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A Daring Secretary's Brush With Death, or The Great Mole Caper by Nicholas S. May 31, 2004 8:43 AM
bad love, good love- friendship by livingston May 30, 2004 2:12 AM
interaction by elvin Jun 3, 2004 6:57 AM
elliot by livingston Jun 7, 2004 12:48 AM
scales by elvin Jun 7, 2004 8:55 PM
I see by Nicholas S. May 29, 2004 5:17 PM
i do not by livingston May 30, 2004 1:47 AM
the woman i always wanted to be by livingston May 29, 2004 4:31 PM
I agree by Hester Prynne May 29, 2004 9:28 PM
i am too by livingston May 29, 2004 9:55 PM
there is a building by livingston May 29, 2004 9:51 PM
Patty Hearst by Nicholas S. Jun 1, 2004 6:33 AM
dix? by livingston Jun 2, 2004 9:22 AM
why by livingston Jun 6, 2004 2:27 PM
wow, the red path, huh? by Andeh May 29, 2004 10:49 PM
the road by livingston Jun 2, 2004 9:24 AM
las by fabled construct May 29, 2004 8:16 AM
the shed guy by livingston May 29, 2004 3:15 AM
Re: Forgotten People by nightbird May 29, 2004 7:02 AM
nightbird by livingston Jun 7, 2004 12:00 AM
nightbird by livingston Jun 7, 2004 12:00 AM
Nightbird on nightbird by nightbird Jun 7, 2004 8:54 PM
he did it by livingston Jun 8, 2004 1:05 AM
Act I Scene I by Nicholas S. May 28, 2004 1:26 PM
the chase by livingston May 27, 2004 8:46 PM
the chase by livingston May 27, 2004 8:45 PM
More SOUL DEBRIS... ( P C ) by nightbird May 27, 2004 8:19 PM
How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Nicholas S. May 26, 2004 4:17 PM
Good... by LoganR May 27, 2004 2:43 PM
very good by yeshua777 May 27, 2004 7:51 PM
Thanks by Nicholas S. May 28, 2004 1:21 PM
ARE YOU INTERESTED? by yeshua777 May 26, 2004 2:45 PM
Flattery by yeshua777 May 27, 2004 7:53 PM
Flattery by yeshua777 May 27, 2004 7:53 PM
strawberries at 5 by Mie May 26, 2004 9:56 AM
berry good story by seajay1221 May 27, 2004 6:55 PM
he wanted to be the woman by livingston May 25, 2004 8:59 PM
Wait... What? by Nicholas S. May 27, 2004 2:21 PM
.... by 4 degrees May 27, 2004 2:46 PM
hate???? by livingston May 28, 2004 1:11 AM
.... by 4 degrees May 28, 2004 8:45 AM
the piont is by livingston May 28, 2004 6:13 PM
a fun read by Billectric May 29, 2004 11:24 AM
another by Hester Prynne May 29, 2004 1:36 PM
Roland has been contemplating death by foolish_Paeter May 25, 2004 7:52 PM
sunflowers drumming on the heart by livingston May 25, 2004 9:32 PM
Roland's fate by foolish_Paeter May 26, 2004 11:57 PM
poor roland by miaverita May 27, 2004 12:56 AM
How "The Island" Got its Name by SLucia May 25, 2004 6:39 PM
read as a preamble by SLucia May 25, 2004 6:42 PM
graduation by Rosie May 25, 2004 2:45 PM
congrats by Robertsnw May 28, 2004 9:43 AM
opps by Rosie Jun 10, 2004 6:44 PM
hello by Rosie Jun 10, 2004 6:44 PM
The Third Night by Nicholas S. May 25, 2004 2:14 PM
Soul Debris - excerpt ( PLEASE CRITIQUE ) by nightbird May 25, 2004 8:32 AM
beautiful by livingston May 25, 2004 6:02 PM
Livingston... by nightbird May 25, 2004 10:30 PM
the soul by livingston May 27, 2004 12:42 PM
True Americans? by nightbird May 28, 2004 8:48 PM
movie by livingston May 29, 2004 4:09 PM
ode to nicoderm- smoking, and the puff by livingston May 25, 2004 2:00 AM
Wait, what do you mean by Hester Prynne May 25, 2004 11:44 AM
yes- i am the same by livingston May 25, 2004 5:45 PM
Writing... by nightbird May 25, 2004 10:34 PM
clay dust and glaze-artists dreams- grandma by livingston May 24, 2004 5:34 PM
livingston by nightbird May 25, 2004 8:41 AM
i want to by livingston May 25, 2004 5:52 PM
Write On! by nightbird May 25, 2004 10:27 PM
clay dust and glaze-artists dreams- grandma by livingston May 24, 2004 5:32 PM
