 2004 11:33 AM
Betrand Russell by zing Mar 24, 2004 11:00 PM
what the heck does that have to do with apartheid by soiled napkin Mar 24, 2004 11:18 PM
oh so past by horsewithnoname Mar 26, 2004 3:37 AM
pc by jessa_lynne Mar 24, 2004 11:02 AM
the choice by silkcut Mar 24, 2004 10:44 AM
Jeremy - a repost, for i believe that it has aged with time. pc by seajay1221 Mar 24, 2004 2:59 AM
Is any of my life worth writing about? PC by Rumrunner Mar 24, 2004 12:52 AM
yes by jessa_lynne Mar 24, 2004 11:21 AM
Things to Do in Heaven (PC) by Knip Mar 23, 2004 11:08 PM
i saved this by squidwork Mar 24, 2004 9:12 AM
I Had This Same Conversational by izeveryboyin Mar 23, 2004 9:57 AM
The curse by magic love Mar 23, 2004 3:07 AM
Song from my mother by magic love Mar 23, 2004 3:23 AM
It was now 2 p.m. Real Life (PC) by slog Mar 22, 2004 6:32 PM
prose first paragraph or 2 pc by slog Mar 22, 2004 4:59 PM
Better than sex by Ziems Mar 22, 2004 9:32 AM
I think we all have been by izeveryboyin Mar 23, 2004 9:25 AM
Quietly Approach The Benchs by izeveryboyin Mar 21, 2004 5:58 PM
Eduardo Pulido meets Louis Armstrong- story researched and written by myself by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 21, 2004 1:57 PM
Yes, Lucy by judih. Mar 21, 2004 8:16 PM
Satchmo! by Ziems Mar 22, 2004 9:49 AM
continuation of post 3039..no it's still not finished... by 4 degrees Mar 21, 2004 12:02 PM
Never see him again by frontal-abstraction Mar 21, 2004 11:57 AM
stir with caution.... by loneliness Mar 21, 2004 2:42 AM
One Summer Day by Nicholas S. Mar 20, 2004 9:52 PM
excellent by Createyers May 26, 2004 2:32 PM
self-conflict by 4 degrees Mar 20, 2004 8:00 PM
well by slog Mar 20, 2004 8:08 PM
well don't forget about by izeveryboyin Mar 23, 2004 9:36 AM
I love the way by izeveryboyin Mar 23, 2004 9:32 AM
heh by 4 degrees Mar 23, 2004 9:36 AM
Actually by izeveryboyin Mar 23, 2004 9:38 AM
... by 4 degrees Mar 23, 2004 9:41 AM
Course it is, silly by izeveryboyin Mar 23, 2004 10:16 AM
Another Story by slog Mar 20, 2004 4:26 PM
Stan and Ruth by R D Eckart Mar 20, 2004 12:59 PM
heh by 4 degrees Mar 20, 2004 1:03 PM
These.. by R D Eckart Mar 20, 2004 1:28 PM
Watertown, Chapter Eight by jota Mar 20, 2004 9:35 AM
whoa ho! by mtmynd Mar 20, 2004 11:16 AM
duly noted by jota Mar 20, 2004 11:41 AM
another well-pruned ficus by Billectric Mar 23, 2004 9:57 AM
Nothing without a smile by frontal-abstraction Mar 20, 2004 5:35 AM
Crowned Heads, a letter to writers, and one in particular by Christopher Hood Mar 20, 2004 1:15 AM
Story of a Man by Nicholas S. Mar 19, 2004 9:56 PM
i wonder if i am a fluke/ if i die tomorrow by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 19, 2004 4:07 PM
luci by slog Mar 20, 2004 7:30 PM
I have been through by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 20, 2004 8:26 PM
you by slog Mar 20, 2004 8:34 PM
damn by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 20, 2004 8:53 PM
at least your not at by slog Mar 20, 2004 8:56 PM
Crash by young one Mar 19, 2004 2:27 PM
