v, my friend…

by firecracker

Posted to Action Poetry on 2001-09-06 06:47:00

Parent message is 9321
as i mentioned before, i really love this one… i can totally relate and I especially like the way you repeat the following

“no matter which way
our paths go

I consider myself
a lucky man
just to have kissed you
and held you in my arms

your fragrance
still holds me
your lips
still touch me”

hmmmmm I hope I have had that effect on a few people…
I also like the details like the raccoon and dandelions… very nice, made me smile. Of course I also appereciate this for its simple and short, yet poignant message. Did i mention I liked this one? 😉