tied ropes

by burningbags&birt

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-07-18 17:10:00

Parent message is 12917
I’m not exactly sure what the poem is about but
I do somehow like it. “rise about your new depression” is a great line, I also like the simile of ‘freed ballon.’ The couple finish does a great job. Is it really a song? Or a poem? It look like a poem.