wow by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 19, 2004 2:55 PM
I cannot encase my spirit (my letter to S) by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 19, 2004 2:24 PM
beautiful by Christopher Hood Mar 20, 2004 1:04 AM
thank you by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 20, 2004 10:00 PM
.... by Mie Mar 20, 2004 10:36 PM
Mie by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 21, 2004 6:10 AM
Another Story by slog Mar 19, 2004 8:44 AM
you should talk to Bennie by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 19, 2004 3:17 PM
everychoice by slog Mar 20, 2004 8:51 AM
a day in the life by Christopher Hood Mar 20, 2004 1:24 AM
i mention phish by slog Mar 20, 2004 8:50 AM
After Insanity, There's "Letting Go" by izeveryboyin Mar 18, 2004 10:19 PM
just a taste from grandmas window by coke-line carl Mar 18, 2004 9:46 PM
clc by 4 degrees Mar 19, 2004 1:10 PM
well lets see... by coke-line carl Mar 19, 2004 4:51 PM
... by 4 degrees Mar 20, 2004 1:07 PM
you by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Mar 19, 2004 6:26 PM
many thanks to you by coke-line carl Mar 20, 2004 11:17 AM
hmm by slog Mar 20, 2004 8:46 PM
NWAHAHAHAHAH by coke-line carl Mar 21, 2004 3:59 AM
i didnt say that by slog Mar 21, 2004 10:51 AM
a job by seajay1221 Mar 17, 2004 10:57 PM
damn by 4 degrees Mar 18, 2004 6:03 AM
sex : the series by pseudonym Mar 17, 2004 5:47 PM
well by slog Mar 19, 2004 11:40 AM
Posting to NetAlive by zen_ Mar 17, 2004 2:46 PM
thanks to HP by 4 degrees Mar 17, 2004 5:14 PM
An email by zen_ Mar 17, 2004 9:37 PM
ah by 4 degrees Mar 18, 2004 6:08 AM
this is by Mie Mar 18, 2004 9:41 AM
a cage in a cage by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 17, 2004 10:32 AM
... by 4 degrees Mar 17, 2004 10:59 AM
write (and get paid) or read fiction here by ggm1977 Mar 16, 2004 4:07 PM
The View (p/c, please) by Christopher Hood Mar 16, 2004 10:37 AM
Lightning rides and brains burn. by Rickety Mar 15, 2004 8:41 PM
The U-Bend Chronicles by microchrist Mar 15, 2004 3:01 PM
the virgin of guadalupe by jota Mar 15, 2004 6:10 PM
Little Me by microchrist Mar 15, 2004 2:32 PM
the result of writing when there's really nothing to say...(not a story just BS) by 4 degrees Mar 15, 2004 5:13 AM
BS by Ziems Mar 16, 2004 4:39 AM
heh by 4 degrees Mar 16, 2004 4:44 AM
hi by Ziems Mar 16, 2004 7:14 AM
hmm by 4 degrees Mar 16, 2004 7:22 AM
Key West by welded sprocket Mar 15, 2004 3:58 AM
a typical night for an atypical person, also it's long,crazy,and true. pc. by seajay1221 Mar 14, 2004 2:13 PM
yes by welded sprocket Mar 15, 2004 1:36 AM
uh..huh.. by 4 degrees Mar 15, 2004 2:27 AM
details by seajay1221 Mar 15, 2004 7:52 AM
Commenting on the language you spoke by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 16, 2004 3:19 PM
What by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 16, 2004 6:14 PM
i was wondering by seajay1221 Mar 16, 2004 8:59 PM
after you left . . by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 17, 2004 8:05 AM