grandma by livingston May 28, 2004 1:40 AM
Dear Constable Green- by logan May 24, 2004 2:44 AM
This is Super ! by Billectric May 25, 2004 6:46 AM
A Day off. by Jon Converse May 23, 2004 5:43 AM
A day on..perfect villans by livingston=mine May 24, 2004 12:56 AM
I really like by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 1:46 PM
Women From There-Follow up-Please post comments. by Chipzee May 20, 2004 4:50 PM
The story of your life by HopelesslyHopeless May 21, 2004 9:05 PM
"Soul Debris" (Excerpt) PLEASE CRITIQUE by nightbird May 20, 2004 10:48 AM
spontaneous theatre 2 by coolazice May 20, 2004 6:35 AM
wealth in the garage by livingston May 18, 2004 4:41 PM
The Women From There-Critique this ruthlessly by Chipzee May 18, 2004 3:24 PM
hm. by HopelesslyHopeless May 19, 2004 9:59 PM
Thanks! by Chipzee May 20, 2004 1:40 PM
it seems like they, the women are distant by livingston May 20, 2004 4:38 PM
First of all, thankyou. by Chipzee May 20, 2004 4:46 PM
what i am trying to say- by livingston May 23, 2004 4:38 PM
"You'd Be a Good Writer If You Wrote" by HopelesslyHopeless May 18, 2004 1:35 PM
Mostly - by PhilipHarris May 22, 2004 8:23 PM
Hi. by HopelesslyHopeless May 22, 2004 10:26 PM
Continuing the Echolalia for the Past and and by Aaron Lundstrom May 18, 2004 12:01 PM
a plagiarized fragment, you say? this isn't good by doreen peri May 20, 2004 4:54 PM
Etymology by Aaron Lundstrom May 21, 2004 10:38 AM
Apparent by HopelesslyHopeless May 21, 2004 9:09 PM
Good by SLucia May 25, 2004 12:33 PM
Continuing the Echolalia for the Past and by Aaron Lundstrom May 18, 2004 11:56 AM
and yet another piece that's not yours? by doreen peri May 20, 2004 4:52 PM
Continuing the Echolalia for the Past by Aaron Lundstrom May 18, 2004 11:46 AM
ok... who wrote it? by doreen peri May 20, 2004 4:51 PM
Comparative Love and Eventuality by Aaron Lundstrom May 18, 2004 11:38 AM
Yikes! by doreen peri May 20, 2004 4:51 PM
I called you this morning. by Jon Converse May 18, 2004 12:54 AM
ST. ANNIE IN THE WATCHTOWER [ P C ] by nightbird May 17, 2004 11:13 PM
not bad by firsty May 18, 2004 8:09 AM
chilly twist... by nightbird May 18, 2004 10:22 AM
oh, yeah... by firsty May 18, 2004 11:11 AM
I read this. by Chipzee May 18, 2004 3:36 PM
Not misread by nightbird May 18, 2004 11:31 PM
nice work by tinker jack May 19, 2004 7:53 AM
sound track by nightbird May 19, 2004 1:07 PM
I died by arielWN May 17, 2004 10:50 PM
as did by crazyspyder May 17, 2004 10:52 PM
as did.... by purple shower May 17, 2004 10:54 PM
and the.... by arielWN May 17, 2004 11:02 PM
Cozumel by StopMakingSense May 17, 2004 8:28 PM
Style and themes and time period.... by HopelesslyHopeless May 19, 2004 10:18 PM
an interior monologue of sorts....kinda funny i think by SLucia May 17, 2004 12:43 PM
i always thought i'd be staring over some rooftop when the world ended by Jon Converse May 17, 2004 1:01 AM
Overheard in the Halls of Ebay by origin May 16, 2004 9:40 PM
The Humming of the Spheres by purple shower May 16, 2004 2:16 AM
He by purple shower May 16, 2004 2:04 AM
St. Annie In The Watchtower [P C] by nightbird May 15, 2004 9:12 PM
Developing A World For Profit by Billectric May 15, 2004 6:23 PM
five am by tinker jack May 16, 2004 3:16 AM
Thanks, Jack by Billectric May 16, 2004 3:35 PM
Cut Me Up by nightbird May 16, 2004 9:14 PM
nightbird, my friend, by Billectric May 17, 2004 5:39 AM
nice thing about cutups is they work for me even when they don't work for you by tinker jack May 18, 2004 10:57 AM
HAHAHA by Billectric May 18, 2004 12:49 PM
Moon over Shannon by Andeh May 15, 2004 12:51 PM