The County by DD Jul 11, 2004 8:19 PM
heh...that night by Mie Mar 17, 2004 12:56 PM
Upon the Burning of My House by izeveryboyin Mar 14, 2004 3:31 AM
"impressive captain" by coke-line carl Mar 15, 2004 1:37 AM
No.. it was by izeveryboyin Mar 15, 2004 4:51 PM
awesome by coke-line carl Mar 16, 2004 2:26 AM
Let us poor by izeveryboyin Mar 16, 2004 2:22 PM
... by 4 degrees Mar 15, 2004 2:54 AM
More than flattered by izeveryboyin Mar 15, 2004 4:53 PM
There Goes Our Funding by Billectric Mar 13, 2004 7:50 PM
St Augustine by frontal-abstraction Mar 14, 2004 4:36 AM
You went to school there?! by Billectric Mar 15, 2004 6:28 AM
No by frontal-abstraction Mar 16, 2004 2:43 PM
oh, i see by Billectric Mar 17, 2004 5:52 PM
I'm going. by HopelesslyHopeless Apr 9, 2004 8:45 PM
florida by slid into the face of it all Mar 15, 2004 4:55 AM
yeah, college towns are cool even if you're not in college... by Billectric Mar 15, 2004 6:31 AM
Coming out of my shell... A spiritual ramble by young one Mar 13, 2004 1:22 PM
i wanna know about the experiences that you've had.. by arleniedp Mar 16, 2004 10:38 PM
meh by young one Mar 19, 2004 1:33 PM
Long Gone Day (PC) by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 12, 2004 7:50 PM
commenting by Mie Mar 16, 2004 5:14 PM
thank you by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 16, 2004 6:15 PM
He. by Jon Converse Mar 12, 2004 12:39 AM
continuation of the continuation of post 3039, or continuation of post 3055.. by 4 degrees Mar 11, 2004 9:34 PM
... by squidwork Mar 11, 2004 10:22 PM
anti... by loneliness Mar 12, 2004 5:29 PM
oh by 4 degrees Mar 12, 2004 7:55 PM
hot damn by coke-line carl Mar 15, 2004 1:49 AM
why by 4 degrees Mar 15, 2004 2:48 AM
"either you have great taste or no taste" by coke-line carl Mar 15, 2004 1:52 PM
hey clc by 4 degrees Mar 15, 2004 1:55 PM
yeah, taste is relative by coke-line carl Mar 15, 2004 7:13 PM
The Rut by carmelcalanthe Mar 11, 2004 9:42 AM
... by 4 degrees Mar 11, 2004 11:23 AM
“Besides, there is more to my leaving than you will know.” by frontal-abstraction Mar 11, 2004 6:47 AM
Envy Blames Me by frontal-abstraction Mar 11, 2004 8:09 AM
Great stuff! by carmelcalanthe Mar 11, 2004 10:23 AM
Great stuff! by carmelcalanthe Mar 11, 2004 10:25 AM
you might know by frontal-abstraction Mar 13, 2004 6:12 PM
At first I was like... by izeveryboyin Mar 14, 2004 4:21 AM
you got it by frontal-abstraction Mar 14, 2004 6:13 AM
Goody!!! by izeveryboyin Mar 14, 2004 2:52 PM
Oh by frontal-abstraction Mar 20, 2004 11:41 AM
ooooo by izeveryboyin Mar 21, 2004 5:39 PM
a short discourse on metaphysics by sonofthesun Mar 10, 2004 10:53 PM
. by Crackpot Jenkins Mar 12, 2004 7:53 PM
a short discourse in metaphysics by sapphyre Mar 14, 2004 4:53 PM
It's got a violent temper for a sanity napkin... by motor city hellcat Mar 10, 2004 3:50 PM
more! by 4 degrees Mar 11, 2004 4:40 AM
meatballs rock by motor city hellcat Mar 11, 2004 6:31 AM
yeah by 4 degrees Mar 11, 2004 6:57 AM
continuation of post 3039-still unfinished, but making some headway..... by 4 degrees Mar 10, 2004 12:27 PM
this makes me blush... by arleniedp Mar 10, 2004 10:31 PM
The Dynamics of Family by jenninot Mar 9, 2004 7:08 PM
..... by 4 degrees Mar 10, 2004 2:46 PM
nice name by jenninot Mar 11, 2004 8:42 AM
Away (PC) by Knip Mar 8, 2004 10:07 PM
knip, this is just wonderful by Lightning Rod Mar 9, 2004 8:53 AM
I's gots t'agree on dat b'y by Caper Mar 9, 2004 10:07 AM
is the dialect right, caper? by Knip Mar 9, 2004 10:18 AM
Pretty damn close. by Caper Mar 10, 2004 8:34 AM
good read by firsty Mar 10, 2004 7:26 AM
Letter from the Joneses by Lightning Rod Mar 8, 2004 4:00 PM
wow by foolish_Paeter Mar 8, 2004 5:58 PM
thanks by Lightning Rod Mar 8, 2004 6:34 PM
enduring it by foolish_Paeter Mar 8, 2004 8:55 PM
that was a read by Knip Mar 8, 2004 10:26 PM
hehe by Billectric Mar 9, 2004 6:22 AM
Oh. Ma-a-a-n. BAM, home run. by Billectric Mar 9, 2004 6:19 AM
when you sent this to me... by doreen peri Mar 9, 2004 7:00 AM
question on the closing by Keseybeezy Mar 9, 2004 9:15 AM
perhaps it should have said by Lightning Rod Mar 9, 2004 9:32 AM
LR, by popejoebaby Mar 9, 2004 12:30 PM
Jumps Part 2 the Evil Empire Strikes Back by slog Mar 8, 2004 10:37 AM
it's all cat again by 4 degrees Mar 8, 2004 12:23 PM
josh moore by slog Mar 8, 2004 1:05 PM
The Trouble With Trees by carmelcalanthe Mar 8, 2004 9:39 AM
Rambling Addiction by Rumrunner Mar 7, 2004 9:53 PM
The Bus Stop by Andeh Mar 6, 2004 7:51 PM
..... by squidwork Mar 10, 2004 9:45 AM
Turn on the action machine crow switch! by foolish_Paeter Mar 5, 2004 9:54 PM
damn, man... by mtmynd Mar 6, 2004 8:20 AM
fine comb by jenninot Mar 6, 2004 8:56 AM
the grammar & punctuation used by foolish_Paeter Mar 6, 2004 5:49 PM
oddly enough, by foolish_Paeter Mar 6, 2004 5:50 PM
i was just checking out your profile- by foolish_Paeter Mar 9, 2004 3:49 AM
another example by Lightning Rod Mar 8, 2004 6:32 PM
"the Mascara Snake is here. by foolish_Paeter Mar 8, 2004 8:55 PM
Down to the Pistol Shots by woesong Mar 5, 2004 10:14 AM
ishmael by squidwork Mar 5, 2004 7:04 PM
Pistol Shorts by woesong Mar 8, 2004 9:23 AM
The AC/DC Double Dong (Content) My first post by jenninot Mar 5, 2004 9:55 AM
ohmigod... by Caper Mar 5, 2004 10:15 AM
no idea by seajay1221 Mar 5, 2004 11:37 AM
wow by foolish_Paeter Mar 5, 2004 9:09 PM
Thanks by jenninot Mar 6, 2004 8:00 AM
great fiction writers & great non-fiction writers by doreen peri Mar 6, 2004 10:14 AM
welllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll by jenninot Mar 9, 2004 3:46 PM
lol by doreen peri Mar 9, 2004 8:05 PM
left me laughing. by mtmynd Mar 6, 2004 8:11 AM
Thanks! by jenninot Mar 9, 2004 3:47 PM
you by foolish_Paeter Mar 9, 2004 10:43 PM
welcome to Litkicks by Lightning Rod Mar 6, 2004 9:22 AM
Hi by jenninot Mar 9, 2004 3:48 PM
wow!!! by slog Mar 8, 2004 9:14 AM
smiles by jenninot Mar 9, 2004 3:48 PM
yassss by Knip Mar 8, 2004 11:15 PM
LOL by jenninot Mar 9, 2004 3:49 PM