coincidence by arielWN May 15, 2004 1:07 PM
You by Andeh May 15, 2004 1:23 PM
going out on a limb.. by arielWN May 15, 2004 2:38 PM
A Letter to Mommy [PC] by arielWN May 15, 2004 5:14 AM
murdered by poetry by tinker jack May 15, 2004 7:34 AM
Abyssmal by tinker jack May 15, 2004 8:15 AM
dispare... by arielWN May 15, 2004 10:41 AM
Blossoming Violet/Decayed Lilac by PhilipHarris May 14, 2004 10:04 PM
Your story drives me to despair* because, by tinker jack May 15, 2004 7:51 AM
the blues - by PhilipHarris May 16, 2004 10:18 AM
Red and Blue (edited one line) by tinker jack May 29, 2004 7:32 PM
Wow by HopelesslyHopeless May 15, 2004 9:58 PM
A punch in the face - by PhilipHarris May 16, 2004 10:37 AM
I need help by moonlight_boy May 14, 2004 3:56 PM
so are you asking? by purple shower May 14, 2004 6:29 PM
livingston by livingston May 16, 2004 1:05 AM
a first sentence by seajay1221 May 14, 2004 2:11 PM
Currently, I Think I'm Flying by izeveryboyin May 13, 2004 1:11 PM
Epiphany? by Andeh May 12, 2004 8:54 PM
She Is Going to Meet a Tragic End. (PC) by HopelesslyHopeless May 12, 2004 4:49 PM
This Ignatius... by nightbird May 13, 2004 9:43 PM
Excerpt by HopelesslyHopeless May 14, 2004 12:46 PM
Ignore by HopelesslyHopeless May 14, 2004 12:49 PM
nightbird - PC by nightbird May 12, 2004 12:34 PM
A critique by HopelesslyHopeless May 12, 2004 4:40 PM
Sorry about 'the end'... by nightbird May 12, 2004 10:27 PM
Would anyone else like to comment on this story? by nightbird May 13, 2004 9:33 PM
very cool by relpyroo May 14, 2004 10:22 AM
Thank you... by nightbird May 14, 2004 8:27 PM
i want to by livingston Jun 4, 2004 11:57 AM
Honor and Fast Cars (5) (This one's a bit long) by searching May 11, 2004 12:27 PM
What would happen if the world's greatest pick-up line was actually used? by singlemalt May 10, 2004 6:46 AM
s'malt... by mtmynd May 12, 2004 7:09 AM
Yep, it's mine by singlemalt May 12, 2004 3:16 PM
419. Dialogupus vs. Director Hitherto by beatvibe May 9, 2004 8:30 PM
BONUS: Deleted Scene by beatvibe May 10, 2004 6:37 PM
Brilliant by Kojo May 11, 2004 7:29 PM
Studio-M by beatvibe May 12, 2004 6:22 PM
Marc... by mtmynd May 12, 2004 6:54 AM
Old Fragments by beatvibe May 12, 2004 6:11 PM
Beatvibean Newsletter, Vol. 2 - by PhilipHarris May 14, 2004 10:19 PM
Email Flood by beatvibe May 15, 2004 1:14 PM
there was an old lady who swallowed a fly... by Rosie May 7, 2004 6:53 PM
that by elvin May 30, 2004 12:21 AM
:) by Rosie Jun 10, 2004 6:46 PM
Adventures in Limbo #6 by lennyzee May 7, 2004 12:41 AM
wow by judih. May 7, 2004 3:25 AM
Again Lenny... by mtmynd May 12, 2004 6:47 AM
Thank you, Cecil by lennyzee May 12, 2004 12:29 PM
Adventures in Limbo #5 by lennyzee May 6, 2004 8:01 AM
been here before by judih. May 6, 2004 8:15 AM
Thank you, judih..... by lennyzee May 6, 2004 11:56 AM
yes, by all means by judih. May 6, 2004 12:14 PM
Smile by lennyzee May 6, 2004 2:03 PM
lenny by panta rhei May 12, 2004 1:22 AM
Thank you..... by lennyzee May 12, 2004 12:31 PM
pathetique [NC] by arielWN May 6, 2004 7:43 AM
Is it ok if you leave now... by absurd May 6, 2004 5:24 AM
When in doubt... by mise_en_place May 12, 2004 6:06 PM
Please, Don't miss it. My Daughter's bad Sick-Feedback by AliceBurroughs May 5, 2004 11:03 PM
Fuck, man.. fuck.... by izeveryboyin May 13, 2004 1:37 PM
God love ya, thanks by AliceBurroughs May 17, 2004 10:09 PM
Indeed I do... got a few shitty by izeveryboyin May 19, 2004 1:21 PM
I need a Nobel Prize for this shit! by AliceBurroughs Jun 20, 2004 9:53 PM
Passage at Tulznürrenne by beatvibe May 5, 2004 7:52 PM
! by mtmynd May 6, 2004 7:25 AM
What a cool write! by lennyzee May 6, 2004 12:02 PM
Erratum by beatvibe May 8, 2004 12:14 PM
walking a new light by The Beat May 5, 2004 3:53 PM
Um..... by lennyzee May 6, 2004 2:12 PM
either by The Beat May 9, 2004 5:00 PM
Adventures in Limbo #4 by lennyzee May 5, 2004 11:35 AM
anahatta by judih. May 5, 2004 11:55 AM
Lenny... by mtmynd May 6, 2004 7:23 AM
I'm enjoying these chapters by Billectric May 7, 2004 8:53 AM
Awww...... by lennyzee May 7, 2004 10:30 AM
And then it the morning, it was like I knew the beasts by izeveryboyin May 5, 2004 9:25 AM
Wow by lennyzee May 5, 2004 12:14 PM
Wow!!! I had suspense??!!!! by izeveryboyin May 8, 2004 6:02 PM
juicy by Ziems May 6, 2004 8:08 AM
Actually, I by izeveryboyin May 8, 2004 6:03 PM
Adventures in Limbo #3 by lennyzee May 5, 2004 5:49 AM
Thanx, Feral! by mtmynd May 5, 2004 7:43 AM
Awww.... by lennyzee May 5, 2004 11:30 AM
Feral? by tinker jack Jun 5, 2004 6:02 PM
Adventures in Limbo #2 by lennyzee May 5, 2004 1:43 AM
hey, cecil... read this. by feral May 5, 2004 2:23 AM
Thank you, by lennyzee May 5, 2004 5:43 AM
This is great,. Very timely reading for me. (please excuse the ramble) by tinker jack May 29, 2004 10:04 PM
My Father's Unusual Mind by AliceBurroughs May 4, 2004 7:49 PM
i like by firecracker May 5, 2004 11:56 AM
A..... by lennyzee May 5, 2004 12:47 PM
You blessed me with your talent! by AliceBurroughs Jun 20, 2004 9:59 PM
Adventures in Limbo #1 by lennyzee May 4, 2004 3:46 PM
chapter one and leaf by judih. May 4, 2004 8:05 PM
Hi judih by lennyzee May 5, 2004 5:45 AM
wayside, downside by judih. May 5, 2004 5:53 AM
This is really good. by Billectric May 6, 2004 10:49 AM
silent voices by tinker jack May 6, 2004 7:50 PM
Thank you..... by lennyzee May 7, 2004 12:33 AM
a costa rican ethnographie by tuanis May 4, 2004 2:37 PM
final installment of post 3039. this is truely awful. read at your own risk. by 4 degrees May 4, 2004 9:29 AM
yyyiiike by judih. May 4, 2004 10:11 AM
great comment. by zen_ May 6, 2004 7:15 PM
I'll agree with judih...but add that it's like a David Cronenberg movie by zen_ May 6, 2004 7:13 PM
nice to by 4 degrees May 6, 2004 8:02 PM
Spectacle by searchinginspiration May 4, 2004 8:03 AM
I don't want to get old anymore if it means shitting your pants in public. by seajay1221 May 3, 2004 9:47 AM
. by arielWN May 3, 2004 6:24 PM
Interesting by HopelesslyHopeless May 5, 2004 9:04 AM
hopeless by arielWN May 5, 2004 3:50 PM
i know what you mean by Billectric May 5, 2004 10:11 AM
Opening Day by addonis May 3, 2004 4:52 AM
Brass Knuckles, whiskey, and partying in the police cell, by weezer May 3, 2004 2:58 AM
hahahahaha by seajay1221 May 3, 2004 11:54 AM
hotness by Mie May 3, 2004 6:39 PM
yeah by weezer May 4, 2004 1:33 PM
jellybean baby by pelerine May 2, 2004 5:29 PM
what's a block when ya got life ahead of ya by judih. May 2, 2004 7:30 PM
ah, kiddies... by feral May 3, 2004 6:37 AM
great by firecracker May 5, 2004 11:57 AM
Where Did All the Blue Pixies Go? by izeveryboyin May 2, 2004 12:45 PM
I phucking loved by sohburceptonweakdays May 3, 2004 2:00 PM
twas good???? by izeveryboyin May 4, 2004 9:23 AM
The Christmas Party by Andeh May 2, 2004 12:25 PM
A Cafe in Paris, ca. 2050 by e_dog May 2, 2004 11:26 AM
An interesting tale, of by sohburceptonweakdays May 2, 2004 1:18 PM
The River by Single Spies May 1, 2004 11:41 PM
Oedipus at the Psychoanalyst's Office (PC) by e_dog May 1, 2004 4:19 PM
riveting and sick by slog May 1, 2004 4:37 PM
Yes, there is a Santa Claus (PC) by e_dog May 1, 2004 3:08 PM


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