yeah by 4 degrees Mar 9, 2004 3:49 PM
chapters of an unfinished love story 1 by motor city hellcat Mar 5, 2004 7:08 AM
marisa by jessa_lynne Mar 15, 2004 9:25 AM
marisa by Mie Mar 16, 2004 5:53 PM
yes by motor city hellcat Mar 17, 2004 7:10 AM
only, of course, by jessa_lynne Mar 17, 2004 11:03 AM
o yes by Mie Mar 20, 2004 2:31 PM
btw by Mie Mar 20, 2004 2:33 PM
Hand To Hand (pc) by Caper Mar 5, 2004 4:56 AM
ha! by 4 degrees Mar 5, 2004 5:03 AM
Clear by jenninot Mar 6, 2004 9:06 AM
JUMPS HA I EDITTED IT Sort ofah!!! PCP please comment police by slog Mar 4, 2004 12:54 PM
... by 4 degrees Mar 4, 2004 2:04 PM
a bird is a word by slog Mar 4, 2004 6:10 PM
.... by 4 degrees Mar 4, 2004 6:38 PM
what are you by slog Mar 5, 2004 6:47 AM
... by 4 degrees Mar 5, 2004 8:43 AM
cat cat cat cat by slog Mar 5, 2004 9:37 AM
i hears ya by 4 degrees Mar 5, 2004 10:56 AM
dude i'm about by slog Mar 8, 2004 8:43 AM
rap a tap tap tap by 4 degrees Mar 5, 2004 11:00 AM
fictional characters by slog Mar 8, 2004 8:42 AM
dude... by mnaz Mar 5, 2004 1:55 PM
think so by slog Mar 8, 2004 8:42 AM
Beatness by LoganR Mar 9, 2004 8:36 PM
no this by slog Mar 10, 2004 7:55 AM
i haven't written in a very long time by in_extremis Mar 3, 2004 1:27 PM
well dammit, in_ex by jamelah Mar 4, 2004 7:49 AM
The Terrible Eye - A Nightmare by seajay1221 Mar 3, 2004 8:15 AM
dreams by jenninot Mar 6, 2004 8:59 AM
lengthy, disgusting and unfinished-you may wanna skip over this one... by 4 degrees Mar 3, 2004 6:57 AM
shit by fabled construct Mar 3, 2004 12:24 PM
first by 4 degrees Mar 3, 2004 12:34 PM
this story is actually soo short, incredible, and unfinished by seajay1221 Mar 4, 2004 6:35 AM
... by 4 degrees Mar 4, 2004 8:37 AM
your story by Ziems Mar 4, 2004 10:34 AM
While reading this over breakfast it occured to me that by The Flaming Red Head Mar 4, 2004 12:04 PM
... by loneliness Mar 4, 2004 10:42 PM
heya... by 4 degrees Mar 5, 2004 4:19 AM
Not reading the other comments... by zen_ Mar 25, 2004 2:06 PM
The Music Box? by SLucia Mar 2, 2004 6:07 PM
I really enjoyed reading this by The Flaming Red Head Mar 4, 2004 5:57 AM
wonderful! by starsailor Mar 4, 2004 6:21 PM
the birthday present by Rosie Mar 2, 2004 11:21 AM
nice rosie by 4 degrees Mar 2, 2004 12:02 PM
heh, heh! by Rosie Mar 2, 2004 12:37 PM
Train of Thought by Pete66 Mar 2, 2004 4:56 AM
.... by 4 degrees Mar 2, 2004 5:12 AM
Train of Thought by Pete66 by sapphyre Mar 6, 2004 3:41 PM
Is it really me? by Ziems Mar 2, 2004 4:53 AM
..... by 4 degrees Mar 2, 2004 4:57 AM
Going South for the Summer by Lightning Rod Mar 1, 2004 3:12 PM
your story is better than mine by firsty Mar 1, 2004 3:46 PM
action stories by Lightning Rod Mar 1, 2004 4:14 PM
Crazies by firsty Mar 1, 2004 4:30 PM
LOL!! by foolish_Paeter Mar 5, 2004 9:13 PM
I assume by mtmynd Mar 1, 2004 3:59 PM
There's lots of fucking idiots in jail, aren't there. by The Flaming Red Head Mar 2, 2004 3:24 AM
eye for an eye... by Billectric Mar 2, 2004 5:38 AM


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